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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
hey kal tohdiwali hai soaybe i wont visit the forum
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happpppyyyyyyyyy diwali in advance
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
All d parts r just toooo good...pl.. update soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

Thanx a ton! 😊

First of all a veru Happy Diwali to all of u! 😊
May ur lives be filled with Happiness and Joy on this festival of lights. 😃

And Hey Diya welcome back dear!😊


And I'm sooooooooooooo glad u all liked this part. 😊

And here's a long one, a Diwali gift from my side to all of u, I only hope u like this one too---------- 😛

Here's the next update------------------- 😊 😊

Abhi says--------------Main toh mill aaya Nandini se, tum karte raho shaam tak kaa intezaar. (And smiling teasingly Abhi begins to walks away) 😆

Raj stops him----------Chauhaan ruko! Waise Naina ko main bhi nahin mila kal raat se. Please can u help me? 😃 (U were right Sharmi06 and ami 😉 )

Abhi smiles---------------Kyun Raj? Uttar gaya shaam tak wait karne ka bhoot? 😆

Raj looks at him pleadingly so Abhi says-------------Alright. Tum aisa karo, kii u go and meet Naina, maa toh waise bhi Nandini ke saath hai. I'll message her and tell her to keep mom busy as long as possible………….and when she comes…………….I will tell u, and we both will disappear. Samjhe? 👏

Raj nods------------Waise Chauhaan mere saath reh ke tum kaafi intelligent ho gaye ho! 😆

Abhi looks at Raj stunned and says-------------Pardon? 😆

Raj says---------------Baad mein. Abb jaldi chalo Chauhaan…………….Please! 😆

As the two hurry away Abhi says teasingly------------Kyun Raj intezaar nahinn ho rahaaaaaaaaaaaa? 😳

Raj smirks------------Whatever. 😆

And they both reach Naina's room. Naina is sitting in her room and is wearing bangles for the evening and is smiling to herself. 😊

She remembers when she and Raj were in the jungle on the drill sent by Major Bhargav and Raj was sitting by the fire when she came out of the tent ans they sat together, and when Naina asked about Raj's GF. 😳
😳

Then when Raj said that he wondered who would want to spend her entire life with such a complicated person as him , to which Naina had replied that she would be a very lucky girl and then Raj gave one of his sweetest smiles (Yaad aa gaya? Yaa kuch aur likhoon?) Naina comes back out of the flash back and says to herself (just as Raj enters into the room and sees her smile to herself) ----------------- Woh lucky girl main hoon Raj. 😳


Raj looks at Naina lovingly and Naina too notices Raj in the mirror and gets up shocked-----------Raj aap? 😆

Raj walks upto her and his smile broadens-----------Haan main! 😃

Naina is worried ans says-----------Lekin……………….lekin maasa ne toh mana kiya tha naa…………..phir Raj aap………….agar unhonne dekh liya toh………………… 😆 😆

Raj stops her in between and says-------------Bas Naina! Relax! Kuch nahin hoga. Chauhaan is standing outside and he will tell us before hand. Alright? 😃 😃

Naina manages a smile and Raj well he always smiles when he sees Naina. They both r quiet. They just look at each other. 😃

Each of them having so much to say, but they don't know where to begin and they don't even want to blink an eyelid as they look at each other. 😛


Raj says at last-------------Naina aaj meri zindagi kaa yeh sabse khoobsoorat din hai………………..aur yeh sabse haseen pal. Isse yaadgaar banane ke liye main tumhe kuch dena chahta hoon. 😳


Raj asks Naina to close her eyes and she does. Raj goes behind her and takes out a box from his pocket and from it takes out a necklace. 😳
He puts it around Naina's neck. Naina feels it and when she opens her eyes and sees that the chain has a locket on which r carved two letters-------------(Any guesses?……………Waise no prizes for guessing it right 😛 )

RN 😳

Naina is touched and she look up at Raj having tears in her eyes. 😭 😭

Raj is a bit taken aback and asks-----------Kya hua Naina Didn't u like my present? 😳

Naina says------Nahin aisa nahin hai Raj.( Naina is toooooooooo overwhelmed and does not say what to say) Main toh sirf yeh soch rahi thi kii kya main itne pyaar ke kaabil hoon bhi ya nahin. Jitna aap mujhe chahte hain……………….mainne kabhi socha hii nahin tha kii aap jaisa jeevan saathi milega……………….Raj aap mere liye sab kuch hain……………..Mujhse kabhi door mat hona.
(And she hugs Raj) 😊

Raj says softly---------------Naina tumhi toh kehtii ho kii tum main tumhaari parchaai hoon…………………aur, parchaai bhi kabhi saath chodti hai kya?
Naina nods and they both smile. 😳


Abhi tumbles into the room. (Wrobg timing Captain Chauhaan! 😡 😡 )
He smiles as he sees RN hugging each other but then realizing the gravity of the situation he quickly says--------------- Sorry to disturb u both……………..but if I don't mom would certainly do it……………so this Kodak Moment has to wait. Raj mom will be here anytime. Lets go! 😆

They quickly rush out as Abhi shouts back--------------Sorry once again Naina! 😆 😆

But Naina isn't hearing. She is in her own world. 😃

She smiles as she embraces the letters on the locket Raj had given to her. 😃
😃 😃 😃

Indeed it was Priceless! 😳


Kaisa laga? 😊 😊




Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
mind bloingggggggggggggggggg.............. do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
wow!!!rn scene was soo cute...make it mroe romantic na..it'l be nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
nice gift friend for us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
superb!!!!!!
happy dewali
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
fabulous 👏
happy diwali
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Happy diwali to u 2..n thx a lot 4 d sweet diwali gift 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
"Raj stops him----------Chauhaan ruko! Waise Naina ko main bhi nahin mila kal raat se. Please can u help me?"

Yap yap yap...i know it will happen....well i want it to happen......come one ya... Raj stay away from his love...i don't think so..........

Well.........nice writting......keep up...waiting for more :)
Edited by sharmi06 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
that was soooooooo cuteeee 👏 👏 👏 . jaldi update karo yaar

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