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Sonikins

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#631

awesome achu love it especially waikingscene🤗

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Arya311

@Arya311

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Posted: 15 years ago

#632

Achu!!!! This was amazing!

Oh how I wish we get to see this exact scenario next week! You know how Prithvi will now try to win back Damnee...well what if he begins by doing all that you described?!

Write more Achu.....more!!!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#633

@ sistu : those lines were... wat shal i say hrt wrenchngly beautiful.... i can hear pri say it....😳

VERY beautiful indeed...😳 😳

@ achu : u knw wat ... as soon as i finished reading it... wat i said... nt even in ma mind bt aloud out ??? i tld
" AWSOME !!!! " .. really n truly it surely is awsome !! 👏i luvd dat lines u wrote in da beginin wen pri is starn at her in bed .. lovely lines..😳 😳... n yaa pri n damz wrkn 2gtr.... awwww dat wud indeed b a dream cm true... 😍hope wateva u hv writn cms true dear...😳 i really do wish ...........😳

- luv nki..😊

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#634

Aww Achu. That was so divine 😍. It is utterly completely and totally pridalicious and pridasome.👏 👏 👏

You brought out every single aspect of the relationship - from Prithvi's love to his fear of telling Damini telling the truth and losing her to his sincere heartfelt desire to make it up to her. I loved it when he told her "I have a lot to learn from you" - Genius Achu - Pure Genius. 👏

I have no other words - I would love love love to see a PriDa scene like this. I hope the CVs are reading this. To the CVs - ask Achu for permission to use this scene - it is a great scene 👏 👏 👏. Also it is very well written and unlike your scenes does not have any bloopers. 🤣

This is for Achu ⭐️

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dee86

@dee86

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#635

Achu sweetie! 🤗

This is brilliant! Sigh.... It made me feel good after a long time. Thank you so much for writing this... Would LOVE to see PriDa like this, in love and living it, despite all demons... Aww Pri bringing Damz bfast is sooo cute! And absolutely loved "I have a lot to learn from you" and "Tears filled her eyes, yes this was the man she loved, decided to spend her whole life with." Sighhh...

Achu, this scene is totally awesome... Keep writing more, sweets!

the cvs seriously need to give us this scene... 😍

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sistu

@sistu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#636

@sheena: thank you dear

@niki: thnaks a lot

@shonali and achu: got your pms and reading ur updates, have a lot to catch so will comment in some time.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#637

Please Note: Teri Meri Zindagi has been updated!

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1297048&TPN=11&#26357991

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Sun10.

@Sun10.

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: sistu
**Writing by sistu**

FICTION 10

Palat ke jab guzre hue mod ko dekha

Toh najaane kaisa ek bhram toot gaya

Yeh baat humne qubool kar li

Najanne kaise yeh bhool kar di

Iss nasamjhi ka asar

Najaane kyon ban gaya zeher

Humse sitam kaisa yeh hogaya

Najaane kaisa yeh zulm hogaya

Yehi hain khuda se ab guzarish

Puri ho teri har khwaish

PS: I would like to thanks sundas for helping me to understand the meaning of the words better and suggesting improvements. Thank you sundas.