Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 27

@ Hammie

I am here again 'check on ur boy '.Hi , Major .

Oh ! Now I begin 'new bride ( raises my eyebrows and smirks ) 'Good going boy .

ooo La la la ''.. Lauren and ''''.wait Baji ( shocked )

Dutta 'darling , who else in PN has the guts to check out Naku that u so worried abt her Chunni ...Bol Bol ..Or R u scared of ur self 'Hmm

Ahh ha .. Our Baby walked today ''..awe .

Harshad ...loser 'U calls himself a man and In love ''what a Poor joke

U think u r a man '' dude u r no else than a despo '..listen , man is not a man becoz of functional unit 'Dutta on wheels is more a man than can ever be '''. Nd one flying kick on ur unit will put down for days or maybe permitted , then what will u be '''.defi not a woman and surely not a man in ur own words ''.

When u love a woman '''.if u can''u did know that she needs more than what u can offer '..she needs a real man '''.what u r not .

Man who is human , funny , who knows her , loves and respect '..stand by her ''.u r surely not that '..

Dutta ''.Growl boy growl '''

Silsila ''.What a version ''tu khoti toh...Lovely

Very nice update👏 Story is progressing well, Datta is slowly recovering, Harshad too wants Naku. Now Datta has to tell AS soon abot Naku. Waiting for the next part. Thanks😊

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ scorpio just saw your comments 🤣 about harshad Iam in sticthes so hilarious dutta to kick in his functional unit🤣

and the remark about nakku's chunni🤣 thanks for making me laugh sooo hard! pun ye maat bhool harshad loved Nakku 3 saal se ... dutta na tu nakku ko notice bhi nehi kiya pechale saaloon mein

he may know her but... xxxhammie

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

YES HAMMIE BELIV IT O NT IT REALLY IS ME LOL

welcome ma'm hamlet is delighted to have your comments your grace[bows]

now without furthr ado...my comnt...enjoy...

yes awaiting ab bol bhi de!

ohmigod hammie am totally speachless!!!! now thats a change you do't say

it was absolutly brilliant!!

thank you ma'am!

there were so many scenes that reminded me of othello nd had a taste of shakespeare in it...

well that's exactly the connection I was looking for

and you got it! so kissey

especially when harshad wnt 2 the barber...reminded me of iago...from othello...yucky man...me not likes him at all...hes rather disgusting narrow minded being!!!

no! jealous! green the colour for jealousy

i rely hope dis evil creature doesnt accompany tasha/baji!!!! XD

now remember he has an interview also ,and if he's saving on petrol what's the harm,be reasonably!

oh damn.jealousy really is a greeneyed monster..is it not XD

yes you got it right at last! well done missy!

nd harsh is trying a lil 2 hard at it...dnt u fink..makin it so obvious dat he is up2 suma...hes right hes young youthful..thus imature...actualy very immature 4 his age...

no,he's only fighting for his love...oops chappel!

even tho dutta acted unharmed by his stupid talks...he stil left a seed of suspicion behind...wich im feelin quite worried bout sinc i was gettin all d horrible feelings i had wen i read/watchnd othello...i jus hope they fight all d odds without much seperation wen d time cums...

yaar Major Dutta na dhoop mein baal nehi safaad

kiya ... he's played war games before..have faith in him... whether he can battle with himself is the question missy?

absolutly loved all tasha scnes omg d song went purrfectly with dem!!!

the song was a reaction of what I saw on lcl between

"nrd &saibhaan..so this was my Dutta&Nakku

version..glad you liked it/😉

the way u made it all flow was stunning!!

😉😉 thankyou i hope the song writer or Amitabh are not offended! pun Dutta[ Mishal] to exclusive hai!

i love it how tasha r both refering eachother wit names only lovers wud use 4 eachother...awesome

haan per gadha ne bhi tak mau se nehi kha Nakku

ko ILU.

the passion the love the intensity of it is rely created a very divine yet powerful atmosphere...

😭 just as well we FF writers can still create it so well done to all FF tasha writers👏

nd the best thng is the way u create dat...theres a ray of lust yet d love overridesit...their romance seems so hot nd passionate yet so pure and innocent...its jus so mesmerising...

aww missy Iam humbled ,😳 your remarks are a big part of the inspiration

however,,,i rely hope dutta wrks out the plan behind harshs evil acts...or rather dis extra sweet tlk...

we'll have to see ,even I don't know what Major Dutta

is up to

y dus he wana go wrk so early... :(((

ghar baith ke kya kare ga ,bas nakku kay saat sare din maskhere tu nehi kar saketa,all the time!

omg i almost 4gt...did i tel u hw much i loved d scene wer dutta was tld nt 2 use rascal...nd d luks he gav 2 naku...they wer so adorable..almost urging her 2 say somethng 2 chnge der mind...he seemed almosst lyk a lil child at d time...wich he is deep dwn...des r d best times wenn u can hav a sneek-a-peek of his tender childish side...oh how am gona miss their rides on rascal...

I know he is getting to attached to Rascal,perhaps getting lazy.. but till his legs are not stable ,he'll still or rather ,Rascal will be by his side!😳

thnku sooo soo much 4 such an amazing n powerful updare...loved every bit [exc harsh]

actually as a writer Harshad was the one I enjoyed

writing about the most..cameo role!

i bet ur surpisd hw i comented on ur update...aur woh bhi itni jaldi...but i fote agar abhi nahi kiya toh phir kabhi nahi hoga lol

I was delighted to see your loong comment missy

means a lot to me... made my datelike I said ye mera chaska hota hai...readers comments⭐️ hammie

lots of lve

mwah

xoxox

Thanks very much...apologies being late in responding to your comments

@ warda: always look forward for your lengthy feed back,of course dedicated the song to you ,remember ,i told you the dil kyon bhaka was a reaction to a diggu /sahibaan scene in LCL ..and you mentioned that you would like my reaction on the love scene between NRD and nakku sooo how could I refuse ,as I was fuming already ..but still glad you responded well...Harshad well, he's the cameo ...quite a reaction I got from the readers! Chaal yar give him a chance ...have a heart .. xxxhammie

@rrs : happy that you liked the update.. haan harshad hai ek problem,dekho how Dutta deals with him ! xxhammie

@ krishaa: battle tu looks like will happen ,but will Dutta rise to it ,is the question? will he see it as a battle ..remember Dutta does his own thing! Xxx hammie

@ daya: thanks for your lovely blue feed back... my thoughts are on p.34 .. keep your long comments coming on my UDss xxhammie

@ sdr: thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed! luv hammie

@ ushankitvc: glad you enjoyed..yes I too am pleased he's on his feet,but still has a long way to go yet before he can walk normally...harshad well pyar karta hae nakku se ,kya kere beechara? Engagement ? pata nehi? Dutta sab ko ekdha ker ke he choorey ga..we'll have to see! Xx hammie

@prncz: raj thank you for your lovely feed back my mate...soo glad you liked it ... nehi yaar Iam not a medical person..have doctors in the family, mother, aunts ,cousins ,nephew! Now me...well I am an educationist! How does the sound ... I do check up stuff though ...there are pretty clued up people on the forum ,many of the FF readers are educated ,well informed people ,so one cannot take them for a ride..even in the name of poetic license... so I try to be true to fact where ever I can! Oh! You a maths and physics person wow I am impressed ... kya baat hai clever clogs! Happy you liked the tasha bonding ,I mean Raj who does'nt? Dutta kya keray ga Harshad ke mamlay mein ? ye tu use ne mhuje bhi nehi batiya...security clamp!!! Ha haa xxhammie

@Mishez: missy! Thanks for your fabulous feed back well done girl you got the Iago reference to Harshad ...excellent ... waise I left a detailed comment on your great feed back on page 36 ...it would be nice if friends can read it ...some free laughs they will get xxxhammie

@ suhana: glad you warmed to the romantic side of things lady... soft touch..me more into Harshad side of things ... jealously ... you mentioned true love wins... I don't know ? would you say to lose in love is also a win... I am thinking of that song from Jab we met , "na ye khoona hai, na ye pana hai"... as the sher is concerned he is grand majestic and certainly not pushed into things he takes his time ... who would dare to mess with the lion... the rest of the jungle just waits for his move! Waise wo ghulab ke phool kalam saaz ke liya hai ye Major Dutta ke liya ? Xx hammie

@ziks: lovely to hear from you ... i loved your long feed back ,ever since you left for your exams and prep have missed you ...,have left a commenton p.35 you take girl and best of lick for exams ...am sure you'll perform well xxxhammie

@ scorpio: priyaaa .tera comment ka jawab I gave straight away ..it was rocking and hilarious sooo I haaad answer straight away...even now when aI go through it never stops me from rolf! Comment on p.35 Xx hammie

@ mnx: thanks for your comment, glad you enjoyed Xx hammie

@ nakusha: glad you enjoyed the update ... aaga kya hota hai ..nakku intezzar ? even Iam getting feed up of Dutta's dilly dallying...I think Nakku should Dump him!

@brvr: loved your comments ,oh more positive comments for my writing skills gosh I am getting a swollen head now... now getting back to Dutta one word to sum him up unpredicatable! What his moves is going to make ...we'll have to wait and watch! Xxxhammie

@ ranjana: see! remembered you lovely name ..always love reading your colourful feed backs..the emoticons and the little red comments you are right Harshad hai jealousy ka mera ..whether he's daft is yet to be seen... while Dutta will be as elusive as MR himself... glad you loved the lovey dovey haaai bits ... xx hammie

Thanks to all those friends also who made time and read the update and pressed like!

Lots of love and many thanks for your time and feed backs! Hamlet.12.7.11

ahmm ahmmm *clears throat*