Gabbar coming to KMA!!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Neha, wah wah...mujhe itni khushi ho rahi hai ki , meri choti si koshihs ne kissike chehre par hassi layiii..😊

Brilliant, ab aap ne start kiya..aur main aap ke nakshey kadam pe chal rahi hun...means u too r brilliant than...😃

atma ghussi..😆😆😆 but u look lovely when u laugh like that ekdam sweetest na...to chale ga...keep smiling..n rocking...😃

Thank you for the compliment,par aap,Ammu,Priyanka Di,Nidhi, aur Sana mujhse zyaada brilliant hain..😃

Haan sachhi.Actually main achche bachche ke tarah khaana kha rahi thi ki woh line padhke hasna shuru kar di..😆

Im continuing it...

And the game begins...

Major Bhargav is busy in something...Sambha and Kaalia comes to meet him...

Sambha:Sardar aap kya kar rahe hain?

Major Bhargav:Hey Cadet Sambha!Maine aapse kaha tha na ki mujhe Sir kahiye.

Sambha:Galti ho gayi ho sardar.

Major Bhargav:Koi baat nahi.Aap bataiye..

Kaalia:Sardar aaj aapki Ritu Ji aayengi..

Major Bhargav(blushes):Kya????Aap sach keh rahe hain???Kab kitne baje????

Sambha:Koi chaar baje..

Major Bhargav pulls their cheeks and thanks them for it...

Major Bhargav is getting ready for it..Woh apne best dress ke collections ko khojte hain aur Sambha aur Kaalia se poochhte hain...

Major Bhargav:Hey cadets!!Kya aap batayenge ki main kis mein achcha dikhoonga?

Kaalia:Aap jo bhi pahente hain bahut handsome lagte hain(in his mind:jo bhi pahen mogambo ka chacha lagega).

Major Bhargav:Phir bhi.Koi toh colour bataiye...

Kaalia picks out a black suit...

Kaalia:Sardar mera matlab hai Sirrrr yeh lijiye,ismein aap rajkumar lagenge aur Ritu Ji aap par fida ho jaayengi(ismein draculla lagega aur Ritu Ji tujhe dekh ke hi behosh ho jayengi)..

Major Bhargav:Haan yeh toh mera favourite suit hai...

Kaalia aur Sambha Huda ke paas jaate hain sab batane ke liye...

Kaalia:Huda Mamu kaam ho gaya.Mogambo Uncle ne wohi black suit pahen liya jismein humne khujli ke powders daale the..Hee hee hee..

Huda:Oye Kaaliye "mamu" kise keh raha hai??Chal tune kaam kar diya.Ab dekhte hain iske asli mazaa..

All of them laugh(in the same style as Gabbar and his chamches used to laugh)😆...

Huda informs Gabbar that Dr.Ritu is returning..Gabbar starts jumping like anything..

Im writing the storyline plz expand it..😊

Huda is helping Gabbar to get ready...

Alekh informs Captain Rajveer about Mission:~Khujli...

Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

Its awesome,fabulous,great,mindblowing,amazing,wonderful👏 👏 👏 👏..

Im continuing the story...

Captain Rajveer and Major Nair are talking...

Major Nair:Waqt ke saath mujhe meri galtiyon ka ehsaas ho gaya..Iska pachtaava hai mujhe.Maanta hoon main strict tha cadets ke saath,par unki bhalai ke liye.Unhe meri criticism ki zaroorat thi aur aapki encouragement.Issi se toh woh sab achche soldiers banenge.Main aapka saath isliye de raha hoon kyunki aap KMA ke Best Mentor hain.Aap toh itne achche mentor hain ki aapki Cadet Singh aapko respect karti hai.Aapke khilaaf aapke jo bhi dushman hote hain unse ladhti hai.Par main aisa mentor hoon ki meri Cadet Ghai ne meri kabra khod di thi.Main itna chikh raha tha chilla raha tha par koi nahi sun raha tha..

Captain Rajveer(laughs):Toh Cadet Ghai ne aapke saath aisa kiya.Par aap baahar kaise aaye kabra se?

Major Nair:Dr.Ritu ne meri awaaz suni aur unhone aake meri help ki.Tabhi se mujhe unse pyaar ho gaya.Par Major Bhargav toh un pe line maar rahe hain.

Captain Rajveer:Oh toh ye baat hai.

Major Nair reveals the secrets of Major Bhargav to him...

Im changing the storyline of LRL a bit more. I'll make Naina's character different in our story.Lets change Naina to positive character like she was in Season1.

Naina returns...She goes to Captain Rajveer...

Captain Rajveer is little tensed as the cadets have done friendship with Gabbar and are following him...

Naina:Sir aap pareshaan lag rahe hain.KMA mein sab badal sa gaya hai.Yahaan Gabbar Singh kya kar rahe hain?

Captain Rajveer:Welcome back Cadet Singh.Aisi koi baat nahi hai.Sab thik hai.

Naina:Sir please bataiye shayad main aapki help kar sakoon.

Captain Rajveer:Mere cadets ne Gabbar Singh se dosti kar li hai.Woh unhe follow karte hain.Unki har baat maante hain.Koi apne classes bhi attend nahi karte,sirf film dekhne bhaagte hain kyunki Gabbar ko kabhi naach gaane dekhna ka shauk hua karta tha.

Naina:Sir I am sure woh aapki baat maanenge.Main Alekh ko bhi samjhaoongi..Aap bas kahiye mujhe kya karna hai..I am with you Sir.I'll always support you.Just Believe In Yourself Because Your Cadet Naina Ah Singh Believes In You...

Captain Rajveer(smiles):Thank you Cadet Naina Ah Singh...

Naina goes to Alekh....

Plz continue it...

Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005

Im continuing it...

And the game begins...

Major Bhargav is busy in something...Sambha and Kaalia comes to meet him...

Sambha:Sardar aap kya kar rahe hain?

Major Bhargav:Hey Cadet Sambha!Maine aapse kaha tha na ki mujhe Sir kahiye.

Sambha:Galti ho gayi ho sardar.

Major Bhargav:Koi baat nahi.Aap bataiye..

Kaalia:Sardar aaj aapki Ritu Ji aayengi..

Major Bhargav(blushes):Kya????Aap sach keh rahe hain???Kab kitne baje????

Sambha:Koi chaar baje..

Major Bhargav pulls their cheeks and thanks them for it...

Major Bhargav is getting ready for it..Woh apne best dress ke collections ko khojte hain aur Sambha aur Kaalia se poochhte hain...

Major Bhargav:Hey cadets!!Kya aap batayenge ki main kis mein achcha dikhoonga?

Kaalia:Aap jo bhi pahente hain bahut handsome lagte hain(in his mind:jo bhi pahen mogambo ka chacha lagega).

Major Bhargav:Phir bhi.Koi toh colour bataiye...

Kaalia picks out a black suit...

Kaalia:Sardar mera matlab hai Sirrrr yeh lijiye,ismein aap rajkumar lagenge aur Ritu Ji aap par fida ho jaayengi(ismein draculla lagega aur Ritu Ji tujhe dekh ke hi behosh ho jayengi)..

Major Bhargav:Haan yeh toh mera favourite suit hai...

Kaalia aur Sambha Huda ke paas jaate hain sab batane ke liye...

Kaalia:Huda Mamu kaam ho gaya.Mogambo Uncle ne wohi black suit pahen liya jismein humne khujli ke powders daale the..Hee hee hee..

Huda:Oye Kaaliye "mamu" kise keh raha hai??Chal tune kaam kar diya.Ab dekhte hain iske asli mazaa..

All of them laugh(in the same style as Gabbar and his chamches used to laugh)😆...

Huda informs Gabbar that Dr.Ritu is returning..Gabbar starts jumping like anything..

Im writing the storyline plz expand it..😊

Huda is helping Gabbar to get ready...

Alekh informs Captain Rajveer about Mission:~Khujli...

Originally posted by: tukz_REmix

kuuuuuuuuuuuuul👏

Thank you 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: tukz_REmix

Great work Neha....khujli wali track...😆😆 that too with Major bhrgav its goign to be fun to write the next part..ok...I will try...great track ..😃

After gettign to know from Alekh that Major bhargav is going to wear a Khujli wala suit in front of Ritu all the plannign team hid behind the window to see the how the event takes palce...😉

Major Bhargav lookign the mirror thinking(dreaming) Dr. Ritu is behind him checkign his collar adn she is singing getting close to him😳

Oyla Oyla Oyla, Dil Tera Ab Hoyla...
Mehbooba Mehbooba Mehbooba
Tu Sirf Mera Mehboob Maein Teri Mehbooba
Tujhe Chaahegi Bada Khoob Teri Mehbooba😛

SOmebody knocks at the door and he comes out of his dream(blushes) and take a comb to comb his hair..but than realises his hair condition ... counts the little hair growing....(music behind...)😕

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera
Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja Baal aayi bahaar..

and his heart burns , pain what God did with him and his hair..why..didnt they grow..and keeps the comb with tears in his eyes..😭😭wears his cap and opens the door...

Kaalia comes: Sirji aapne ab tak suit nahi pehna....aur baniyaan mey ghumrahe hain...jaldi kijiye agar mere jagah pe Ritu ayi hoti to...chaliye...chaliye... main yeh batane aya..ki Ritu ji ne bhi blakc sari pehni hai..apka to abhi se match horaha hai..(thinking in his mind...match box hoga sab khujli se badan jalega pehle suit to pehanle tu)😡

Major bhargav is extremely excited and wears fast fats in hurry while Kaalia goes back...Ritu enters...😛

Major bhargav: Ritu ....jiiii..Ritu ji....(smiling like an idiot) pulling his cap down again n again as if its the TV antenna.😆

Ritu : HI, Major bhargav aap kaise hain..😊

Major bhargav: Main...(the khujli reaction starts) he pauses..main....(again he feels like itchinching..so patting his hands and chest...he says..Mere to hath salamat peir salmat...dil majboot...itchign all the places🤢....aap batayi ye...

Ritu : Aap kuch ajeeb se baat kar rahe hain..sab kuch theek hai na...😕

Major bhargav: Haan...thoda (itching the neck part..) gaane ka mannn tha.... (itching his back) magar gym nahi gaya...(itchign his hands) thandi bahut hai to nahi jaapaya..(itching his stomach)motapa bhi bahut hai.... (itching the whole body) Ab to mujhe nacch na bhi sikhna hai...(he starts dancing like a monkey..

Ritu is scared with the performance..he says: Main jaati hun aap thoda meditation kariye..apko jarurat hai..

Captain Rajveer, Huda , Kaalia , Alekh all cant control their laughter looking at Major bhargavs dance.... Alkeh holds Yudi's with hsi shoudler on hsi mouth to stop him from laughign loudly...😉

Major bhargav runs after Ritu as he wants to go to Dr. shalini ....but Ritu gets scared and starts screaming n running... Help help!! Comes in Gabbar😃...he feels Major Bhrgav is tryign to act smart and bashes him up....while Major bhargav enjoys that bash as he helps him to ease the khujli little bit...The whole KMA n staff r crackign up with Major bhargav happy with the gabbar mukkasand dhakks on ground...throwing him in the mud n all... Gabbar is tired and his clothes r muddy
Gabbar: Chalo...kapde kharab hua to kya...Daag ache hain...😆

Left right left Khujli ka khel hua,
Left right left Major bhargav ka bhel hua...

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

After gettign to know from Alekh that Major bhargav is going to wear a Khujli wala suit in front of Ritu all the plannign team hid behind the window to see the how the event takes palce...😉

Major Bhargav lookign the mirror thinking(dreaming) Dr. Ritu is behind him checkign his collar adn she is singing getting close to him😳

Oyla Oyla Oyla, Dil Tera Ab Hoyla...
Mehbooba Mehbooba Mehbooba
Tu Sirf Mera Mehboob Maein Teri Mehbooba
Tujhe Chaahegi Bada Khoob Teri Mehbooba😛

SOmebody knocks at the door and he comes out of his dream(blushes) and take a comb to comb his hair..but than realises his hair condition ... counts the little hair growing....(music behind...)😕

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera
Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja Baal aayi bahaar..

and his heart burns , pain what God did with him and his hair..why..didnt they grow..and keeps the comb with tears in his eyes..😭😭wears his cap and opens the door...

Kaalia comes: Sirji aapne ab tak suit nahi pehna....aur baniyaan mey ghumrahe hain...jaldi kijiye agar mere jagah pe Ritu ayi hoti to...chaliye...chaliye... main yeh batane aya..ki Ritu ji ne bhi blakc sari pehni hai..apka to abhi se match horaha hai..(thinking in his mind...match box hoga sab khujli se badan jalega pehle suit to pehanle tu)😡

Major bhargav is extremely excited and wears fast fats in hurry while Kaalia goes back...Ritu enters...😛

Major bhargav: Ritu ....jiiii..Ritu ji....(smiling like an idiot) pulling his cap down again n again as if its the TV antenna.😆

Ritu : HI, Major bhargav aap kaise hain..😊

Major bhargav: Main...(the khujli reaction starts) he pauses..main....(again he feels like itchinching..so patting his hands and chest...he says..Mere to hath salamat peir salmat...dil majboot...itchign all the places🤢....aap batayi ye...

Ritu : Aap kuch ajeeb se baat kar rahe hain..sab kuch theek hai na...😕

Major bhargav: Haan...thoda (itching the neck part..) gaane ka mannn tha.... (itching his back) magar gym nahi gaya...(itchign his hands) thandi bahut hai to nahi jaapaya..(itching his stomach)motapa bhi bahut hai.... (itching the whole body) Ab to mujhe nacch na bhi sikhna hai...(he starts dancing like a monkey..

Ritu is scared with the performance..he says: Main jaati hun aap thoda meditation kariye..apko jarurat hai..

Captain Rajveer, Huda , Kaalia , Alekh all cant control their laughter looking at Major bhargavs dance.... Alkeh holds Yudi's with hsi shoudler on hsi mouth to stop him from laughign loudly...😉

Major bhargav runs after Ritu as he wants to go to Dr. shalini ....but Ritu gets scared and starts screaming n running... Help help!! Comes in Gabbar😃...he feels Major Bhrgav is tryign to act smart and bashes him up....while Major bhargav enjoys that bash as he helps him to ease the khujli little bit...The whole KMA n staff r crackign up with Major bhargav happy with the gabbar mukkasand dhakks on ground...throwing him in the mud n all... Gabbar is tired and his clothes r muddy
Gabbar: Chalo...kapde kharab hua to kya...Daag ache hain...😆

Left right left Khujli ka khel hua,
Left right left Major bhargav ka bhel hua...

Im laughing like Gabbar after reading this...😆

Its A Dream Come True👏😊

Di you are a winner⭐️.

Its awesome,fantastic,fantabulous,fabulous,amazing,wonderful,mar vellous,hilarious,excellent,breathtaking,impressive..

🤣

Im laughing like Gabbar after reading this...😆

Its A Dream Come True👏😊

Di you are a winner⭐️.

Its awesome,fantastic,fantabulous,fabulous,amazing,wonderful,mar vellous,hilarious,excellent,breathtaking,impressive..

Hi Neha, wow!!😃 it feels so nice that u just enjoyed this part..hey!!! akhir dost kiski hun..or should i say dii kiski hun...😆 so may be tumhari sobat mey i am trying to write better each time😃

The way u give me compliments...woh saree fantastic n alll...ufff maine to dream land mey hi hoti hun...yeh sachii kya mere liye hain😆😳 thank u so much for all ur encouragment ..😃

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

After gettign to know from Alekh that Major bhargav is going to wear a Khujli wala suit in front of Ritu all the plannign team hid behind the window to see the how the event takes palce...😉

Major Bhargav lookign the mirror thinking(dreaming) Dr. Ritu is behind him checkign his collar adn she is singing getting close to him😳

Oyla Oyla Oyla, Dil Tera Ab Hoyla...
Mehbooba Mehbooba Mehbooba
Tu Sirf Mera Mehboob Maein Teri Mehbooba
Tujhe Chaahegi Bada Khoob Teri Mehbooba😛

SOmebody knocks at the door and he comes out of his dream(blushes) and take a comb to comb his hair..but than realises his hair condition ... counts the little hair growing....(music behind...)😕

Ek do teen, char paanch che saath aath nau, dus gyarah, barah tera
Tera karoon, tera karoon din gin gin ke intezaar,
aaja Baal aayi bahaar..

and his heart burns , pain what God did with him and his hair..why..didnt they grow..and keeps the comb with tears in his eyes..😭😭wears his cap and opens the door...

Kaalia comes: Sirji aapne ab tak suit nahi pehna....aur baniyaan mey ghumrahe hain...jaldi kijiye agar mere jagah pe Ritu ayi hoti to...chaliye...chaliye... main yeh batane aya..ki Ritu ji ne bhi blakc sari pehni hai..apka to abhi se match horaha hai..(thinking in his mind...match box hoga sab khujli se badan jalega pehle suit to pehanle tu)😡

Major bhargav is extremely excited and wears fast fats in hurry while Kaalia goes back...Ritu enters...😛

Major bhargav: Ritu ....jiiii..Ritu ji....(smiling like an idiot) pulling his cap down again n again as if its the TV antenna.😆

Ritu : HI, Major bhargav aap kaise hain..😊

Major bhargav: Main...(the khujli reaction starts) he pauses..main....(again he feels like itchinching..so patting his hands and chest...he says..Mere to hath salamat peir salmat...dil majboot...itchign all the places🤢....aap batayi ye...

Ritu : Aap kuch ajeeb se baat kar rahe hain..sab kuch theek hai na...😕

Major bhargav: Haan...thoda (itching the neck part..) gaane ka mannn tha.... (itching his back) magar gym nahi gaya...(itchign his hands) thandi bahut hai to nahi jaapaya..(itching his stomach)motapa bhi bahut hai.... (itching the whole body) Ab to mujhe nacch na bhi sikhna hai...(he starts dancing like a monkey..

Ritu is scared with the performance..he says: Main jaati hun aap thoda meditation kariye..apko jarurat hai..

Captain Rajveer, Huda , Kaalia , Alekh all cant control their laughter looking at Major bhargavs dance.... Alkeh holds Yudi's with hsi shoudler on hsi mouth to stop him from laughign loudly...😉

Major bhargav runs after Ritu as he wants to go to Dr. shalini ....but Ritu gets scared and starts screaming n running... Help help!! Comes in Gabbar😃...he feels Major Bhrgav is tryign to act smart and bashes him up....while Major bhargav enjoys that bash as he helps him to ease the khujli little bit...The whole KMA n staff r crackign up with Major bhargav happy with the gabbar mukkasand dhakks on ground...throwing him in the mud n all... Gabbar is tired and his clothes r muddy
Gabbar: Chalo...kapde kharab hua to kya...Daag ache hain...😆

Left right left Khujli ka khel hua,
Left right left Major bhargav ka bhel hua...