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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

update nakku crying dutta asking reason fnally nakku told that their relation is cause of her stress

Edited by tamanna1391 - 12 years ago

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

a beautiful updt...loved the tasha convo ...continue soon...

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FASSBEN

@FASSBEN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

HI Daya

Liked the ud. Naku trying to keep her distance from Dutta from save herself from getting hurt later on and she thinks it will kill her more when when the whole thing will be over. I love the convo between the two the best part was when he ask why she was crying and when she she told him because of them he goes all silent. I can't wait to read what he will say after this.

Thank once again ud soon

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

hey daya i am speechless after reading this update ..it was that wonderful..you have brought out nakku's pain so well..it is indeed very hard to keep distance from a person who u love so much especially when he is all concerned and around you ..first i liked the scene where she was finding medicines for him ..it was cute ..however the fire place scene bowled me over ..his warm touch melted me at least ..i could imagine the whole scene and all the time i wished that nakku crashed into his arms and broke down instead of running away from him but that's our nakku always trying to curb her real feelings ..it kind of surprised me that he was so adamant to know why she was crying ..i hope she gives him a full answer

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Beautiful update daya

amazingly written

Enjoy it and want that it never ends puri book publish kar de :-)

Every moment of tasha is awesome

Dutta's concern for her or its his love always want her safe and happy

Just want to know that why she was weeping in any way so that he can do something for that and nakku can't do anything expect thinking of him and him leaving her later

After getting his answer he must be cursing himself why he ask that :-p woh toh dukhi hai ab khud bhi ho soch kar :-)

fab update

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jedy25

@jedy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

superb ud daya ...dutta -naku convo was very nice

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

hi daya

loved the ud😊i 'll comment in detail soon

hi daya

our dutta & naku in safe house & outside a storm is buliding but within the storm nahin theres a hurricane .😆

naku as always me & my kitchen ,dutta with his concern is making naku fall in luv with him over again or naku s dilemma on dutta concern is it concern as a protector or luv .we all are waiting too know 😆

the candle scene was very cute & naku is stubborn & dutta is already getting used to her way

naku finally admit he been the reason for her tears .the frozen atmosphere but nakus tear have already melted his heart

me loving the way story is moving ,the story is superb waiting for next ud😊big hug tc

Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago