'Bas Ek Ghuzarish'chapter 21/p60 Conclude - Page 4

Originally posted by: ramya90

loved ur old as well as new FF

Originally posted by: Warda.

Loved reading it jagruti 😊

loved the title a lot ...is it refered to naku's only wish to be loved by dutta...i assumed so😳

Thanks for bringing out the old memories of LTL...reminds me of all the jan-feb 2010 episodes...miss those days a lot ...

specially dutta walking with his hands on his backs and baaji with all those colourful kurtas.. 😊

its a completely different experience that dutta is already aware of naku's fair skin unlike the serial...would be really interesting to read how it progresses...glad that he heard the full story about naku's secret...so there are no chances of any misunderstanding...

Pls update next part soon...and add me to ur pm list too pls😳

will surely catch up with your ff's as well...😳

Originally posted by: jagrutid

hiya!!! aap ka hein intaazar tha!! l🤗lovely to have you here thank you so much for coming to read this ff of mine too! you know i'm attached to your comments now...if you didnt turn up with your regular analysis then i would totally be left..waiting for you! 😕😳 but your here so all is good.
you know what😕 you wont believe me but naming this ff was the hardest part! omg seriously wrote it completed chapter 1 and two and even though i know exactly what this ff is going to portray i had no clue for a name..! so finally ..its named! As for the background bit yep..i thought i better just give a little hint to get you hooked..just in case you find the first chapter boring.
Your comments as always love so i'm going to follow them through and add my own commentary..
chapter 1 your analysis of the first chapter totally kills it! wow..something that took me a whole pharagraph you did it in 4 lines!! 👏 couldn'td have put it better myself.
Yep its all about this strange feeling nakusha has..somewhere within she knows she feels something more significant for him..somewhere in her heart she knows
that she loves him. Like any girl she has almost a crush on him..yet its not as simple as that, she dreams of him, she thinks of him yet she had very little to do with him. In terms of my ff nakusha has only spent a little time around dutta. Shes saved him, attended to his wounds once..warned about the dangers of drinking and he has told her about seema. There is lots of distance between them..for nakusha dutta at the moment is just sahab..the more master, maid type relationship yet something tells her that she understands him a little more. All because of the fact they share a painful past. She sees something in his eyes that gives her an insight to the dutta within.
so the face reaveal happens and dutta knows the truth..this is how i wanted it to happen in the serial..in a very sutble yet still complex way..even though dutta has reacted very silenlty to this..theres lots of layers of this reaction of his ..the important one being .. understanding and compassion.

As for the second chapter..that was for all you girls who love dutta.
you got to see Dutta Shri ram patil at his best! glad you liked that confrontation though. I tried to stick to duttas character as much as possible. For me Dutta shri ram patil has always been the highlight so there will be never the question of altering his character. My DSP will always as true to the original..as much as i can make it so anyway.
anyways bohot kuch likh dala.😆.if you got this far then i want to add one last thank you!

Originally posted by: sdr66

i love ur ff's. The only reason i keep logging on to this forum after M.R's exit is ff's like your's.

Originally posted by: nileshni679

oh this is more amazing. i really loved and enjoyed each and every part of it. Do update soon.

Nice start, I've just read both the parts, story looks quite gripping👍🏼 Thanks😊