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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Well done Di👏

Gabbar aur Dr.Ritu ki meeting bahut achchi thi😆👏..

u enjoyed...i guess pehle jitni khujli wale mission jaise nahi thi na.....but tried whatever i could..tried to keep the trakc on...warna LRL season 2 banjata...thoda mission ko realte karna chaha..so it became lengthy i guess..😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Well done Di👏

Gabbar aur Dr.Ritu ki meeting bahut achchi thi😆👏..

u enjoyed...i guess pehle jitni khujli wale mission jaise nahi thi na.....but tried whatever i could..tried to keep the trakc on...warna LRL season 2 banjata...thoda mission ko realte karna chaha..so it became lengthy i guess..😃

Di yeh bahut achcha tha😊.Aap aisa kyun keh rahi hain ki yeh achcha nahi😭.

Ek question hai:~Kya Dr.Ritu bhi villain hai,I mean Major Bhargav se mili hui hai humare story mein?

Aap bas yeh bata dijiye.Phir main ise main continue karoongi.😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

u enjoyed...i guess pehle jitni khujli wale mission jaise nahi thi na.....but tried whatever i could..tried to keep the trakc on...warna LRL season 2 banjata...thoda mission ko realte karna chaha..so it became lengthy i guess..😃

Di yeh bahut achcha tha😊.Aap aisa kyun keh rahi hain ki yeh achcha nahi😭.

Ek question hai:~Kya Dr.Ritu bhi villain hai,I mean Major Bhargav se mili hui hai humare story mein?

Aap bas yeh bata dijiye.Phir main ise main continue karoongi.😊

We do have a traitor in this story...I would prefer someone from the cadet....So for me original cadets mey traitor hoga...kaun woh later reveal karengey..with good reason....while I would prefer Ritu and Rajveer in romantic angle and Ritu haath dho ke peechu lage RAjveer ke ekdam makign him blush everytime..😉 hwat say...?? I am RR pro...so u tell RN i wont prefer..but as u wish even I will turn the story after ur part as u want it...no pressure dear...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry Bhoomi Di for replying so late..I was tensed bcoz of my studies..Now Im continuing the story..

Captain Abhimanyu joins KMA.Gabbar meets him.Gabbar is talking with Captain Abhimanyu about the meeting with Dr.Ritu..

Gabbar(blushing):Main Ritu rani se milne gaya tha..Sab achcha hua par main chahta hoon ki unhe bhi mujhse pyaar ho jaaye..

Captain Abhimanyu: Major Gabbar! Aap music kyun nahi try karte..Dr.Mishra aapse impress ho jayengi.

Gabbar: Impress????

Captain Abhimanyu: Mera matlab hai aapse khush ho jayengi..

Gabbar:Oh achcha..Par Gabbar ne kabhi music nahi bajaya..

Captain Abhimanyu:Don't worry hum aapko sikhayenge..

Then Captain Abhimanyu plays his violin..The tune is the song "Humko humise chura lo" from the film "Mohabbatein"..

Captain Rajveer is watching the movie "Phir Hera Pheri".The movie ends and the someone calls him.Its none other than Col.Chandra.Captain Rajveer is talking about his mission about catching the spy..Pooja is silently hearing all this..Captain Rajveer gets aware that someone is hearing his conversation..Pooja sees Dr.Ritu coming to Captain Rajveer.She hides..Captain Rajveer opens the door and he sees Dr.Ritu.

Captain Rajveer:Dr.Mishra aap yahaan?

Dr.Ritu:Woh actually Captain mujhe aapse kuchh zaroori baat karni thi..

Captain Rajveer:Bataiye..

Dr.Ritu is about to say something then she hears the violin music..

Dr.Ritu:Yeh toh meri favourite song hai.Yeh KMA mein kaun itna achcha violin baja rahe hain?

Dr.Ritu starts searching who is playing the violin..

Captain Rajveer:Yeh Chauhaan Saab ke alaava kaun ho sakte hain..Chalo dekh lete hain..

Dr.Ritu dekhti hain ki Captain Abhimanyu violin play kar rahe hain..Captain Rajveer is also shocked but is happy to see his friend..Gabbar starts blushing seeing Dr.Ritu..He starts singing "Mere Mehboob Mere Sanam Shukriya Meherbani Karam"..Gabbar starts jumping and goes to Major Bhargav to tell that he is succeeding..Now with this everyone starts laughing..

Huda:Maanna padega yeh Gabbar ki awaaz mein kaafi dam hai..

Kaalia:Haan Huda Mamu humare sarkar hain hi aise..Dashing dude..

Yudi silently laughs hearing this..

I am writing the storyline please expand this..

Captain Abhimanyu meeting with Major Nair..Major Nair missing Dr.Ritu..

Captain Rajveer plans for the party(prank for Major Bhargav) with Captain Abhimanyu,Alekh,Naina,Huda,Yudi,Ali,Pooja,Gabbar's gang.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Good one Neha

Gabbar n Dr. ritu.😆
I'm enjoying this one. Atleats Rajveer is spared.
Do continue......👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: CINDRELLA

Good one Neha

Gabbar n Dr. ritu.😆
I'm enjoying this one. Atleats Rajveer is spared.
Do continue......👏

Thanks Di😊.Im happy u liked it.😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

Sorry Bhoomi Di for replying so late..I was tensed bcoz of my studies..Now Im continuing the story..

Captain Abhimanyu joins KMA.Gabbar meets him.Gabbar is talking with Captain Abhimanyu about the meeting with Dr.Ritu..

Gabbar(blushing):Main Ritu rani se milne gaya tha..Sab achcha hua par main chahta hoon ki unhe bhi mujhse pyaar ho jaaye..

Captain Abhimanyu: Major Gabbar! Aap music kyun nahi try karte..Dr.Mishra aapse impress ho jayengi.

Gabbar: Impress????

Captain Abhimanyu: Mera matlab hai aapse khush ho jayengi..

Gabbar:Oh achcha..Par Gabbar ne kabhi music nahi bajaya..

Captain Abhimanyu:Don't worry hum aapko sikhayenge..

Then Captain Abhimanyu plays his violin..The tune is the song "Humko humise chura lo" from the film "Mohabbatein"..

Captain Rajveer is watching the movie "Phir Hera Pheri".The movie ends and the someone calls him.Its none other than Col.Chandra.Captain Rajveer is talking about his mission about catching the spy..Pooja is silently hearing all this..Captain Rajveer gets aware that someone is hearing his conversation..Pooja sees Dr.Ritu coming to Captain Rajveer.She hides..Captain Rajveer opens the door and he sees Dr.Ritu.

Captain Rajveer:Dr.Mishra aap yahaan?

Dr.Ritu:Woh actually Captain mujhe aapse kuchh zaroori baat karni thi..

Captain Rajveer:Bataiye..

Dr.Ritu is about to say something then she hears the violin music..

Dr.Ritu:Yeh toh meri favourite song hai.Yeh KMA mein kaun itna achcha violin baja rahe hain?

Dr.Ritu starts searching who is playing the violin..

Captain Rajveer:Yeh Chauhaan Saab ke alaava kaun ho sakte hain..Chalo dekh lete hain..

Dr.Ritu dekhti hain ki Captain Abhimanyu violin play kar rahe hain..Captain Rajveer is also shocked but is happy to see his friend..Gabbar starts blushing seeing Dr.Ritu..He starts singing "Mere Mehboob Mere Sanam Shukriya Meherbani Karam"..Gabbar starts jumping and goes to Major Bhargav to tell that he is succeeding..Now with this everyone starts laughing..

Huda:Maanna padega yeh Gabbar ki awaaz mein kaafi dam hai..

Kaalia:Haan Huda Mamu humare sarkar hain hi aise..Dashing dude..

Yudi silently laughs hearing this..

I am writing the storyline please expand this..

Captain Abhimanyu meeting with Major Nair..Major Nair missing Dr.Ritu..

Captain Rajveer plans for the party(prank for Major Bhargav) with Captain Abhimanyu,Alekh,Naina,Huda,Yudi,Ali,Pooja,Gabbar's gang.

Hey Neha....😊awesome work..👏👏👏I really loved the idea of Capatin abhimanyu teaching Gabbar music and the song..hmm really u to got it perfect ekdam dil ko touch hua hoga Dr. Ritu ke...😆

Looks like agli meeting mey kuch aur panga wanga hoga yeh MAjor bhargav to gaya....waise yehan Captain Abhimanyu bhi Gabbar ko helping...hmm Gabbar ka bread and Abhimanju ka long hair yeh dono KMA ko circus banake rahenge😆

Am lovign ur track...keep up the good work...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK So here I am again to contiue the next part...hope there r audience to our story ... 😆

Captain Abhimanyu has launched a singing sontest in KMA with all the cadets playing the different intruments while staff will sing.

BC was convinced by Captain RAjveer and others that this will bring the cadets n teachers close adn they will understand and confide in each other more. No more spy than coming up here.

BC sang... Zindagi maut na banjaye sambhalo yaaro,
Kho raha chain nO watan mushkilo mey hai Watan
Sarfasoshi ki tammana dil mey jaga lo yaaro..
All clapped....

Dr. Shalini sang dedicatign it to Dr. Ritu and RAjveer.
Beetiya rani , pariyo ki nagree se ek din, Raj kuvarji ayengey parioo sang legayengey..
Captain RAjveer kept tellign Dr. Shalini this isnt fair....:)) all were laughing...BC coudlnt undertnad what was wrong it was a beautiful song..;)

Dr. Ritu came and sang looking with all love at Captain Rajveer..
Thoda sa pyar hua hai,
Thoda hai baaki, HUm to dil dechuke hain,
bas teri haan hai baaki....

This broke the heart od MAjor gabbar and MAjor Bhargav..Major Gabbar gave heartbroken look to Ritu while MAjor bhargav was looking angry ...

In came MAjor Gabbar, HE blushed and said he will play the piano and sing byhimself...he looked dressed as Adnan sami and sang... lookign at Dr. Ritu..
Kabhi to nazar milaoo,
Kabhi to kareeb aooo,
JO nahi kaha hai, woh samjhbhi jaoo jaoo...
HUmbhi to hai deewane deewane oo deewanaee...
he immediately started with another song as well.....
Bheegi bheegi raaton mey, phir tum aoona....
Aisi barasato mey Aooona...hmmmm aaa Aoona...Aoona...he kept sayign aoona..and all were like jaooona..Gabbar bas hogaya...ab jaooona...

While all this happened, Ali and Pooja were not anywhere near may be they were busy with their premkahani??
MAjor NAir sang...with searchign for ALi and Pooja...
bachke rehna re baba bachke rehna re..jahan teri yeh nazar hai meri jaa mujhe khabbar hai bachnaa sakaa koi ..lambe hai mere hath jitne dekh idhar yaar dyaan kidhar hai,

Captain Abhimanyu sang...with the prop his hair:))
Yeh hai reshmi zulfo ka andhera na lehrayi ye,
jahan tak mere kesuooki mahaek hai chale aeee

Major bhargav first didnt approve to sing..than he saw Dr. Ritu coming closer and she asked..plzz sing...and he sang...
Mera mehboob mujhse aise milaa.
jaise chanda se chandini milti hai...

Huda: Major saab ka takal deh to chanda hi hai yeh ..aur apni Ritu mamm chandini...
All laughed with his remark.Major bhargav couldnt tolerate all laughign at him and went inside..(inside All cadets with Captain Rajveers help had kept a small rat as soon as Major Bhargav opened the door the rat ran here n there and poor Major bhargav's cap fell off while he jumped with fear....)

On hearing MAjor bhargav screams all went there and saw MAjor Bhargav without his trademark cap which lied onthe floor... ( all were laughign again)
Captain Rajveer sang...
GAbbar singh yeh kehkar gayaaa jo darr gaya woh margaya,
nadaan bachaa hasi khel mey kodi gazab ki dekar gaya.. 😉

......................contiue the next part....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tukz_REmix

gr8 1....luvd it... 👏

thanx for always encouraging us..😃 and happy to know u loved reading it...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg .... you guys are amazing 👏 👏 👏 .... unfortunately i can't think of anything to add right now .... 😭 ..... but will hopefully get back to this soon 😃

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