FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#1041

hi rose

its pleasure to read anything from ur end be it a anno😊...don't u miss us...like we do...waiting for a new story

a rose for a rose

Edited by Nakusha - 11 years ago

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uwith

@uwith

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1042

hi rosethanxs for anno...start writing a new ff pls...regards uvi

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1043

Hi rosethanxs for anno...😊waiting for FF

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1044

@ ranjana ..you are right , these days bollywood movies are having tragic endings where especially the hero dies , like aashiqui , barfi , lootera . thanks for reading n leaving a comment behind.

@ jedy ..sometimes its difficult to keep everybody happy , thanks for sharing your views.

@ hammie ..i know you are strong enough to take this shocking end . i am surprised that you don't read love stories yet LTL is so close to your heart , i am glad you feel that i have given a dignified ending to the story , for me all the characters are important including sups , she is not positive, she is grey and that makes her human and believable. thank you so much for appreciating the bombing of the shopping complex scene and nakku giving up her life scene these were tough parts for me to write and i am glad u liked them.

@ sanghita ..it feels so good to know that you think the ff couldn't have a better ending than it had. thanks.

@ sona ..thanks for the pink roses , it reminds me of my changed color . dear you have answered your question on your own, stories like these seldom have a happy ending.

@ usha ..sorry to have brought tears in your eyes but i am happy the story touched you.

@ fassben ..i can understand that you weren't expecting tasha to die in the end but like you said , tasha's love has not died. thanks for the comment.

@ elena ..thanks for the appreciation n the rose.

@ ALL ..thanks a lot friends for making me feel special by asking me to come with a new ff but like i said i don't have new idea or concept in mind but whenever i have a good story will definitely share it with you and when will that be , i have no clue . this time i am not committing myself because seriously i am totally blank so how long you shall have to wait , i don't know but thanks once again for your love and support .

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jedy25

@jedy25

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#1045

hi rosepls start a new story...forum is silent ...missing u

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twinkle-star

@twinkle-star

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1046

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

@ twinkle twinkle little star ...this ff wasn't a fairy tale instead the pics that you have uploaded reflected a fairy tale , couple dancing on the moon ..lovely and i am really sorry i made you cry but trust me killing tasha wasn't easy for me , it was heart wrenching. As always your pics have taken my heart away, dutta looking in the rear view mirror to check on nakku , fighting with anna's men , heart broken dutta on seeing nakku in a miserable state , all were just perfect but the avi of dutta holding nakku's hand in the hospital was the best. thanks a lot for taking so much pain while coming up with this heart touching comment. omg you made siggies of tasha with the songs that i have included , so sweet of you dear, really appreciate them.

Hi Rose🤗
Wow..Thank You So much for your lovely annotations dear...Loved them soo much❤️...Oh Dear...Your story is truly a fairy tale..loved it so much...Still in my heart.❤️..Thank you so much for liking my pictures dear🤗..Awe dear..Honestly you are the one & only person who always appreciates baby's crazy creations 🤗..So sweet of you dear.🤗..Today is the happiest day..Our Rose ki Birthday.🥳.Soo No sad faces from Twinkle baby..😃😃😃...Luv you so much dear.🤗..Have a wonderful Happy Birthday..🥳..May your dreams come true.🤗..Lots of Hugs from Twinkle baby...🤗

PS:-Awe...loved your MR video avi & siggy so much dear...❤️❤️

Edited by twinkle-star - 11 years ago

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zeest_14

@zeest_14

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1047

Hi rose,

Sorry for late reply.So wat i should say,last part and heart wrenching work.I wasn't expecting this,i thought something bad ,something worse but not this worst one.All my hopes dashed and i was in tears.It means u successfully did your work.For me if a story or fiction affects our mood ,it means the writer is successfull.i like your writing skill but not the tragic end.So it could be said that IWL is totally based on facts and realities of life.👏

You presented tasha very well.Dutta's concern about naku in car, at site and in hospital was apt.I love that scene when dutta was standing near window helplessly.Life was there outside the window ,he could see it but couldn't feel it.

ZINDAGI KI SAB RONAQAIN MERE ANDAR HE DUM TOR GAIN

DIL MERA KUCH THUM SA GYA JEENEY KI UMANG BHI CHOR GAI

And then tasha moments.Their understanding was very nice dutta didn't say any thing but naku knew the reason of his anger.And the most awaited scene ,another shade of dutta's character ,dutta as father .You always present dutta's character very well but in this ff you present it marvelously.I was anxiously waiting for this shade and you didn't disappointed me .👍🏼

Naku and baby scene was well written,the way she cuddled the baby and her sadness was heart wrenching.She gave him the biggest happiness of his life and for this she paid the biggest price.

JAB TUJ SE MUHABBAT KI TO PHIR TAN MAN SAB TUJ PE WAR DIYA
BUS AIK BACHA THA JEEVAN HE , LO AJ WO BHI HAAR DIYA

And then dutta's death 😭

JAB HATH SE TERA HATH GYA,MERE HATH TO PHIR KUCH BHI NA RHA

JAB TERI AANKHAIN MOONDI TO MERI SAANS BHI NAATA TOR GAYI

In the last scene i like supriya's intention of telling the truth to tasha's child,an intention of admitting her imperfection and tasha's love.

Brilliant job rose ,really amazing .Huge round of applause for you.Don't try to follow mishal and bring a new ff buttt with happy end.

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twinkle-star

@twinkle-star

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#1048

Rose🤗

Aweee...You are really a lucky rose dear..🤗...Aweee nice colour for IF-Sizzlers...Loved it sooo much...❤️❤️...You're totally free from that baby pink.....This lovely purple colour is suitable for you....aweee...dhinchak...dhinchak...Big Hugs from twinkle🤗

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#1049

Originally posted by: twinkle-star
Rose🤗

Aweee...You are really a lucky rose dear..🤗...Aweee nice colour for IF-Sizzlers...Loved it sooo much...❤️❤️...You're totally free from that baby pink.....This lovely purple colour is suitable for you....aweee...dhinchak...dhinchak...Big Hugs from twinkle🤗

thanks twinkle , you don't know how happy I am