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Posted: 11 years ago


Hi Sweeto Hammie🤗🤗
Awe...Our Roaring lion Hammie is sooo sweeet...🤗🤗...Yeah Twinky didn't come here for past 2 days..😳😳..Because baby became sad or guilty due to some reasons.....Leave it Hammiee dear...😳😳...Awe...such a lovely funny song dear.❤️..Lyrics are really funny..😆😆...It gives huge smile on my face.😆😆...You can see my 28 teeth now🤣🤣...Still I'm singing "Kaakka um Peacock aagum,Hormone gal Ada weak aagum" ( Kaakka means crow & aagum means 'become', Crow will become peacock ,Hormones will become weak...)...Bhou🤗!!...You & your Baji are thinking in the same way..⭐️⭐️.Today She also post this song on her SS...❤️❤️.So Double treat for us...Your sleeping beauty enjoyed the song a lot...Thank you so much meri sweetest Dhanush fan😉🤗🤗...

N.B:Waiting for today's written update dear😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Tammy🤗
We all are Miss you & your picture update so much dear.😭😭..Happy to see you again.🤗🤗🤗..Hope your net problem is solved now...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: twinkle-star


Hi Tammy🤗
We all are Miss you & your picture update so much dear.😭😭..Happy to see you again.🤗🤗🤗..Hope your net problem is solved now...🤗

no dear net will take time
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[B]Hi hammie. .loved the ud so much and your thought provoking remarks were brilliant. .this episode was damn good the show completly turned to a different track. .its interesting to note that how show shifted from the story of a dark girl to don's life and then till end he took the cake. .

It was amusing to see the sisters showering their love on their brother. .and singing around. .but its easily felt daal main kuch kala hai. .have to applause babi's insight here gosh in a glimpse she guessed what the real picture is her words are so apt "extra sweet behaviour means something is not rite" . .

Poor naku had to face the humiliatiom once again hats off to her patience pata nahi sab kese pee jati hai . .not once she blames her mother not even a complaining look.

Kala from episode one was trying to be dominant over dutta. .clingy😆 . .

Over all great episode. .you are having great time. .me feeling jealous now 😆. .oyee baaji side lined hai abi lol[\B]
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Hammie🤗

Salute to your awesome updates and the effort you make for all of us here👏


Ganpath is one of those who would even find fault with 24 carat purity...the few times he has kept shut has been under pressure from Babi or the situation.The only time he actually helped was when he took Naku to the temple in an auto...when dsp and family were held hostage...maybe that too because of some laalach.

The first time intro with the evil trio was totally misleading...I was like... love for the brother is too melodramatically insane..per chalo dekte hain kya hai. With Kala removing the fake burns and celebrating with "Charanamrit"...opened my eyes and my heart bled for poor Dutta.

Naku was at her innocent best here..as the story developed the stained teeth disappeared and hair was less unkempt.

Like Warda has said the tracks changed to the Don's story.


Edited by ivy_11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

LTL Written Update

Episode ~28

3rd February 2010

Kala's Room

The episode starts when Kala returns to her room where her younger sisters wait impatiently for her. Leela and Roops look at her apprehensively. She sits on the settee , much relieved herself and then says with a placid smile, god is really merciful, he sent our Bhau back. The other two look at each other searchingly, as Kala continues, I've been so worried.. she says with a smirk,.. the thought of him getting hurt scares me. Leela half smiles half scared says , yes Tai, did you give the herb infused milk to Bhau ?Kala says, yes and he's already asleep by now. The other two looked pleased.. already there are some questions about the validity of what is being said.. their glances that they exchange, are quite misleading ,at this point.

Roops moves over to Kala anxiously, and kneels beside her,Tai you burnt your hands, it must be hurting a lot.. and she tenderly holds her sisters bandaged palms. Kala looks down at her lovingly. Roops suggests, Tai shall I apply some ointment on it?. Leela too joins Roops and sits beside her older sister, yes both of us will dress your wounds up. Kala smiles, how nice ! my sisters are so caring , just like my Bhau... Both sisters lovingly take one of Kala's palms each, and slowly unwrap her bandages.. Kala winces in pain, easy! easy! it stings!. Leela and Roops look worried, oohh does it hurt Tai ?. Kala warns, do it very slowly.. and Roops assures her gently , Tai its almost off.

Kala's burnt palms can be seen, dark burnt circles in the middle of each palm, second degree burns! Kala looks at her palms and warns her sisters, I think you shouldn't look at the burns. Leela asks , it's burnt real bad?. Kala with a painful expression , says I'll treat it myself. She feels her burnt palms and instructs Roops , do one thing dear, get holy water from the fridge, I think only that can heal my wounds. Roops gets up to obey and Leela calls out, Roops! can you get me my medicine from the drawer as well! and she then turns to Kala,I haven't taken medicine since yesterday ..my total attention was on Bhau. Kala feels her burns on her palm and her face twists in pain.

Roops goes to the fridge , three wine flute glasses sit on top of the fridge. Kala says in pain, as she presses her palm , its hurting like hell... please get the medicines quickly. Roops opens the fridge and reaches out for a bottle of wine , as Kala digs her nail under the burnt skin on her palm..

As she digs her nail deeper she has a FB of her palm holding a burning candle on it. Roops pushes a cork screw in a chilled wine bottle!. As Roops pulls out the cork! Kala peels off the burnt scab in the pit of her palm, and Leela watches keenly, at Kala's palm..

Roops pours wine in the three wine glasses..and Kala pulls off the clear scab of "skin", wax off her palm and holds it up in her finger tips! and looks at it with a nasty sneer...its very painful she says. Leela sneers , yes Tai I am sure it hurts.. and both sisters giggle ..as they look at the piece of so called dead skin of Kala's palm...Kala chucks it aside! and then pulls off the other scab as well and says, this one too! and blows that one away too with one puff !. Leela teases, look it flew that way!

Kala leans back and says, now get the holy water quickly! Leela yells, Roops hurry up now!.

Roops holds the three glasses between her both her hands.. holding three glasses at one point symbolizes that all three sisters are in it together, very much united ..stood up firmly with each other, each glass holding up the others..

She looks down at them and slowly advances towards her smiling ready and waiting sisters. She puts all three glasses on the table, plus a packet of cigarettes and a lighter..

Kala leans forward and picks up the lighter and lights it up..she looks at the dancing flame with great interest and says.."what seems good is actually bad, and what seems bad is actually good"... and pulls her finger off the lighter..

this line actually throws light on how her mind works..

Leela who is actually led on by Kala, echoes her Tai's thinking.. yes sister it sure is. But one more thing, we are out of glycerine and dyes ..it seems the trio often carry on such staged performances to impress their mother and Bhau ..

Leela teases, please Tai , get some more red dye bottles , and Kala says, so what, we'll get some more, and Leela says, sure! and pulls off her "blood stained", bandages! and starts rubbing her palms together. Roops is a bit concerned and she asks, but Tai , what if Bhau would have found out about your trick?..

Leela looks at Kala to answer that one. Kala looks across to Roops and stands up from the settee and moves towards Roops...and takes the glasses off her and gives one to Leela and keeps one to herself and replies ,with shrewd confidence, I never miss my aim, besides more than my wits, I trust my brother's foolish innocence, he can't separate good from evil... isn't it? Leela laughs, Bhau lives dangerously for whom?.. Kala adds , he gets embroiled with thugs and goons , he earns so much ... for whom?.. Roops adds he gets shot !, lives like a maverick.they clink glasses and all shout, for us! and Leela adds in, so that the flow of our booze runs smoothly , right Tai? and they swirl their glasses and Kala adds, with sarcasm , yes!, my Bhau is so good , so very pious, Leela mocks, yes Tai that's why we like him so much, but don't we play with dangers ? and Kala adds , don't we play with fire on our hands? Leela says , yes Tai! we've to come up with new tricks to make him play on our strings! may god bless this relation between our Bhau and us. Kala chips in, may god not let another woman part him from us..and they laugh craftily Roops adds in finally, and if someone tries to part us, she'll be eliminated.. Kala approves, nice one little sister! you learn very fast obviously no one command our innocent brother..more than the three of us, so let's drink to our brother and our command on him!

The three laugh heartily ..with the wine going to their head..

The scene is very interesting, the three sisters conspiracy, seems inspired by the three witches in Macbeth.. whom Macbeth used for foretelling his fortune.. here what we are foretold is the presence of Naku who will be as a shield to Dutta . Kala has also identified a flaw in Dutta's character.. inability to judge people..

Out House

Old habits die hard. Propelled by habit , Ganpat does what he does best ,use his skills to brew alcohol, singing at work..while the rest of his family has their first peaceful sleep in days. Over an earthen pot that cooks his speciality, Ganpat hums, tastes pours, stirs ,and creates smoke in the rest of the room. While he delights in his tasting, superb ! superb!, his daughter coughs due to smoke inhalation, but he blows and carries on brewing.

Naku sits up in bed abruptly surrounded by smoke, babaa! she says and in a hurry moves to find out what he is doing, babaa what are you doing?, he hushes her, quiet quiet..

The mighty, graceful, and majestic Dutta comes out of his room dressed in a black pathiani, on to his landing, holding his arms behind his back.. Dutta's particular style of walking, his body carriage , introduced for the first time , along with his distinct style of clothing.

The manner in which he moves his head, left, right, his eyes alert , reminds me of man carrying out vigil on the battle front, he looks, listens and walks..

Dutta cuts across the landing of his room , which meant he is up and ready. Ganpat meanwhile creates his stir.. stirring the booze.

Naku runs to stir her mother, mother get up! Babi complains about being woken up., but Naku reiterates , look ,what he is doing! Babi looks up jumps out of bed and yells ay! .

Naku begins to put out the fire by a sprinkle of water.Ganpat complains , hey! you'll ruin every thing!. Babi coughs in the smoke filled room, as Sethji too wakes up by the rising fumes of the smoke.

While Ganpat yells at Naku.. not to far the lion of Patil Nivas continues his slow prowl.. gradually his heels dig on the hard floor and his eyes contract as he continues..his wander, almost checking the house for unwanted elements.

While Naku whispers on the inside, babaa, don't you understand? all this has such a foul odor.. Ganpat tells her to shut up!. Babi moans, Ganpat have you lost your mind?ey! . she screams, and Naku warns her to keep it low too!

Dutta outside now, moves his head slightly, and pauses.

Babi yells at her husband, he's gone crazy, how can you brew booze inside the house?

Sethji now awake , asks, what's happened ? is there a problem again? . Ganpat yells back at Babi, why do you keep yelling at me! you crazy woman!! I'm your husband ! remember that!Naku begs quiet, quiet,. but Babi is not to be cowed down by Ganpat's yelling, I know! how much of a man you are! step out side! and throw this out!!

Out side, on the wooden stairs the tall, stiff figure of Dutta comes down one foot at a time.. step by step..

Ganpat reasons with his wife, don't be a crazy! you'll value me when I die! once I die you'll be a widow![uff! such a prat!]foolish woman!, Babi yells back, ey! don't try to threaten me! go and die if you dare! I'll live peacefully. Naku pleads, Aye ,let it go ,why spoil your day? don't you know how mad he is for booze?..shows Naku's sensitivity towards her father's addiction, i.e conflict resolution, hence she appeals to her mother, what's wrong with you ? at least you try and understand. Babi , replies, he doesn't think at all, about this place, or these people! what if Dutta Bhau finds out! Naku wide eyed thinks..

Outside, Dutta reaches the last step of his wooden stairs, he steps down and once again resumes his rounds.

Babi cries in the outhouse, we've hardly caught our breath from running around! and this crazy man!.Ganpat starts again, what did I do?. and Babi thumps his back.. he yells I'll slap you!. Naku grabs the earthen pot! and Babi shouts yes good! take it away!. there is a pull and tug of the pot!

Outside in the hall, the figure of Dutta pauses,.. he sniffs, turns his head, and hears noises.. Naku yells , leave the pot babaa!! Ganpat yells, you leave it!.. there is a knock on their door!.the family freezes, with frightened faces. Naku bids her brother, Sethji go and answer the door.. the boy looks very anxious.. as Ganpat whispers to Naku, hide this ! hide it!. Naku covers the pot with a dirty rag. Babi prays to her god..

Sethji with a shawl on his shoulders, stands near the door, as Naku looks on in deep fear.

The opens , and Dutta looking to his side stands in the door way. Once the door opens he moves his face to the front. With narrowed eyes , and an eye brow raised he looks down at the little face of Sethji between the slightly parted doors. Naku and Ganpat look on..at a pair of two black shoes, a pair of legs dressed in black trousers... a black pathiani shirt with two top buttons undone, a black waist coat, and a stiff neck which holds an equally stern faced Dutta , that looks down at Sethji...who opens the door wide and blabbers , b.b.. Bhau!. Dutta looks down at him and then slowly steps into the room towards Sethji. who slowly backs off as Dutta moves on..

Dutta moves in silently, in the smoke filled room. All wait in worry at his reaction, but Dutta only speaks to Sethji... one instruction, "go call Baji".The boy throws off his shawl and runs past Dutta.Dutta moves his head to ensure that the lad had gone . Then coldly he turns his head towards the rest of the family, and the smoke filled room, his eyes shift to determine where the smoke arises from, he gives Naku a piercing look and slowly moves towards a wide eyed Naku.. this scene coincides with something he says and later episode, I can read people's eyes.

He looks down into her eyes and almost demands an explanation from her, rather than her parents.. from her eyes, his eyes move to her father Ganpat standing behind her.

Baji arrives in a hurry and he checks out the smoke with a roll of his head. Dutta finally lowers his eyes straight into Naku's waiting... finally with her eyes lowered , she mumbles, there were lot of mosquitoes so babaa created some smoke.Baji, stands behind Dutta hears and pulls a face ,at the nonsensical statement that Naku gives. Ganpat stammers , yes..yess.. so where there's mosquitoes, there will be smoke. Dutta turns his head sideways silently , and Baji continues, Bhau ! this family is trouble , they keep making something or the other up!. Baji at this stage does not seem too keen on this family , he wasn't really into keeping them in Patil Nivas ,had it not been Aye Sahib's order..

Dutta continues to maintain his silence but his shrewd eye does fall on the covered earthen pot...and the burner that still was omitting smoke... fumes. It was pointless for him to comment , but the solution he has found..

He nods his head at Naku , to show he accepts what she reports and will not say much to her father..

But further action he does take , as he moves towards Baji in the door way and both men face each other. Dutta begins , Baji .. and he starts to give instructions with his hand. The family looks worried , as the two men are in audible, they can only read Dutta's hand's sign language, occasional glance from Baji approving, disapproving. This was driving Ganpat insane, what are they saying? As Babi glares at him... Dutta's fingers, makes the cash sign, rubs the thumb against the index finger and the rise of the index finger to the opposite direction, meant do it now .. worries Ganpat. Dutta looks towards all of them and points to them, and makes it very clear to Baji what he wants.. glares at them, with his arms folded across his chest, he turns to leave..

Baji looks at them , and proceeds towards them and Babi stands with her hands folded. He says , its Bhau's order everyone has to come .. Naku still looks to the door way where Dutta stood, Baji turns to look behind himself.. then he clicks his fingers and tells her, ey! are you listening to what I 'm saying.. is Baji beginning to notice that this girl is drawn towards his Bhau ?

He repeats , all of you have to come , Bhau's orders , and yes.. take a bath , get neat and clean before you come!.. Dutta gives them time to have a wash , seeing its morning time.. hey half pant! you too! Ganpat ! bring every one ! all this nonsense of yours! moans Baji, as he stalks off. ... and the family looks anxious ,wondering what verdict Bhau will give regarding the incident this morning.. Babi and Naku most disturbed.. it's a matter of waiting now.

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Day Break at Patil Nivas

A pair of hands, picks up empty wine bottles, lying down wines glasses, cigarette butt ends, loads of scrunched up tissues from the centre table.

The same pair of hands then wipes clean Ganpati's altar in the room and adorns the idol with, flowers, sweet meats and a prepared arti thali .Incense sticks are lit to give off an aroma pleasing to the god.

Finally the puja lamp is lit.. amid chants of hail, Lord Ganesha!, Kishore gives his wife a wake up call by chanting the melodious bhajen to their household deity Ganpati Bappa.. Kala wakes up with a hangover and covers her ears with a head cushion, due to his bell ringing and chanting. She complains, what are you doing! it's not even morning yet!. Kishore folds his palms before his god, oh Lord Ganesha , she thinks it's not morning yet... devi Kalavati , the sun is up and shining...please wake up!. He gets up from his place of worship and says, here take some holy water! she looks up at him from her pillow and he apologizes, sorry ,why would you need this? all night you were drinking this water.. and he picks up an empty wine bottle lying beside her. there is a loud knock on the door.. and Kala's eyes in panic look at the fresh wine glasses and an unopened bottle of wine , on her beside side table... she stares at it and the episode ends.. Hamlet53 3.10.13

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Precap: Aye Sahib bids Dutta to sit, which he does regally on the red one armed Roman recliner. He watches and listens, as his mother explains, from today ,Naku and Babi will be in charge of the kitchen..Dutta chips in, Baji will sort Ganpat with...

N.B. lots of issues are exposed in this episode. The main one being the true intent of the sisters. The brother's ignorance of what's going on in an area where he need not have his guard up.

Dutta's silent , yet not revealed decision about the future of this new family in his house.

Kishore is thus introduced, as is his commitment to religious values.

ivy, twinky, bart ,warrie, naku ,nimmi.. cheers for the comments.. gosh chk out wot Kala has to say out our lion..😡


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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update Hammie 👍🏼 ...and your comments make it even more interesting.

I have wondered where did AS go wrong with the evil trio??...Senior Patil was supposedly a decent man when compared with the sharabi and juari Damodar Patil 😕

My take: Dutta was able to absorb the values from AS while Kala was busy firing up her hated and corrupting Leela and Roops minds.

On one hand Dutta is a Don who does not blink to put a bullet through his enemy ...but he is a man of principles and generous to the core. Feared by his enemies and respected by Ratnagirians, ends up being cheated by his own family...a case of misplaced trust !

I can imagine a regal DSP in his black pathanis with the top two buttons undone walking down like a sleek black cheetah

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Hammie🤗

Loved your update so much dear...Poor Twinky...She can't tolerate these three witches ki tortures...EEEWWW...😡😡...Arey yeh kya acting hai!!!!...I didn't watch this episode...When I was start reading your update I thought that at least kala got severe burns on her palm...Stupid Twinky...Not only Dutta but this twinky also fooled by These evil Sisters...😡😡😭..EEERRR...I want to kill them right now...😡😡.I can't tolerate Kala's mockery words for our Dutta...Its really sad to see Our Dutta's blind beliefs towards his Evil sisters..😭😭..I I Hate it...see His so called lovely sisters are insulting his true love towards them...Its really shameful...EEW...One doubt hammie...What's that cigarette packet???..😲😲..So they're smocking also...EEWWW...Are they women or men???.😲😲.According to my knowledge ,I only saw Dutta with daru bottle...He never appear with cigarettes...(But he brought a lighter with him)...hammie Loved your side comments sooo much dear..🤗...You've noticed lots of thinks & brilliantly analyzed the meaning dear...Fabulous job hammieee...I didn't wonder about Ganpat's smocking habit...He is 1000 time better than those 3 witches...😆

Awe hammie...Loved your description about Dutta's walking style....What an awesome explanation dear...We are really lucky to have you our sweetest sher hammie..🤗...EEW..This Babi & Ganpat were starting their arguments.😡..I hate this Ganpat's Heartless behaviour.😡😡.Hammie...Awe What a details about Dutta's appearance dear...mmm...naku lied to Dutta for the sake of her father...Dutta noticed the hidden pot..Naku's family didn't understand Dutta's sign language with his men...Dutta gave time for them to get ready...Poor Kishore.😭.Feel sad for this gentle man...Hammie...Superb update dear...Twinky enjoyed it a lot..🤗.Thank you so much my dearest sweet sher..🤗.Its really wonderful to read this awesome update with your side comments....Thanks a lot dear...Eagerly waiting for Tomorrow...Thanks again for your super duper Dhanush song...Enjoyed it soo much dear🤗🤗



NB:...OMG Hammie..Lots of sad news are around on this forum...Tammy's net problem & just now saw daya's message about her broken laptop...Whats going on here dear????😕😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi hammie😊
This is a thrilling episode...i had it sone where in mind that kala and gang are upto no good in real and here they are...I actually felt very bad for dutta yes he is too innocent or more so he is so sincere in his dealings that he trusts people blindly and then even later we see how he mis judges naku.
here the only reson behind kalas hatered seems possessiveness as if they dont want to share thier bhau with any other person and depends on his money .. it reminds me now actually when cvs diverted kalas hatred towards his father.

Ganpat tu bas feel like killing him sometimes ..chik chik family lol...naku is clever in making excuses btw 😆...but I do remember later dutta made ganpat work for his wine factoey clever he is to guess what he was doing lol

Poor kishore kidhar phas gaya I liked him instantly when he was introduced. ..actor was good too.
Overall it was a great episode and you have written it in an amaxing way so well described even without a video I can link easily to it...thank you so much hammie for your great commitment and brilliant writing
Post nect episode soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Hammiee🤗
Eagerly waiting for your LTL WU dear...Twinky baby badly missed our Hooo Haaa group here...Afzal bhai,Naku ji...where are you all????...😭😭..

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