Painful Rapture thread3 last part/ p.133~ 28.12.12 - Page 97

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee

loved the ud,will be back with comments .ur amazinggg hammiee😊

hi.naku ..tu h gaye..pata tha tu wapis ye ge.. good to see you..😛

hi hammiee

mein aa gai .ud mein bahut rang the & u know wht i mean😆

what rang? bata mujhe iam listening..😉

dutta is taking good care of his wife ,naku is a lucky girl 😊dutta is a major but with his fly he is such a perfect fly man

yes Dutta the lionhearted is predominantly an animal who stalks alone too but lives in apack

nakus condition is better than before & i must thank our Dr hammiee 😃dutta will get some rest had to carry is wifey dear all the time .gym jane ke fursat the

haaa hooo😆was looking around.. heyyy like the sound of doc.hammie..well aagar mera bas jale tu every one has a hale and hearty healthy life..

dutta meeting his boss parekh & joining back ,its good he can be closer to naku ..joh darr tha woh huwa khan ne rasta kat deya 😕her excitment on seeing dutta didn't make it visible she is married

hain? pun Naku bartee tu thrill koi khani ke sun ke.. oyee fikar not jab jane ko kuch nehi kiya tu Dutta home ground pe kiya kare ga.. really dutta is shall we say is quite harmless!😆

she is back to her fav job calling naku for favour & naku brust crying😆 for her .kuch pichle janam ka nata hai ya toh hormone problem during pregnancy

well look at it his way , female bonding ek aurat he dosre aurat ka dard smahjte hai ..😉

dutta forgiving the man who endager his wife & child ,its quite noble of him but sametime he felt law should take its course ,loved his sense of judgement

well thats the difficult part to maintain a balance between right and wrong..

with naku on feet dutta ordering his fav sandwich😆love the couple so much

the feet massage scene brought LTL memory back do incorporate if possible miss it so much

yes.. I thought better incorporate something from the original track, simply becuse it just seemed to fit , but no where near the real scene.. check bart ka video ,she has kindly posted the clip in her comment.

hammiee i 'm worried abt forum & hope all my fear are wrongoyeee Naku, sab thek hoga , there are people like you ,tahera, priya ,nimmi ,Rose, bart,fassben, who keep posting interesting threads ,bas we should continue to contribute to the posts..
thanks so much for your comments ,with much love, as ever yours,xxhammie.

as always u r amazing hammiee tc

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

awesum...loved the dutta was taking care of her...not liking much of khans interference ...poor dutta wanted a kiss and there she wanted to puke...continue soon...
hi ushankitvc, great to see you yet again
pleased that you enjoyed the UD, yes we see the caring husband ,so he should be.. khan is part of the job,and that's how it will remain.. nothing more. Naku's puking ..well you'll have to work out mate if its fake aur genuine..😆.. thanks for reading ,and commenting ,with much love ,as ever yours xxhammie.

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi hamhi imli good to see you mate..😛

dutta taking care of naku pati ho to aisa

love the change first it was naku who use to get dutta morning tea now its duttas turnwell this caring for her strengthens their marriage..

uff ham ye kya bechara dutta ghar pe aaya hi tha itni jaldi kya thi kam pe bhejne ki look baaby ,he is in full time employment ,so he has to go back to work, cannot justify otherwise..

here comes chudail no 2 khan😡 dutta ka pecha nahi chodti i doubt if she knows about nakus condition tab bhi apni harkato se baj nahi aayegi look Khan is purely professional colleague , aur kuch nehi , aur naku ke liya aache tha when she rang.. as a friend.

good to know naku n baby both are out of danger

khan calling naku waah dosti ho to aisa itni din tak naku ki yaad nahi aayi jaisi dutta back dost ki yaad aa gayi 😡

dutta giving naku foot massage so sweet good you liked he final section, reminded me of he memorable scene of LTL1..

thanks for ud n pm

waiting for next
thanks for reading ,and giving such a lovely comment,as ever with much love , yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet thanxs for remembering my name in ur post...😊i luv ur story & my friends too ...wish apart from my comment i contibute something more...its time constrain..study as u know ...very nice UD.dutta back on duty & naku feeling better ...looking frwd to next ud soon 😊
dearest uvi, you and your friends are an integral part of Laagi forum, every one appreciates the time you take out to visit the forum and comment on various posts..keep it up.. mates..
thanks reading,enjoying ,and commenting on the UD, with much love, as ever yours, xx hammie.

Originally posted by: jedy25

hi hamlet superb ud ..thanxs alot for beautiful story 😊
hi jedy, super duper to see you 😛
makes me very happy to learn that you read and like my work.. thanks ,with much love, as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: afzal7861

hi hammie great ud dutta was taking care of naku nice poor dutta last time take he wanted a kiss par hamare naku ke nakher 😳

the feet massage scene was good loved

thanks for the ud

waiting for next ud soon

helllooo kaka balli! ke hal hai sab thek thak? keeping warm I hope..
yes he is a caring,doting but deprived husband😉.. soochta hai sawa ka koi phul mila ga but Naku bhi Naku hai .. thanks for liking the Update mate, with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: mirage123

hi hamlet fab ud😊
HI mirage so great to see you
nice to learn that you read the ud and enjoyed it ,thanks for your comment ,as ever yours with much love xx hammie.

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet

Dutta life came full circle...khans entry😆...naku is fine ...its a gr8 news...would luv to see her old self...dutta act of forgiveness was very touching

looking to another superb chapter😊

hellooo sonaaa, great to see you mate
yes Dutta's life is reaching full circle ,almost.. Khan is here professionally.. Yes, Dutta forgiveness is legacy of his whole family.. thy are a sensitive people, can recognize true remorse, yet still beleve in the hand of the law to prevent possible repeat of the incident.. thanks for your great comment ,with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie

Originally posted by: dilse14

hi hamlet with each chapter you write something unique its made to order 😊 love reading it
my dear dilse, a few days back when I saw your comment it picked me up from the doldrums.. you are so gracious ..thank you so much for your on going support, with much love , as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: -daya-

me back...with my comments...

and now ldies and gentlemen , here comes my dil jigar with a whammy! oyee howdy book worm.. wriggley wiggley worm.. 😆 good to see you Baji,high five! tu ek he hai ,aur koi nehi..

Painful Rapture ~ Chapter 71

Hammie, a wonderfully written chapter with lots happening. Dutta's still coming to terms with his becoming a father but at least he's started to learn the details and interesting to note he's also noticing more and more expectant mothers around. I'd say that's because it's the only thing on his mind and it's something that leaves him a little clueless...well bradley gave him the material he should read up ,the dodo!

Jane was...well can't say she didn't add some drama to the trip, but she's quite shameless if you ask me.😆 Despite the fact that she knows Dutta's married and a devoted, faithful husband she still attempted and hoped for a chance with him...good god😆...the woman seemed desparate...am glad he showed her who's boss... and pointed her to her place...she asked for it...really...but Dutta also showed his good heart when he talked with her afterward...tera dil kiya bat ghumna hummh/.bata. know teri nasty s turn overs

Now I was surprised with the turn of events at Naku's workplace. The stress of the incident resulting in a threatened pregnancy was an interesting touch. It gives you ample of opportunity to test Major Dutta's control. Of course, naturally, Dutta reacted with some light chiding...questioning her ability to take care of herself...but we all know it was because he loves her a lot...good to have him back in person with his love...waiting to see how this threatened pregnancy affects the lot... waise he may be right daya , i wonder if she really takes things on board, she acts daft at times.. Dutta knows her well

Painful Rapture ~ Chapter 72

Another great update. Never cease to amaze me. Enjoyed the banter between two friends in the beginning...Dutta and Baaji are certainly an amusing pair...Loved that Kala took it upon herself, ignoring the awkwardness of the topic, to approach Dutta and make sure he understood how this threatened pregnancy means partially eliminating complete intimacy between the couple. Of course, Dutta being hungry for her doesn't help but I trust he'll find his way through it..he's a Soldier! Army Officer...he can find self control :P

oyee tu to aise bol rehe hai he self control army depot mein sale pe hai ,he goes there and just buy's some..

Dutta now in the role of working while Naku kicks up her feet, lays back, and enjoys the royal treatment...it's rather amusing...after being so used to her doing all the work and him ordering it or just expecting her to do it...now its all flipped. yes its good to see that in such conditions one can enjoy or experience a certain degree of role reversal..

Had to laugh at the bit on their way home from the hospital..her feeling sick, Dutta ordering Baaji to get the lemon and Baaji getting it but lying about why...well can't blame the man...he's being sent on the oddest errands really...now Dutta will slowly begin to experience what it's like to be an the pregnant woman's husband...hope he's ready for all the demands, emotions, cravings...some how his lemon in the car scene came to my mind only for Baji, the gopher!

The family moment was great. Him filling them in on the happenings...what he was offered, why he declined and the promotion...all wonderful news to his family...ummh like to e live moments of family times shown in LTL1..

Oh the Dutta-Naku scene about food reminded me of LTL1...the JMM2 sequence...except here we were graced with Baaji's prescene...who needs to climb trees when Baaji will bring you what you need when you think it...barging in and giving the food...any excuse to be around...doesn't he get the message when he's being pushed out the door? I think he needs to get married and be tied down...anyway after everyone finally leaves them alone...he gets to what he's been dying to do..which is kiss her only until Kala's words make him end abruptly...I guess it was a good thing...all they need is a kiss to end somewhere where they shouldn't go under the current condition...yes Baji should have his lagan , if nothing else at least on paper ,so his affairs are done and dusted..

Anyway let's see where this condition takes the two of them...

Painful Rapture ~ Chapter 73

Great Update Hammie. Dutta's turned into a great caretaker...doing a marvelous job with ensuring his wife's and baby's welfare...though his uhmm yelling orders could use some mellowing but regardless he's at least on top of his family's health...

Loved that there's good dynamics between this couple...him relaying that he must report to HQ and her asking his opinion about working and both sort of coming to a compromise about the situation...each has the others' best interest and unconditional support...its wonderful to see...haan thisis what makes a marriage.. other wise many situations , from the simple to the complicated ,that can rock the boat

So Major Dutta back to work and that too with teaching again the next batch of lieutenants...and of course who else but Khan ends up crossing paths with him...loved how she's still herself...sort of fearless of speaking her mind and asking what she feels like even if it may not be correct or appropriate...though khan's one of his best students it seems he's irritated with her...can't blame him though really...she sort of puts herself out there... yes khan back in the picture,but only professionally..

Interesting that Khan's married...and there's issues...because it seemed the guy had no problem with her before and now her status threatens his ego? Ridiculous yet interesting addition to the story...can be common,where the husband feels less than the wife , but that's not what its all about.. its about walking together..

So the man responsible for Naku's condition and Dutta's testing his self-control presents himself at PN...of course I expected a lot worst for the man but Dutta being the man he is...let him walk out...loved how Dutta handles it...and have to add Baaji's anger was rather adorable to watch and see just how much he adores Naku...like i mentioned earlier is Baji let it all out.. that which Dutta couldn't due to his responsible post..

Oh the bit at the end where he goes to massage her feet I simply pictured the LTL1 scene in the JMM2 track...with the red saree...gosh I miss them so much...damn show! Love how you adjusted it to fit the part in your UDthanks daya,yes used it simply because it seemed to fit in the scenario..

God this Naku and her bloody sickness comes when he's about to taste her lips...i wonder is it the pregnancy or what he'll do that sickens her lol...lets say with him, one thing leads o another..

Anyway...Great work! It's always a pleasure to read your work...keep writing...! thanks for your great comment pappy , I appreciate it, aaand reading all those flipping chapters ufff!tu kis meethi ke bune hai billy choo?😉 thanks a million ,as ever with loads of high fives! as ever yours xx hammie..