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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
khan ho tum. update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
amazing diwali giftagaar tuh festivals par aise update degi toh toh lets make each day a festival..............
kash tune lrl ka story likha hota then it wd have been mind blowing 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
yaar ek baat poonchu dont mind r u planning to end ur ff
no i dont mean any offence par ek baar saaare updates waapis padha aur laga ki u r nearing the climax..........do tell me if my guess is right
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Thanx a lot all of u!

I'm soooooooooooo glad that u all accepted my Diwali gift with such genorosity!

I'm humbled!

And arss I'm not reaching the climax very soon.........but yes after solving a few issues I plan to end my FF in the coming time.

Alright here's the next update------------


Its evening. Pooja and Dr. Shalini r in Naina's room.
Naina is wearing a pink lehnga with golden embroidery all over.
She is laden with beautiful jwellery and is being made ready by Pooja.
Then Dr. Shalini puts the dupatta (With heavy embroidery) around Naina's head and they both smile admiring Naina's beauty while Naina sharmaa jaati hai.

Just then alekh and Yudi enter Naina's room both looking handsome in Sherwaanis.

They both r stunned by Naina's beauty.

Alekh says-------------Kya baat hai Naina, aaj toh tu bahot hii khoobsoorat lag rahi hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise zameen par pari utar aayi ho.

Yudi adds----------Absolutely! Naina! U look gorgeous…………Aaj toh Rajveer sir will definitely miss a beat when he sees u in this……………..

Alekh then says--------------arre apun bhool hii gaya. Hum isliye aaye thei kii Naina ko aur dus min mein neeche aana hai……………car wait kar rahi hai isiliye thoda jaldi……………

Yudi says as the two take leave----------Alright we'll go, we have lots of work to do…………..see u all in ten min.

And they quickly move out of the room.

There in Nandini's room, nandini is wearing a green lehngaa with work all over. Riya and Sherry r making her ready.
She too is equally laiden with beautiful jwellery and is looking pretty.

As Riya helps Nandini with the bangles, Sherry puts the dupatta on her head and she is too stunned by her beauty and quips------------Aaj toh Abhi bro is really going to be awestruck by ur beauty……………U just look sooooooooooooooo beautiful!

Riya amiles and nods in agreement.

Just then Jai and Sameer enter and both look handsome in Sherwaanis. They wish nandini a good evening.

Jai says--------------Oye kudiyon! Nandini ma'am ko jaldi se tayaar kar do. Dus min mein unhein neeche jaana hai.

Sameer says-------------Ma'm u r looking very pretty and congarats from our side.

Nandini smiles and says------------Thank u, and the two hurry away.

There Raj is in his room and is wearing a pink Sherwaani and is …………well …………….looking extremely handsome! U all can very well imagine how dashing he looks in pink!
Alright let me not get into this nahin toh main type karna chod ke yehi imagine karti rahoongi!

He goes and stands by the open window and looks up at the moonlit------starry night
The cool breeze blows across his face and he closes his eyes and suddenly Naina's smiling face comes in front of his eyes and he smiles.

He then opens his eyes and looks up at the moonlit sky and.

He soon finds the single brightest star and says--------------Naveen……………aaj Naina aur main apnii zindagi kii ek nayi shuruaat karne waale hain.

Aur ajj main tujhse waada karta hoon mere yaar……………..kii Naina ko humeshaa khush rakhoonga………………usskii aankhon mein phir kabhi asoon nahin aane doonga……………aur humesha usska saath doonga……………………

Naveen sach……………aaj aisa lagta hai kii jaise meri har chahat………….har tamnnaa……………her sapna poora ho gaya hai…………..agar kuch kami hai toh woh teri kami hai mere dost………………(And Raj already has tears in his eyes)
He continues--------------Kaash tu aaj humaare saath hota……………Humaare beech hota………………kaash………….
Just then Abhi walks in and looks dashing in his Green Sherwaani (I hope u got the connection that the two r wearing colours matching to their would be's Partners).

And when he sees Raj looking at the sky, deep in his own thoughts, unaware of his arrival…………..he walks upto him and putting a hand on his shoulder says--------Raj?

Raj quickly wipes off his tears realizing that it wah Chauhaan.

But Abhi sees that Raj had been crying so he asks----------

Kya hum jaan sakte hain kii humaare dost kii aankhon mein jo aasoon hain, unkii wajah kya hai? 😕 😕

Kaisa laga? 😊 😊




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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
great . awesome but update jaldi diya karo
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
dil hai besamal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
superb update dost
continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
Thanx both of u! 😊


I'm soooooooooooo glad u liked it! 😛


Waise u must be wondering delay kaa reason? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Thanx both of u! 😊


I'm soooooooooooo glad u liked it! 😛


Waise u must be wondering delay kaa reason? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

Thanx both of u! 😊


I'm soooooooooooo glad u liked it! 😛


Waise u must be wondering delay kaa reason? 😕

Yaar abb tum logon se kya chupana.................😉

Aaj kal meri loyalty towards Rajeev jo hai naa its been divided........................😕

Reason? Well I hope tum log samjhoge yaar its Shahid Kapur ....................😳

And only after Jab We Met that I realised his potential!😛

Lekin honestly its only till Aamir will release!😃

Pakka!😉

Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
that was superrrrrrrrrrr. abb yaar jaldi update karo

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