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Posted: 13 years ago
hi daya it was a gr8 ud .pls start a new ff soon .i 'm feeling sad with my fav NTL ending regards uvi
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Posted: 13 years ago
res..
yaar tum toh supersonic speed mein NTL ka The End kardiya, readers pe daya karo, do comeback with more. now I've a backlog of 4 UDs to read n comment, hope to do it b4 u start another FF😉
Hi daya, here is my much delayed commments,

chap 27

Naku excited but also fearing the unknown, hmm.. poor girl unable to believe times change n its her time to enjoy the new reality. It was cute how dutta could sense her need for reassurance n some convincing to relax.

Now she is having problems with the saree😃 n yes it is one garment which can be altered to suit ur need. One can look stunning to sexy n also elegant to totally boring with saree, all depends how u carry it. Wow! a simple engagement ceremony n the two on the dance floor was a fitting way of sealing their relationship. The quiet time they had on the lawns was dreamy, Beautiful!😊

Where did this Anu come from n when did baji fall for her??? here, i had almost connected him with deeps lol.. anyway, he is acting a nervewreck to move forward hahaa, grt! Naku getting to know Arohi better wil help her bond better in her future home, what I found amazing was how naku even after getting engaged she carried on with her paper delivery without any hesitations.. Hmm..she also has her share of nervous moments especially with the daunting self defence training programme which she has made it out to be cause she is incapable of hurtin anyone, but dear i feel when confronted with such grave situations our instincts take charge n with some basic training it can wil add to our confidence. But for her the worse part him bein her trainer, but she has no choice has she? the puppy follows her master's voice lol..😆

chap 28
Baji,s luv story looks to be on shaky ground😉. As naku n dheeps guessed Anu is acting weird right frm the first moment. Even thou baji,s attracted to her, rightly doesnt take a further step as she has not been forthcoming with her feelings. But dheeps push n bajii,s frustration with Anu,s reaction...gosh! ends up kissing her, luckily doesnt get slapped lol.. bechara baji! 😃
Naku has a surprise test hahaaa, a demo for school girls n o Boy! she did pretty well, hey! but what is he doin? instead of enjoying her co; ordering her to get fit all in a day, taskmaster of some kind he,s become, poor naku after all the running around she does in a day didnt need this one. Hmm, for all that she does there is the reward too, now thats fair enuf !! she gets to be carried n put to sleep n lot of TLC too lol.. so no complaints, carry on Mr Sadoo..
Gosh! naku n anu kidnapped, now the mystery of anu should be unraveled.

chap 29
Baji being sensible in not over reacting in an otherwise a grave situation. Dutta n Arjun too very careful n taking calculated steps to avoid any untoward incident. Liked how u tried to give morey the closure cause it was bound to happen someday unlike our LTL CVs.. But unfortunately for morey, baji was right there at the right time. All along this nail biting saga i was constantly feeling that it was like watching a bollywood movie,s climax😆. But you handled this better. Liked how all the three showed restraint n finally when naku put to use her training with dutta, they rescued. It was also heartening to see naku stopping dutta from taking law unto his hands.
After the rescue Anu did the right thing as she had no justification, like baji me too felt she did a mistake of endangering another,s life to save her nephew ,s life. It is according to me a weakness of human mind, ofcourse easier said than done. So dutta has changed plans n marriage is preponed.. naku can only nod in agreement n us too as readers would luv to see them happily united for ever👍🏼.

chap30

Hey, u robbed us of one more wedding celebrations daya,😛 anyway happy to see the couple settled n at peace. Hmm..😍 the love birds enjoyin marital bliss along with their respective duties n studies But baji yet to go anywhere..n still hankering for Anu, dil jo de baita hain lol. Its funny how love just refuse to fade n how much it hurts, only baji knows better. So he has decided to go after his love n life finally. Anu too shocked to see baji n liked how u got the two meeting n ooh lala ladki badi tez nikli kiss bhi wah!! Thank GOD! the two cleared their misunderstandings, nahi toh hamara baji kuwara reh jata.😆 But didnt follow what happened to morey in the end..
Still would like to mention again would have luvd to see u continue and as u said urself it would have been nice to see other loose ends given a fitting closure. Nevertheless, Its been a pleasure reading ur works all this while n wil miss for sure. If possible do comeback with some short writings, thank u daya. Wishing you all the best in all ur future endeavours👍🏼..Take Care!!

Edited by -bharti- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi daya

Awesome ud & i loved the ff & way you write .pls do start a new FF soon .its a request 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi daya
my fav NTL ended it had to still sink in ...the story was superb . morey death & dutta naku together for ever ...its one of the best FF ...FF writers are reason for visiting forum ...daya with ur FF ending ...i want u too pls start a new FF soon
pls readers send message asking daya to start a new FF
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -bharti-

res..

yaar tum toh supersonic speed mein NTL ka The End kardiya, readers pe daya karo, do comeback with more. now I've a backlog of 4 UDs to read n comment, hope to do it b4 u start another FF😉

hi bharti
u echo my feeling too .plz daya start a new ff soon .i hope this thread of urs reaches 150 pgs .guys send in ur comments 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi bharti
u echo my feeling too .plz daya start a new ff soon .i hope this thread of urs reaches 150 pgs .guys send in ur comments 😊




As much as all this encouragement is wonderful and heartwarming
I do not have any intentions to write any more FFs..to be honest.
this is mostly for time purposes and maybe partially due to
the mental exhaustion of writing one...
but at the same time I can't completely ignore my most loyal readers whom i am grateful for..can I.?...I guess the compromise can be that MAYBE I can come out with some OS's once in a blue moon...



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Posted: 13 years ago
daya a brilliantending for a brilliant ff.
it was too good the way baji followed the van then hid his own vehical to keep it out of sight from goons, and then the other 2 followed him to the place where nakku was being held .
nakku did show her stronger side and defied him, despite her neeepheeew being in custody ,she pleaded to moray to let nakku go. which was brave of her. the fight scenes were good . the rescue operation fantastic. moray got away first time. lekin kab tak they eventually removed him from this world.
tasha living a happy married life. baji got his love back . very good ending just how we like it.
ended a bit sudden as i had iit in mind taht a couple of weeks but tum ne double episode de ke kamal ker diya.
daya we're going to miss reading NTL alot nevertheless it had to end, and u did it well. as every one has asked u to keep writing which will be good if u can we the readers enjoy all ff's, many people just come to this forum just to follow ff's they're never seen on any other posts which is an indication of ur good writing skills.
this forum is slowly slipping into decline again,and all talented members are doing their utmost best for all our survival. and seeing u and hammie and also nakku doing new posts is very commendable.👏 i hope u will continue to give whatever u can to ur faithful readers whenever possible. whther it b ff's ss or os. we know we will enjoy them. thanks daya for giving us this lovely ff. and best wishes for ur future.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey daya😊

awesome updates so four updates constantly lovely updates but little sad you end the FF but happy that you gave us such a fabulous FF thanks dear👏

so tasha got engaged great😛

so a new entry Anu is there i thought you gonna end it as baaji-deeps and arjun-arohi but like this one baaji-anu😛

poor girl trapped by morey it was evident that morey must have sent her

so jogging with nakku save nakku from morey and poor baaji blame himself for not understanding everything and dutta just don't know anything about Anu

so finally morey's chapter closed and he thinks to be very smart but indeed that's his illusion

nakku use MA to little bit protect herself and anu

finally everything is fine

poor baaji heart broken but i think duji has problem to first lose their love and then understand the true meaning of love 😉

tasha got married poor morey first bring tasha close and not help them to get marry soon

wonderful FF daya

love it and will miss it


hope to read another wonderful FF's and OS's in future daya😛


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -daya-




As much as all this encouragement is wonderful and heartwarming
I do not have any intentions to write any more FFs..to be honest.
this is mostly for time purposes and maybe partially due to
the mental exhaustion of writing one...
but at the same time I can't completely ignore my most loyal readers whom i am grateful for..can I.?...I guess the compromise can be that MAYBE I can come out with some OS's once in a blue moon...



hi daya
as ur loyal reader & fan .would luv to read anything from ur sideSmile .we 'll miss the FF .pls give a thought u can take a break for couple of weeks .
ur admirers are too demanding u r solely to be blamed its coz of ur brilliant writing .😆
i 'm still postive never say never Smile
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nakusha

hi daya
as ur loyal reader & fan .would luv to read anything from ur side😊 .we 'll miss the FF .pls give a thought u can take a break for couple of weeks .
ur admirers are too demanding u r solely to be blamed its coz of ur brilliant writing .😆
i 'm still postive never say never 😊

hi daya
wonderful ud ...story ...pls start a new ff 😊

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