ff is pyaar ko mein kya naam do chapter 7 pg13 - Page 10

Created

Last reply

Replies

115

Views

16.2k

Users

19

Likes

167

Frequent Posters

Nakusha thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#91

liked it ,i hope you are feeling better & take care of yourself 😊

sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Nakusha

liked it ,i hope you are feeling better & take care of yourself 😊

aww thnk u glad u liked it😛
yes loads better thnk u😛 fully recovered faster docs sed a few mre weeks but thnk god dat wasnt da case
sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

thnx for the update sana! gr8 2 c u better n updating yt agen!😃

hmmm so NS is down 2 work in hunting down his daughter...lets hpe she aint found b4 she has learnt sum manners😆
awww naku finding it hard 2 clean da clothes becos of her wounds... lets hpe dutta does sum maram patti for her... 😳
😲😲 naku does a runner n dutta all calm...😲😲 omg a lion? m sure dutta wil cum 2 da rescue...r we in 4 a jadu ki jappi scene between tasha?😉😆...naku scared hugs dutta😆😆😆 oh u hav 2 updte soon yaar...pls
ere is ur chocs...

acha u edited😳🤣but boy oh boy wud u even want me 2 work tgrough all these chocs😲mujhe kya samjha hain yuvi!🤣nw forget updating dis is one of those cases wher ei go well i was gnna update i was eating sum chocs for a brainwave wen suddenly my mind went chocs only no update 😆kidding thnk u🤗
yeh course dutta's all calm n hot n sexy 😆ohh u wud like dat but u knw how naku is she is rme likely 2 say oiii get ur filthly hands off me u lowlife🤣
--khushi-- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#94
Finally m done wid all 6 parts ...
interesting FF Sana...
wow Sana m sooo proud of u...
wah kya FF likha ahi...read karke mera dil garden garden ho geya...lol
tere jaisa FF writter kaha kaha aisa FF yara...
yaad karenge sare IF wale tera yeh FF yara...wah wah
ab khush meir maa...
reading any FF after such a long brk so enjoyed reading it...
more Important now u cant say I haven't read any of ur FFs...lol
ab update soon so that i can read how apna sher save spoilt Nakku from 2 loins...
yahan pm mat kario plz FB pe msg kar deyo...
Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago
sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#95
chapter 7
as nakusha stares at da lion who is approching her slowly she stares wide eye in fear her eyes popping out in alarm😲she tries backing away slowly holding da tree for support wen da lion roars again loudly b4 crouching slightly 2 pounce nakusha screams loudly moving her arms infrnt of herself as she does so a figure cums infrnt of her nakusha luks up in horror she is holding onto da figure cluthing his bk his sherwani as he turns slightly 2 luk at her its dutta who is calm but his face serious n livid wid anger nakusha luks on wary as she turns 2 luk bk at da lion who luks at dem both dutta turns bk 2 face da lion as he is about 2 attack dutta pulls out his pistol n shoots a loud noise fills da jungle as birds n animals make noises in alarm nakusha gasps as she stares wide eyed wide fear as well as relief at da lion who is sprawled on da floor his eyes closed blood can be seen dutta calmly turns 2 luk at her b4 luking around da jungle warily b4 he grabs her arm tightly pulling her closley 2 him nakusha trips n holds onto his sherwani 2 stop herself frm falling as she shakes her roughly glaring at her b4 speaking agli baar aise harkat ki toh sher sey darni ki koi zarrorat nahin as he meets her gaze nakusha stares at him fear fully b4 gulping she tries 2 speak but realises her throat is dry all she can do is stare at him den da dead lion who is lying on da ground dutta who is still holding her arm drags her wid him through da jungle
the scene shifts 2 da poilce n nana saab in da jungle
as da police ,nana saab n da main inspector yuvraaj r making der way in da jungle armed wid guns there selves a shot is heard making dem all quiet n stop in der tracks as da police luk around den at yuvraaj speaking saab goli ki awaaz yuvraaj luks around cautiously b4 speaking be alert woh yahin kahin hongey nana saab luks around cautiously b4 walking on signalling 2 his men which have acommpnied him for protection no one speaks mre about da gun shot for fears which nana saab n da police have about nakusha nt wanting 2 think such a thing cud be possible
scene shifts 2 da daku's in the jungle dutta's men
they luk around cautiously taking der places wen a gun shot is heard all da men take der postions waiting wen suddenly a gang member cums running 2 baaji n da rest of dem baaji speaks in a dark voice kya huwah police agey pounch gaye da daku shakes his head nahin baaji yeh goli bhau ney chali hain all da gang luk at eachoder in confusion as da daku explains i was on da lukout as i was tld on top of da tree wen i saw a lion bhau ney sher ko goli mardi n im sure da girl is with him as bhau knws da jungle mre better den anyone lekhin police bhi yaha hain dev glares agar woh ladki baagti nahin toh yeh sab nahin hota baaji puts his hand out signalling him 2 be quiet as da daku says bhau knws its nt safe 2 stay here anymre we shud shift camp rite nw dev n a few oder gang memebers speak at once aney doh police ko hum kaafi hain sab key liyeh but baaji shakes his head nahin police sirf apna kaam kar rahi hain agar jaan bachane mein goli chalani pari phir alag baat hain chalo samaan bando n lets move dev speaks 2 baaji ,lekhin baaji bhau baaji luks at him with confidence mein bhau ko janta hoon he is wise he must have thought of da same thing 2 woh us ladki ko kahin safe jaaga par lekar chala jaye ga jaha police nahin aa sakti everyone nods b4 packing der things into bundles as they leave they put da fire out nt wanting 2 attract the poilce quicker dne possible
scene shifts 2 dutta n nakusha in da jungle
as dutta is cautiously luking around da jungle walking fast dragging nakusha wid him she luks tired n angry trying 2 get him 2 let go but his hand might as well be made of steel as he walks deeper in da jungle nakusha luks scared light is disapering in a few hours it will be dark she slows dwn b4 stopping luking wary she is sure he is taking her deeper in da jungle n dis is nt da way 2 da camp where she was taken previously b4 she ran frm der dutta notices she has stopped he turns 2 luk at her widout any emotion n see's her baffled expression luking around he sighs in annoyance n anger b4 pulling her arm wid force making her stumble as she hits her leg on da tree branch making her foot turn in da instance nakusha gasps in pain holding onto dutta's sherwani b4 crouching 2 da floor slowly taking deep breaths holding her leg in agony dutta watches her for a few secs waiting but as nakusha presses her foot n leg in pain she luks up at him in fury b4 starting on him r u blind dikhta nahin hain tumhey u illiterate fool kuch pata bhi hain ya nahin jab sey yaha ayi hoon torture kar rahe hoon she lets out another gasp as she tries 2 get up but cant choro gi nahin dekhna sab yaad hain mujhe bohat sataya hain mujhe she closes her eyes b4 speaking in a quite voice yaad rakho gi mujhe ghar jaana hain papa key paas woh tumhey choro gey nahin dekhna u will be sorry for ever doing all dis dutta luks at her for a few minutes his expression hard 2 read b4 luking annoyed crouching dwn n picking her up in his arms nakusha gasps as her eyes open screaming let go off me she tries pushing him away but dutta ignres her walking further into da jungle nakusha screams let go of me tumhari himmat kaise huwi mujhe is tara haath laga ney ki chi as she continues 2 scream n hit him she gets tired b4 giving up she sighs b4 letting her head rest on his chest dutta continues making his way into da jungle
night has appeared n a short time later dutta walks dwn a steep path nakusha luks petrified at da dark jungle she cant see anything she clings onto dutta as she luks on they cum across a clearing dat is massive n clear nakusha luks around nt seeing anything wen suddenly her eyes cum across a wooden house dutta strides over 2 it opening da door nakusha luks around its dark hard 2 see she can make out a dusty table a few chairs as she luks around she screams as dutta dumps her dwn on a bed she glares at him nt being able 2 see him clearly she holds her legs in pain but cant speak as she is worn out n hungry dutta walks away nakusha luks around in fear at dis unknown place dats giving her da creeps as few minutes later a faint light appears nakusha see's dutta holding an oil lamp in his hand as he hangs it in da middle of da room giving light around nakusha can see clearly everything is dirty dusty she can see cobwebs making her luk around da bed in fear da bed she is on is dusty n dirty making her pulls a face n luk annoyed dutta widout luking at her walks near a chair b4 sitting dwn n closing his eyes nakusha luks at him briefly b4 luking around da house again she can see a small old kitchen which is da same she sighs b4 carefully examining da bed da pain in her leg is getting mre making her whince hunger still present n nakusha being thirsty she luks at herself as her face crumbles tears appear in her eyes as silent tears fall dwn she tries sleeping which is impossible she lays awake staring at da ceiling which is filled with cobwebs making her scared da one nt one a few maybe mre will fall dwn she hated creepy crawlies but with her life style der were hardly as cold over takes her she tries wrapping her arms around her body but 2 no luck
scene shifts 2 da police n nana saab
yuvraaj has ordered his men 2 camp in da jungle as its 2 dark 2 search anywhere never mind safe nana saab is furious at dis n protests at yuvraaj who listens calmly b4 speaking in a calm voice i knw u r concerned nana saab ,nana saab flips concerned concerned! my daughter is out der my daughter! i want her found n safe nt out der in god knws wat condition n with these animals yuvraaj nods but nana saab 2 search in da dark is dangerous u have 2 see frm my point of view if we continue searching through da nite we may cum across many dangers nt 2 mention da jungle wildlife n if my theroy is correct they knw we r in da jungle i wudnt under estimate dem at all we want miss nakusha bk safe n sound n u have my promise i will find her for u but u need 2 co operatate nana saab luks annoyed at dis b4 agreeing yuvraaj speaks again i knw its hard but we have 2 be very carefull we have bin trying 2 catch dutta sri ram patel n his men for ages but no luck but i wil find dem all n hand ur daughter 2 u safely u have my word nana saab, nana saab luks at yuvraaj b4 speaking in a dark voice i want u 2 find dem inspector n den see wat i will do no one touches my daughter no one i will show dem what nana saab can do they will wish they wernt born yuvraaj listens calmly b4 nana saab goes inside his camp
scene shifts bk 2 duta n nakusha in da wooden house
nakusha sttill cant sleep she tosses n turns whinces but still cant she is still hungry she cud eat anything thirsty as anything cold n hurt as she is doing dis she closes her eyes tightly trying as best as she can 2 sleep da way she see's it if she is asleep she wnt be hungry thirsty nor cold plus she wnt be able 2 feel da pain dutta who nakusha thinks is asleep gets up annoyed he luks at nakusha on da bed in a strange way😕nakusha who has heard na chair nosie opens her eyes n see's dutta near da bed she luks at him in confusion in da faint light as she sits up abruptly making her wince dutta reaches inside his sherwani making nakusha stare at him in alarm she tries moving bk as far as she can on da bed dutta goes 2 sit on da edge of da bed making nakusha go quiet she luks at him again cautiously suddenly dutta reaches out with his arm holding nakusha's leg making her scared she luks at him b4 luking around b4 kicking her leg away as she wraps her arms around her leg her voice cracks dekho dnt touch me im telling u acha nahin hoga im serious dutta reaches inside his pocket making nakusha even mre scared dekho im serious i swear if u do anything i will b4 she can say anything dutta screams bas! making her jump her words get stuck inside her throat making her go all quiet n stare at him wide eyed da faint light dat is shown inside da wooden house flashes across der faces dutta who luks furious n nakusha who luks afraid nt being able 2 speak he again reaches inside his pockets nakusha dsnt react out of fear she just continues 2 stare at him dutta takes out a rumaal b4 moving her arms away frm her legs she lets him but keeps her gaze on his face shocked out of her wits as well as scared he grabs her leg in his arm nakusha squeezes his eyes in fear of what he is about 2 do 2 her wen suddenly she opens dem baffled n confused she watches dutta who is tying da rumaal on her leg tightly she whinces a few times untill he ties a knot b4 letting go of her leg n getting up she watches in disbelief as dutta goes bk 2 da chair b4 closing his eyes nakusha watches for a a short while b4 closing her eyes in defeat even with da hunger n coldness sleep overtakes her worn out body
screen freezes in 2 one with dutta n nakusha in da wooden house asleepn the oder wid da police n nana saab in der camps sleeping
okkk guys im finished *sighs*im so tired hope u like it 😛press da like button if u like it n comments n feedbk r most welcum i knw i have yet 2 reply 2 sum comments will do n later on will pm everyone my eyes r hurting
Edited by sana786a - 14 years ago
Yuvika_15 thumbnail
Hogwarts Championship 2025 Thumbnail Gulaal-e-Jung Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
#96

nice update sana...

thnk god dutta cme on time n shot the lion...aww poor naku is so shocked tht she cnt evn speak...i fink nw she wil mellow down a little n b grateful 2 him for savin her life... oh wow so baji lot leave n decide 2 find another place 2 live n tasha r on der own sumwer else...wud b interesting 2 c thm left all alone in a new place...
m sure NS wnt find naku until tasha r in love😳
edited
aww naku in dutta's arms...n she's stil complaining...lol..dis girl it doesnt seem she wil gt ne sense soon...i reali liked hw dutta noticed she was in pain with her injury and decided 2 tie the rumaal...😳 cnt w8 for these 2 to fall in love..as i sed b4 i hpe naku falls in love 1st😳
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: --khushi--

Finally m done wid all 6 parts ...

interesting FF Sana...
wow Sana m sooo proud of u...
wah kya FF likha ahi...read karke mera dil garden garden ho geya...lol
tere jaisa FF writter kaha kaha aisa FF yara...
yaad karenge sare IF wale tera yeh FF yara...wah wah
ab khush meir maa...
reading any FF after such a long brk so enjoyed reading it...
more Important now u cant say I haven't read any of ur FFs...lol
ab update soon so that i can read how apna sher save spoilt Nakku from 2 loins...
yahan pm mat kario plz FB pe msg kar deyo...

bhangra😲palwaan ji wait till u work ur way around all 4 ff's 😆thnk u glad u think so😛🤣proud! awww garden garden 😆tumhey nahin lagta kuch zyaada tareef ho gaye hain😆haan ji kush very kush😉i knw will pm u on fb wen i update yaad aya aaj update kiya hain rofl will let u knw on fb
sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

nice update sana...

thnk god dutta cme on time n shot the lion...aww poor naku is so shocked tht she cnt evn speak...i fink nw she wil mellow down a little n b grateful 2 him for savin her life... oh wow so baji lot leave n decide 2 find another place 2 live n tasha r on der own sumwer else...wud b interesting 2 c thm left all alone in a new place...
m sure NS wnt find naku until tasha r in love😳
edited
aww naku in dutta's arms...n she's stil complaining...lol..dis girl it doesnt seem she wil gt ne sense soon...i reali liked hw dutta noticed she was in pain with her injury and decided 2 tie the rumaal...😳 cnt w8 for these 2 to fall in love..as i sed b4 i hpe naku falls in love 1st😳

thnk u yuviii😛
arey woh nahin aata n naku gt eaten up den story agey kaise karti😆naaa wats da fun in her changing just like dat nooo slow is gud 😉see i bet u didnt expect dat i wud seprate da gang frm der leader dutta lekhin karna para😆
hmm as usual i dnt kwn da story in advance either jab update hoga pata chale ga till den wait wait wait i was actually gnna update khtk but socha just do dis
Yuvika_15 thumbnail
Hogwarts Championship 2025 Thumbnail Gulaal-e-Jung Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: sana786a

hmm as usual i dnt kwn da story in advance either jab update hoga pata chale ga till den wait wait wait i was actually gnna update khtk but socha just do dis

😆😆 i no tht, thts y didnt bother asking u wts gna happen next cos i knw kuri has STML n dunt think ahead...if she does she starts gtin headaches😆
wel u no u can always update KHTK nw...😉
sana786a thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

😆😆 i no tht, thts y didnt bother asking u wts gna happen next cos i knw kuri has STML n dunt think ahead...if she does she starts gtin headaches😆
wel u no u can always update KHTK nw...😉

i knw i swear seriously wen i start a ff i have a rough idea like in dis dutta's a daku naku rich brat etc n pick da story up wen i update its mre easier wen i sit dwn type wat cums in my head der n den if i planned it god knws i wud go crazy🤪yeh i have da stml 😆dats why i open 2 pages 2 see da rpevious update so idnt forget anything
naaa baba nt nw plzzz 2mmrw hopefully nt nw haath jorti hoon mere maaa😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".