SS~Dutta~a trilogy~ thread 1. Follow the Heart. continued on thread 2 - Page 60

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Posted: 10 years ago
FA very positive update. I just loved the opening scene tasha hugging each other under the moon. Very beautifully written. Tasha dialogues were wonderful both of them honestly sharing their feelings without any inhibitions. Some things never change like dutta proposing so directly and abruptly. Then nakku not eating before dutta . These small small things keep the story close to ltl and I like it.
Even today our society is not so open when it comes widow remarriage but good to see dutta's family accepting nakku with open arms
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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi Hamlet

Awesome ud...mein kya bolege Naku patent dialogue😃...Dutta did all the talking to Damodar & AS...honest convo with Dutta & Naku...you did complete justice...ud soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi hamlet

fab ud..convo btwn tasha..he made himself clear.she loves him but family..dutta did the needful..some official recognization for naku suffered a lot...ud fast😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
dil hai sacha aur dimagh hai kacha.
waah waah
dil hai sacha aur dimagh hai kacha.
bharti tera jawab nahi aa raha ...
kya baat hai bacha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi hamletawesome ud...heartfelt talk naku doesn't have fear .soulmate dutta found in her muse..proper proposal remind me of ff PR..😊this time though fear of dilawar.dutta will deal with it..he is an artist ..waiting how tackles it..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi bharti kahan ho aur ye tahera kidar hai??

okay now shayari time

khamosh sa shaher aur guftago ki aarzoo...
hum kis say karain baat koi bolta he nahi...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: afi7861

hi bharti kahan ho aur ye tahera kidar hai??


okay now shayari time

khamosh sa shaher aur guftago ki aarzoo...
hum kis say karain baat koi bolta he nahi...

Mein idhar hi hu, zaraa masroof hu 😉
seene mein jalan ankhon mein toofan sa kyu hai, iss shahar mein har shaks pareshan sa kyu hai ?
Dil hai toh dhadkane ki bahanaa koi doonde, pattar ki tarah behis o bejaan sa kyu hai?

lo, meri taraf se ek do line from one of my fav bolly songs,
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Posted: 10 years ago
have updated my spot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Mein idhar hi hu, zaraa masroof hu 😉

seene mein jalan ankhon mein toofan sa kyu hai, iss shahar mein har shaks pareshan sa kyu hai ?
Dil hai toh dhadkane ki bahanaa koi doonde, pattar ki tarah behis o bejaan sa kyu hai?

lo, meri taraf se ek do line from one of my fav bolly songs,


oye bharti zabardas to good kya jawab diya hai 👏

bewafa dunniya main sari zindgi saath kun de ga.
log toh hathon se dafna kar bhool jate hain ke qaber kon se hai..


bharti waiting for you for more shayari 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

Thank you hammie, will be back

Hi hammie
hi bart.. good to see you..
Dutta is wasting no time n in one g acknowledges naku,s explanation then forgives her mistakes then goes on like a father to a child warning her not to lie in future, warna consequences(punishment) hogi lol.. Then he shocks her by proposing in the same breath.
Yaar kaunsi gaadi choot rahi thi, itni bhi jaldi kya hai.. thoda naku ko bhi tarsaon, mauka toh de baat karne ki, thoda usko aur parak le, nahi he is the accuser, prosecutioner withess judge all rolled in one. Naku is a mere spectator.
you nailed it and well put.. vakil sahibaa,,,


He doesnt waste a millionth of a second, jaise naku abhi ke abhi disappear hojayegi. Banda bada despo hai 😛..well kuch tu problem hai is bande ga..
But Liked how he opens up effortlessly. It doesnt matter how or what it can be construed, he has to say it. This is quint essentially dutta to me. Brutally honest nothing hidden not even his inner thought process. And naku is just the opposite, i guess its her upbringing, the socio cultural insecurities which come into play.
glad to read you can find dutta in this man who is NOT a don..
Aah finally! he,s thinking of his haste to propose naku, toh somewhere he is still sane in his big fat head. method in his madness? haina..
It will take an effort for the two to get over the social barriers that is invisible, remarriage of a widow n all. There is a class divide here when it comes to remarriages of widows atleast young widows. You can say a rural urban divide bhi. Nevertheless its happening. i love it when you can relate fiction to facts bart.. it is a joy to write for you..
But since naku,s marriage was a sham she would rather move on, embrace the new life offered on a platter. And Ofcourse the family,s opinion would matter.
Hmm already dutta ko honewali biwi ki fikar, hmm piyaar jo hogaya, hain, now he remembers he is the one who is disabled n wants her to feed lol.. khana peena nahana,. arey yaar iske ilava bhi duniya mein bahut kuch hai, pyari pyari baatein karo, ek doosre ko chedo, ghoomi ghoomi karo, romance karo.. Yeh dono already shadi bache phir bahut jald budape ki planning karenge, head desk!! ooo laa la i can sense you were rolling those eyes of yours
Hain? yeh kya tareeka hai badon se poochne ki??? it was more like dhamki or rather a veiled threat. He is just making them know his choice n takes liberty from naku,s side too. Bas, khatam, baji toh babi ki muh bhi chup karadiya. This is called chat mangni pat biha, nahi mangni bhi nahi seeda shadi ya kuch aur?? hmm jab miya biwi raazi kya karega qazi! tu aur kiya.. family's ok.. yaar bhi ok.. and lardki tu he know is doubly ok!
Naku is saved from the uncomfortable queries but im sure nothing can prevent babi give her two cents later...or may be not.. she should know dutta ke saath beti ki life secure
So, we are hurtling at break neck speed towards shadi, bring it on hammie. But i gues there is dilawar the chota sa deewar also.humm.. you know how i feel about shaadi ,bart ..means end of SS..you accept that?
Many thanx hammie, your writing keep us rooted to laagi n inturn our friends. Take care.
well shall i say my writing keeps me linked to you ..and our other readers tu it would be true.. thanks so much for your comments always empower me.. will try to UD tomm.. much love as ever yours hammie.. still iam not my self.. bart..

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