Hammie
Firstly Congrats on the 100th mark, wish you a joyous fulfilling journey ahead, here,s a song for the same.. celebrating the joy of reading your work for so long and the company of many like minded friends in the forum.. Subhanallah !!! 😊
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4BgJz7xI3Hs[/YOUTUBE]
Yeah,next is apologies again for the much delayed responses to your updates.. was constrained by various reasons.
Chapter 12 And thus i clothe my naked villainy
Dutta is slowly usurping jeera,s territory, a defacto boss running his dealings in his own way. Have to see how long jeera is ready to accomodate the brute lol.. The only solace to jeera has to be that dutta continues to address him as Boss. But digu n the curly haired shabbo have no respite, jaha bhi jayenge pitke ayenge.. Serves them right!
Dutta the new robinhood of the area is taking more liberties, baji finally impressed at his bhao,s ways.Some respite to his troubled conscience.
Hmm after a long day of work time to have fun.. Bhao heading towards his pet doctorni.
If dutta had the gall to barge into her office n chatup bob, naku too not far behind, holding his wrist to drag him out of the office lol.. Grt goin,
HAIINN?? Ab donoko achanak kya hogaya, i fail to see a reason for the lovers tiff here, umm maybe thats why its called a lover,s tiff, one without a reason.. Lol
Dutta under the shower cooling his raised temper, now who wants to miss this? Lol.. But all he can think is kali gori, she,s completely taken over his senses. The dinner time n the brief encounter in his terrace with naku was cute n one can feel the undercurrent of emotions churning inside ready to burst.
Chapter 13 Out out brief candle, life,s but a walking shadow
Interesting title hammie,
Dutta,s past continues to haunt him, aww.. a toddler yearning for a baaja n his sister trying to veer his attention away.. but dutta,s mind is troubled to no end that his misfit father made another home cheating them of his love n attention. I guess this is where supriya needs to stepin.. to help him moveon.
The previous night,s tiff with naku is carried forward, each trying to avoid one another..lol. "Yes baji, yeh dono gaye kaamse"..
Dat teri! Baji nahi toh kalatai is the KMH lol.. Bechara dutta somehow managed to get upclose with naku but all in vain, Lol... Now we have not one but a handful of KMHs...
Its a relief atleast his sisters have taken kindly to naku in their brother,s house and as one among them. But dutta battling his past is yet to open up, umm "naku chinta mat kar,. Jo ghar mein jagah diya hai woh dil mein bhi jagah dega" lol..
The full family at the dinner table has to be heartwarming for both mother n son duo, n dutta,s eyes looks out for the one n only one cough cough..
Supriya yet another haddi in dutta,s eyes.. But luckily he keeps his appointment with her. Haiin, what did he think? Supriya would attempt rape on him rofl? that he is issuing stern warnings, bechari lol.. as always quick to conclusions he is..
Ooh gosh! Dutta,s past is heartwrenching, as a young teenager he had to go through such rough times.. A heartless dad, poverty,sickness, helplesnes all a deadly potion... also the reason for his cold behaviour with AS is justified in many ways. Hmm, must say hammie you have done a fab job, brilliantly written, this portion especially, very moving. WOW! a well deserved dedication to suhana, none deserves more than her i guess... Forum,s vm queen. Belated Cheers to her !!!
Chapter 14 Love comforteth like sunshine after rain
I guess the title has to be reversed to our local conditions which is thirsty for rains lol.. So the perfect doctorni supriya made the stubborn mule speak.. And this time he was ready n willing too, but as she stated it would help him a great deal if he shared with someone close umm who else kali gori.. But im rather surprised that sups was equally upright in her dealings with dutta.. Lol
What a novel idea hammie, incorporating the real with the reel, you are too good... the rains mean so much to this nation one can only imagine, you have certainly caught everyone,s imagination here. The smell of the thirsty earth drenched in the first rain, the joy of the many, n the misery all adds to the celebration of the onset of monsoons... Ofcourse it takes its own sweet time to touch base. Beautifully described by you as well.
Hahahaa,. Dutta behen ? Hmm nice to see dutta taking potshot at himself.. Haan dutta tu cheez hi aisa hai jo sab tere aage peeche ghoomte hai..
He,s never short of action n thrill is he? .. Now its the turn of another damsel in distress, madhu.. umm similar scenes of naku seeking dutta,s help in LTL. Fortunately for madhu he doesnt hold any grudge against her at this grave moment, instead she,s escorted to the safety of his abode.
Amidst all this drama we have our kali gori enjoying the downpour, huh romance karne ke bajaye he admonishes her, yedha jo hai? Naku has no option left except to romance her kitchen lol...
While jeera showers his love n appreciation on dutta (how does dutta even tolerate such namoonas, lol) digu gets a taste of dutta,s gussa firsthand.. Dutta,s brotherly instincts takes over despite his refusal to accept her as a sis. Hopefully baji has a taste of romance now with two prospective ladies lol..
Hammie even thou this story revolves around LTL you,ve successfully managed to give a fresh perspective n a personal[HAMLET] touch to the episodes(i mean updates) Im sure you would be disappointed with my comments, but could only manage so much. Ever greatful for the hardwork you put n appreciate your unrelenting dedication.. Stay blessed, Thank you.
Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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