FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi Rose nice ud naku thoughts beautifully written love naku and anays first meet dutta back home and having difficulty to accept their relation
waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
rose another great update, Dutta ko Anna ki hadi pasli todnay ke baad abhi bhi gussa khatam nahi huwa, poor bird,"hatt" couldn't just move by his hand gentley...he needs to learn from his nephew! liked annay and nakku meeting, nakku has never had anyone to befriend b4 hopefully they both will bond soon...looking forward to next ud.
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Posted: 11 years ago

@ tamanna - yup nakku is lonely in her new home and hope that at least annay accepts her.

@ twinkle twinkle rocking star - thanks a lot for enjoying the update so much.

@ dilse - glad you liked annay and nakku meeting. hope you enjoy the next part as well.

@ sona - thanks for finding the update awesome and the card is cute.

@ ranjana - thanks dear for reading n commenting.

@ fassben - thanks so much for appreciating the scene where nakku bares her heart to lord ganpati and also when she meets annay. well annay is her only hope as dutta will take time to accept her. thanks for the lovely rose.

@ mirage - agree with you, it is a tough situation for nakku where she is treated like a stranger in her new house. there is no one to understand and support her at the same she can't even complain. thanks for commenting.

@ nakusha - hey first of all thanks for the blooming rose , its beautiful. and i am happy that you liked reading about nakku's thought process and enjoyed her first meeting with annay. don't worry you will get your book back soon.

@ usha - thanks for finding the update awesome and i am glad it touched your heart.

@ jedy - thanks a lot for appreciating the way nakku's feeling were penned. hope you like the next chapter too.

@ sanghtia - thanks a lot .

@ uwith - the yellow roses look fresh n lovely thanks . it feels great to know that even though the update focused mainly on nakku still you enjoyed it and didn't find it boring. thanks so much for appreciating the way nakku's thought have come out.

@ hammie - well for me getting into the mind of a character is easier than writing an action sequence or describing the whole situation. in short by ability to describe anything is nothing compared to yours. you are gifted. agree with you nakku is a bundle of nerves who is clueless about her surroundings. she has been thrown into an extremely tough situation and she has nobody to seek help from although she is hoping that annay might come to her rescue . lets see what happens. thanks for appreciating the shower scene , although i guess on this forum only dutta taking a shower is enjoyed ..lol..thanks once again for liking the ganpati scene along with the pigeon feeding scene. your comments are always amazing and very encouraging.

@ emily - happy to know that you loved how nakku's emotions were penned. thanks for taking out time to read and comment. hope you continue to enjoy this story.

@ tahera - you are right , at times dutta can be really insensitive , poor bird had to face his anger. he should definitely learn something from his caring nephew. thanks a lot for liking the scene where annay n nakku meet for the first time. yes it would be great if annay accepts nakku with open arms.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Rose

Thanks for anno
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aishwish

I take my jhappi and pappi back,😡 I don't love you any more.uff you are such a miser ..in fact I hate you.😡 ..OM SAI RAM , baba please give me strength to deal with her.How could you so heartless,😭 from where does you get the guts from to torture my heart, kidney, liver, lungs in short sab kuch? ..do you really think that i need guts to torture you and your lovely body ? no baby , torturing you is not a gutsy job on the contrary its an absolute delight. its a pleasure that can not be expressed in words , it can only be felt and i am thoroughly relishing this feeling.No, today just tell me what wrong I have done to you.i know i have done a lot but what exactly are you talking about ?..that you do THIS to me?😡 Instead of getting me dutta taking a bath, what I get NAKUSHA IN THE BATHROOM!! 🤢..why , isn't she human ? isn't she allowed to keep herself clean ? or is it only your sweetu's birth right ? Applying his soap....was his name written on that soap and was there any other soap ? tell me ? NAHIIIN.🤢 Tell me when were you so descriptive when dutta takes bath?..axecuse me , are you blaming me of being partial to nakusha ? this is absolutely wrong . you are trying to defame me and i shall sue you for this.I hate you rosie, Not Roopa but you are a sadist😡..i am not taking these baseless allegations lightly , see you in court darling now you better make dutta bath subah dopahar shaam..what about raat? is nakusha allowed to bath during that empty time slot ? lol .

Coming to chapter 5 (with a heavy heart💔)..correction not a heavy but a broken heart.

What a beautiful contrast...both dutta and nakusha woke up with the chirping of birds, but their take on it was so different on it, one was annoyed and the other finds it sweet. I guess we will get to see the difference in perspective in other aspects as well..yup the upcoming bathroom scene shall be a perfect example of how different they are😉. In fact it's always been one of the prime traits of tasha.

Thank you...thanks a lot for having nakusha's take on dutta as a normal ration individual and not some sati savitri patni vrata woman. ..after all that hue and cry its tough to accept appreciation from you and that too for nakusha but thanks anyways.Of course she is intrigued, and its but natural for her thoughts to wonder around her husband whom she had 0.0009%..again correction , her chances were 0.0001%chances of marrying (or may be not even that), especially after witnessing his kick boxing side😆..sadly she didn't get to watch this thrilling side of his before marriage otherwise dutta would have been yours. But still she is not clinging onto him. And I'm so glad that she considers him as a grown up man...thank fully no motherly instincts instantly... i am sure for maa ka pyaar he comes to you 😆

Ha! Whom is she kidding? She feels like an outsider!! Which outsider barges into somebody else's bathroom like it has been always hers and uses somebody else's soap...accept it or not but now she is married to dutta and has equal right on everything that belongs to him of course i don't need to mention that she sole and complete right over dutta 😡 And rosie darling!! When I expressed my love for dutta's bathroom, it was with dutta in it, not when it's empty or worst with nakusha inside🤢...oh so you like to see only him in the bathroom , good you told me otherwise i was planning to send you to the bathroom in the next chapter considering you getting so mad at me , i thought i shall compensate for you but now its okay. Anyways this time dutta's got a more lavish bathroom then what he actually got in the show. And I liked that you mentioned a bathing cubicle in the bathroom, or else she would have draped the saree in the room, providing lame excuse of saree getting spoiled due to spilled water on floor😵..you think way too much.

Okay on a serious note...wow that was sensuous, actually! Her using his soap, I was blushing throughout☺️...trust me its really hot , i am telling you not out of personal experience but out of personal wild imagination Wow rosie...I never thought I would feel anything but unhygienic.i can see you screaming,."to hell with hygiene i want my kids to have his genes." rofl at the thought of using somebody else's soap. I never expected it to be intimate...ahem ahem..but surprisingly it was! Oh! She avoids mirror, that's sad, but its good as well, as dutta and nakusha always needs problem with oneself which the other can solve😆. In the show I really wanted a track concentrated on nakusha's identity crisis, and dutta helping her with dealing the trauma.😳

OMG she even used the red towel, 😲she doesn't have her own towel. Trunk mein kya bhar ke laayi hai phir...kachra?..kapde but errr...the way she has left it on the couch, has she invited a trouble.😉..maybe God this girl is obsessed with the bed.😆 And tell me why didn't her blood nevr boiled against misdeeds of roopa the way it does just at a mere mention of the fact that he is not willing to share the bed with her. Desperate girl..honestly i think that roopa has been torturing her for years so now she is immune to the pain inflicted by her , maybe that's why she doesn't complain.😛

Well jokes apart, I love this rational side of nakusha, she is definitely not dumb and has a back bone. Her whole thought process in front of the Ganpati idle is very well written...thanks so much I quiet liked that she realizes that bed or no bed he is never a bad deal😉. No seriously, I agree love is priceless, but everything else comes with a price, so money matters, I appreciate that you made nakusha acknowledge the fact that her life is way better than it could be.

The kitchen scene, laxmi is exactly behaving the way she was expected to...oh really ? Though you know I never care for anybody or anything else than him, still I'm curious how nakusha actually takes over as the mistress of the house..you will surely see this. Hey sometimes she speaks in third person, I noticed it in one of the previous updates, as well, even in the show sometimes she used speak that way. yes she does n you are not hallucinating , lolLook there's such a overdose of her, that I'm noticing things about her, kya din aa gaye hain.😒

The sindoor scene, without the clichd "maang bharo sajna" was tingling warm😳.

Anay reminded me of Amrish Puri of DDLJ😆...i knew this was coming from you Okay, thank you for giving a description of how anay looks, as I don't remember the kid who used to play anay. So he resembles his maamu, the way he asked "yahin rahogi kya" attitude wise he is a replica.😆 I found the nakusha and pigeon scenes quite symbolic..thanks again. No matter how much nakusha daana dalofys..dutta stays away.😆 So when anay said "abhi nayi ho, isilye paas nahin aa rahe hain" I had my own interpretations.😉

But I really felt bad for nakusha, she is so low on confidence, dutta clearly doesn't realizes he is traumatizing her by ignoring her, and it also gives us an insight that more than as wife she feels bad as an individual being ignored...you are right All she expects is a cordial attitude, and that's not too much she is asking for. The grain feeding sequence was beautifully heart warming. The satisfaction she feels in feeding somebody else, when till yesterday she didn't had the access of adequate food, that was very sensitive and insightful of you rosie.👏⭐️ You know I was looking forward for nakusha and anay bond, till now I'm enjoying it..i am relieved to know that

Aah!! Finally my praan nath makes an entry!!❤️ I would love to welcome in the same way as anay did☺️, except I would be screeming "annay ke maamu" instead of maamu😆..very funny. I'm glad that dutta has a great relationship with anay and nakusha doesn't have to mend it.

I'm so pleasantly surprised when she completed dutta's sentence, there was a spark.....yup she kind of announced it. By her standards of confidence, that was audacious, and I loved it. Did you just accused my sweetu? What to do he deserves it...I hope nakusha gives her back, she is meek, still I can catch glimpse of hidden spark, which I guess even she is unaware. This is gonna be an interesting journey.

Waiting for next❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
rosie.. thanks for the lovely annotations.. humm now do I sniff a promo coming..? ana de!
much love hammie.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi rose thank you for annotations... promo kab milay ga?😃
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He glanced down at the bowl, it had some yellow paste. He furrowed his brows in confusion and stared right back at her. What was this?

" yeh aapki chot par lagane se theekh ho jayega." She pointed toward his wounds. This turmeric and basil leaves paste would help in healing them.

He locked gazes with her and saw what he didn't wish to see. There were questions and concern in her eyes. Questions as to how and why he'd got hurt? But since he didn't owe her any explanations, he wasn't going to answer. He was expecting her to ask about his nightmare but she didn't. Good for her because he wasn't going to utter a word about it.
He dropped the hair brush back to the dressing table and replied," mere kisi dard ko dawaa ki zaroorat nahin."

Full update on friday.
Edited by stranger2rose - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy rosie me still here.. tere liye! tere liye! tere liye!
ok a bit OTTT..
humm loved the promo .. grouchy dutta.. foul proof to all hurt.. wah!what an IRON MAN!
waiting for Friday.. much love and thanks .. hammie!

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Posted: 11 years ago
hi oxy rose
awesome promo mere dard ke liye dava nahin...anno loved it😊waiting for friday

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