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Posted: 12 years ago
@ uwith

hi hamlet
loved the ud it was really very sweet & loved the couple...thanxs to rose for convincing u to continuing it regards uvi
thanks for liking the with much love, as ever yours hammie


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet
hi sonaaa, great to see you

thanxs for extention😊...awesome party & our eternal couple...congrats
will put up the last part,thanks for reading and commenting , with much love, as ever yours hammie.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

hi hammie🤗
hi warrie.. great to see you, still no light but you made it.. good one.
Tasha ki tu lotery laagi hai iss update main ..kiya baat hai what a romantic couple i tell you dutta has left the college boys behind the way he was finding a corner seat.😆
Very important question though i have when dutta and nakusha were busy feeding each other and sharing same juice and giving each other blushing smiles and deep gazes tu us waqt baki loug thay kahan .😛..its impossible you are not caught in a gathering...and mind you agar koi daikh lay tu first response would be yeh sab yeh dono ghar jaa kar nahi kar sakte...wish i was in that party too
oyee thujhe kyun taleef ho rehe hai? baki log were there , that's why he took her to one corner.. for some privacy..

But its always a treat to read such moments between dutta and naku...they do things which make me wonder can anyone love each other like that and even more important that they are together too ..truly one blessed couple and one more plus point was baaji gave them the space too thansk to that girl who kept baaji busy.😆 yess warrie batasha is a hard act to follow, they have left such a mark.

Loved the whole feeding session and their simple selection of food too ignoring all italian chinese cusines .even more pics posted by bharti were so apt and reminded me of the clip while reading the OS...and toping has to be gajar ka halwa and even more special without spoon ...kiya baat hai ..all the young men and girls there actually need to learn how to romance from them and how to avail every possible opportunity .😉
I am glad you approved of the spread,I have an educated palate but prefer my own food woh bhi haat se khana, not rice however, can get messy.. haan bart's pictures of Dutta/Naku ,have sure complimented the UD.. So thanks to her..
Loved the whole update hammie ...It was as always a treat to read your writing ...
Post next part soon .😊 thanks for your lovely comment warrie,with much love,as ever yours hammie..
many Congrats on becoming a "Rocker" ...new colour looks good on you 😉
Want to see you a Sizzler soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

The Party

Final part 4

"If music be the food of love, play on".'Shakespeare.

The lights, suddenly dimmed, except on the square wooden dance floor which displayed the Seth's son, Deven and his sister Diyva in a beam of spot light. Divya, spoke through the microphone,"we hope everyone has had their dinner, and enjoyed it?"'Deven took the mic from his sister and continued, "so sit back and enjoy the musical bag, we hope to cater to every one's need, so here we start with a golden number from yester years, ladies and gentle may I give you Mandira performing to"..Dutta, gave his customary longingly reassuring gaze to Naku, and settled back in comfort on the two seater settee, as he crossed his left leg over his right leg, rested his right elbow on the sofa arm. He stole a glance at Naku, and stretched his left arm against the sofa back. Naku felt safe as they sat together facing the entertainment. The musical notes of the song ' piya tose naina laga re, naina lage rahe, jane kiya hoga age rahe, naina lage" filled the atmosphere as the spot light fell on the beautifully decked kathak dancer whose movements complimented the melody which held the spectators enraptured. Naku, looked up at Dutta with meaning every time the lyrics rang "naina lage rahe...Dutta, parted his lips and passed her a tender look. While the dance and song continued, Dutta shuffled a tiny bit towards Naku, and in a lowered tone asked her 'to main tera piya hai Naku?, Naku faced him and shook her head from side to side like a naughty child, she could see that his face just fell ,as he replied equally childlike by pushing his lower lip out, with a twitch of his eye brows, 'kya?" he demanded by repeating "mein tera piya nahi hain?...Naku promptly held his palm and consoled him, "Nehin ap meray Saab hai, sirf meray Saab". He overcame with a surge of longing for her, and he moved his hand resting on the sofa back to her shoulder, and tried to pull her close to him.Naku's, gaze pleaded to him to keep his emotions at bay. He continued to rest his hand on her shoulder, as they both from time to time looked up to enjoy the appealing dance. As the dance ended with a thunderous applause, the dancer bowed and took her leave. The environment swiftly transformed to dancing green ,blue, purple spots lights, and the thumping beats of the drums and guitars vibrate around. Naku's eyes shine like a child bedazzled by the lights, it was obvious she has never been exposed to the disco type environment, for that matter, neither had Dutta. Dutta , caught Baji at the bar who gyrated to the rhythm of the contemporary dance number 'milgaye jo chora chori; hui masti thodhi thodhi; bas pyaar ka naam na lena ;I hate luv stories! As the song pulsated, the dance floor displayed an infestation of young boys and girls,who jived, rocked, and breaked, Baji rocked with his item ,as Dutta smiled. Naku, watched her Saab as he gazed at girls, shaking and bending embracing their male partners, but turned his eyes towards her as if to say, for him she is the only one! He shifted himself to comfort himself, and Naku approached him with a tease 'Saab, ap ko music pasand hai? he stared at her with narrow eyes and replied,"thujhe pata hai Naku, mera liya kal thek, saas ek goli ki awwaz, ya pher ek bum ka dhamaka thi' , he waited with a sly twist of lips for her to react, and she jested with him and responded, "ya pher ap ka tandev jaise gussa!"! He smiled as he jerked his head a little, and bent his face down a little as he tenderly held her face in his broad palms and looked into her eyes and replied 'kyun Naku thuje abhi ek tandev ka namoona dekhoon?. She shook her head as she gave him the helpless wife look, but he persisted,"chal Naku pher pyar ka ek namoona tu dehaney de'!,she pulled her head back gently and she realised his advances.. and Dutta bit his lower lip and moved back, but continued to look at her with desire!

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People synchronised their body movements to the sound of the music as the dance floor resounded and the spot lights entangled into each other with a similar frenzy as the dancers. The music once again changed to a popular dance number,"zor ka jhataka hai zor se laga !haan laga! shaadi ban kayi umarqaid ke saza; haan saza!' .As soon as the song started, Baji gave Dutta a thumbs down from the crowded dance floor, and Dutta replied by showing him his clenched fist!. Many young boys and girls were leaving the dance floor in between to refill their drinks or to freshen up ,but generally, the music the dancing and the partying was in full swing. Dutta, looked at Naku with mischief in his eyes as he smiled at the lyrics of the song, and started to hum,"shaadi ban gaye umarqaid ki saaza!'"Naku, chided him as she pushed his chest with her hand, he jerked as he thought she was going to tickle him. Soon after, away from the madding crowd he move his right hand from the side of the settee and reached out for her hand, he felt the soft skin of her hand with his thumb and fingers, then he turned her hand over and traced the lines that embedded her palm, with his fore finger.He gradually, brought her soft palm close to his lips and brushed it across his mouth. She blushed as she felt his hot breath and prickly stubble against her soft hand.He detected the colour in her cheeks and laid her hand back on her lap. He was about to place his right hand back on the arm of the settee, when Naku, grabbed hold of his hand and kept it protectively on her lap. He smiled dreamily at her advances and moved his hand from the back of the settee and started to entwine a loose strand of her hair around his forefinger.

Deven, lowered the music and says, "ok this is for the last number everybody and it's for anyone who loves some body and that somebody loves you! So come on all lovers this one is especially for you"... The, dancing disco lights are history and are replaced with a softer dual combination of pink and blue lights highlighting the dance floor. There is a shift of activity as music plays on softly, more couples join the dance floor.Dutta ,looked on stumped as he saw Baji approaching them,"chalo Bhau, vahini, abhi tu ap dono ko mein udhar dance floor pe laye ki jaye ga!', he chirped with excitement.Dutta, retorted,"Baji pagal ho gaya hai tu! thujhe pata hai ye nachina! vanchana! main nehin karta!'!,"pun kyun nahi? ap dono pati patni hai, jana tu banata hai Bhau", Baji insisted. Dutta, raised his fore finger and indicated a definite NO.Before he put his hand down, Deven and Diya appeared and started their appeal,"please Bhau aur vahini, ap duno aj raat ki saab se pyari shadi shuda jodi hain , please chalein na!" Dutta looked at a demure Naku with enquiring looks, and she lowered her head shyly and smiled, which Dutta took as her consent and reached out for her hand and headed with her for the dance floor! Baji puts his arm around Dutta's shoulder and yelled "dhinchak, dhinchak!'

As Dutta and Naku reached the dance floor surrounded by other couples, the song "paaya maine, paaya thumhe, rab ne milya, hoonthon pe sajaya tumhe... tum jo ayaye zindigai mein baat ban gaye; din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gaye, tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi"... Dutta, awkwardly drew a deep breath, parted his lips slightly and he mades Naku face him. He gazed down into her wide green eyes, and gently held her fingers, he felt the tremor of her fingers, and he tenderly smiled down at her gently, as he bowed his head to one side.As the lyrics played on they both conveyed the meaning to each other in silence. He, let go off her hands as they continued to gaze at each, and his hands moved up on her slim arms and finally rested on her shoulders. "paaya maina pyaa tumhe", the lyrics repeated and he pulled her gently towards his chest, and she willing rested her head against his heart. He dreamily smiled at her surrender and put his arms around the small of her back, and his mouth gently rests on the top of her head. They seemed oblivious to the world around them as, their bodies slowly moved to maintain the notes of the song. He raised his head and peered into her upturned face to check if she was at ease, he noted that her trembling had stopped, "tu theekh hai na? he questioned. She replied by moving one of her hands shyly around proud stout neck.At her gesture he tilted his head to brush her arm with his lips that entwined around his neck. Embarassed, by his action, Naku, slid her arm and hand back to his chest and felt the pump and pound of his heart against his warm sinewy flesh. He, shifted his head slowly and rested his chin on her head, as he continued to hold her warm body close to his...

The music, faded out amidst general claps and Dutta, with regret released Naku and they along with a few other couples made their way back to their seats. Dutta and Naku seated themselves, while Divya and Deven render their vote of thanks to their parents and the guests.Dutta gave Naku a side long glance as he sat with legs apart bending forwards towards his knees .His fingers played with his ring. His face showed that he wanted this time he spent with Naku to continue... "jana hai'? he questioned Naku remained silent, hence as if his query was answered. Baji turned up very unsteady on his feet, completely drunk, drawled "ho Bhau mein aagya, chalo ghar chalien mein gare nikalta hai!' Dutta glared at him with disgust and commanded, 'nahin tu gare nahin chalia ga, tune pe rakhi hai Baji, ghari ab mein hi chalaye ga", he announced 'ho Bhao,Baji accepted, "pun mein ghar kaise jaye ga? quizzed Baji. Dutta, replied"humara saath jaye ga aur kaise?. Baji winked at Dutta and retorted, "nahin Bhau ap Naku ko laye kar jao, meri tension maat lo".Shortly Deven approached and informed Dutta and Baji, "Dutta Bhao,aap fikar maat karien main ne driver ko keh diya hai ki Baji bhao ko ghar drop kar de ga". Dutta stood up to leave and signalled with his head for Naku to leave. Deven thanked them coming and sprang forward with respect and shook hands with Dutta and Dutta also patted him on the back. As they proceeded towards the door Memon Seth and his wife also received Dutta, Naku and Baji, thanking them with folded hands.. While, the three waited for Dutta's Mercedes to arrive Baji teased, "kya Bhau abhi apun samjha kay tum na daro ko aaj zarra bhi haat nehi lagaya... kya Bhau vahini ke saat long drive pe jana ka ju tumhara programme tha!" He said laughing hysterically, Dutta growled 'Baji tu bahut bikwas karnay laga hai, ghar chal thuje mein bataye ga!"

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Dutta opened the front passenger seat for Naku and waited for her to settle in her seat and shut the door behind."Seat belt laga laye" he ordered her and bounced next to her in the drivers seat. He looked sideways at her boyishly and then lowered his eyes and turned his face forward as he focussed on the way ahead. Dutta dispensed her another sided glance, his eyes shifted gradually as he gathered her looking at the CD player in the dash board. 'Naku tera dil abhi behara nahin shor sharaba se' he remarked.She smiled "nahin Saab theekh hai" she conformed to his hint. Dutta continued 'lageta hai thujhe kafi maaza aeya, party mein', she nodded and questioned him too, 'Saab ap ko maaza nahin aeya?". Still driving with a smile he replied, changing to a lower gear' haan mujhe tub bahaut hi mazza aya, ek se ek item dekhnay ko mili, aur mein asli mard hai to maaza to aeya ga hi na ?. He brought the car to a halt at a solitary secluded spot surrounded with foliage and shrubbery.She looked at him and weighed his naughty answer, but with a slight burning, placed her hand on his lips, so as to stop him from further comments. He moved his neck to one side, parted his lips and smiled at her subtle jealous expression ,as he enjoyed this rare moment. Shortly he could see that tears welled up in her eyes and he gently took her hand with his right hand and kisse her hand with a view to console her.Dutta let go off the steering and placed his left arm around her and heaved her towards him. She pushed him 'Saab koi ah jaye ga!', "Naku raat ke barah bajae kuan aye ga? He mumbled and continued to nuzzle his face in her soft neck."Saab! police ah sakti hai' she continued helplessly, he pushed her away with slight annoyance 'Naku, main Dutta Bhau hai, police na apni hadiyaan thorewani hai ,jo mujhe rokein! apni patni ke saath hai mein!" he moaned. He tilted his head to the left and with his, right forefinger pressed the release buttons of both seat belts for comfort, and resume to hug her with both his arms, as he positioned his stubble face close to hers silky cheeks, 'Saab police!,jerked Naku, teasing him. He withdrew abruptly backwards and sat back upright ,frustrated in his seat. Naku, smiled secretly as she looked up at his profile , while he bit his lower lip.Overcome with a surge to love him she encircled his brawny nearside bicep, and stroked his arm gently with her dainty fingers, calming him down, "Saab ghar chalien, she suggested.

But, Dutta was in the mood to get back at Naku, and besides when did he ever get such stolen moments with her so he thought of an alternative strategy to apply a big tease in her direction. She repeated again, "Saab,bhaut raat ho gayey hi ,ghar chalien", nahin! he said firmly "main sooch rahoon, Naku, aaj raat kyon na hum duno car ki pechaliy seat par guzarehien!"'Naku, responded in complete wide eyed silence, and wondered that in the mood he was in tonight anything could be possible! "nahin Saab, Aye Sahib, aur Baji ko neend nehien aye gi jab tak hum ghar nahin phoonchtey",Naku reminded Dutta firmly. He bowed his head in agreement as he gave her one last smitten look. He started the car, and checked ahead on the road, but before he pulled off he gave her a suggestive sideways glance in complete wickedness ,as if to say that he would pick up the pending matter when they get home later...Naku read his thoughts and lowered her eyes shyly as always.

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Dutta, looked over his right shoulder and turned his car around, home ward bound. As, he drove lazily, he out of curiosity asked,"Naku aagar kisi rooz main teri zindagi se ajanaak ghayab ho jaoon ,tu tera kya haal ho ga?. She felt a sudden premonition gave way in her being, he looked at her sideways and he could see tears ready to smear her face, and regretted asking her this one off silly question. He turned to concentrate on the road still as he waited for her answer, finally her answer reached his ears' Saab, Bappa aise na hoona dey, pun mein tu apna hosh hi kho dunoon gi, aur ap Saab, ap ka kya haal ho ga?, she carried on... Dutta, took a deep breath in and responded quietly' Naku, tera Saab tu maar hi jayega!" Naku, alarmed leaned to the right and covered his mouth to stop him from saying anymore... Dutta, carried on, "mein kaise baat sooch raha hoon...Bappa sab teekh hi rekhe ga,Naku",he assured her as he ,revved the engine and drove at speed towards Patil Nivas looking forward to his unfinished business with his love, his wife Nakku!

Dearest friends ,many thanks for reading, liking and commenting on my work The Party; it is largely dedicated to Mishal Raheja in his memorable role of Dutta and his love Nakusha. It goes without saying, that your love and encouragement goaded me to complete all the parts, for it is painful a process to even contemplate life without LTL1, let alone to create imaginary scenarios between Dutta and Naku.Still, many thanks for making the time to read my thoughts, for granting me some degree of healing... Hamlet53 9.4.11 edited 4.2.13.


Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Hammie ,
In deed a perfect closure to the party ...and specially for those like me who miss this wonderful couple a lot your imagination is like a drug ...healing the pain...with every moment penned between dutta and nakusha one can just keep on dreaming imaging the two actually holding each other and dancing on the tune..the world too moving with their rhythm.and i think shakspear has left those wonderful lines only to match with your work each and every title do such a great justice with your script...truely amazing...and what is even more noteworthy that you remember all those lines and pick them appropriately always.

Loved all the songs picked have to say the first one piya tose naina laagay re was'nt expecting this one from you ...i was expecting some rocking mika number lol...but great choice and each word when related to tasha was giving even more deeper meaning...for naku every word of affection is summed up in one word "saab" so simple yet the strongest feeling...no other justification required to prove "your love" .

im sure a wonderful experience for naku and dutta experiencing the disco enviornment ..wese i hate those pink blue baatiyan yeh kia saar dard wali cheez hoti hain if i was a party decorater hamesha i would have eliminated those disco lights lol...shaadi is for sure not a umar qaid ki saaza for tasha and baaji pointing out haha just was too good.

Last but not the least finally finally dutta and naku too on the dance floor and the song is defo one of my favourite and it looked so perfect on tasha..and so well described each and every movement on the dance floor was a treat for the readers.

and baaji nay tu saray shikayat dour kardi not even for a single time he played the role of a kabaab main haadi not even going along with them to patil niwas .. loved their drive together and dutta tauba this man does nt leave a single job..the funny part was him jumping on the name of police hahaha ...

Thankyou hammie for giving us such a wonderful part betwwen our beloved couple...plzz annot this thread soon iss ka number hamesha sab say last part atta hai😔 ...and yeh jo apne aik bomb blast kiya hai with declaring it as last part i hope you consider your readers and continue this thread as we all love to read your updates and always wait eagerly for them...im looking forward to dutta completing his "Unfinished Business" in the next update with his love :)
plsss post soon waiting for a new OS :)
Edited by Warda. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the annots :)
im looking forward to this thread and hoping you will continue after this part too :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hamlet thanxs for the os..it reminded of LTL..enjoyed the party ...you are too good...pls continue the os i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammiee
the party was great & dutta & naku enjoyed themselves on dance floor,yes it does remind of ltl .which u guys have kept alive with great stories.i felt like been part of party
each & every chapter i enjoyed .for ur old reader u need to give a new ud
plzzz hammiee rose did convince u to continue now don't back ..big request from all of us
as always ur amazinggg hammiee ek nai ud de de tu zara😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi hammie very nice ud thanks the party was geart dutta and naku enjoyed the very much
datta and naku on dance floor loved it hammie
thanks again please continue the os ud
love you hammie
waiting for next

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Posted: 12 years ago

HI Hamlet

Thanks for the annotated. I very much enjoyed reading this OS it was great. Dutta and Naku took to the dance floor and they got lost in each other but you can not leave it like this pls continue this OS ud

Take care now



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