New FF: Two Face-Prologue(A glimpse)

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Oh man, I love romantic thrillers...defn PM me when this one kick starts.

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AzMishy
Yipeee another FF from shilpi..*party*
Will be waiting for ur updates :).

Azy author note parh kay main nay tu party khatam kardi :(😭

ye SHilpi bohat zalim hai 🤢

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

OMG OMG.. I cant believe it..U finally started writing this story!! well, what an amazing start ... amazing start.. i had a smile on my face as soon as i read the first few lines cos I knew this was that idea which you have been toying with for a while now..girl, u r brave having 3 greats FF's on the go.. wah wah..oh, i have no doubts this will better Krentz!

Regarding character sketch.. i loved the way D looks here..ice inside and out.. immaculate, cold, nothing can shake hm.. except that one moment when he struggles to say her full name.. wonder why ;-P naku's character sketch is a bit sketchy at the moment except her eyes which mirrors her heart na..wow..match made in heaven for us Shilpi fans.. this has all the trappings to become one hell of a great FF :) hmmm..meera, for whom D feels nothing.. so far irrespective of whatever he says, we can see naku has an effect on him positive or negative depedning on whose perspective we look from!

it loooks like a maze this story.. so many questions in my head.. she is married to a man who doesnt exist.. and D feels this time he wont get away from murder.. mathlab, he has murdered before?! maybe not in actuak sense, but destroyed someone else completely. cant wait to read more..ab i will be interested to see which FF's u will update in what rder and what riot acts will happen on all these threads with people demanding updates.. ROFL..

Thanks for the PM and it looks awesome!!

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husnu

@husnu

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

suspense and romance grrrt .

what a start lady full time mistery.Please pm

thanks

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

where is my PM*angry muh*

I came to know about ur new FF thru FB,that's so not fair*more angry muh*

iska badla main leke rahungi*total filmy*😛

will come back tommorrow & by then u better have some answer ready ,warna...

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

great guru jee looking forward to this thriller prolouge verrry catchy now its the waiting for the FF to start...sure i'll thrill me outa me seat!!

xxx hammie

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Amazing , intriguing start Shilpita ,, i am Loving it 😆 (NOT Mcdonalds wala )

will wait for the update..

thanks

Raj

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suhana19

@suhana19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Hey Dear Shilpi🤗

Omg u stared new FF 😲 and yeh kya no PM ,,,,,But loving the mindblowing Prologue ...Just really awesome yaar ...can"t wait for the nxt part...u take care and pls jaldi update karna ...

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

wow started the new one ,but what a shock dutta killed nakku's husband a person who never exist what does this means their r lot of question but loved the u expressed tasha ,hope dutta and nakku relation of love will not change in this ff too and please pm me when u update,please make it soon waiting for all 3 ff to be updated soon,hoping u will consider it so make it soon .thank u

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

hehehe look who is here,😉off course i,me & myself*heavily influenced by Salman's dialouge in READY*😛

Is it thriller or is it web of spider?😆Both the characters are so much layered.

U again made him Doctor😆,but i guess this one is PHD wala.Bit difficult for me to imagine this cold ,ruthless & mean Dutta.But none the less ,very interesting personality.

Nakku's eyes are important part in this FF ,i guess. the way u described all shades depending on her moods.

I take it that this Rajat is her husband,who for the world doesn't exist😕

There are so many questions popping up in my head ,the 1st being why do both of them have such strong effect on each other?

Why Nakku was hesitant to speak her full name?

Why was Dutta so interested in listening to her speaking full name,i mean what is so special about it?

No way he murdered someone,but my guess is he ruined someone's life real badly & that someone is Rajat?

There was one very intersting line about Rajat being the person who made nakku realise that she is in love,my guess is at some point she & Dutta shared some special bond.

Meera is his escapism from reality,i presume.I really doubt that he will marry her😕

Before another set of questions starts popping,😆 u better finish Ek Thi Kahani & come up with 1st chapter of this FF😊