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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: mirage123

Hi daya

Fab ud...dutta trying hide bedding😆...temple trip now gol gappa...pls ud fast😊

Hey mirage123,

LOL glad you enjoyed the UD. I rather enjoyed the hiding the bedding game😆 Poor guy caught in the middle of his mother and wife...will UD soon. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

👍🏼 Awesome UD so Dutta and Nakku go and visit the Temple because of his mother asked them he do not believe In god but Nakku has full faith. On the way back Nakku see a Gol Gappa food stall and becomes sad which Dutta had notice and goes and gets some Is they a story behind this Dutta does not go home goes were Is he going hope to find out soon. pls ud really soon

Take care now

Hey Fassbender,

Glad you liked the UD. Yep,he doesn't believe in God but maybe she'd change him? Yep, there is more layers to her character...what shaped her what she deals with etc...and well let's have them unfold slowly...will UD soon. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Nakusha

Hi curly locks

Loved the ud...here comes AS with her pooja proposal...meeting with purohitji kya...😆thanking for dutta is married...she would have an attack if she know it's a conditional marriage

Bedding hiding scene & temple were too good...continue soon😊

Hey Nakusha,

Haha OMG no purohitji ...sorry to burst that bubble...I think one love story in this family is enough!😆 Oh she would be so devastated to know her son lied to her. Let's see what happens on that note later...glad you enjoyed the UD. Thank you for reading and commenting always :)

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: jedy25

Hi daya

Superb ud...naku is giving dutta hard time...baji & dutta signal scene good...dutta looking at naku in temple ..ud soon😊

Hey Jedy,

Glad you liked the UD. Yep, Naku is giving him a hard time and I think she enjoys it😆

Thanks for reading and commenting. Much appreciated. Will UD soon. TC

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

ATF

chapter 6.

hi pappy,
Hey Hammie! Hope you are doing well.

Seems, Dutta has to follow the traditional family beliefs, and knowing him ,no surprise! he resists.. and no surprise either! that his mother uses her powers to coax him to go to the temple for devotion... funnily enough she ropes Naku into pressurizing him in going! and all this in the name of keeping Aye Sahib happy . Feisty though ,she may be , but in the temple she certainly gets him thinking.. about her, faith..
Yes, he's a mama's boy😆 And will do anything for her even when he absolutely disagrees with it's purpose. And Nakusha is definitely getting to him...

Overall some positive outcomes of Dutta's reaction.. he heeded to his mother's request of visiting the temple.. and that, he also sees Naku as a devotee..

Thanks, pappy ,for an interesting prompt update.. well written as always.. much love hammie.

Glad you liked the UD and are enjoying the story so far. Thanks for reading and commenting Hammie! Love knowing you thoughts! Take care.

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: dilse14
hi daya
wonderful ud

dutta & baji too good timing
AS got dutta & naku to temple
liking it...ud soon😊

Hey Dilse,

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD.

Originally posted by: uwith
hi dayaawesome ud...thanxs for making time for us...funny act 😆dutta scared of mom & wife...he is liking her...she has her misunderstanding...ud sooncongrats for 25 pgs

Hey Uvi,

thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed the UD.

Haha yes poor guy is stuck between the two in a mess of his own making.

Serves him right.

Thank you for the wishes...I didn't even notice I reached 25pgs😆

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
awesum part... temple viisit tasha together...dutta boought gol-gappas fr nakkku...continue sooon

Hey Usha,

Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD. He did but will she actually eat them? 😆 Let's see...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
oyeee... sharmilee tim tim.. high five.. happy 25 pgs 👏⭐️
twinky found this for me.. i asked her.. tere liye.. stop! rolling those eyes..MOOSE!
oyeee.. now you better get this link to work i cant do it grrrhhh.. so mad iam.. twinky helped lets see if it works.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P2YRN8iGQ6g[/YOUTUBE]

Hey Hammie! Thank you, thank you! Could've have reached it without you all.

Haha I haven't yet watched this movie but I did like this song...danush just makes them amusing...thanks for posting and looks like you've gotten it to work...with twinkles help. Thanks twinky...was entertaining to watch the video.

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
enjoyed reading this light hearted update , loved how you described baaji's antics ..you were perfect also dutta hiding the bedding was cute , my god this don is quite scared of his wife ..lol..and dutta admiring his wife in the temple was sweet then the golgappa scene was also very nice , maybe nakku was deprived of having them as a child ..thanks daya

Hiya Rose,

thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed the UD. Haha Baaji had to have his screen space na? And LOL yes but he definitely does fear her...😆 he'd rather not have to deal with her vomit of words...more on the gol gapps in the next UD...thanks again!