CONTEST!

hi people,

we have a contest going in our community, here it is....please go ahead and participate!


hey guys, I have organised a contest for all you guys. The winner gets the title of "The biggest RN fan" for 3 months. All you have to do is this:
write a romantic scene between Raj and Naina. ony one entry per person. I will chose the best 5 and post it for voting. the entry which receives the max no of votes wins. All entries must reach me by April 30th. after that i will view all entries and choose the best 5. So c'mon guys, get writing!
Rules:
1. only 1 entry per person
2. the entry should be max. 2 posts long
3. no obscene entries
4. do not write anything offensive to any member
5. DO NOT post any comments, suggestions or criticisms in this topic. only contest entries
6. Heading recommended
7. Have fun while writing!

credit:Ayeshacassim

First Entry-----by Kirti

The train was now about to move any moment...
just then rajveer hears an annoncement....It was NAINA's voice....
she was saying from the announcer's room....everybody was listening in the platform....to what she was saying..
"Rajveer sir,,,aap jahan kahin bhi hain...please yeh baat suniye...Mat jayiye....Mian aaj aapse woh baat kehena chahti hoon jo aine aapse kabhi nanhin kahi....Par aaj woh waqt aa gaya hai...yes..main aapse pyaar karti hoon bahut bahut pyaar...
I forgot to say that I love you.... I forgot to say I love you..
When angry words came and my mind made me feel that our relationship is wrong....I forgot to say I love you...
When the hurt inside me grew and the only pain I could feel was my own.....I forgot to say I love you...
When tears began to fall and stubborn pride made me close my heart to urs...I forgot to say I love you...
When I said maybe It was best that we should end this...and go on in our separate ways..i forgot to say I love you..
When disbelief washed over me...i forgot to say i love you...
when the door closed and al that reamined was my silence and quite tears..i forgot to say I love you....
I forgot to say how much joy u brought in my life....
I forgot to say that u were the most interesting part of my day....i forgot to say that a day without u left something empty inside me....
I forgit to tell u how i thrilled to the sight of ur sweet smile...and the sound of ur quite voice....
i forgot to tell u how much i valued u as a person...
I forgot to tell u that u were the one who taught me to struggle and gave me a hope to live....
i forgot to tell u that u were the one who was always on my side..no matter what happens...
i forgot to tell u that it was u who made me to fall in love...
when u turned to leave, when i could have reached out...but i didnt...because my pain clouded my judgement....i forgot to say I love you...
I simply forgot...
I know time has passed....and our lives are going to move forward....and what we shared remains in the past....But somehow...

....u know just what u did means to me....
What my memories still hold so dear,,,,,
Yet my strongest regret is not expressing my heart's constant whisper...
I LOVE YOU...
I LOVE U
I LOV U
Yes i luv u...
the train began to move.....slowly..then it takes up sped....faster and faster...naina listens as the train slowly moves out of the staition....taking out rajveer with him....rajveer has moved out of naina's life.....he is gone..naian ne bahut der kar di....
naian was hit by a pang of regret....and lonliness....she starts crying,.....use khus pe bahut gussa aa raha tha....Kyunki usne rajveer ko rokne ki pehle koshish nahin kii....
kash raj ko usne ye baat pehle kah dee hoti..kash.....to aaj woh uske saath KMA main hota...She cries desperately....in hope....captain rajveer please wapis aa jayiye..please////Plz mujhe akela chod kar mat jayiye...pls....
just the she heard somebody's hand on her shoulder....who was saying--dekho naian main aa gaya.....
Naina turns and looks at rajveer
Rajveer apni baahein faila ke naian ka intezaar kar raha tha...naian jhat se uske paas daud ke chali jaati hia....and they embraced....crying in each other's arms....lovingly kissing each other....desperately wanting to be with each other forever....naina ke aasoon kab khushi main badal gaye use paat hi nahin chala.....raj train se utar ke naian ke paas aa gaya tha..aakhir naiana ne usse apne dil ki baat jo kah di thi....woh jo sunna chahta tha..usne sun liya ....
then atlast raj breaks the silence...
rajvere000ab yahan se wapis KMA chalen?? ya saare logon ko apne pyaar ka naxaara dikhayen???
naina looks around her..all the people were surrounding her..watching her..and they started clapping...at the couple's happy ending...
naian blushed with embarrasement....
naian--jaldi chalte hain....
And they smiled at each other....and went together hands in hands...to KMA..to start their new lives...happlily...

Second Entry-----Khushi

They did not want to leave each other's arms and wanted to be there for ever.But then naina "Raj mujhe chodo na aacha nahi lagta".Raj ok abhi chodta hu but shaddi ka baad nahi chodunga.Ye sunta hai naina sharma jati hai aur window ke bahar dekhna lagti hai.Just then Raj-naina tumhe sharmana bhi aata hai?(giggles)naina "please mujhe aur mat satao na.Raj-aaj tau mei tumhari koi baat nahi sununga aur ek rose nikalta hai (4rm the bach side)and says yeh tumhara liya my love naina is so happy that she doesnt want these moments to end.Raj-naina kaha kho gayi tum? naina kuch nahi mujhe abhi bhi vishwas nahi ho raha ki aab hum dono.. and she blushes and says nothing.Raj (in a naughty mood thinks something and thinks lets try)and says naina woh samna wali seat pe woh laadki ko dekho kitni sexy lag hai na,uska figure ah..uski aakhe kitni nashili hai nahi naina deekho na.Naina turns red listening to him and says raj get lost i dont wana talk to u huh.Raj aacha aacha sorry baba mei tau bas yeh dekh raha tha ki tum jealous ho sakti ho.Sorry na masti kar raha tha ab itna gussa mat ho darling ...jaanu...sona...

plz na mujhe maf karo.Naina thinks something naughty n stands up from there and goes and sits in the back set of the bus beside a guy who was sitting there(he was a smart one).Raj got so confused, he dint know what was goin on so he also gets up and goes back to talk to her.But naina starts talking to that guy beside her and ignores raj.Naina starts talking(to that guy)hi am naina can we be friends actually i am getting bored and am alone so(and makes a sad face)the guy was unfortunately like huda (in nature hehehe...so he to starts hey why not beautiful my pleasure and takes her hand and gives her a soft kiss and naina raj ko j feel karva na ke liya excepts his kiss.Raj standing there doesnt know how to react.Naina was enjoying it a lot (seeing raj's face turn blue).

Third Entry----by Neha

kirti wrote a good romantic scene for naina & rajveer but it seems too filmy for our uniqe jodi. for our heartthrobe jodi the scene should also be unique. from my point of view i think there relationship should be made so strong ki unhe kuch bhi kehene ya sunane ki zaroorat hi na ho bas aankhon hi aankhon me ek dusare ke dil ka haal pata chal jaye jaise ki naina ko rajveer ki majburi samajhni chahiye ki kyun rajveer ne uske bhai ko mara tabhi woh ye samajh payegi ki rajveer use kiss hud tak chahata hai. jab bhi rajveer usase dur hota hai woh kyun bechain hoti hai. so the romantic scene is like naina realizes that how much she love rajveer & also be able to understand that luv in the eyes of rajveer & both of them committed with each other that they luv each other soooooooooooo.... much.

Forth Entry-----by Priyasha

The lights flashed at the entrance as each couple entered the beautifully decorated restaurant. It was decorated with flowers of different colours—pink, yellow, purple, orange….The only source of light was tat from the candles kept on each table. The light flashed for the fifth just as Rajveer entered wearing a black coat accompanied by Naina who was wearing a sky blue gown, dazzling earrings, high heel sandals with hairs pinned up.
They sat at a table near the door to keep a look out for Ritu and her partner who were supposed to come tat day to celebrate their victory for getting the rifles. They ordered two drinks, both nervous at each others presence. Naina sat their thinking when Rajveer had insisted her to go as it was the couple's party. Naina squeezed the glass absentmindly when the drinks arrived and blood oozed out from her hand as the glass broke.
Rajveer- Yeh kya tumne Naina tumhara dhyaan kaha pe hai. Lao haat dikhao.
Naina hesitantly shows her hand and Rajveer takes out his handkerchief and ties around her palm.
When the waiter arrives, Naina orders aalo parathe but Rajveer orders only coffee. Rajveer tries to avoid Naina's gaze by looking at the door to see who entered. They sit their silently till the food arrived.
Naina struggles to eat with her left when Rajveer looked at her and smiled
Rajveer- Lo mein tumhe khila deta hoon.
Naina protests but finally agrees.
Rajveer tells her some jokes and together they both laugh.
Rajveer- Naina tum har waqt hansti rehna tum achi dikh ti ho.

Rajveer kneels down in his knees.
Rajveer-May I have the honour to dance with the lady.
Naina looks at him and smiles and says "Sure".
Rajveer led Naina to the dancefloor and they found a place among all other couples.
They danced to the music in slow steps.
As the music picks up pace,
Naina - Sir, ek baat poochun
Rajveer - Poocho Naina
Naina - Par aapko sach sach batana padega
Do u Love me?
Naina searched Rajveer's face for the answer but there was none.
Rajveer turned to go. He couldn't hide his fealings from Naina.
Naina (with tears in her eyes) - Sir, I Love U. Main aapke bina mar jaungi. Aaj apko batana hi padega.
Naina sank down to her knees,tears rolling down her cheeks.
All the other couple were staring at them.
Rajveer lifted Naina and wiped her tears but couldn't stop his own. He kissed Naina on her forehead with his wet lips.
Rajveer – I Love U too Naina, Main tumse apni jaan se bhi jyaada pyaar karta hoon par kehne mein thodi deri ho gayi.
Naina smiled in between tears and hugged him.
Rajveer slipped his ring in her finger and loud applause broke from the spectators.
At that moment, the light flashed at the entrance and a beautiful couple stepped inside one of them being Ritu and her partner.
Naina's eyes became wider with shock and chill ran through her spine as she recognized Ritu's partner………..

Moderator's Note:my god! wat awsome entries! that also on d last day (although i gave 2 onths time!!!!! lol!!!) okay now since we have just started getting entries i will give 5 more days time. on staurday evening i will close the contest and all entries will be put up forr voting. the voting will last for around 10-12 days after which the entry with most entries will win! so keep posting!

Fifth Entry-----by JIV

Here goes mine!
I was asked this one question,

What if Naina loves Raj, so how would Naina try to make him confess his love or her?

Answer:

Ok.....there are 2-3 ways......very filmy....as I am bad @ romantic scenes!

First,

Naina would get herself in a dangerous situation/during the ritu case, when she is in a soup.....raj saves her.....and after a lot of days....during a casual meeting....she'd go away from the gathering....in a way that raj would realize that she left.....making sure that he follows her! And then she'd stand alone in the darkness...very gloomily.....and Raj would come over and try to cheer her up....and she will say,

"Ek sawal pooch sakti hoon aapse, sir? Personal Sawal!"

"Hmm...poocho!"

"Woh Sir, maine aap pe bharosa nahin kiya, aapko hurt kiya, goli tak mardi.....Major Bhargav ka saath diya...firbhi aap mere liye yeh sab kyun karte ho? aap ki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi.....kyu, Sir?"

"Woh...Naina....."

"Hmmm?"

"Tum meri student ho na....aur mera farz banta hai...."

"Huda, Yudi, Pooja.....yeh sab aapke student hi to hain.....to kya aap in sab se..."

"Naina...ab....iss waqt kaisi baatein le ke...."

"Nahin sir, bataiye....."

"Woh Naina....."

She moves closer....to make him feel assured of her reply!

"Bolo na sir?"

"...its because....Nai....that....emmm...I....I...."

"Sir, boliye na....", she moves still close....

Ok thats it!!!! Raj tells himself!

"I LOVE YOU"

And than without a word...he hugs her....and she gives in....her acceptance of the embrace is her reply!

Second,

Well, it would be a game....Naina would persuade the gang to celebrate a festival....and they play a faculty-cadet date game! And its that, cadets are given a number in the canteen in the morning and teacher receive heir envelopes with a no. these no. are to be matched, and the couple has to spend the day tog, and play some games.....and submit the results during the party....the best couple wins!

so.....Naina would make sure, that her and captains no. match!

So evidently they form the hottest couple! and the day begins with Raj taking her out for a breakfast....to a nearby dhaba....his way of romance....but both keep chattering of wierd, non related stufff....than both go back to raj's room and start playing the games......

there is a card lying on his table, telling them about the game

Just one game!

They have to stare at each other until one of them blinks!

"Sir aap haar jaoge...."

"Hmmm....", he raises his eyebrows.

"Bhaiyya ko hamesha harati thi....."

"....yeh Naveen bhi na....har baar mujhse jeeta tha, aur ladkiyon se har ta tha....nautanki...."

Now, Naina raises her eyebrows, and raj looks at her!

"....aap bhaiyya se harte the...to mujhse to nahin bachenge....", some thing in her expression, made him smile and look away!

"kuch bhi Naina....."

"Achha, Try me, sir!"

And both of them smiled...and started the game....

one - two - three - go!!!!

They gear up on opposite ends of raj's bed, and stare at each other! and Raj puts on a slow romantic music on....his room is lit with candles, and its like the mentorship programme, interview day!

None realise how much time passed.....

None knew, when Naina moved close to him, and he to her.........

None realize when he place his hand on hers.....


.....they just stared at one another!

It must be so many minutes.... none blinked!

Finally, Naina,

"Sir...."

"Shhhh....."

"Woh....."

"Shhh...Naina....let me......"

Naina opens her mouth....but Raj places his hand on it....to silence her......

"Naina.....I...."

Naina stares at him......

"....I......I....I........."

Its complete silence....the soft music stopped playing long back...but who knew? and who cared?.....They could just hear each others breaths.....and feel their heartbeats going faster!

A tear sparkled in Naina's eyes.....and he gt the courage from somewhere!

"I LOVE YOU.....love you.....Naina....."

And both broke down.....crying in joy and laughing at the smae time....on each other's a shoulders.....in each others arms......

Blisss!!!!

Credit goes to all the writers, and our moderator, Ayesha!!!!

So, go on.....and give in your stories! 👏