Painful Rapture thread3 last part/ p.133~ 28.12.12 - Page 107

Originally posted by: tahera57

i's ok i've never managed to win this at home with my bro either . and it's ok, lot of bak bak most of the times.

Originally posted by: -bharti-

"How far that little candle throws its beams! So shines a good deed in a weary world." William Shakespeare

Dearest chulbul pandeyji, aap hai "yaha ke robinhood pandey jo hamesha manmani karne mein mahir hai"..,

Firstly to you and wishin you happiness, health and all that you wish for in life..🤗 But there is no denying I was shell shocked by the sudden closure of my favourite Ff Dunno what to say but i hate you for enslaving us, hooking us to this journey of major/dutta's life and leaving us orphaned, when major went abaad with not one but two juniors 😛 Why did it have to be like this? No, i dont need ur cliched answers... chalo yeh gaana suno, dagabaaz hai tum, sach mein, yet i forgive you😉...

"Zindagi mein teen cheeze kabhi underestimate nahi karna, I, me and myself," and u live upto it to the hilt, you just do ur own thing.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3m2-HuJKO3k[/YOUTUBE]

Shocker No.2, we have a leap of 18 months and robbed of the precious moments when major n naku hold their bundle of joy first time 😲 But thank you for some small [actually bigg] mercies, a girl baby Amba named by AS ofcourse who else can it be... Hohohooo "aye naku" 😆 amba is speaking woh bhi loaded with attitude and why not, jaise baap waise beti. What a cute family moment that is, the little girl perched on his chest n pulling his hair lol.. arey yeh toh naku ki aadat hai. She's naturally Daddy's pet, but his mirror image as well n luckily he knows the limits of pampering, way to go major👍🏼 Still feel for him thou as he missed the birth of his darling baby. hmm one cannot have everything atleast not in army life

Hammie this is shocker No.3, i vividly remember u were against naku having another one...now you will tel me it was an accident how convenient. Its getting increasingly difficult to trust you. And our gadha is ready for more, he will only say,

"Aare Soniya baacho ko chodo..Itna pura Baap khada hein..Baap se pyar karo" ..😆

Wow its raining surprises, baji and roops wedding yayee!!!... ill call it a pleasant surprise, superb hammie, u didnt forget them. oooh ghar jamai baji tearful, what a sight ? teary eyed as his dostana is over full and final. Roops ki vidai ? WTH? from one room to another, this is the most funniest vidais i have ever heard of 😆 And i felt we have to celebrate their biggest day, so this one for our beloved baji and roops..a marati weddin number from english vinglish

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEHNef66HT0[/YOUTUBE]

Umm, poor naku not getting much help from her darpok pati 😛 [chooha] on her Dday lol.. shravan is here, im sure he will live upto his name, devout and caring just like naku. Perfect family 'hum do hamare do' but hey wait, they are not following the latest National family welfare propoganda... it is no longer hum do hamare do, eighties ka slogan hai, we have moved on and the nineties slogan is 'beti ya ho beta, parivar ko rakhe chota' 😆 but luckily for them we are not rigid like china with population control.

Epilogue

This has to be the biggest of all the surprises uptil now and i totally welcome, Amba following in the footsteps of her dad, wow this is overwhelming really,.. cause the nation which empowers its women only deserve to be called civilised in the true sense. GOD! she is also a terror and Baji ka toh misery continues unabated 😆...now its bhao's pet amba shooting off orders a step ahead of her dad, yaar isko jo bhi milega woh gaya kaamse, lol and shravan turned out to be PT, now this is one too many coincidences to digest, kuch zyada filmy hogaya 😛 hammie looks like you were in a tearing hurry to get the UD done with .. im bein very candid kyun ki u like it this way, "Mujph par ek ehsaan karna, ke mujhpe koi ehsaan mat karna"

Mellowed, salt n pepper maned major, oops General 😉 aur hammie General hi kyun, is it the natural progression in the army ? LOL. Whatever he continues to dote on his naku and their teasing refusing to fade with time and age, bless the couple

Now coming to the dreaded part, the VIDAI of PR.. Unbelievable, its more than 1 1/2 YEARS, time has certainly flown. I still vividly remember my first comments a hesitating one lliner. I was a silent reader of the forum then. But PR forced me to express myself a bit more as i found it a breath of fresh air [oye no mooli dakars plzz which ur so generous in bestowing] and the style of your writing floored me. Gradually i gave wings to my thoughts sheddin my inhibitions. Hammie you are extremely gracious in acknowledging every reader with the same love and affection throughout. I am humbled by your kind words, cause infact it was me who was obsessed with the Ff and fridays come to stand for PR and nothing more nothing less. The first two threads i must have read atleast 5/6 times all over and if you remember at the very beginin had mentioned that this would be my first E-Novel.

In this journey we have come to know each other a bit more on a personal level but my love for your writing is above all that we share. Major's eccentric behaviour, shirty attitude, passionate love making, total dedication to profession and job at hand, perfect sibling, friend and offspring.. its like "ek baar jo maine commitment kardi, us ke baad toh mein khud ki bhi nahi sunta" his character is etched in my heart as if it was not a fiction. He will rule my heart n mind for long long time..

The moment i read your pm "LAST UD", was on the street walking towards my car and it distressed me so much that i lost my way almost 😛😳 .. first thing that struck me what life would be next friday onwards. It was anger, emptiness all mixed up. Even though you had warned me of the Ff nearing its closure nothing prepared me for this. But its also a reality that it had to happen. I take heart in that you will continue with your brilliant work.

Remember agar jaldi se doosri Ff shuru nahi toh, "Hum tumhare inbox me itne PM bhejenge ki confuse ho jaoge ki padhe konsa or konsa delete kare" 😆 sochle nahi toh "circus ke retired sher banjayegi" 😉

Life is indeed come 'One Full Circle' atleast for me, im at the same crossroads as i was 18mths ago, wondering... Hammie, hoping i can even bring one smile reading my take. Im ever greatful to you for tolerating my nonsense for so long not to forget the many transgressions.. it was all in good humour and my love for ur work. I will end my comments with this quote; even if its fashionable to say,.."Dosti ka ek usool hai madam, no sorry, no thank you"

"Let us be grateful to the people who make us happy, they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom"

Mooli

signing off, love you loads, may you bloom in your choosen field and be ever loved and blessed PAINFUL RAPTURE !!!

Originally posted by: dilse14

superb comment😃

Originally posted by: Warda.

hammie🤗 **this time i need a hug too** :(
baji knows what I feel about hugs.. so just looks, nice ones..hummh.

ummhh one last time for Painful Rapture...all good things come to end but why the endings always leave you in tears...no there are no good byes and i hate saying good byess...like all other readers i feel gloomy too as my favourite ff has ended ...still cant believe it that next friday there will be no PR update for me...it will always remain a special ff for me...for through this ff only i came to know you as a person...the extra ordinary charecterisation of Major.Dutta was one of its kind always he will be my most special hero...its just like the image of Mishal/Dutta has been overtaken by an addition by adding major to it ..I will miss Paniful Rapture like anything ...nothing will ever replace it .warrie ,this is the story of life.. every thing that begins,has to come to end.. just like life.. pity we are slaves of time.. it does move on and we have to move with it. PR ,had a good innings and for that I shall be grateful to readers like your self who goaded me to continue..

oki first coming to the update wohooo 18 months leap ..lol even in the last update you didnt spare us to jump from our seats😆...and wow tasha our blessed with a girl Amba...what a beautiful name you picked it has as strong impact just like duttas name have...and why im not getting surprised at the girls attitude ...ditto copy of baba ...this is what i always wanted for dutta to see how the women of the house have always pampered him lol. .and i can feel dutta finds pride in it too that his daughter looks like him the same narrow eyes and square jaw ..

this was by far the best sight of PR for me dutta playing with his daughter ...what a lovely moment it is ...the full circle completes actually when one holds a part of himself in his hands. .

oyeee amba is not calling naku aaye hahah aaye naku...major ki beti my god i was rofling on that one and i challenge major if he made her call naku aaye 😆 ...usay bhi pata chalay zid kiya hoti hai...haaa haa, loved this remark ,you brought out Dutta's stubborn spirit..well said..
i loved it how amba was torturing dutta hahah trench ki birth hai rightly said...btw where did they go at the time of shravan that he is so calm *cough* loloyeee haaa hoo,another quietly humorous remark..shall we say, Naku was unaware, probably fast asleep..🥱

ummh h its pretty natural that after child's birth the attention is more focused on the child rather than each other and it is mostly seen coming from the mothers side and daddys always complaining for attention but here tables seems turned its actually dutta who is more focused on amba ...and awww thats so true thats one sharing that both husband and wife happily accepts.haan warrie, that's true , but ye Amba is not a new born infant ,she's a demanding toddler.. attention seeking , mind you that's how they learn to interact with society, learn language skills... and how to manipulate their daddy..😆

haiinn the hug has to be blocked by another bump...hehehe expected the way major doesnt left any single opportunity ever..are they giving competition to ram and rani 😆... and me shaking head that he is still unfamiliar with certain terminologies ...but yeah he do seem more relaxed this time the past chapters we can recall how he never let her step down .

waise I was hell bent ke Indu ka siggy saach kerna hai, so Shravan tu hona he tha. besides aache hai.. dono baache.. saath he grow up karien gayen... but there is a hint that, something will have to be done for future, with regards to more children.

Finally baaji too wearing sehra his long over due wish ...how he used to plead at tashas wedding ke aab mera number hai and here tasha are ready to welcome their second child lol ...Dutta is so blessed to have baaji as his BIL his betest buddy his brother ...and the luckiest person is roops who will be living in the same house with her AS...hahah the beedai from one room to another and what was this flood for ..i guess for photo clicking lol...😆

yes I thought about it and decided, this Roops really is not going to another home.. so could afford to add the funny bit.. and haan roona dhoone tu must hai humari shaadis mein, girls cant show their happiness, if they are..

ohh bless them now the family is complete with a baby boy...dutta is indeed a lucky son of a gun...par ohh yeh kiya even now he didnt stayed with naku in the labour room i wish he did holding her hand...wow the boy is just like naku must be very cute kid then with that sharp errect nose...The ending where baaji clicked a picture it was just the perfect moment a complete family...Bless them !!!😊 well Baji ke bagher tu Dutta ka immediate family incomplete.. even if is the official family photographer..😆

Epilogue: you know till you mentioned the name amba i could have never guess who was walking in that uniform taking long strides...but it made me so proud to read a girl following the foot steps of her father ...just imagining the same fire as major had in him as an officer coming from a girl is giving me goose bumps...Brilliant...and the way amba's character was penned in just that small epilogue she was leaving such an impact with every word i was loving this character so much...loved her roars of aae baaji for a change in a feminine voice lol and still aae naku awww i love this mother daughter too much :)shravan seems mama's good boy haha chalo naku bhi khush someone is calmer like her ..thanks warrie, for liking her introduction, in the opening bit, Ididnt want to disclose her identity, so maintain the surprise element.. that is a female soldier..

Dutta ohh is on general's rank now and loved it how still he was engaged in a convo with his baaba...hammie you left nothing incomplete ...the epilogue was so complete that i felt i actually lived those 19 years in those two paragraphs.oohh warrie tera ye remark means so much to me, it was not easy for me to do what I did.. only wanted to end the FF in a befitting manner...with a peek into their future too.

and the ending ohh one can just wish anything to be so perfect the two lovers together ...what a life they have lived one can just dream about it ...and our major oopss now general saab still the same ishq tu abhi bhi jawan hai hahah ...ohhh im actually in tears reading these last few lines...hammie kyon end kiya isko 😭 warrie, ummh na kar, aise. please. mera dil bhi doob jata hai, bahut sick feeling hota hai jaise, Mishal/Mahi have gone from my life yet again..

Kiya bolon a thank you will not be enough .. PR has been a pampered baby of mine just like major was for naku AS and baaji...i cant tell you how much i'll miss it...1.5 years i spent with this ff time just flies i hate it why time has to fly so soon and even more why do we fall in love with things one just cant say bye to it😭 ... you will right something else but PR will be always my favourite one just like no matter how many other shows MR will do ltl will be ltl...waiting for every friday literally to reserve the first spot i dont know why i loved the first spot may be my impatience when i had to wait for my annot turn...lol now im laughing how i acted like a kid who wants to be the first the most noticed...😳 ummhh, thank you for sharing your personal emotions, Iam very humbled and feel very valued Warrie.. ummh FF katam hoya hai, you haven't lost the buddies you made here ,baaby.. so smile please roote hoi aache nehi lagte tu..

i want to thank you for making my every friday so beautiful despite of your health issues or any other job you never missed to give us timely updates how much i want to thank you for this...every reader i came to know through this thread its just like our small "PR family" ...we've lived,laughed cried together .naku bharti daya ivy tammy sona afzal mirage tahera emily im gonna miss every single persons feedbacks... .im missing raj[prncz] too much today...tammana's colorful comments...bharti's insight to this ff and all her witty remarks ...nakusha your official accountant that unlimited spamming and every little event we have to celebrate on this thread be it eid ,xmas,, new year...or get well msgs for any ones health or those good lucks for exams..aww my family ...and gosh i hate it when any of you used to post yt videos blocking the page for me lol... wow what lovely thoughts Warda, now I am deeply deeply touched with your views of elevating this FF from just a story written by me , to incorporating readers whom you called PR FAMILY... thank you .. warrie..

thank you for using the few siggys i made although i never did a job close to daya and oyee how did you miss daya shifting you from one thread to another lol haaa yes daya is kya ? for me every one knows , and good you pointed it out.. tum sab ke bina FF could not have functioned like it did..

..PR is my "pampered baby" and will always remain like that. thank you,waise I feel pampered.😃

The bestest gift of this ff is that i came to know you had i not been a reader we would have never got a chance to interact.My prayers are always with you i want you to live a life which is full of happiness and success and love and peace...Stay blesed always..if anything or any of my word ever hurt you regarding this whole PR journey plzz forgive me for it...Thankyou hammie for giving us Painful Rapture .this beautiful saga which im going to cherish in my memories...Major was one character which has left a mark on my mind...
warrie with each word of yours , my sadness of ending this FF ,is gradually leaving me.. and I feel empowered once again to perhaps write more.. thanks for your prayers and good wishes, tera dau ,I always need..

and im just saying bye to Painful Rapture not to your writing..its just like major used to say to AS "Main Jaa Kar Aata Hoon" same goes for you jaldi wapis anna hammie plzz with another gem from your pen ...like we say in urdu "Hayaat Baaki Mulaqaat Baaki"
now thats my warrie! chin up! rise and shine! and move on! .. though we still wait for the real Dutta... Mishal to return..

i hope you'll like my little gift ...lots of love🤗 yeshh love the gift, brilliant, just the way I like it on duty fauji silhouettes.. with a heartfelt caption... warrie many thanks for your last comment on PR.. ummhh.. but like I said major may have gone..but I,Me,&Myself is still here.. with all my love, as ever yours xxx hammie.

P.S any of the PR member want to use it plzz do tell i'll post the link :)

Originally posted by: -bharti-

"How far that little candle throws its beams! So shines a good deed in a weary world." William Shakespeare

thanks for the lovely quote Bart.. from the bard, you know I respond to his words of wisdom, mind you mate, feel more like a stamped out candle at the moment..springs of writing not in motion..
bart this is a fantastic comment , and so say many others who have quoted it to show their delight in reading it.. it's an evidence of love for me and my writing , thank you,I am humbled.

Dearest chulbul pandeyji, aap hai "yaha ke robinhood pandey jo hamesha manmani karne mein mahir hai"..,nehi bart, may try to do ,but get nowhere.. readers are much much more powerful.. they make me do things , I thought I could everdo,like write + complete a FF.. so here's to you all..

Firstly to you and wishin you happiness, health and all that you wish for in life..🤗 But there is no denying I was shell shocked by the sudden closure of my favourite Ff Dunno what to say but i hate you for enslaving us, hooking us to this journey of major/dutta's life and leaving us orphaned, when major went abaad with not one but two juniors 😛 Why did it have to be like this? No, i dont need ur cliched answers... chalo yeh gaana suno, dagabaaz hai tum, sach mein, yet i forgive you😉... ok , no cliched answers , yes thanks love , the song, and haan you are right iam daaga baaz, woh bhi kum nehi bahut zayeeda..😆 and bart.. a happy new year to you as well baaby, keep smiling forever..

"Zindagi mein teen cheeze kabhi underestimate nahi karna, I, me and myself," and u live upto it to the hilt, you just do ur own thing. well ,bart, the FF was well past its sell by date and had to be ended gracefully, bas yehe kiya maine..please would appreciate your support on this , I am humbled that you loved the FF so

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3m2-HuJKO3k[/YOUTUBE]

Shocker No.2, we have a leap of 18 months and robbed of the precious moments when major n naku hold their bundle of joy first time 😲 But thank you for some small [actually bigg] mercies, a girl baby Amba named by AS ofcourse who else can it be... Hohohooo "aye naku" 😆 amba is speaking woh bhi loaded with attitude and why not, jaise baap waise beti. What a cute family moment that is, the little girl perched on his chest n pulling his hair lol.. arey yeh toh naku ki aadat hai. She's naturally Daddy's pet, but his mirror image as well n luckily he knows the limits of pampering, way to go major👍🏼 Still feel for him thou as he missed the birth of his darling baby. hmm one cannot have everything atleast not in army life ohh yes had to continue Major's attitude and looks ..for the long run too , especially when I was considering the end of the FF.. but pleased you liked it..

Hammie this is shocker No.3, i vividly remember u were against naku having another one...now you will tel me it was an accident how convenient. Its getting increasingly difficult to trust you. And our gadha is ready for more, he will only say,

"Aare Soniya baacho ko chodo..Itna pura Baap khada hein..Baap se pyar karo" ..😆
ummh no I think,wise step tha, both children will be nurtured together now, listen puri zindagi hai to act naughty now..😆

Wow its raining surprises, baji and roops wedding yayee!!!... ill call it a pleasant surprise, superb hammie, u didnt forget them. oooh ghar jamai baji tearful, what a sight ? teary eyed as his dostana is over full and final. Roops ki vidai ? WTH? from one room to another, this is the most funniest vidais i have ever heard of 😆 And i felt we have to celebrate their biggest day, so this one for our beloved baji and roops..a marati weddin number from english vinglish bart, it as you who suggested in a prvious comment ,that its about time Baji got married ,so followed your suggestion.. do you know loved this song, had not heard it , but since you have shown it to me may watch the film now on dvd..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEHNef66HT0[/YOUTUBE]

Umm, poor naku not getting much help from her darpok pati 😛 [chooha] on her Dday lol.. shravan is here, im sure he will live upto his name, devout and caring just like naku. Perfect family 'hum do hamare do' but hey wait, they are not following the latest National family welfare propoganda... it is no longer hum do hamare do, eighties ka slogan hai, we have moved on and the nineties slogan is 'beti ya ho beta, parivar ko rakhe chota' 😆 but luckily for them we are not rigid like china with population control.

hain? so now one child.. ? this is ridiculous.. if I have understood your remark correctly. bart, thujhe yaad hai there as a scene between AS/Dutta , in his room ,where he particulary felt low and told his mother that he has given her nothing but tears and heartache, and then she says to him to build his courage."nehi Dutta ,tu mera Shravan Kumar hai" ,that's where I took the name from..

Epilogue

This has to be the biggest of all the surprises uptil now and i totally welcome, Amba following in the footsteps of her dad, wow this is overwhelming really,.. cause the nation which empowers its women only deserve to be called civilised in the true sense. GOD! she is also a terror and Baji ka toh misery continues unabated 😆...now its bhao's pet amba shooting off orders a step ahead of her dad, yaar isko jo bhi milega woh gaya kaamse, lol and shravan turned out to be PT, now this is one too many coincidences to digest, kuch zyada filmy hogaya 😛 hammie looks like you were in a tearing hurry to get the UD done with .. im bein very candid kyun ki u like it this way, "Mujph par ek ehsaan karna, ke mujhpe koi ehsaan mat karna"love the pictures bart.. haaa hoo filmy end hai😆 okkay.. you are right may be I wanted it to be a complete end. with some aspects still unchanged , Amba,carrying legacy, empowering women, and Baji still the lovable underdog ..ummh fauji's ke jaan..😆

Mellowed, salt n pepper maned major, oops General 😉 aur hammie General hi kyun, is it the natural progression in the army ? LOL. Whatever he continues to dote on his naku and their teasing refusing to fade with time and age, bless the couple

Now coming to the dreaded part, the VIDAI of PR.. Unbelievable, its more than 1 1/2 YEARS, time has certainly flown. I still vividly remember my first comments a hesitating one lliner. I was a silent reader of the forum then. But PR forced me to express myself a bit more as i found it a breath of fresh air [oye no mooli dakars plzz which ur so generous in bestowing] and the style of your writing floored me. Gradually i gave wings to my thoughts sheddin my inhibitions. Hammie you are extremely gracious in acknowledging every reader with the same love and affection throughout. I am humbled by your kind words, cause infact it was me who was obsessed with the Ff and fridays come to stand for PR and nothing more nothing less. The first two threads i must have read atleast 5/6 times all over and if you remember at the very beginin had mentioned that this would be my first E-Novel.this paragraph has to be the highlight of the comment, the honest admission, you giving one liners.. hummh so pleased , that you stopped and opened up ,how else would people know then ,that you express your self brilliantly upon a variety of subjects , and all who read learn , new aspects of issues you comment on . So thank you Bart, I feel very lucky that you graced my FF with your presence.. Always waited for your comments every friday.. I sincerely hope that you will continue to support my writing ventures in future too.. bart..

In this journey we have come to know each other a bit more on a personal level but my love for your writing is above all that we share. Major's eccentric behaviour, shirty attitude, passionate love making, total dedication to profession and job at hand, perfect sibling, friend and offspring.. its like "ek baar jo maine commitment kardi, us ke baad toh mein khud ki bhi nahi sunta" his character is etched in my heart as if it was not a fiction. He will rule my heart n mind for

long long time..

yes I too treasure our bond ,BART, you have always been beside me in my highs and lows,specially related, to my personal life and my writing, so I formally thank you and say that I value tera saath..

The moment i read your pm "LAST UD", was on the street walking towards my car and it distressed me so much that i lost my way almost 😛😳 .. first thing that struck me what life would be next friday onwards. It was anger, emptiness all mixed up. Even though you had warned me of the Ff nearing its closure nothing prepared me for this. But its also a reality that it had to happen. I take heart in that you will continue with your brilliant work.

yes I Know bart..sorry it had to be so.. the FF was really at a dead end.. about continuing writing bart, I don't mince my words ,I will if I am supported by you..

Remember agar jaldi se doosri Ff shuru nahi toh, "Hum tumhare inbox me itne PM bhejenge ki confuse ho jaoge ki padhe konsa or konsa delete kare" 😆 sochle nahi toh "circus ke retired sher banjayegi" 😉 yes.. if Iam supported ..

Life is indeed come 'One Full Circle' atleast for me, im at the same crossroads as i was 18mths ago, wondering... Hammie, hoping i can even bring one smile reading my take. Im ever greatful to you for tolerating my nonsense for so long not to forget the many transgressions.. it was all in good humour and my love for ur work. I will end my comments with this quote; even if its fashionable to say,.."Dosti ka ek usool hai madam, no sorry, no thank you" YES...

"Let us be grateful to the people who make us happy, they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom"

Mooli signing off, love you loads, may you bloom in your choosen field and be ever loved and blessed PAINFUL RAPTURE !!!

thank you for your loving comments bart, they are heartfelt , and I receive them with the same love you give them with. Also bart, thanks you for the lovely acknowledgement you used to give me for my annotations.. its sad that this is the final one baaby.. ummh better leave , with much love ,as always yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi hammiee
Nakuuu tu ah gaye.. and hopefully not for the last time, saath de ge na mera agge bhi?

you gave the shock ,there was no indication the ff will end

maaf kar de, kisi ko bhi nehe pata tha, but I wanted to end before the fourth thread

frist thing i 'll comment on the ud & come back to the above comment

dutta & naku eighteen month leap blessed with bonny baby amba & the description brought the image of cute girl, the reslembes of dutta i did figure out the image eventually😊

haan ,Naku, didn't want to end Major ka persona immediately.

the father & daughter bonding was very cute & aaye naku just like dad

glad you liked the moments, its what I would have liked to have seen..

baji finally got married to his beloved it was long overdue

yes.. yehe tu hona he tha, bart made a comment about it.. earlier in her previous

You gave the name amba as per AS wish & than you dropped a bomb naku caring 2nd time

haaa hooo.. think INDU ka siggy.. that was the inspiration.. wanted to make you all happy one of each...

the scene at the hospital brought back LTL scene when naku was injured
😭 yeshhh it kept fleshing in my mind... ummh dil dooba ja raha the as i wrote,stopped and cried.. till i got better..

shravan kumar was born carbon copy of naku ,had to use my imagination again to visualize the babyhaaa hoo gorra se with green eyes and sharp features..ckikna lardka.. not not hat type..bas gentle ., sensitive ,caring male.. real man..

the nineteen months leap thw war scene i thought it must be shravan but it was Amba & why not girls too can carry frwd legacy

yesss fauji lardki!

shravan was physio like mom & the baji amba bonding was just like baji dutta

tried to keep some originality

dutta turning 48 with salt & pepper hair ,AS & naku by his side to see his promotion .AS always used her trump card her falling health from getting dutta married & having her frist grand kid.i 'm happy 😊she lived to see all the happiness

well naku, every one wants a happy ending.. with a peep into future

the end with dutta & naku sitting together & his desire to hear dutta reminded as it is ..

haan ye teri request the that she should call him dutta ... but naku.. ummh woh kiya bole ge Saab ke elawa.. haina?

the epilogue & you thanking your reader for been with you ,i 'm glad i got to be part of ff which had a longest run & exceptionally well written

ummhhh thanks you my dear Naku.. you re so kind.

i can't thank you enough for keeping us engrossed major began the part of my fridays ,fridays was exciting to visit forum just to read the ff

koi baat nehi.. is friday ko bhi i have come to do final annotations..

the beauiful story in every way started with majors injury & like naku stole his heart ,i lost mine to your beautiful story .major resistance & exceptance of naku ..eventual marriage

yesss.. its coming back,have to admit, iloved the initial chapters even to this day ,tired to capture Amba in the FB of the 1st chap..

the wonderful journey enjoyed every bit ,hammiee as i told before you are gfted

but i had you readers as my support naku.. koi writer readers ke bagher function nehi kar sakta..readers are the inspiration to continue..

the forum which felt lifeless coz of MR exit & story turning for worst ,find solace in the ff

yes that's what made me start it in may 2011..

with pride i can say this forum has best ff writers

I am proud to second them.. Rose,Daya, sunset...

hammiee you gave different perspective to the characters & story ..the research you did just added the value to superb story

thanks baaby,tahera ne bhi yehe kha mujhe i was sooo pleased, ht my hard work paid off..

you always made it a point to consider your fan request ,even when you were sick you always had us in mind ,i guess you deserved much more appreciation than you got but the ppl who followed ur ff it wasn't any other story its impact ended with end of story ,the number maybe less but for me it will remain in my memory like a good book ,my fav book painful rapture

naku thujhe pata hai its exactly a year today 4th jan when i was operated,.. i was in excruciating pain,but my readers .bart ,daya,warrie,priya ,you, and many others helped me to fight the pain and waited for me to UD.. I love you all..and all the new readers jedy.sona and her gang of friends love them..

i can't thank you enough some of the chapters i must have read over & over

thujhe pata hai ,i have never read it, the only time I COULD read as when I WAS PROOF READING..😆 MAYBEI'LL read it.. iam sure i'll come across loads of faults.

hammiee i understand as a creative person you felt to end ur ff on high & here i was waiting for completion of 3rd thread

phewww,, palze

hammiee plzzz i accept your wish to end the ff & i expect you to consider mine start a new ff soon ..plzzz forum won't be same for me

naku, I will do something..forum ko chalna hai..

hammiee other ff writer has done so on demand of fans...hammiee my acchee hammiee plzzz start a new ff ,i don't want my fridays to change

oyeee ..sun liya hai ,gosh naku tu aur teri emotional hera pheeri..

plzzz guys wht ever it takes black mail or any other weapon to get our major to start a new ff soon

oyeee.. bas kar.. logon ko insigate kerna.. giving youa narrow eyed look...

its painful hammiee to say good bye to the ff ..wish you could see the impact ...i 'll miss it
naku my hamaazing naku. so dear to me, my last annotations, but not finished with you, we go on... many thanks for your love and support.. keep smiling ,as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: afzal7861

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oyeee kaka balli chalab shock mein se nikal ah.. listen thank you for your continued support in reading this FF.. IAM VERY GRATEFUL LOVE THE BILLI

hammie its anded nono 😭 you give me a electric shock hammie 😲

im very sad today

i love your writing hammie plzz start a new ff plzzz dont say good bye

Oyee balli, i am not saying good bye, just saying will be back after a short break... thanks for all your comments kaka balli,keep in touch.. with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: noreen

excellent ud and the epilogue was a great end to this great ff 👏

noneee great to see,you, i wanted you to read the last bit ,and you did mate, thank you..

thnkyou!!!!!!

glad you enjoyed the complete last part..

But on a sad note, can't believe it has finally ended

well i had to give it a credible end..

happy to see the loving family of dutta and naku

and the last line of naku was great!!!

thanks for loving the last part mate, thanks for all your comments on previous UDs too,please keep in touch and i will pm you any new stuff that i come up with..as ever with much love yours , xx hammie

Originally posted by: uwith

hi hamlet its been a tough day ...following the media report ...it s quite hard for all us.i came to forum to read the UD...wonderful story & epilogue had happy ending ... why am i still disappointed ?.😭...i 'll miss your writing ...plsss start a new ff soon ...its a request from all of us

hi uvi,s always great to see you, listen baaby thanks for all your comments in the previous UDs too, listen dont disappear now, i'll pm you when i write something ,you read it please, ummh yes the news anout the lady is one that still continues to fester ,till something is sorted.. thanks for your comment...with much love ,as ever yours xx hammie.

Originally posted by: emilymine32

hi ham
hi my dear imli,

so going to miss my friday dose dekh is friday bhi hammie has come with annotations,😛

coming to ud

duttas daughter just like himyes major continues now.. and so does his profession.

naku pregnant for second time n gave birth to boywell wanted to do the complete family bit.

amba n shravan completed tashas family yes they sure do

at last baji ka number lag hi gaya ohhh yesh this had to be done,it was long overdue..

love the last part reminded of ltl muhje bhi ..and guess what LTL1 still goes on...long live the other brilliant FFwriters of this forum.

MEMORIES PLAY A VERY CONFUSING ROLE!

THEY MAKE U LAUGH WHEN U REMEMBER THE TIME U CRY TOGETHER

BUT MAKE U CRY WHEN U REMEMBER THE TIME U LAUGH TOGETHER

beautiful reflective words that keep the readers of this FF together.. thanks for your love and support , as ever yours xx hammie.

START A NEW FFwill do some time in the distant future..if not than some form of writing..