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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Rose,
I understand n respect your decision. Also me ready to wait as n when u decide to return with something new, thanx for the message😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

IMPORTANT NOTE

HELLO and a big big THANKS to all u wonderful ppl who have appreciated this ff so much and wish me to write something more. to tell u honestly at the moment m emotionally n mentally exhausted after finishing this story, i dont know about others but writing doesnt come naturally to me , i have to put in a lot of effort in doing so and right now m tired , plus i have some pending office work too so i need atleast a months time to come up with something new , really sorry to diappoint u all but i have a suggestion , why dont u pm other writers who are much much more talented than me like shilpita , jagruti, daya , raj etc to continue with their ffs . i am sure they will listen to u and once again thanks a lot for showering so much love on me n this ff . will reply to ur feedback soon .
Love u all
ROSE

Hi rose
you are busy ...we can understand ...will trouble u after a month 😆missing u r ff .come back soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

IMPORTANT NOTE

HELLO and a big big THANKS to all u wonderful ppl who have appreciated this ff so much and wish me to write something more. to tell u honestly at the moment m emotionally n mentally exhausted after finishing this story, i dont know about others but writing doesnt come naturally to me , i have to put in a lot of effort in doing so and right now m tired , plus i have some pending office work too so i need atleast a months time to come up with something new , really sorry to diappoint u all but i have a suggestion , why dont u pm other writers who are much much more talented than me like shilpita , jagruti, daya , raj etc to continue with their ffs . i am sure they will listen to u and once again thanks a lot for showering so much love on me n this ff . will reply to ur feedback soon .
Love u all
ROSE



Rose! well one things for sure...it is definitely mentally exhausting to write...does not come naturally to me either ...sometimes i sit there and think why did I even start writing 😆 especially ending them...tying up all loose ends...gosh defo brain worker...

Anyway I wanted to say thank you for your compliment ^ above it's sooo sweet but I hardly think I'm more talented than you for ur writing may not come easily to you but when read it like just flows so nicely...simply...so fluid...so I sure do hope to read something new by you ...whenever that will be...

good luck with finishing that pending work...and definitely take the break u need...
take care...phir milenge chalte chalte ...lots of love ❤️
Edited by daya0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey rose

thanks for such a beautiful FF dear

complete your office work and then relax

we will always be here for your next FF dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ brvr ...hi dear ..i know it came as a shock for all of u that this was the last part but what to do i thought this was the right time to end (though hate the word end ) this story as dutta had realized what he needed to that she meant the most to him so finally he did accept that usey bhi khuch luv jaisa ho hi gaya ..and then they had twins too...thanks a lot for ur wishes on this silver jubilee part...it wouldnt have been possible had u all not shown so much interest in this ff ..
@ tahera ...thanks so much for appreciating this story and esply the last part ...agree with u he did accept that she meant the world to him and he could survive without his child but not without her ..i will also miss reading ur sweet comments dear
@ tammana ...yup dutta finally confessed his feelings to her though they lost their child in the process but in the end they had twins nah ..so happy with the ending ???? thanks for the tasha's family pic
@ daya ...hey really i am speechless after reading ur comments ...i didnt know that u liked this story so much ...thanks a lot dear ..thats what i can say ...it was a very painful and emotional journey of tasha where though nakku does fall in love with him easily but he finds it difficult to reciprocate her feelings ..they came together for a child but stayed together for their love which was beyond everything ...thanks once again for taking out time to read and share ur views on this ff
@ yuvika ..aww this was one of ur fav ff ???? happy to know that ..yeah the child came in the world just to bring them closer and make them realize their love for each other ...lol ..i know dutta loves modaks but he is fond of ladoos as well ..if u remember when they visited shirdi he was having ladoos along with pregnant nakku ..lol..but good observation ..i like it
@ priya ...thanks for aapreciating the conncetion between miscarriage and tasha cmg together ...no dear i havent the book ..aww u like twins ..hope ur besty fulfills ur wish
@ sonu ... thats really sweet of u to say that u havent seen such a beautiful ending anywhere ..and ur right all things be good or bad come to an end ...thanks so much for enjoying this love story
@ ramya ..thanks so much
@ sinak ...glad u liked the last part
@ priya ...thanks a lot for finding the last part mesmarizing
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Posted: 13 years ago

m aaa gayiii...but Darna mana h

😆

Dabi dabi sanso m suna tha rosy ne

Bole bina mera naam aya

"NAUTANKI"

Palke jhukior uthne lagi to

haule se unka salam aya

This time NO WALL'..NO BURKHA'..NO HELMET

Becoz

I was under crime with full permission

*OUCH*

(see rosy , what u have done'..oye late comment ki permission ditta naa tussiii'.now I have no topic to start my nautanki'..gosh'.ajeeb lag raha h)

Wooo itne saare weapons ek saath lolz

Jokes apart''''sorryyy sorrry sorrryyy

*holding ears*

Really this time to I have crossed all the limits mmm I promised for 28 feb and its 16 march''..ishhh 18 days late

What u searching for rosy


Chalo lets come to the update

EPISODE 24:

So AS is in ICU 'awww dutta hairaan pareshan (its all ur fault mr. karela)

But loves to see that even in the sad and depressed environment he is taking care of his wife'.nakku to convinced him and said to believe on god. Chalo at least a good thing happens that atlast he trying to understabnd what he was doing by separating a mother from his child'.hmmm as he braked from inside after having the same pain'. Of his separation from his Ayi

Loved the scene when nakku slept on his shouldera and he placed her hand on his lap'..after that again a sixer from ur side rosy

The mother son conversation was so touchy, AS want her son to analyze and feel the love which he have for nakku and then the saas bahu conversation was also too good

Thank god AS is fine now and again make her son realize the importance of nakku in his life , he needs her and couldn't stay away from her in future '..AS was ri8 that whenever his choice was wrong that time he always believes on it aankh moond ke and now when his choice is just perfect , he wanna separate it from himself'don't want it to be part of his life'..chalo kam se kam gadhe k deemag ki ghanti baji and he assures her aayi that he'll think abt whatever AS had said.

Zindagi ki raah mein aage chalte jana har pal,mur ke na dekh beete hue pal
jo nahin tha tera tujhe nahin mila,jo milgaya uske sath guzaar apna har pal

EPISODE 25:

Dutta back to patil niwas'

Aaj bhi ek sawal hai is dil mein,
Pyar ka gham beshumar hai is dil mein,
Kuchh keh nahi pata ye dil magar,
Kisi ke liye bahut pyar hai is dil mein.


Happy to see that dutta thinking of the importance of nakku in his life , she is the only girl who always spread smile on his face , she is the one who never ever hurts him, she is the one who understands him, changed him and make his life really special.

And now he himself want to get alone in his life again.

Loved the way how all the special and memorable moments he spent with nakku comes in front of his eyes as recap to make him realize what he gonna do with nakku , an unborn baby, with himself and somewhere with his family too'..

Awww'he takes that ring with such a care'and he smiled that means munda line pe aa gaya naaa'..wow''h????????? oh god now gadha back to his gandhagiri lolz'..how to confess his love feeling infront of nakku (ye nahi sudjrega )

Oh my gosh '.rosy now whats this''nakku screams'phir locha kar diya o

Ooo nakku fell down frm stairs, I never thinks that this would happen '..now dutta have to chose whom he wish to be saved nakku or the child'.dhooo'.

Omg duttta lost his child

Rosy u really make me to cry'what a emotional and touchy scene'."THE REACTION OF DUTTA ON HEARING THE BAD NEWS"''.awww the baby was a boy

Chalo happy to see whatever happens '..dutta accept it'learns from it'.confess his love

and welcomes his new life with nakku with open arms❤️

Jab jab dard ka baadal chaya
Jab ghum ka saya lehraya
Jab aansoo palkon tak aya
Jab yeh tanha dil ghabraya
Humne dil ko yeh samjhaya
Dil aakhir tu kyun rota hai
Duniya mein yunhi hota hai
Yeh jo gehre sannaate hain
Waqt ne sabko hi baante hain
Thoda ghum hai sabka qissa
Thodi dhoop hai sabka hissa
Aankh teri bekaar hi namm hai
Har pal ek naya mausam hai
Kyun tu aise pal khota hai
Dil aakhir tu kyun rota hai

awesome update it was rosy...a lovely story that ends with a happy note dutta and naku with their twin childs, AS may be now not with them but as u said wherever she is ...musy be happy to see her son with his love.❤️

rosy Before a writer begin to write a sentence, he/she imagine the whole scene and then paint it with his/her own words.writer Imagines himself as that character and feels what the character feels,Smells what the character smells, and hear with that character's ears.before he/she begin to write...have to see and feel what he/she want the reader to see and feel.and must say its the harder nope hardest work...me just wanna say *with standing ovation* that really u are an awesome writer.



thanku so much for writing such a wonderful FF for ur readers


Originally posted by stranger2rose

IMPORTANT NOTE
HELLO and a big big THANKS to all u wonderful ppl who have appreciated this ff so much and wish me to write something more. to tell u honestly at the moment m emotionally n mentally exhausted after finishing this story, i dont know about others but writing doesnt come naturally to me , i have to put in a lot of effort in doing so and right now m tired , plus i have some pending office work too so i need atleast a months time to come up with something new , really sorry to diappoint u all but i have a suggestion , why dont u pm other writers who are much much more talented than me like shilpita , jagruti, daya , raj etc to continue with their ffs . i am sure they will listen to u and once again thanks a lot for showering so much love on me n this ff . will reply to ur feedback soon .
Love u all
ROSE

rosy hmmm i can understand ...as i already said writing really needs lots of effort ( u know naa me too have tried of writing something but my haal was behaal...now i have promised to myself "ab nahi likhungi lol''
complete ur pending work 😊
till then me too will be free from 😈 (exams)...after that 😈 😈 😈 😈 😆 😆 😉
k

Edited by MishalsFAN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi rose
missing you & it isn't same without ur promo & ff .plzzz start a new ff soon .lots of luv tc 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ sona ...i m so happy to know that u enjoyed this story so much ...thanks a lot dear ...will start with a new story hopefully soon
@ usha ...thank u so much for appreciating the ff and i am glad u could imagine mishal and mahi in the story ..its a big thing for me
@ aanchu ...ohh me too miss this ff ..
@ mirage ..feels grt to know that u loved reading this story ..thanks dear
@ nakusha ..hi dear ..i know the forum is less active these days ..will come up with a new story soon ..hope u enjoy that one too ..and thanks so much for ur kind words of appreciation
@ blue pal ...ohh dont be upset will start a new story soon and thanks for finding the last part awesome
@ jagruti ..u know i greatly admire ur writing skills and when u say that u are a fan of my writing then i am left spellbound and speechless...i am no where close to what u write but still it feels awesome when u appreciate my updts also that ur not an ardent follower of ffs still u took out time to read mine ..i am touched and thankful to u ..well will be starting a new story soon hope u read it and share ur views
@ ranjana ..thanks for taking out time to read all the parts and i am glad u liked the ff so much ..ur sweet comments mean a lot to me dear
Edited by stranger2rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi rose

thanxs for consideration
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MishalsFAN

m aaa gayiii...but Darna mana h..lol..even though i think ppl are hardly scared of me

😆

Dabi dabi sanso m suna tha rosy ne

Bole bina mera naam aya

"NAUTANKI"..exactly ..dramebaaz

Palke jhukior uthne lagi to

haule se unka salam aya...wah ji salaam namaste

This time NO WALL'..NO BURKHA'..NO HELMET

Becoz

I was under crime with full permission

*OUCH*

(see rosy , what u have done'..oye late comment ki permission ditta naa tussiii'.now I have no topic to start my nautanki'..gosh'.ajeeb lag raha h)...lol..now ur blaming me coz u couldnt display ur nautanki skills ...lol..

Wooo itne saare weapons ek saath lolz

Jokes apart''''sorryyy sorrry sorrryyy

*holding ears*

Really this time to I have crossed all the limits mmm I promised for 28 feb and its 16 march''..ishhh 18 days late..oye hoye u remembered ?? good good

What u searching for rosy...u know exactly what i was searching for ...love u and him for this siggie ...no need to say sorry dear


Chalo lets come to the update

EPISODE 24:

So AS is in ICU 'awww dutta hairaan pareshan (its all ur fault mr. karela)

But loves to see that even in the sad and depressed environment he is taking care of his wife'..he is a responsible man ...nakku to convinced him and said to believe on god. Chalo at least a good thing happens that atlast he trying to understabnd what he was doing by separating a mother from his child'.hmmm as he braked from inside after having the same pain'. Of his separation from his Ayi

Loved the scene when nakku slept on his shouldera and he placed her hand on his lap'.i know u must have enjoyed reading this scene ..thanks a lot ...after that again a sixer from ur side rosy

The mother son conversation was so touchy, ..i know hope u didnt cry ..AS want her son to analyze and feel the love which he have for nakku and then the saas bahu conversation was also too good

Thank god AS is fine now and again make her son realize the importance of nakku in his life , he needs her and couldn't stay away from her in future '..AS was ri8 that whenever his choice was wrong that time he always believes on it aankh moond ke and now when his choice is just perfect , he wanna separate it from himself'don't want it to be part of his life'..chalo kam se kam gadhe k deemag ki ghanti baji and he assures her aayi that he'll think abt whatever AS had said.

Zindagi ki raah mein aage chalte jana har pal,mur ke na dekh beete hue pal
jo nahin tha tera tujhe nahin mila,jo milgaya uske sath guzaar apna har pal
...kya baat hai ..lovely lines

EPISODE 25:

Dutta back to patil niwas'

Aaj bhi ek sawal hai is dil mein,
Pyar ka gham beshumar hai is dil mein,
Kuchh keh nahi pata ye dil magar,
Kisi ke liye bahut pyar hai is dil mein....yeh dutta ki dil ki baat hai ya apki ..lol


Happy to see that dutta thinking of the importance of nakku in his life..finally gadha has started using his brains .. , she is the only girl who always spread smile on his face , she is the one who never ever hurts him, she is the one who understands him, changed him and make his life really special.

And now he himself want to get alone in his life again.

Loved the way how all the special and memorable moments he spent with nakku comes in front of his eyes as recap to make him realize what he gonna do with nakku , an unborn baby, with himself and somewhere with his family too'..

Awww'he takes that ring with such a care'and he smiled that means munda line pe aa gaya naaa'..wow''h????????? oh god now gadha back to his gandhagiri lolz'..how to confess his love feeling infront of nakku (ye nahi sudjrega )..u know nah he is a shy guy

Oh my gosh '.rosy now whats this''nakku screams'phir locha kar diya o

Ooo nakku fell down frm stairs, I never thinks that this would happen '..now dutta have to chose whom he wish to be saved nakku or the child'.dhooo'.

Omg duttta lost his child...awww dont cry dear ..all will be well

Rosy u really make me to cry'what a emotional and touchy scene'."THE REACTION OF DUTTA ON HEARING THE BAD NEWS"''.sniff sniff ..me too teary ...awww the baby was a boy

Chalo happy to see whatever happens '..dutta accept it'learns from it'.confess his love

and welcomes his new life with nakku with open arms❤️

Jab jab dard ka baadal chaya
Jab ghum ka saya lehraya
Jab aansoo palkon tak aya
Jab yeh tanha dil ghabraya
Humne dil ko yeh samjhaya
Dil aakhir tu kyun rota hai
Duniya mein yunhi hota hai
Yeh jo gehre sannaate hain
Waqt ne sabko hi baante hain
Thoda ghum hai sabka qissa
Thodi dhoop hai sabka hissa
Aankh teri bekaar hi namm hai
Har pal ek naya mausam hai
Kyun tu aise pal khota hai
Dil aakhir tu kyun rota hai...oye u copied from zindagi na milegi dobara ..lol..me too loved this poem

awesome update it was rosy.thanks so much ..a lovely story that ends with a happy note dutta and naku with their twin childs, AS may be now not with them but as u said wherever she is ...musy be happy to see her son with his love.❤️

rosy Before a writer begin to write a sentence, he/she imagine the whole scene and then paint it with his/her own words.writer Imagines himself as that character and feels what the character feels,Smells what the character smells, and hear with that character's ears.before he/she begin to write...have to see and feel what he/she want the reader to see and feel.and must say its the harder nope hardest work...me just wanna say *with standing ovation* that really u are an awesome writer. omg itni tareef ...i m on cloud nine now ..thank u ji



thanku so much for writing such a wonderful FF for ur readers


Originally posted by stranger2rose

IMPORTANT NOTE
HELLO and a big big THANKS to all u wonderful ppl who have appreciated this ff so much and wish me to write something more. to tell u honestly at the moment m emotionally n mentally exhausted after finishing this story, i dont know about others but writing doesnt come naturally to me , i have to put in a lot of effort in doing so and right now m tired , plus i have some pending office work too so i need atleast a months time to come up with something new , really sorry to diappoint u all but i have a suggestion , why dont u pm other writers who are much much more talented than me like shilpita , jagruti, daya , raj etc to continue with their ffs . i am sure they will listen to u and once again thanks a lot for showering so much love on me n this ff . will reply to ur feedback soon .
Love u all
ROSE

rosy hmmm i can understand ...as i already said writing really needs lots of effort ( u know naa me too have tried of writing something but my haal was behaal...now i have promised to myself "ab nahi likhungi lol''
complete ur pending work 😊
till then me too will be free from 😈 (exams)...after that 😈 😈 😈 😈 😆 😆 😉
k

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