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Wonderful updates as usual, just finished reading both the chapters.

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

update nakku crying dutta asking reason fnally nakku told that their relation is cause of her stress
Hi Rani :) Thanks for reading and commenting. Yup Naku distressed, I think both are really and that distress is about to blow up...😆 wait for it 😉

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

a beautiful updt...loved the tasha convo ...continue soon..
Hi Usha! Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you loved the conversation between tasha...there's more to come so hope you like it :)

Originally posted by: FASSBEN

HI Daya

Liked the ud. Naku trying to keep her distance from Dutta from save herself from getting hurt later on and she thinks it will kill her more when when the whole thing will be over. I love the convo between the two the best part was when he ask why she was crying and when she she told him because of them he goes all silent. I can't wait to read what he will say after this.

Thank once again ud soon

Hi Fassben! Thank you so much for reading and leaving your lovely remark. Glad to hear your thoughts. Seems their conversations are pretty big hits lol...I am glad you've enjoyed it...this conversation will be a highlight moment for them...so hopefully in plays out right...anyway thanks again :)

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

hey daya i am speechless after reading this update ..it was that wonderful..you have brought out nakku's pain so well..it is indeed very hard to keep distance from a person who u love so much especially when he is all concerned and around you ..first i liked the scene where she was finding medicines for him ..it was cute ..however the fire place scene bowled me over ..his warm touch melted me at least ..i could imagine the whole scene and all the time i wished that nakku crashed into his arms and broke down instead of running away from him but that's our nakku always trying to curb her real feelings ..it kind of surprised me that he was so adamant to know why she was crying ..i hope she gives him a full answer
Hiya Rose, thank you for reading and leaving your precious comments. I do appreciate it greatly and am very glad to hear this UD left you speechless in a good way😆 You know fire place scene was my fav part and maybe you weren't the only one wished she'd crash into his arms😉...though it didn't happen it will one day :P and as for the breaking down...you might like the breakdown in the next ud 😆 he wants to know because it bugs him that he was a reason for her tears when he's been nothing but nice to her...anyway hoping that conversation plays out just right so I can get this show on the road 😛

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi daya

fab ud 😊
Thank you! I am glad you've liked the UD. I really appreciate the time you take out to read and comment so thanks again :)

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Beautiful update daya
amazingly written
Thanks Ranju, glad you thought so.
Enjoy it and want that it never ends puri book publish kar de :-)
Hain? It's going to end eventually😆 and probably soon...
Every moment of tasha is awesome
Thank you...they're quite a pair!
Dutta's concern for her or its his love always want her safe and happy
yesh! he likes her but doesn't know it! He wants her well and fine but also denies the truth behind the why..what to do with him?
Just want to know that why she was weeping in any way so that he can do something for that and nakku can't do anything expect thinking of him and him leaving her later
After getting his answer he must be cursing himself why he ask that :-p woh toh dukhi hai ab khud bhi ho soch kar :-)
ah i'd say that is a question he'll want and get an answer too 😉
fab update

Originally posted by: jedy25

superb ud daya ...dutta -naku convo was very nice

😊
Hiya Jedy, thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed their conversation...lots more of that to come...

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya

loved the ud😊i 'll comment in detail soon

hi daya

our dutta & naku in safe house & outside a storm is buliding but within the storm nahin theres a hurricane .😆

naku as always me & my kitchen ,dutta with his concern is making naku fall in luv with him over again or naku s dilemma on dutta concern is it concern as a protector or luv .we all are waiting too know 😆

the candle scene was very cute & naku is stubborn & dutta is already getting used to her way

naku finally admit he been the reason for her tears .the frozen atmosphere but nakus tear have already melted his heart

me loving the way story is moving ,the story is superb waiting for next ud😊big hug tc

Hiya Nakusha! Thank you for reading and commenting , greatly appreciate it...
and yeah! there is a hurricane building inside 😆 let's just see how bad it is...
omg i had to make him tease about her and her kitchen lmao that was like her second home...Naku's and Dutta's mind battles are about to get more interesting...there is too much caring going on apparently haa...neither can handle it ...oh yeah you know what I think Dutta's already given in to her stubbornness..he knows how she is and doesn't bother no more...psst I think they are falling into place naturally amidst a natural disaster going on outside :P Yep she admitted enough to pique his interest...and now the man is going to wonder what he did...but ur right the tears get to him😉 its her secret weapon..lets hope she knows that and uses it well 😆😆 Thanks again...glad you're enjoying the way its progressing...

Originally posted by: uwith

hi daya very nice UD...dutta & naku in safe house ...loved it😊regards uvi
Hi Uvi, thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you're liking it...yep their in the safe house and hopefully that exactly what the two need 😉

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi daya

love the ud

dutta naku convo enjoyed it

seems naku cant stay away from her first love kitchen

waiting for next part

Hi Emily. Thank you for reading and commenting. Lol yeah the kitchen is her second home that girl is addicted 😆 but i think her bigger addiction is to a certain handsome man...

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi daya loved the UD...dutta & naku in safe house ...they are getting closer😊...the safe house will safe their relationship too ..pls ud soon
Hi Sona! Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the UD...yep so their in the safe house now and you've said it beautifully let's hope the safe house safe's their relationship...

Originally posted by: meriyaar

Wonderful updates as usual, just finished reading both the chapters.

Dutta and Naku's relation is truly unique and you're writing it so beautifully!

tc

xoxo
hiya mate...long time no see or chat...how goes life?
Thanks for reading and commenting...glad you're liking it!
And thank you for the kind words about my writing😳

Yaar you are now just like those runaway trains... 😃 moving at break neck speed, me a little lazy and you wil be off to the next.

Anyway, the couple are battling not just the elements but their emotions too atleast naku is clearly cracking.. YES! the two as planned by our master planner baji aided by some stroke of luck are stuck in the safe house 😉

Poor naku is barely managing to hold her feelings in check for him, his closenes and his luving and caring behaviour hasnt helped in anyway. What i like about her is she doesnt stop from speaking her mind, mildly defiant and displays some attitude too. But basically she is trying to mask her feelings for him. Dutta outsmarting naku with medications and naku left huffing n puffing lol.. 😃 It is heartening to see him slowly but surely interacting with her as a matter of fact way kind of forgetting the animosity and indifference behind.

Now normally power outages are a curse but i wholeheartedly welcome it 😆. Just when i thought it was time for sparks.., naku instead of taking advantage of the situation is heartbroken at the future of her relation with her man, yedi hai lol.. GOSH, she is literally numb to things around her 😲. But dutta alert showing presence of mind, comes to her rescue. Naku in a dilema to reveal her feelings for him n dutta adamant... but atleast the two warming up to each other literally 😆 daya, you are back with your cliffhangers lol...

Thank you dear for the lovely UD, continue plzz..

hello pappy..Daya/Baji..
umhh oye paji! ummh forgive me , you see me busy with work ,not like you faffing about.. chaal gale lag ab.. waise tune check kiya, teri pupil Warrie ne Dutta in London ka siggy buniya hai mera liya... humm haan thekh hai..didn't have the heart to tell her its Mishal in London notDutta..😆 now I can feel a jhotti coming towards my head all the way from her .. so now you Baji need to stand in front of me and take the chappels... chaaal don't look at me ..do it!
OK now to YKB~ Chap.8
loved it..daya .. brilliant.. waise..
~Naku has some bad crush on Dutts..ummh what is her preoccupation?.. be cold,be distant,act like she doesn't care, ummh who is she kidding? mujhe sab pata hai, iske acting..😆
~Naku and kitchen go together ,like you do with your kitchen ,can hear you checking the cupboards main kya khaon... daya daya... I know you too well ..
~now my caribou! some great references to the storm, ..rainstorm; power cut; candles, generator, no heating, fireplace, brilliant Daya you incorporated your real experience when recently you along with USA were in the throes of a hurricane! fantastic section ..
~ the candle scene was Ooh so warm, as it brings them together along side the cold,the fire , the comforter.. it was full on a scene of Christmas warm cheer! completed with the reference to Rudolph..
~ yet to me Daya the highlight has to be Dutta's wisecracks, and certain restrained humorous inputs which are very welcoming in the storm,the cold, for it certainly has started to puncture their aloofness towards each other!
so mate.. keep up with the excellent SS writing! waiting for the next bit.Thank you, with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie..

@hammie. . oyee mujhe pata hai . .I intentionally didnt pick dutta's pick in pathani or kurta. .jee woh london main hai that too doing awara gardi on roads😆 so keeping in mind the temperature i picked a pic where he is wearing a jacket. .you should give me an award for my intelligence😆

Originally posted by: Warda.

@hammie. . oyee mujhe pata hai . .I intentionally didnt pick dutta's pick in pathani or kurta. .jee woh london main hai that too doing awara gardi on roads😆 so keeping in mind the temperature i picked a pic where he is wearing a jacket. .you should give me an award for my intelligence😆

but he wears a coat suit in the show 😆 white wala...and then the brown wala 😛
waise Warda...absolutely love the siggy! MR/Dutta both one and the same...
and really love the lines ...one of my fav songs...reminded me of Sidra's VM on TaSha for it...its actually one of my favorite VMs too