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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Rubal,

Nice update . Thanks for PM .

Dutta ka accident hua , naku aur madhu in hospital 😕. I was feeling bad first but its ok its a small one .

Tasha initial talks were nice . Knowing about each other . But appears to be so formal .😊

Of course they never know each other . Slowly closeness developes hai naa ?

But dutta is too formal with naku aisa kyu . Dutta is so happy with naku that she is taking care of his mother which he wants from his wife .

He wants her to continue studies sooo sweet . Naku wants to take care of saahil . Really both are made for each other each thinking about other one dutta about naku and naku about dutta.😳

Dutta knows that naku doubts him about saahil and she knows all about him from madhu Good .

Naku is telling him that he is saadiyal before him .😊 and he asking tujhe dar nahi lagtha mujhse aur she is telling no good girl aur waise bhi naku ko dutta se kaisa dar hai naa ? 😊

But i feel their talk is so formal . Don't know why . I want to see tasha closeness soon . develope some romantic scenes and love scenes between them waiting for tasha scenes . 😳

Dutta is so good and naku also . Love them in this ff . 😍

Please update soon Rubal .

Thanks for maintaining tasha essense and for keeping dutta sriram patil character so clean as in LTL .👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Hey Rubal,

Nice update . Thanks for PM .

Dutta ka accident hua , naku aur madhu in hospital 😕. I was feeling bad first but its ok its a small one .

Tasha initial talks were nice . Knowing about each other . But appears to be so formal .😊

Of course they never know each other . Slowly closeness developes hai naa ?

But dutta is too formal with naku aisa kyu . Dutta is so happy with naku that she is taking care of his mother which he wants from his wife .

He wants her to continue studies sooo sweet . Naku wants to take care of saahil . Really both are made for each other each thinking about other one dutta about naku and naku about dutta.😳

Dutta knows that naku doubts him about saahil and she knows all about him from madhu Good .

Naku is telling him that he is saadiyal before him .😊 and he asking tujhe dar nahi lagtha mujhse aur she is telling no good girl aur waise bhi naku ko dutta se kaisa dar hai naa ? 😊

But i feel their talk is so formal . Don't know why . I want to see tasha closeness soon . develope some romantic scenes and love scenes between them waiting for tasha scenes . 😳 = main kya karoon unki shaadi aise situation mein huyi ,agar unka romance likhti hoon to bahut fake hoga

Dutta is so good and naku also . Love them in this ff . 😍

Please update soon Rubal . = i will try to upday next week because in this i have to study ,my exams

Thanks for maintaining tasha essense and for keeping dutta sriram patil character so clean as in LTL .👏👍🏼

thanks for readinng

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Rubal,


I know that romance now is not possible because of the way they married with out knowing each other .

But develope some romantic atmosphere and closeness , comfort between them soon .

And all the best for ur exams . Take care .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Hey Dear Rubal,


I know that romance now is not possible because of the way they married with out knowing each other .

But develope some romantic atmosphere and closeness , comfort between them soon .

And all the best for ur exams . Take care .

thanks for your suggestion ,i will try it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
good nakku ne sahi kaha sadiyal waiting for next
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update, waiting for next part.

BTW all the best.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read all the parts in one go... nice story... luv the way the story is proceeding... continue sooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
i Likes it !

Love D and N talks

chalo i was afraid of D meets an accident but

u make the accident worth it !

hmm so loving teh story !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mine😉
will update it soon😛

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Oouufff y this nakku always mai jathi hu!!! Doh!!
Come on he is ur Pathi n not a ___!!!

At last Dutta tels her to stay n there too she try to run!!! yedi kahi ki!

So when we will get DN romance :p
D met n accident n hope it will bond this jodi tgether :D

Nice update Ruby, soon update the nex part!
U have become kanjuks now :p
Just kidding *wink*





Edited by AzMishy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey my singing queen lovely update
ah accident ho gaya me was waiting for that
chalo chance to mila dono ko kuch pal saath bitane ki liye but no nakku wants to go out daft girl but our lion explain her to stay here so that they can spend some good time together.
Dutta is about say something but stops something fishy .
superb update
love it
thanks for pm

best of luck for exams and after exam give long update till then concentrate on exams

Edited by eternity_of_luv - 14 years ago

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