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Posted: 12 years ago

hi hamlet

nice ud...dutta got a job at jeera ...its a showroom better than office boy😆...his doing fine with sessions...naku thinks alot abt him😊diggu entry dutta should just kick him out ...from the story altogether...congrats ..regards uvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
a very nice updt...loved it...waiting fr the nxt updt eagerly...interesting precap...continue sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finished reading chapter 7. I am glad Naki and Baji are there for and with our Dutta.
Thanks for the wonderful update, Hammie 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello hammie very nice update 👏 dutta and baji go to jeera showroom for a jab interview
par mujhe toh interview kam dadagiri jada lage rahe the 😆 aur upar se yeh sharat bhi ke mere stha mere dost baji bhi kam karga dutta bhao you two god 😆 par yeh jeera aabime kuch theek nahi lagat kuch toh hai jo theek nahi hai par kya yeh toh hammie ko he pata hai
dutta and baji bond was great i like baji he is very sweet and caring person
jb baji ney dutta ko yeh kaha ke naku thujhe pasand kerti hai that is reminds me of ltl
aaja toh dutta ko naku kuch khas nahi lage rahe par
main toh us din ka intezar kar rahi hoon jab naku he us ke liye bahut khas ho jay ge
plzz hammie jaldi se in dono ke love story shuru kar do
dutta is responding well to supriya therapy
interesting precap
waiting for naxt plzz ud soon
hammie love the ud its great
thank you very much for the great ud







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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet
superb ud! dutta got a new job...guy jeera is quite bad ...shabir 😡they do have a plan to employ dutta...its upto dutta to make choices...he should meet naku ...congrats & waiting for ud 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello KB 😊
Atlast ! someone noticed your kali gori naku mixing work with pleasure.. Wowow her hollow defence n tirade against bob was amazing, lying through the teeth really n so convincingly that Bob ended up apologizing 😆 She,s pretty but much much more talented in ways which she's unaware of
Bob is smart too, he,s noticed how preoccupied she is with excon,s thoughts n how quickly she jumped into accepting the runner,s job for him. What more, she can bend his elbow? now what more one need.. should we say dutta would be delighted hearing this one, being a runner n serving chai n doin sundry errands n eyeing her every few seconds? bechara bade bade sapane dekhraha hai

lo behold ! She has more in store, narcissism bhii, cock sure dutta,s ex flame seema cant be as beautiful as her ? To me naku comes across as too naive akin to a hopeless teenager totally lost her senses in her crush for dutta.. Its not criminal to be attracted but she,s takin too far too fast. Just when i thought some sense is dawning on her she,s back to denial mode. Hmm, but its also true, "Jab miya biwi razi kya karega kazi" ?

Aaw, the mother son duo for once had a chat, luved AS,s words when she authoritatively makes known to him what her thoughts are with regards to his ambitions. Unlike LTL AS who believed in escapism this lady has a voice n an opinion of her own. Gosh! Dutta is tactlessly blunt albeit honest.. maa ke samne seema ki karname sunadiya aur roops ki bachi ko mazaaa araha hai... uski bhao jaise koi salman khan hai ladkiya marne ke liye ? sab yedhe.

It is noteworthy how Dutta is chiding baji to concentrate on the "maal" instead of bein overwhelmed by the looks of the showroom. He,s single minded in his approach. The receptionist too getting a taste of dutta,s arrogance. The lay-abouts following the sidekick to meet brudder jeera bhai, lol. Hammie this one from jeera was paisa vasool, "gadi ko kaise haat lagata hai jaise ladki ki kamar ho"

It was pure delight comin from you, too good. You have picked their nuances beautifully, goes well with the characterisation. Jeera seems to me more like checkg dutta for his looks n attitude than his abilities. Waise banda hai aise ki ladki kya ladke log bhi phisal jate hai. Lol.. But the confusing part was who interviewed whom? as if jeera was more desperate than dutta. He's convinced that brashness of dutta was more than worth the risk of his egoistic antics ...

But Baji not too eager, wil he be able to put some sense in his friend? Just as i was waiting for the daily bus stop ritual we have a call from chaiwali instead offering him a chaiwala job, wah! Naku too sensing trouble with his new job interview, i didnt realise that obsessive prying was part of her job But she is right, his new job interview seemed more at a barber shop than some automobile showroom lol.. Razor, jeera blade n all..

Saree clad Sups? [no impact on dutta here of a choli n sari clad sups unlike LTL 😆] this lady is instead making considerable progress on his mental reform n him finding it easier to open up... a positive sign.. But wil this translate into keeping him from slipping into undesirable ways. Anyway the biggest achievement so far has been his softening towards AS even thou im disappointed he finds these sessions useless, looks like he's doin it only to please naku, no wonder there is little impact.

Thank you hammie for the lively UD, despite your preoccupations you never fail to deliver. Your efforts spread cheer n smiles n is much appreciated as ever. Waiting for the next, Take care 🤗

Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi hamlet nice ud...naku is worried abt duttas employment issue...she wants him to work in his office😃...jeera is a stupid boss.he is hiring a smart guy...shabir & other jokers of LTL are like crowd ...pls hamlet show them the showroom door😆...waiting for ud congrats 👏 Number of age in a colorful studio setting with pink roses against a black background Stock Photo - 18291326
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey hammie ..sorry for being late

hello tell me one thing is this bob after nakusha just like seema is after dutta ? god can't their employers let them work peacefully ? and what did bob mean by this what? I don't believe this Nakusha! this man is demented who the hell does he think he is? some eye candy for the fair sexes! honestly...of course he is eye candy without any doubt

so now nakku wants him to work with her in the office ..good way to keep an eye on him 😉 i wonder what will bob do then ..lol..dutta wants to make quick bucks and that is not possible by working in a garage or the show room 😔..but like the way baaji handles not only dutta but also his family ..he is a true friend

the mother - son scene was once again emotional , really like the way you have portrayed their strained relationship 👏

so the showroom is owned by none other than jeera , he is a funny guy and our tiger is in no mood to hear nonsense , i am sure jeera must be proud of his new finding , dutta's anger and aggression are perfect for what actually jeera wants him to do

kadoos dutta is once again rude with kali gori but glad he realizes it soon and wow baaji even suggests that she likes him ..kya baat hai

the session between sups n dutta was so well written , really appreciate the pain u take in making a scene look authentic


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Posted: 12 years ago
hi ham love the ud ek chudail ki chutti new entry jeera hope duji doesnot accept the job naku offering dutta a job aur woh bhi chaiwala ham kick start tasha love story plz thanks for pm n ud precap entry of dalchini tasha ki luv story mein kitne sare villian hai waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet awesome ud dutta got a job as salesman baji will be with him
dutta is entering into crime world
naku should help him
dutta is mingling with all wrong ppl
ud soon
congrats of 50 half century👏
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