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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi hammie, interesting ur asking readers where to take ur creation .
i would be happy with wherever u take it. love ur writing im sure it will go well with readers. personally i would like to read the story how u planned it to go'whether a leap has to come u decide. at least i would feel cheated of the story that hammie had planned for us.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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All is well that ends well...a very significant title because things actually went well in the end ..😉.
Tasha on their way to their home...poor naku sad on leaving her homeland and parents ...but the likeable part was how dutta was trying to cheer her up...baaji as usual living upto his reputation the ultimate KMH...yahan bhi akela nahi chora...but it was a fun to read him being a part and trying to cheer up a sobing naku...
loved all the rituals performed once tasha were at home...and baaji/suds as usual sautans😆

lovely bonding between naku and baaji...he has fulfilled his duties like a brother till naku landed in that den where there is a big NO ENTRANCE board for baaji😆...at least for today ...ahhmm was baaji trying to give any special advice to dutta😆...i loved his cold and frigid expressions there...it was no big deal for him ..target identified aim and shoot!...well not before unless he actually encountered what was cooking in nakus mind 😛

What came into naku 😆...oki she was nervous and kind of expected that roona dhoona but not that much ...here when naku said a firm NO to dutta made me giggle so much...hammie was it some badla that we were after you for tasha marriage😆
What i never expected was dutta being so calm and patient...was completly surprised by this transformation from a desperate lover to a patient husband...how about a combination of both😉

He undid his green sherwani plus the rest of his clothes in the hope that she would visit his room but having waited a while he gave up and headed...now i want to laugh loudly ...hehe...koi baat nahi major saab some other day may be luck favours you ...😉

hmm heading towards all is well ...finally tasha sharing a moment alone ...sea shore...rain ...jungle ...nothing can be more beautiful than this and the way you added amber song sequence it looked awesome with that moment ...away from that luxrious decorated room that wooden hard bed and a lonely place in the middle of jungle sounded so exciting...😳
Jungle main mangal 😉
This was very much like dutta .Jannat ..everything picture perfect!!!
and baaji had to give a call KMH ...yeh nahi badle ga...
precap ohh dutta back on duty ...itni jaldi ...awww

A beautifully penned update hammie...loved it to the core ...tasha marriage preparations...main event and after effects everything was incredible...
Ohh will miss the updates till 24th but im sure the wait is going to be worth it and till then are you leaving things to our imagination between tasha 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: tahera57

hi hammie, interesting ur asking readers where to take ur creation .

i would be happy with wherever u take it. love ur writing im sure it will go well with readers. personally i would like to read the story how u planned it to go'whether a leap has to come u decide. at least i would feel cheated of the story that hammie had planned for us.

WORD tahera, i too always felt it is for the writer to decide the course.
@hammie.. Plz dont hesitate to give the story the direction you originally intended, if you had not planned, then kindly do it your way, we wil love it anyway 😊



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey hammie,⭐️

How r u? must be excited with mishal's announcement, cheers to the good news Well, Here's my humble comment, thoda lamba hai par couldnt help it, hope u dont doze off reading. 😃

Hmm.. our fav couple major n naku set off on a new journey .. emotional n most important, life altering time for naku n for major too i would say, many times we forget that marriage does take a toll on a man too...his priorities, his choices altered n compromised. But already we see major, instead of bein sensitive makes a mockery of naku,s misery😛...agreed its his first time, lol... but he fails to handle the situation ...ends up irritating her instead arrgh! Actually major DSP has always [ok mostly] failed in guaging naku,s emotional needs 😔 Ohhh! baji kabhi toh apna drama band kar, kahi bhi shuru hojata hai, 😃 even thou he is tryin to lighten the delicate situation, sometimes it can be irritating [ofcourse its my opinion] atleast thats how i see it. Infact we as a society take our KMH ka role seriously ...ever ready to offer our unsolicited advice n help 😉

The mirror ceremony was something new to me, fun n frolic ways of welcoming a new member to the family, symbolic gestures of the mother in law to the daughter in law is more than welcome as now, two ladies vie for one man,s attention😃. Luckily Naku has in AS more a mother than a mother in law. And the moment of reckoning, the culmination of the vows, the customs the ceremonies, the cementing of a bond is here...😉.. but for the family, time for more leg pulling n masti. suds n baji refuse to grow up, taking potshots at one another... resembled one of those boxing matches. Kishore too enjoying at the cost of major...reminded of LTLs pre SR moments. Wow! stunning move by baji carrying naku..assuring his muh boli behen👍🏼 , the sisters too helping naku settle in her new abode. But it was surprising to see her so agitated when she has been all along familiar with the surroundings the people n more so the man himself. She could atleast express her fears to him i thought...dunno what does she think of him? some bollywood Prem Chopra?😆

But baji's dostana is stil on,😆 its as if he is reluctant to let him go, waiting for some pvt time with him. Major looks totally in control, atleast he is faking it wel. Uff! gadha taking it to be his battlefield hahaha...now this is not a good sign thou, lol... What an anti climax this suhaag raat is turning out? Major in his room err his trench, taken aback with the transformation of it huh! normally it wouldve been a romantic setup, but he is no normal i mean ordinary. To steady himself goes into flashback mood 😉 but naku totally unresponsive...irritating him further. To make matters worse she begins trembling sobbing n begging him to spare her 🤣 gosh! this battle of major has turned into his waterloo of sorts, he is shocked with naku's reaction... to add to the ignonimity baji catches him in his trip to kitchen, dhat teri!! kya se kyaaa hogayaaa ... luved his response n reaction in the end, feel for him now.. a desperate lover turned into a patient husband indeed! he kind of steals my heart everytime he does it... Way to go son of a gun, one step at a time👏. teekh hai, kaha jayegi, kamre mein ayi hai toh...😉

A new day n a new set of ceremonies..lol. but major can barely take his eyes off naku, she has no time for him yet. AS,s penchant for rituals has always helped our couple one way or the other. Once they set off out of PN, naku seem to be back to her own self, catches major offguard with her excitment n the two in a more conducive time n place one in nature... [they have some strong conection with jungle] Aaahh! even the rain gods blessing them . Our lion showering his love n the lioness leaving behind her inhibitions.. as he put it they had found their jannat but on a hard wooden bed in the middle of nowhere with the backdrop of a romantic no.,😆 far from family n mostly KMH,s. lol...wel almost i thought... uff! baji abhi bhiii??? iska jaldise kuch karna padega nahi toh bhao se ek din pitega pakka lol , jab dekho baat karne ka bahana chahiye?

The precap is worth the wait, major in his uniform, mixed feelings thou. Even b4 we could get enuf of the beautiful dreamy update, the reality of two dry fridays looming large, dampened the mood 😳 Ofcourse hammie, this is a much deserved break, hope u have a ROCKING time n return rejuvenated, Wil wait for the 24th UD, thou.

Bon voyage kala bandar !

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: afzal7861

congrats for the third thread hammie 😊
miss you so much my friend come back with a great update i miss your ud to

afzal ur missing picture is cute but confusing, ye billi kab se sher ko dhoonday lagi😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hammie,

Home is often the key to your happiness as home is where your heart is.

Congratulations on your new home! 👏

Atlast ! hammie my comments got what they wanted after 7days, but my congratulation message are stil awaiting ur kind attention on the last pg of ur previous thread😆😛 kindly visit the page since many of the messages stil lie unchecked by you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
hi hammie
nakus bidaai n her roona dhoona chalo
wow nakus promotion 4m jahil aurat to malkin ji
baji feeling guilty coz of him tasha is quite
oh baji singing n dutta completed the line n baji doesnt wan to b kmh
dutta sr ko mission samaj raha hain no wonder naku ne aarmano par paani pher diya
finally tasha became one
tasha celebrated their valentine in jungle now their first nite too wonder where dutta will take naku for their honeymoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

afzal ur missing picture is cute but confusing, ye billi kab se sher ko dhoonday lagi😕

ab hammiee 3 thread ke silver jubliee ke baad he aaige😆😆
tahera billi sher ke khala hote hai afzal ne sahi tareka dhunda hai .hamare nahin toh auntyji ke sun lege 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nakusha

ab hammiee 3 thread ke silver jubliee ke baad he aaige😆😆
tahera billi sher ke khala hote hai afzal ne sahi tareka dhunda hai .hamare nahin toh auntyji ke sun lege 😆

tahera nakusha yeh hammie ki thread hai kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😆
billi sher ke khala bhi ho saktye hai 😆
Edited by afzal7861 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: afzal7861

😆

tahera nakusha yeh hammie ki thread hai kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😆
billi sher ke khala bhi ho saktye hai 😆

hi afzal ,tahera .bharti
hammiee ke liye ek vm post karo jumma chumma wala😆by friday
wordings change karde teh hai
aree o hammiee forum ke jaan
aaj jumma hai pichle jumme ko UD ka vada tha .forum mein aaja aaja 😆

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