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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: mirage123
hi dayafab ud...dutta & naku would seem like a imposter...😆..6 months isn't a long time to fall in love😊ud fast

Hiya!

Glad you liked the UD. Yep they'll definitely be acting ...its a matter of when acting becomes serious or if they really end up acting at all...hmmm...ideas ideas!😆 You're right, I think 6 months is longer than they need😉😆

Thanks for reading and commenting. Greatly appreciate it!

Take Care. Phir milenge chalte chalte...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: uwith
hi dayaawesome ud...dutta & naku has such charming personality...difficult to escape from each other...how long can they just act...good work...ud soon😊

Hey Uvi!

Glad you liked the UD. Interesting you picked up on their personalities...it may seem like they're both annoying and argumentative but there is more to them. Though he is controlling and she doesn't like that...but as you go you'll see they both can bend a little! 😆 How long can they act indeed...I think this next chapter should set the base for that one😉

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Take Care. Phir milenge chalte chalte...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
i have always loved your style of writing , its simple yet intriguing ..the whole scene was penned wonderfully. love this stubborn nakku who just wants to flee from him and this 6 months time will change her heart and mind completely. waiting to know how this arrangement works

Hiya Rose!

Thank you for the compliments on my writing! I'm glad you think so! It's taken a while to get there as you well know😆 and still it needs work. But am happy to hear you enjoy my writing! I am liking the stubborn Naku too...and though that stubbornness will choose when to surface in upcoming chapters..it'll definitely be there. It should be fun to write...6 months to freedom let's see all she's going to do for that...

Thanks for reading and commenting, Rose.

Take Care. Phir milenge chalte chalte...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: -bharti-
Hi daya
Hi Bharti!!! 🤗
Neandrethal ? wow thats cute ..😆 so she sees him as a primitive, outdated animal hahahaa. very funny this is getting. I just luv the spunkiness of this girl.
When you're angry you choose the worst words possible...I think I'd have liked to see a more spunky Naku in the show...a bold character who does dare to defy him...no care for consequences...anyway she'll definitely butt heads with him in this story...where she can of course...she does have a image to maintain for the sake of her freedom...😉
Whats with naku,s past n her past rosy image of dutta, waiting to know this bit 😛
I'll bring in more on that later😛
The six months bait is dangling n naku has no option but to bite it. the seemingly long wait for divorce will im sure turn to finding a middleground, a change of heart.. till then naku has to act as a real wife, for me as a reader the fun part has just begun 😃, its round the corner but for poor naku the misery begins.
Oh I think you all will enjoy the bits that are about to begin...sure enough there will be his ground and her ground and middle ground...they just have to find where it mixes...we'll see how that turns out for them...or may they might end up killing each other in annoyance before then😆
Why do i get a feeling this man too is enjoying her ordeal, or its his only way of prolonging her stay. He sure has a soft corner somewhere. ok before i bore you with my presumptions will be patient 😃
Hey, you're not so off the mark...he does have a soft spot...and more on that in the next UD😉 you'll see :P but this soft spot won't make bow down to her that's for sure!
" He just has to exist to get on her nerves ", thats another line i was enjoying.. what a compliment ! 😆
Hahaha hey that line could be interpreted in a lot of ways 😉
Thoroughly enjoyed the short update, plzz continue soon daya
Glad you liked the UD...note that my size of UDs has significantly decreased since my previous stories😆 I am loving it!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
Take Care. Phir milenge chalte chalte...

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: tahera57
@blue, yeh exactly what I thought.. but you know," out of sight out of mind" forum se dour rehnay ka asar...

isn't that right daya ? or any other reason we should know about😉?😆

@bharti: YOu're absolutely right . I have ideas...plot developments...all happened in Mexico while I was swimming away!😆 And the next UD came about on the 4 hour plane ride back home today. So let's see how well that turns out.

@tahera: It's the out of sight out of mind...just sort disappeared on me😆

Edited by -daya- - 11 years ago

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Iridescence

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

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Edited by .iridescence. - 6 years ago

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

awsemm update entry of family tasha with them

Edited by tamanna1391 - 11 years ago

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-bharti-

@-bharti-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

res..

Hi daya

Looks like naku had a few sleepless nights before she gave her nod to his terms. Also im wondering why she didnt think of messaging or even calling him on his cell to convey the same, intriguing indeed unless she wished to bumb her head into his jaws 😳

Both working hard at hating each other 😃 constantly reminding oneself of their reason to be together, this is turning to be very funny.

Ok she seems to have no difficulty in slipping into her new role as his wife.. We can already sense the softening from both the warring parties. The internship has worked wonders 😉

Hmm these two are looking at ways of bumping into each other every now n then. Otherwise how will one explain naku,s frequent mishaps. But what better way to welcome her so called inlaws. AS certainly looks more than pleased to see her son settled, the three sisters pulling their brother,s leg was cute. How can baji the master behind scenes be left out, handling all the dirty jobs of his bhao n putting up a charade of wellnes 😛 perfect partners in crime

A great deal of understanding is visible between the two n i doubt dutta,s act of wiping her tear was just phoney concern. He was there at her side everytime she needed him. what an anti climax, i had expected a much more volatile high decibel exchanges between the two 😃

Daya waiting for the unravelling of the mystery of dutta,s decision to marry naku.

Thank you daya for a slightly longer than all the previous n a bumpy update 😃 do come back soon with more

Edited by -bharti- - 11 years ago