Naina aur Aath Khajoor ff last part p4 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: arwa72

sorry for doing that, but i thought the khajoor part was cute.

wese mere liye bhi huda koi khajoor nahi hai

Hey!!!!!!!! No sorries dear!!! I was appreciating your work!! Huda got a taste of his own medicine😆...he might be my sweetoo, but shaitaani bhi bahut karta hai😳

Hmmmmm...ek aur competitor Huda ke liye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉😆

Pehle hi keh rahi hoon, huda mera hai😳...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice one... 😆

He is sweet n cute khajoor.. 😳 😳 MY khajoor.. 😉 😆 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
Hey!!!!! My khajoor!! 😳

Tabele mein aao di, faisla karte hain 😆


But awesome ff.. 👏 👏 👏 I wonder Bhargav kya karega???????

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part five

Rajkumari Ritu:😡 Tum! (pointing at Bhargav) You little wretch. Yeh sab ?tumharee wajese huwa hai. Agar tum hamare or Rajkumar ke beech aane kee jurrat nahi ?karte to wo hamse kho nahi ghaye hote
? ?
Nair: tum dono milchuke ho. Khajoor no. 8, report.?

Rajkumari Ritu: Khamosh! Dekhai nahi deta ke hum baat karahai. Beech me bolene kee ?ijazat nahi dee hai, zalil insaan?
? ?
Shalini: how dare yooooooo (sneezes) uuuuu talk to him like that? Wo to shukr maano ?ke tum is waqt yaha hamare chat ke neeche kharee ho warna……?

Rajkumari Ritu: apna mooh band rakho. Don't make a mess on me. (points at Bhargav) ?hum tumhe hukoom dete hai ke abhi isee waqt Rajkumar Rajveer ko hamare saamne ?paish karo, warna tumhe keere kee tarha masal denge hum.?

Bhargav: Kya hai? Kabse sunraha hu Rajkumar ko lado, Rajkumar ko laado. Jahase tum ?aayee ho waha pe beshak log tumhare ghulaam hai per yahape sab hamare ghulaam hai. ?Right guys
? ?
All: RIGHT! ?

Rajkumari Ritu is forced out of the cottage by all the khajoors. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: (knocks on the door)
hey how dare you! tum sabko iskee saza milegee. ?Tum jaante nahi sab ko bhasm karsaktee hu me. (Knocks harder on the door) this is your ?last chance you lousy scums. Darwaza kholo!?

Nobody opens the door and Rajkumari Ritu leaves the cottage angrily. First of all she ?was angry with Rajkuamr Rajveer for being a forgetful fool and leaving her. Then she ?was angry with the khajoors for insulting her. She storms out in the darkness towards her ?secret den in the middle of the forest. ?

The next evening Maharani Naina is in court with her advisers. She is waiting for the ?messenger to arrive who had been sent in search of Rajkumari Ritu and Rajkumar ?Rajveer. ?

Messenger enters

Messenger: Maharani kee jai ho (curtseys) ek achee khabar hai. ?

Maharani Naina: 😊jaldee batao!?

Messenger: kal raat ko Rajkumar Rajveer ne jungle me ek ghar me sharan lee. Wo ?khajoor qabile ka hai jaha pe 8 khajoor rehte hai. On logo ko humne khabar dee ?Rajkumari Ritu ke baare me to wo log chokanya hogaye or Rajkumar Rajveer kee hifazat ?kee, per……?

Maharani Naina: Bohat ache!👏jaldi se unke wapis aane ka intezaam ?karo.?

Second messenger rushes in

Messenger 2: ghustakhi maaf ho Maharani per ek buree khabar hai. Aaj shaam ko jab ?Rajkumar Rajveer khajoor qabile se nikal rahe the to Rajkumari Ritu waha phirse pohoch ?gayee or onhe phirse apne saat onkee scooter pe bhaga legayee. ?

Maharani Naina: 😲 un khajooro ne roka kyu nahi? ?

Messenger 2: Maharani, Rajkumari Ritu ne un sab se yeh kaha ke agar wo Rajkumar ?Rajveer ko onke hawale kardenge to wo sab ko normal insaan banadegee or onhe adha ?khajoor nahi rehna parega. Wo sab is rishwat kee aar me agaye or Rajkumar Rajveer ko ?de diya.?

Maharani Naina: Bohat hee bura huwa. 😭bechare Rajkumar Rajveer ko to yaad ?bhi nahi rahega baad me ke Rajkumari Ritu ne unko dhoke se pakarliya hai. (Orders her ?guards) hamaree savaree tayaar karo….thero! hamaaree gaaree tayaar karo kyu ke ab ?hum khud jaaenge Rajkumar ko laane.?

? Advisor: Ghustakhi maaf Maharani per yeh faisla sahee nahi hoga. Aap jaantee hai na ?Rajkumari Ritu kaala jaadoo kartee hai or onke sar pe os kaali churail ka pe haath hai.?

Maharani Naina: (turns towards advisor) hum sab jaante hai. Bus ab bohat hochuka. ?Rajkumari Ritu ne jung ka elaan kiya hai or ab hame hamare Rajkumar ko waapis paana ?hai.?

Maharani Naina exits?

okays heres an end to another part.
Edited by arwa72 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
Hey!!! great!!! 👏

Bhargu bhoot ko bhi khajoor bana diya 😆 ..


Let's see aapke shaitaani dimaag mein aur kya hai 😆 😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part six

Rajkumari Ritu takes Rajkumar Rajveer to her secret chamber in the middle of the forest. ?She has made a plan to make Rajkumar Rajveer fall in love with her by making him drink ?a love potion.?

Rajkumar Rajveer: kya baat hai. Bohat hee mehnat se banaya hai aapne apna ghar ??(Points towards all the things hung around the chamber) ?

Rajkumari Ritu:
yeh sab aap ke liye hai. Hamara ghar.?

Rajkumar Rajveer:😕hamara ghar? Kyu? Hum hamara raj mahal chore ke ?yahape tum ek anjaan ke saat kyu rahenge, or wese aisee ghatiya see jage pe.?

Rajkumari Riu: 😡ghatiya? Abhi abhi to aap iskee tareef karahe the.?

Rajkumar Rajveer: taareef to hum saaree larkiyo kee karte hai iska matlab ye nahi ke sab ?ke sab khoobsurat hai. Jaise ke tum.?
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Rajkumari Ritu: (really fuming and thinks after he drinks the potion he will see nothing ?else but her) theek hai jaane dijye yeh sab. Aap ko yaad hai hum aap ko yahape kyu laaye ?hai. (Puts her hand out for him) yahape aake baitye hamare paas. (takes to a pink blowed ?up sofa and then sits on his lap with her arms curled around his neck) aapse pyaar bharee ?baate karne ke liye. Oske pehle yeh leejye. (picks the glass from the nearby table and ?holds it in front of him then her seduction game begins)?

Rajkumari Ritu: Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale

Kab kaun jaane kahan chala jaaye
Mausam yahan se vahan chala jaaye
Aisa na ho ye sama chala jaaye
Oh, kab kaun jaane kahan chala jaaye
Mausam yahan se vahan chala jaaye
Aisa na ho ye sama chala jaaye
Jhuki hui hei aankh bhi
Ruki hui hei saans bhi
Kuch to mulaaqaat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani

Bole ye nazar ye zubaan chali jaaye
Yeh dil gaya ab ye jaan chali jaaye
Door door tak ye daastaan chali jaaye
Oh, bole ye nazar ye zubaan chali jaaye
Yeh dil gaya ab ye jaan chali jaaye
Door door tak ye daastaan chali jaaye
Jhuka hua hei aasmaan
Ruka hua hei ye jahaan
Saara jahaan saath aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
Yeh pyaasi mohabbat, ye pyaasi jawaani
Adhuri adhuri ye dil ki kahaani
Jhuki hui hei raat ye
Ruki hui hei baat ye
Yeh chaandni raat aage chale
Ho, kuch pyaar ki baat aage chale
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Rajkumar Rajveer takes the glass in his hands and is about to put it to his lips when ?Maharani Naina bursts through the door. ?

Maharani Naina:
Nahi Rajkumar! Ose mat peejye, osme zeher hai.?

Rajkumari Ritu: kya bakwaas hai yeh! Aap ise jaante nahi ho Rajkumar, ise hamaree ?khushi se sakht nafrat hai to yu hee bebunyaad baate banatee hai

Maharani Naina: hum ya aap? Pehle se, aap ko naahi hamare ghar kee izzat kee parwa ?hai yeh oskee aabru kee. Or ab to bohat hee hochuka. Os insaan ko aapne bandhee banaya ?jis insaan ko aapse kabhi mohabbat nahi hosaktee. Oh for god's sake he doesn't even ?remember who he is right now

Rajkumar Rajveer: baap re waqt dekha hai, aap dono apna maamla neptaye hume chalna ?hai….?

Rajkumari ritu: (holds onto Rajkumar Rajveer firmly) kaha jaarahe hai aap? Aap hee ke ?liye to yeh sab horaha hai

Maharani Naina: (holds onto Rajkumar Rajveer and pulls him to her) aap theek kehrahe ?hai Rajkumar ab hame chalna chaheeye.?

Rajkumari Ritu: haath haatoan Rajkumar per se. hum tumhe inhe nahi lejaane denge ?samjhee

Maharani Naina: himmat kese huwee aapkee humse aisee baat karne kee! ?

Maharani Naina and Rajkumari Ritu continue arguing with each other and keep on ?pulling Rajkumar Rajveer towards each other. It really gets out of hand. In between ?comes Bhargav due to that the contents of the drink drop on Rajkumari Ritu's face and ?most of it goes into her mouth. She closes her eyes. Everyone is surprised ?

hey heres another part especially for u
Edited by arwa72 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part seven

Bhargav: lagta hai finally yeh Rajkumari Ritu se bhootnee Ritu bangayee😆

Maharani Naina: koun ho tum or kaha se aaye??

Bhargav: maafee chahta hu maharani (curtseys) mera naam Bhargav hai a.k.a khajoor ?no.8. me khajoor qabile me rehne wale log…..?

Maharani Naina: yeh, yeh, hamne tumse tumharee puree daastaan nahi maangee. Ab ?yeh batao ke tumko is jaga ka kese pata chala??

Bhargav: jab Rajkumari Ritu, Rajkumar Rajveer to hamare ghar se lejarahee thee to tub ?me bahar se aaya huwa tha or dekha in dono ko scooter pe, mujhe mere dosto kee ?beimaanee ka pata chala to forun in dono ke peeche lag gaya.?

Maharani Naina: (confused) lekin itnee jaldi kese pohonch gaye??

Bhargav: well these would be the answer (points towards his feet) I guess Nike air really ?pulled it off. ? 👏

The potion has an immediate reaction and Rajkumari Ritu first sees Bhargav and falls in ?love with him. She has no control over it. ?

Rajkumari Ritu: kaha the tum meree puree zindagee? Kitna intezaar kiya mene (takes ?Bhargav in her arms, whilst he makes a face 😕)

Rajkumar Rajveer looked at Maharani Naina and immediately their love spent times ?came into his head which made him remember everything. Both walked out hand in hand. ?
With this song in the background

o o...?
aashiq banaya - 3 aapne - 2?
tere bin suni suni hain baahein
teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein
tere bin bin asar meri aahein - 2 ?
tere bin

tere bin lamha lamha sataye
tere bin bekarari jalaaye
tere bin chain mujhko naa aaye - 2 ?
tere bin

meri nigaaho mein tera chehra rawaa hain
gehre hain armaan jaane ja paagal samaa hain - 2?
apni daayre se toh main chutne lagi hu
tere baajuo mein aake tootne lagi hu -2?
tere bin jeena nahi hain gawara
tere bin dil ka nahi hain gujara
tere bin kaun apna sahaara
aashiq banaya - 3 aapne - 2?

bechainiyo ka faaslo ka silsila hain
dardejigar ka yeh sabab hamko mila hain - 2?
betaabiyo ne hamko chur kar diya hain ?
pass aane pe majboor kar diya hain - 2?
tere bin raat kat ti nahi hain
tere bin pyas mit ti nahi hain
tere bin duri ghat ti nahi hain ?
aashiq banaya - 3 aapne - 2?
?
Rajkumar Rajveer made her sit on a stump whilst he propped on one knee to propose to ?her. ?
Now they are returning back to the palace. ?

Maharani Naina: Aakhir yeh din aaheegaya. My wish came true after all. ?

Rajkumar Rajveer: hmm. Yeh sab to theek hai per hame yeh to bataye ke hum jaa kaha ?rahe hai??

Maharani Naina: (bites her teeth)😡 Phirse aapkee yaadasht chaleegayee? ?


THE END

okay guys this is the end of the ff. i know it was pretty short but i didnt want to contiune it for a long time becasue evetually it gets boring.

thankyou all who have read it and all of who commented on it.

Edited by arwa72 - 18 years ago

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