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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

hammie


oyeee my bart! is here!...nah bart , tu ek he kafi hai..by the way bart as from simpsons ...so olla olla olla! chico! chico! come and get me! 😆😆 haaa ha..can feel the heat is on...don't you dare
BPL aacha! that's no to ask for what you want dolly birdie! ...ja ja bart! hawa kha! militant aurat!

ab itni bheed kaafi hai ya aur bhi bulao BPL ke liye😡
@warda & tamanna hammie ko pyar se zyaada dhamki kaam karti hai😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
blame it on urself for the militant part baby hammie tch tch!😃 bachke kaha jayegi ab itni log tere peeche pade hai😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Warda.

me first again 😎

and this time will be on time 😳 yesss baaby tu hai first! good good .so nothing more to say except , aim for being first! on time !
Edited :
Exceptionally brilliant update hammie... tasha moments together were the highlight of the update...for this interaction has taken their relation to another level...the turmoil which dutta
was facing'was very well sorted by naku...i knew it it would be her...it has to be HER yes true soul mate ..he lays bare his inner self before her ..especially his frailities.. ...the
only person which can have such influence over him which can reverse him from his decision...
what i loved the most is his calmness throughout he expects her to heal him,show him the way out..its like a counselling session, talking and listening ...when you mentioned how he followed her like a lamb...yes he was at peace... this decision would not have been easy for him... for a person like him whose work is his passion...his baba's inheritence which is running in his blood... what pain he would have felt even saying those words yet alone he would have accomplished it...i can picture if it was true how bitter he would have become...with everyone and not even sparing himself...if this ever happened he would end up feeling inadequate and useless , for he grew up in an army family , immediate and wider..

I feel very much connected with this dutta the way it has been progressed in each update...for this dutta is not the ruthless don of LTL whome ive seen so many times...this dutta is not him but still i could tell what is going on with him ...or how he would have reacted in these terms...very well done for that 👏thank you warrie..for seeing him wrestle inside emotionally as did the Dutta In LTL1

AS made the perfect choice to handle his spoilt brat in nakus hand...for she knows how to handle him even in worst situations it is calming for a mother some where ,that the woman that her son has chosen as his life partnercan give him solace ,and that he responds to her counselling ... the whole part is penned so beautifully...From the moment she called her it was a journey of more understanding ...which both have crossed yet again successfully... i loved it how he was reminded of HIS GUILT ...which brought him back...yes to me he was guilty as well...for the person who is breathing his live day and night ...it was unjust on her part...that she was ignorant of one of the most important or one of the key descions of his life ...yes AS is a clued on woman, she supports her future DIL ,becos she wants to always have her son beside her...also she is ick to point out where he is wrong

Briantally explained the convo b/w dutta an naku... i loved it to bits...and the most his
calmness ...for somewhere he too was fighting inside after taking such a big step... the way he was convinced felt that he too urged to be so... i loved naku's example of disabled people... he too was fighting the same way...well done naku ... for reverting his descion for i could nt have think what would have happened if he was not at the place where he was meant to be...its true to life that one comprehends some niggley issues when their own past experience is set before them...

The mention of naku not feeling that this news was shared with AS first ...proves
her charcter once again... for why she desrved to be standing next to him... you have touched every minute detail in this chapter...its flawless 👏 thanks baaby,its a common place issue which a loved one may feel..being given less importance ..can bring in comparsion..but haan naku ko pata hai ke life mein ,kuch rishtoon mein you cant draw comparsions..they have to be assigned a designated place in one's life..no more ,no less..

OMG one more proposal on fone ...ab tu shadi karna banta hai..😉.the most
loved topic about them... but i loved this proposal more than the previous one
for that incident brought them more close emotionally... haan baaby ,every time he learns more about her , their relationship, he confirms his passion to her in the magic words ..will you marry me..?

feels so good to see him back teaching... and the topic discussed too was very intersting...
yess ,its the kind of issues soldiers deal with in action ,besides firing a gun...decision making,problem solving.. to be contiuned in the next UD..
the precap seems they are too close to wind up this term...hmm both dutta adn naku too
close to target almosttogether...will be waiting eagerly whhere it leads them TOGETHER :)😆 oye target ..you mean shaadi haaa haa

Thank you for such a power packed update...waiting for next one... thank you warrie,baaby.. loved your comment very detailed ,with interesting points. listen keep reading.. feel so encouraged..
Lots of love...see you in pms 🤗
oye tu bhi ah gaya hai munno !chall ah ja pick you up and give you kisseys on your chubby droppy cheeks..hummh looks like your mummy didn't feed you again...she's too busy reading my UD's 😆....aww holding you on my lappie and smelling the top of your head...thanks warrie xxmuch love hammie


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Posted: 13 years ago

and me second ! 😳

hi billy choo! daffy duck..pata hai knew it ke use warrie ke bad tu ah jayea ge ..birds of a feather, flock together! oyeee baji high five ! ho jayea ek ghunoot! loved tera siggy..waise would have liked you in the siggy baji woh naku tu kuch dunkh ke jazeez pee bhi nehi deti...😆😆...oye naku! ja kitchen mein aur mera aur baji ke leya chai buna ,hamri meeting hai mera kamre mein! chal chop chop!

ME BACK ! 😳

Hammie! peek-a-boo...I see you LOL see what taking care of your roly poly ...tootsie does to me ...haa chal take her now while I get to this beautiful UD of Dutta and Naku... hain tum dono ne mujhe babby minder samjhe hai apne baache mera bas chor jati ho? by the way where's my gorgeous roly.yaar haven't seen her pappay! wanna see her now!

Wow! is my first reactiong for the entire UD ...you have penned it so beautifully hammie...I was like woah! me will get into details shortly but first me have to say what an UD almost entirely the two characters were brought together to be one...in showing how well these two fit together as a pair regardless of the differences because their compatability is at levels that are much higher yess gadhne ne acche choice ke hai...."problems" are part of life ...and a problem is only a problem if you consider it to be...it can simply be called a challenge instead right? just a bump on the road and need to figure out how to swerve ...but see highlight for me in this UD was how well it just came together, how easily they were she was able to shed some light on his life on his decision...chal let me get to specifics ...me am chatting away like alwayz now...thanks pappy , I couldn't help but think ke it was more your style of content..the speaking and listening ..so yes you take a bow as well!

So we all know a mother knows best...dil ki connection hai with thier kids and of course AS knows that this decision although may bring forth one thing she wants, that is having her son by her side, but she knows that for both of them this life path is important and not something to just leave like nothing matters for everything does with Dutta especially but in this case its also a family thing
its called been it done it! and she is woman who keeps her family together ,a trait she may have spotted in Naku as well...and so she of course calls Mr.Fix It! my sweet cutie pie...dimple dude 👏 loved the phrases to the rescue...of course he would do what needs to be done to make it all right again...and he calls up our Naku dearest updating her on the situation...and here we go...drama ke number 1 family is this one I tell you ...haa so Naku creates the drama she needs to to bring him back...of course the mans guilt for not telling Naku was reaching somewhere when she called so in hopes of redeeming himself a little he decides to head back ...to see his damsel in distress...now i love the little details of how wen going back to work he was driving steady speed...and them going back to Dera hospital he was going full speed...now we don't need to ask why ..sab ko pata hai... this is thing about this family ..all the links seem to fit..none missing! so one see's results!..dutta ko order mila hai tu wapis tu woh jayega...

So here we are at my favorite part...the whole conversation between the two...and even I noticed not once did she mention he told AS first but it was that he did not tell her...which was completely reasonable...and plus she knows what place his mother holds in his heart and am sure that it makes her proud of him more than anything :) she is a clued on, astute girl, plus she has lived in the household ,more so with the mother than the son I would say ,though...but has gathered the importance of his mother in his life!

So we start with what makes perfect sense a little anger a little worry a little concern and all coming out in words and in a hurry for she knew that something was up but he had denied it...and if it was reverse situation I am sure he would've roared for her doing something like that...so i think her outburst was well deserved ...even if he had good reason to keep it from her...but gosh she went as far as calling off everything I think,that was quite far sighted of her ,it's called diffusing a potentially explosive situation,so stopped him in his tracks !...i know she said in the spur of the moment and did not mean it but still...relationships struggle more when both are not on the same page for one can't understand the other's place if parts of the story in between have not been read...so in a sense I felt he should've told her regardless for she is someone that should be aware of such decisions in his life esp when it comes down to leaving behind his first wife haha but anyway moving along...so he tells her very lovingly his reasons and i loved her response "Saab ap kyon nehi samjhete ho ke meri zindaga ke har fasala mein ,main ap ko rakhte hoon , maagar aap aisa nehi soochte ho, kyon Saab?why don't you include me in every aspect of your life? batao?" I was like yes please answer that major! but we know thats where the difference lies between them..ek hai who will not say much about work and the other is as always all ready to share...so me was quite enjoying the way she was being with him ...for it really sent the point across..and of course he gets all surprised with her way of speaking to him yet he goes to her and buried his lips in her neck ...and gives her one good reply...he loves her, can't be with out and will die without her aww ...now i would melt if that came from him ufff ... haaa melt ho gayea Daya..that's why he is the way he is ..bolshi! loved what you wrote pappy ..so correct!

so now both go over to a bench and carry on..and me am just reading in awe ...hmm the way she is truly there for him in every aspect...physically emotionally ...that support and comfort she gives him while she tackles the reason for his sudden decision to leave...and they way he had basically naturally let himself confide in her...and both talking it out ...it was penned beautifully hammie...i really was glued to it...and that part about 'normal' i personally think the same, along the philosophical lines, what one names normal is only because its common in a group its percerption and acceptance...and 'normal' things are ever changing...but i absolutely loved when she said " haan Saab but mera liya you are an ordinary person faced with an extra ordinary job, and our normalcy lies in the sameness of our purpose..to serve our nation" i was like bravo ...well said...applause ! great work hammie! and to end on another line i liked ..."he knew that all though he will stumble in life he will never far for she will be there to hold him" hammie that sums up everything for you ...their entire relationship ...they will be there with each other for the other...together forever :) well ,your review is so beautifully written,that Iam sure you will be applauded today as well my dearest baji..so this calls for another shot! chal bana! mera mau kya dekh raha hai tu...😆naku ko choor woh kitchen mein poha buna rehi hai 😆 clicking glasses!

and now on a lighter note KYA major has plans to sleep i her flat :O his naughty intentions are so hidden in their LOL and another little detail that got to me...that when it comes time for send off ..and separation yet again ...the added fact of this time he needed to go and she wanted him to for there was another part of him he needed to reconnect with...ahhh i enjoyed the little banter between Naku and Baaji ...baaji will be baaaji!!!! and then the little talk between mother and son...hmmm so what is this Dutta is thinking maybe they should marry now? no refusing now ...improvement hai... yess he thought he might as well test the waters itne good mood mein hai Naku! ...hain? he thinking about lagan oh come on baaby he is an elusive man...don't go by what he says...or hints...

oh bed time so our other two leads characters aagaya ...chunni aur kurta haaa...omg he is in his own dream world remembering her whole being...beauty to emotional presence...and what it does to him ...and of course me too laughed reading his YES i lust for you comment ohhoo ...yesh i would love to see her reaction to that...aww the phone call ...i just love their phone calls ...sach much match made in heaven whether they fight or show some love over the phone...always amusing...but this time he is so flattered by her...he says I love you and will you marry me and I went hain...lion ko kya hua ...no roaring today i see...and of course she is overwhelmed and say yes as she too sees that very dream of being married to him ...and ended the call on a good note...lovely!😆 told you mood ke baat hai.. but it's true he does lust for her...but respects her to no end...so he pats himself at his right choice ...and hence in those moments he tends to propose to her yet again ..and again...

And Major back to his work ...what he loves and does best...and funny he should be teaching about motivating and team building, communication, problem solving, creative thinking etc...after he just learned what all that can be like in personal life too :P hmmm as per pre-cap seems like his teaching days are coming to an end as the semester ends too...looking forward to the next UD yes daya wanted to show that it's not only about aiming a rifle for a soldier its much much more that leads to being a trained soldier...more of this in the next UD...so hence not finished yet..

Thank you my dearest Hammie for such a fabulous UD...I loved it to its very core...claps and hugging you ! yes I hugged you LOL sab ke saamne now stop pushing me off you as if ur allergic to hugs psht kaya hai thujhe baji!peeche haat..salla nautanki baaz!...haaa cheyeahh...ye le ek gift hai tere liye ...this is majors pigment you mean figment paji! of imagination of his curvy stunning beauty...and how apt these words for the end of ur chapter...*wink* haaa lots of love hammie...see you pms mein :D **** And see this song...i like it...but listen to the words ...hmmm Dutta to Naku http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Txf_C_WhSXk heyyy love the song phil collins and mind blowing siggy super duper
look billy choo!thanks for such a lovely comment ... yes of course I deserve every bit of it..the praise..😉...and baji high five to you...xxxhammie.chal ek aur ghoont before that daft naku turns up!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391


AS
DECIDE THAT NAKKU SHOULD KNOW ABOUT THIS AND ASK
BAAJI TO LET HER KNOW SMART AS

BAAJI TOLD NAKKU about dutta decision nakku already knew something wrong and suscpicion got cleared and baaji ask her to talk to dutta DUTTA GUILTY FOR SAYING THIS NEWS TO HER MOTHER BECAUSE SHE IS A PATIENT BUT YES AS KO NAHIN KAHEGA TO KISE KAHEGA mother son bond and guilty to not tell naku nakku call dutta and doing cry drama to make him back and dutta teasing her nakuu saw dutta and hug him

nakku because dutta didn't told about her decision and told him to broke the engageme dutta and asking him reasons about dutta not answering rightly finally nakku calmed and make him sit and calmly talk

so finally dutta let out that he wants to with AS and take care of her and the way nakku make him understand that they are comitted to nation and his duty i was just fially dutta ki tubelight jal gayi

and after little romancedutta back to ready to go to duty

nakku informed baaji about mission completing and baaji informed that AS ask him to her to make dutta understand nakku as boding love the conversation of baaji nakku about dutta it

dutta reached flat and thinking when nakku will be with him
and dreaming about marriage as called himand as again making him understand naku imortance and TELLING HIM THAT SHE IS THE One who told her about all this through baaji dutta happy that nakku didn't compare her to AS it dutta romancing with chunni and dutta calling nakku and lovely dovely and proposing her on phone


dutta ready in uniform and no more problem weghted on him and he thankfull nakku for this


dutta classes start and he is teaching them about communication decision making and typed of problems me going to Mathura tomorrow so done my commentED on saturday
UPDATE



sooo we meet again...my lovely tammy girl..as usual mindblowing comment how great you are ,your imagination..both in pictures and in words..kya baat hai ap ki tamanna madam...baat sun lardki saw your fabulous siggy pictures on p.44 all lovely shots of dutta and naku...love the taj mahal wali ... woh writing ..message on the siggys are very apt and look great on the shots ...keep up the good work ..tammy.. spreading so much happiness on the thread.. love you loads ... much love xx hammie
ps.how was the trip?saw your message when you came back











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Posted: 13 years ago

hi my name is rani i joine the forum month back but couldn't continue but now me can continue this and i love this ff dutta soldier nakku pt awsem update love it finally nakku make him agree to continue his duty👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi hammie , sorry i missed the last one but you know i always enjoy your update love it and i loved this one too it was heartwarming update the way AS call baji said call naku that dutta didn't inform her .she know that naku can handle him we always see mother and son bonding but today we saw mother-in-law and daughter-in-law bonding they didn't talk to each other but know each other will dutta is so lucky. they way naku call dutta and hug him was so beautiful and got angry call of engagement dutta was calmed but didn't say anything naku calmed herself and make dutta understand they have there up and down that don't mean leave his job his passions to serve his country .today naku was like his truly wife dutta understand and proud of his naku .naku call baji inform mission completed baji tease her was nice .dutta back to his work dutta think about her and romance with her chiunni and proposed her will you marry me was beautiful i was in dearmland so everything is fine .thanks for awesome update take care and enjoy your weekend
hellooo..pushpa great to see you on this thread again,koi nehi, if you miss tu, read the missed one at your lesiure ... so you did catch up with his one..it was important to iron out certain factors between them ,so tried to use all the loved ones around them to approach and solve the problem..so you enjoyed their little chit chat on the phone...well have to make sure that readers are happy..😆 listen thanks a lot for reading and commenting on the UD...xx hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hammiee
hi naku... tune kiya soocha i forget you..jabhi tera annotate nehi nope! ..ho nahin sakta dutta cannot forget his naku😉
was waiting for the ud .kal se pukar rahein thi chalo at last u heard me😊 is dafa ka UD i dont know when...mafa kar de..mujhe ..kuch personal kam hain.. will do jab bhi possible hoga..
nakus effect extra drama .loved the ud aai saheb did the best thing getting baji to inform naku abt his strange decision to leave army .naku made our major take the reverse gear of not only of his car but same for his life .the way they understand & share the bond is really eternal 😊 thanks for liking it..
dutta back to basic where he actually belong .dutta proposing marriage to naku .as expected she said yes .is baar hammiee ur self is giving ur dutta to naku in plater😆think abt it nahin toh pichle april fool news ke tarah reaction na ho .we have to be ready for tsunami alert.. shaadi ,lagan.its l like the inevitable...hummmh
on a serious note loved the ud very philosophical u brought the point without indulging in cause & effect .
as always u r amazinggg hammiee .enjoy weekend tc 😊 thanks naku for reading and commenting XX much love hammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hammie , great ud nakku nay major ko hila kay rakh dia, ekdum i lne pe aa gaya bechara! ab yeh hall ho gaya hai uska! kiya ho ga uska doesn't know wheather he's coming or going. jab ussay khud ehsas tha ke usnay nakku ko na bata kar theek nahin kiya toh bataya kyon nahin. shayad usko khaal ayay hoga ke he might look weak in her eyes? but nakku being more perceptive thought right and told him so just a momentarly doubt in his mind because of certain incident. it was good for her to give him reassurance and send backpacking. love the little romance added with her strictness. love the devar bhabi convo. dhinchak,dhinchak baji har fun maula. sabkay liay hazir 24/7.
proposal bhi phone par kar diya chalo thi toh woh hamesha se dutta ki, i suppose baji jaisa romantic nahin hai. army major hai very practical.
tahera...
oye phele tu ye bata ke chilman mei kyon chup gayea hai tu aur woh bhi mera se????...
guna sun tera liya ..tera liya ...check out his tartan kameez on jeans...ek dum hammie ka ehstyle... saj dahj ke tashan mein rahna... baki pm pe gadi sadhi gali ve aya karoon..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C87WJjQKLNI
baki thanks for reading and commenting kurriye...oye major ko koi nehi hala sakta...😆 ek ke sawiya.. haaa ab tu guess ker woh kaun? bombhassst...😆 xxxmuch love hammie

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona89

Hi hamlet
oh mera sona, good to see you ...yes dutta ka mission acomplished...aur proposal tu woh jab cha bol deta hai..halwa khien ka! thanks for reading and commenting lots of love xx hammie

Naku lived upto aaisaheb expection ...mission dutta accomplished😊...dutta proposed to naku😳,...waiting for the next ud

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