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Posted: 13 years ago
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yuvika, that would have been same as every one else does nakku was there to stay no matter how bad dutta got her persistance was the key to bring his resistance down, he had to see she wasn't going anywhere.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

yuvika, that would have been same as every one else does nakku was there to stay no matter how bad dutta got her persistance was the key to bring his resistance down, he had to see she wasn't going anywhere.

yes..her persistence sure was what brought him around..but her defiance was there too...like when she goes away from the room...that was as close to her saying,"main maikay chali jaun gi.."coz that room was her maika before their wedding..albeit that her family was not there.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yes, agree with you in that nakku ne biwi hi nahin maa ka bhi role nibhaya dutta ko swarne mein, gadha ma ki toh sunta kam tha , jahan hath dikhaya nahin AS dour hath ke kadhi ho jaati thein.😆😆😆. nakku ek dhamki deti thi chod ke jane ko bati jalni shuru ho jaati thi. that's another reason we adored the couple.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meriyaar

just utter perfection! Meriyaaar! Thank you 😳

That was beautiful Daya, I'm glad you found it and posted it :)
am glad you see its been liked...seriously i opened it and was like when on earth did i even write this but anyway ...great to know it was liked...thank you again...and you're FIRST 😉
thanks for the pm
ly
tc
xoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tahera57

beautifully written your hidden gem, i loved it , from the day he realised he loved her, he couldn't get enough of being with her he wanted her in front of his eyes 24/7, so her leaving PN for ever woulud have broke him for sure. i am so glad you competed nad posted it . thank u.


Hi tahera ! thank you for the lovely compliment 😳
yes lol i dunno what I intended to do before...but anyway glad it has positive reviews 😆
yes in separation you feel the pain of that person not being around...so kind of messed with that a bit...again thanks! see you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

beautiful OS...reali enjoyed it as it focussed mre on dutta's feelings n thoughts...nakus feelings in the show wer always known 2 the viewer, they wer like an open book bt it was dutta's thrts n feelings tht left us curious...i remember this track esp da scene wer she confronts him abt suresh n leaves the room u cud tel he wntd 2 stop her bt didnt n the part i reali liked was wer he watches her walk away n da min she turns around he quickly turns his face the other way so she doesnt knw tht he was lukin at her. lol... it shws his concern...

reali liked hw this OS showed dutta's journey in realising tht be it fair or koyal she is his naku n he loves her...loved the end hug... n wt i found cute was hw he decided 2 wake up early so he cud c a glimpse of naku...so cute


Thank you Yuvi! yes I did try to make sure of that...for even I have felt that his feelings are always unknown...omg yuvi that was the highlight of that scene for me...when she's walking away and he's watching her and the second she turns he does too to make it look like he was unaffected by it...longing for her but too stubborn to admit it ! Glad you liked it yuvi...and thanks for the great comment :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Varsh: Hey! haven't seen or chatted with you in a while ...I hope you are well ...thank you for reading and commenting...glad you liked it hun...lots of love ...see you ...

@rani: hello hello ...thank you for the exciting emos...glad to see you loved it...

@aamirkhanfan: thank you for reading and commenting...always love seeing them...

Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: brvr

Thanx daya for the pm n the beautiful OS.

Im speechless, what can i say, ur OS has again proved that the eternal luv story of the two leave me spellbound nd never fails to touch the core of my heart. The more i read the more i crave, such is the beauty of their story. It has paled the legendary luv stories of Romeo n juliet, heer ranjha n the likes of them for me. Laagi tujhse lagan dutta-nakku!!! ❤️
[oye, apni Ff mat bhooliyo, update kardo please, im aware ur busy with many things + orders frm special friends like u know who?😆😉]



Bharathi ! 🤗
thank you for reading and liking 😳
yes definitely this pair of them has left such a mark and even i would add them to that legendary list at the top ...thank you again for the wonderful comment...and LOL i have not forgotten it promise...just stuck and then got so busy...have not even had a chance to think about it...haa i do take orders...i guess urz is next in line lol UD ke liye ...right 😉



@ Ranju: Thannk you ! glad you liked it ...

@Nakusha: Thanks for reading and commenting, always appreciated greatly...and yes i will defo get around to writing NTL UD some time soon I hope...

@priyaraghav: Hey priya! Thank you for the wonderful comments...love reading them...glad to see you liked it...

@Sona: hey hey hun! thank you for reading and commenting...always nice to see its being liked...glad you enjoyed it...

Edited by -daya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS Removed by Writer.

Edited by .iridescence. - 6 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpita87

Most beautiful daya..i couldn't help but go back to those days..sigh...

on another note...nothing brings a man around better than the threat of of his wife going away to her Maika...LOL...

Main maikay chali jaungi tum dekhte rahiyo!



Hey shilpi! its great to see you here...its been a long time 😳
haa true! the threat of her never coming back got to him...
her saying that would've been so cute to see...esp his stubborn reactions with his hard shell like self 😆

thanks shilpi for reading and commenting...always is greatly appreciated 😃

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