FF: A Twisted Fate (TaSha) - Page 12

Hi crulylocks

loved the ud...it was 72 hrs ...so it took naku ages to accept his plan...😉..dutta is patient with her...he has noble intention...he feels she deserve better than what he can offer...he is hiding the fact...he is fool with personality like him robin hood of PN...naku would find it difficult to move...as for now I m enjoying their get to know phase...its romantic story agree

Meet the families...AS with her gang...they got in RK banners pose...I felt somebody missing...guess purohitji😆

Loving the story...continue soon

Hi Daya

Awesome ud...naku accepted dutta's term & condition...dutta is hiding fact about his hurried wedding...AS , sisters & baji make an entry...too god...ud soon😊

ATF!

Chapter 4

Hi Pappy! thought could never get here..but how can I forget my Baji.. it's like forgetting my self.. and that can never happen, I,Me &Myself.. hummm?

So at last there is some movement between them.. but what a clash! bang! scream!Now that is understandable where Dutta is.. nothing is calm either with him or the person he is with!

His ummh deal seems reasonable .. you scratch my back and I'll scratch yours..dhande ka usal.. now all she needs to do is listen to him. and do as she is told! if only life was so uncomplicated.

Gosh this Dutta has a scheming mind like a certain Kala.. mind you using his bosom pal BR to do his dirty jobs for him is no surprise and reminds the readers of the duji connection.

Loved that bit in the chapter where they share their like, dislikes.. great ploy for ice breaker.. humans love to talk about themselves.. give or take!mind you I chuckled at the bit, she's not good at housekeeping!hummm.. I bloody well hope she can make more then a cup of coffee? Oops1 ok the woman can cook, phew! And enjoys the activity.

Hey sounds typical in laws coming over and Bahu's skills assessed.. of course before that a rather typical hubby /wife scene involving a casserole dish! Pyar tu hona hi tha! enjoyed the scene.. cherry on the cake is dimps.. with his as usual KMH entry!

Loved the family scene.. so nostalgic of the original LTL characters .. well Naku warms to his mother, and she also spots a certain tenderness in her husband for his mother.. so some moral issues about lying.. especially to his benign mother.. begin to raise their head in Naku... interesting.. want to know more about what happens next.. thanks for a great piece of written work.. sharmilee tim tim.. much love, as ever yours hammie.