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FASSBEN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

HI Daya

Awesome ud loved the convo between Dutta and Nakku. AS going to throw a party for both of them. what will happen and how will Dutta and Nakku act this one out

Thanks as always take care

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Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

the conversation between tasha was very well written , though we get to know more about nakku's childhood but still why dutta married her is a mystery. baaji has a habit of coming between dutta n nakku but this time he comes between nakku and her golgappas 😆 good she gives them to him and doesn't eat just goes to show how strong headed she is. thanks daya for the update

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mirage123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

hi daya

fab ud...liked the convo of naku & dutta...naku opened her heart to dutta...PN celebration time...ud fast😊

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Nakusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

Hi curly locks

Loved the ud...dutta & naku sitting across ...maybe for first time...serene atmosphere...golgappas brought so many memory for naku

Naku's first meeting with dutta...ganpat is worst ...😡...taking advantage of helpless girl...since she has nobody

Dutta gave hear to her problem...meaningful convo...

Reception preparation for couple...😊.hope it will bring them closer...ud soon...thanks for making time for us

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Hamlet53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

ATF

chapter 7

hi my Baji.. firstly your DP is super... now if I can get my eyes off him.. who rules Laagi forum.. I can get down to the next chapter of ATF.

heavens ! thirty minutes of silence before he speaks.. the water they both looked across too must have stilled.. seems serious.. mind you reminded me of the water front setting of young Dutta in LTL1.. enjoyed how you wrote the defence justifications, Naku conjures up in her mind for Dutta.. and still ends up having the bit of loathing for him..she does feel quite like a slave, bought by him..

Sad the sour ,tangy savoury golgappas had memories attached to her family.. her hurt in seeing them perhaps clamps her up from sharing the festering wound. ..gosh alcohol over powers the family tradition.of golguppa's..dutta's sympathy does come as timely, for a smarting Naku.. but he can't put her off her step father.. loyal hai lardki.. gives parental respect where due..what ever.

Well he almost gives away the real reason of why he marries her.. but then stops.. so she has to fester more.. Still the waterside at least helped them to break some ice between each other.

A party next.. how exciting.. question is will Dutta attend , the reception? Looking forward to finding out next pappy..

Thanks for a lovely update, sharmilee tim tim.. although a fresh story .. yet has a nostalgic feel of LTL1.. that's why I loved it.. much love continue ..[Ileana de cruz ... you wishhh].. hammie...[ heard mishal fever is back on you] haaa hooo.. hainnn? I just noticed your siggy... mishal in role aiming for a chummmaaa.. haila!..mailaaa!

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jedy25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

hi dayaawesome ud...sad past is past...naku looking forward...ya but she doesn't know dutta's intention...reception waiting ...ud soon

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sona89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

Hi DayaAwesome UD...Naku past😭...Dutta can't say the truth...reception...when is it...i will prepared...😊ud soon

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dilse14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

hi dayawonderful udnaku still has remorsedutta didn't complete the sentencegolgappa's & receptionme waiting too😊

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tahera57

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Thanks Daya enjoyed reading the ud..Dutta had the good sense to bring Nakku to a calm place to have a chat with her , it wasn't a good heart to heart but they will get there slowly but surely ... that's our reasons for reading on to see how they will progress there... AS is on a roll 1st the mandir now march him to his reception ...good going ...thanks for the fab ud waiting for next ...