hey guys this is my first time for writing a ff and i was reading this old story of mine i had written based on snow white and the seven dwarfs and thought it would interesting to try it out the lrl charcters.
well here goes.
THE CHARACTERS
Maharani Naina Singh Ahluwalia - she is only 21 and got forcefully married to the 60 yr old Maharaja Chandoke Ahluwalia. She lived through the humiliation for one yr after which the Maharaja passed away.
Rajkumar Rajveer Singh Shekhawat - he is lovely handsome playboy who has girls falling on his feet. his heat belongs to Maharani Naina but he has an amnesia problem where he tends to forget things every five minutes. that makes him chnage his gf every five mins but deep down he knows his love for Naina.
Rajkumari Ritu Ahluwalia - the vicious vamp who hates her stepmother because she is the same age as her. she is jealous of her beauty, her position and the amount of attention she receives. she finds new ways to put Naina under disgrace by disrespecting her postion as a rajkumari and openly exposing herself.
PART ONE
Maharani Naina Singh Ahluwalia is in her room looking out of the window at the birds ?on the ledge. She was forcefully married to the king of Barbair, Maharaja Chandoke ?Ahluwalia a year ago because he had to fulfil his challenge of getting married more than ?ten times. He passed away last month leaving her with a step daughter the same age as ?her. ?
Maharani Naina: Kaash ke mein in parindo ke jaisee hotee, yu asaad banke apne paankh ?pehla ke aasmaano kee oochayo ko chootee. ?
A bird comes and rests on her hand.?
Maharani Naina: Aah, iska matlab hai ke mujhe wish karna chaheeye (she closes her ?eyes) Bhagwaan tu koi karishma deekha de jiskee wajese Rajkumar Rajveer kee nazar ?mujhpe pare or ohne mere pyaar ka ehsaas ho (she lets the bird fly away and then sighs) ?
Servant enters
Servant: Maharani kee jai ho (curtseys) ghustakhi maaf per ek buree khabar hai?
Maharani Naina: Khamosh! Tumhe pata nahi ke buree kahabar dene ka waqt shaam ko ?hai subah nahi. ?
Servant: maafi chahata hoo, maharani per yeh bohat hee zaroori hai. ?
Maharani Naina: Acha. Per usul ko to badal nahi sakte hum. Ek kaam karo os buree ?khabar ko tum kavita me sunao take oska dene ka andaaz khush khabri me badal jaye. ?
Servant: Batameze panchi ne phirse kee baghawat
? Chore chaar ke ghar kee aabru or izzat ?
? ; ; ; ; ; Tore dale saare darwaze or deewaar ?
? Os ghatiya see scooter ko leke baar baar. ?
Maharani Naina: Pata nahi yeh larki kis janam ka badla lerahee hai (She points at the ?servant) hamare sipaheeyo ko kaho ke jaake dhoondhe ose, or ha kal ke pehle nahi.?
Servant exits ?
Rajkumar Rajveer Singh Shekhawat comes to see the Maharani in her lounge
Rajkumar Rajveer: Maharani kee jai ho (he curtseys) aapne hame yaad kiya??
Maharani Naina: Ji, aaye aakar baitye hamare paas. . ?
He moves towards the empty chair adjacent to her arm chair. He sits himself comfortably ?and stares at her.?
Maharani Naina: (she hesitates and thinks that will Rajveer remember her today and ?will he express his love to her. She had to make sure) Theek hai, hame yeh bataye ke kya ?aap ke dil me koi khaas hai? ?
He sits back with his arms and legs crossed. ?
Rajkumar Rajveer: (scratches his head) Hmmmmmm, yeh to soch ne waalee baat hai ?kyu ke hamare dil me to kahi hai. Chalo list banate hai. Ab dekho isme Sarah hai, Pooja ?hai, Devi hai, Laxmi hai ummmmm, kya tha oska naam…... ab dekho najane kyu bhool ?jaate hai per itne saare ho to phir ek kee kya zaroorat hai. Hame to ye bi yaad nahi ke ?kitno ka dil thoda or kitno ko aasmaan pe charaya. (he chuckles).?
The Maharani puts her hand over his arm
Maharani Naina: Or main? Mere liye koi jaga nahi? ?
He puts up an eyebrow and then gets up, thinking very deeply
Rajkumar Rajveer: Aap? Aap to alag hee kahani hai. Jabhi hum aapko dekhte hai to ?hame aisa mehsoos hota hai ke hona ho ham aapse mohabbat karte hai per yeh kambakht ?yaadaash hai jo hame marth dejaatee hai. That makes me confused. Ek kaam kijye jab bhi ?humein aapko yeh kehna ho ke hum aapse mohabbat karte hai to tub hame yaad ?diladijyega. (It has been over ten minutes in this conversation which has made Rajkumar ?forget the whole purpose altogether.) Are baap re waqt dekha hai. Chalye ab hame ijazat ?dijye wo kya hai ke hamne Sarah ko waqt diya tha or hum aapse baat karne me bhool ?gaye. (curtseys). ?
The Rajkumar exits?
okay guys kindly tell me wat u think. i know theres a fan fiction section in i-f but i thought i might post it in this forum becasue it is more related to it.
Shiv Shakti
