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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally Hammie , you updated ,, and boy wht time did u update , me daya, missy and su were wondering if u dozed off 😆
were u proof reading all this while, we were dringkin shakes and eating chocl cakes and mangoes ? whn did u sleep by jo, did u sleep or u were dreaming abt major dutta like missy ?
ok me res for now 😳 will love reading wht Major dutta is up to 😆
see hope u still here for the day 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

@ daya thanks for your lovely long feed back... yes harshad has lost the plot ..even though he's a Pt pun pyar mein banda pagal ho jata hai...i enjoyed writing his section the most I have to say..it was different... jealously as in Iago i othello ... .. but I think I readers would prefer to see Dutta's green side but abhi to woh only red hot passion he dekh raha hai... gosh he sooo needs a cold shower! haaa [Mishal STYLE LARF]...gLAD YOU LIKED THE UP DATE ..INSPITE OF THE DAMN PROOF READING I CAN STILL SEE MISTAKES WHEN I READ IT AFTER POSTING IT ON THE FORUM ..sham ko miltay hain chit chat mein .xxxhammie

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ prncz oye I read all your remarks ,teray ,su ,mishe,or daya ki .man it sooo deviated me from my proof reading ki i still made mistakes which I can see in my post ..tuhumari waja se ... cos I was reading the comments when you fools thought I had gone to bed ... Sher ka style quiet prowl! oye you did'ent read the up date tuk tuk.. yaar please read it considering ke I did it for you guys .. oye see you in chit chat tonite... speak to you latersss! xxxhammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!! a superb updt... dutta on his feet... Nakku is on top of the world seeing this... Harshad😡😡😡... i hate him... dutta understood his intentions... would luv to see the war between Dutta and harshad and how Dutta wins nakku... updt sooon... precap interesting... i hope he seriously gets engaged to nakku bfore both leave fr their duty...
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Posted: 14 years ago
O ahmmie wht an update 👏👍🏼
1st and foremost ,your knwledge on medical teminolgy is amzing ,,,, i am a no no as far as anatomy or biology is concerned
I am more of a Physics and Maths person 😉
are u in mdeical or para medical field if i may ask you?
Awesome update , so Major dutta is falling hard for nakku , he misses her wants to be with her every time
small gestures as" chunni nahin pehni? " , holding her wrist whn rest of the family left the room , savur sme moments with her , bajji ko bhagana frm the room , and looking for her as soon as he reachs the ground floor for brk fast ..all these signs are ther why is gadha not saying yes to AS
loved the Harshad cameo entry ..so he wants to fight for his love and has his hairstyle cut and wants to challenge Major ,, he is so immature ,,he doesnt knw a real sher and is all set to get himself humilated and bashed by our sher and sherni
he has already announced his war and is all set to be bashed , he was so provocative at the brk fast table and is confident of winning nakku's love ,,doesnt he knw Naku loves saab from a long time
thansk hammie for this update i knw u stayed till late to update this and trust me it was worth it ,,
it was awesome read and left us waitign for more
we get to see major saab going for duty ,, and missing naku and viceversa and Harshad's fight
Raj hope i dnt bore u n readers ,, it was long post
oh btw loved the moemtnu described with the song from silsila awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
YES HAMMIE BELIV IT O NT IT REALLY IS ME LOL
now without furthr ado...my comnt...enjoy...
ohmigod hammie am totally speachless!!!!
it was absolutly brilliant!!
there were so many scenes that reminded me of othello nd had a taste of shakespeare in it...
especially when harshad wnt 2 the barber...reminded me of iago...from othello...yucky man...me not likes him at all...hes rather disgusting narrow minded being!!!
i rely hope dis evil creature doesnt accompany tasha/baji!!!! XD
oh damn.jealousy really is a greeneyed monster..is it not XD
nd harsh is trying a lil 2 hard at it...dnt u fink..makin it so obvious dat he is up2 suma...hes right hes young youthful..thus imature...actualy very immature 4 his age...
even tho dutta acted unharmed by his stupid talks...he stil left a seed of suspicion behind...wich im feelin quite worried bout sinc i was gettin all d horrible feelings i had wen i read/watchnd othello...i jus hope they fight all d odds without much seperation wen d time cums...
absolutly loved all tasha scnes omg d song went purrfectly with dem!!!
the way u made it all flow was stunning!!
i love it how tasha r both refering eachother wit names only lovers wud use 4 eachother...awesome
the passion the love the intensity of it is rely created a very divine yet powerful atmosphere...
nd the best thng is the way u create dat...theres a ray of lust yet d love overridesit...their romance seems so hot nd passionate yet so pure and innocent...its jus so mesmerising...
however,,,i rely hope dutta wrks out the plan behind harshs evil acts...or rather dis extra sweet tlk...
y dus he wana go wrk so early... :(((
omg i almost 4gt...did i tel u hw much i loved d scene wer dutta was tld nt 2 use rascal...nd d luks he gav 2 naku...they wer so adorable..almost urging her 2 say somethng 2 chnge der mind...he seemed almosst lyk a lil child at d time...wich he is deep dwn...des r d best times wenn u can hav a sneek-a-peek of his tender childish side...oh how am gona miss their rides on rascal...
thnku sooo soo much 4 such an amazing n powerful updare...loved every bit [exc harsh]
i bet ur surpisd hw i comented on ur update...aur woh bhi itni jaldi...but i fote agar abhi nahi kiya toh phir kabhi nahi hoga lol
lots of lve
mwah
xoxox
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ prncz oye I read all your remarks ,teray ,su ,mishe,or daya ki .man it sooo deviated me from my proof reading ki i still made mistakes which I can see in my post ..tuhumari waja se ... cos I was reading the comments when you fools thought I had gone to bed ... Sher ka style quiet prowl! oye you did'ent read the up date tuk tuk.. yaar please read it considering ke I did it for you guys .. oye see you in chit chat tonite... speak to you latersss! xxxhammie

wel i had a resun cuz i stayed up til 3am las nyt 4 ur update...lekin...u kno d rest lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Dear Hamiee🤗
iam here finally yaara ...Read the update in morning itself but was in rush for work😳...Now read it again ...What an Superb and wonderful update👍🏼👏As always loved it to the core 😉
Major Dutta got morning glimpse of naku ..haila ek bhi chance nahi choodta romance ka😍😍...Loved the moment ...
Dutta in blue kurta "su faints"😆😍...Wow so baaji is excited that lauren is coming 😉...haila even trying to line maaroying on her ...
Wow me impressed he told baaji to stayback when lauren was present in the room ...and dnt want naku to feel bad or take it other way na...
Omg D took a baby step 😳 and everyone are so excited ...But aww he will miss Rascal...But cant wait to see him Fit and healthy 😉...
I just loved the song and the romance in between ...i was imagining it all ...really mindblowing ☺️☺️
Arrrg i so hate Harshad😡,,,,,But our sher is no less he will win this war all the way...No matter how harshad tries😳,,,,,True love will win ...Omg the precap is damn interesting yaara ...Pls jaldi udate karo ...u take care and see ya around ...
Lots of love and hugs
suhana🤗

...Hamieee...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Hamlet,

Iam writing comments on this ff though exams are there . Just came once to forum for relax and read the update and can't stop commenting .

Iam reading mainly this ff because of its uniqueness i.e dutta character his morals , principles . I love and respect major dutta character very much in this . Iam ver much fascinated this dutta saab . Mainly he is one woman man that i love more . I love his morals and principles in life . I love love major for this .👏

Love love the sweet and lovely romance between tasha and love the unique and unconditional love between tasha . The moments between tasha and major saab constant staring at naku and his sharing of happiness with naku and giving complete credit to her .😍

Defintely in all those scenes his eyes completly are on naku and seeing her reactions though his complete family is there. His priority is naku there its clearly seen and romance superb . Song and passion in that lovely .

Major saab standing on his legs iam very happy for this . And harshad's pavlov and his low level thinking on major saab i hate hate hate this harshad . I hate harshad in this part . I think he has gone out but oh god trying to seperate tasha . Its sad .😕

Harshad boy he is such a jerk , His behaviour on dining table , how he intentinally spills poison in all minds that there was something between him and naku . Urggg i hate this guy . He turns dangerous though he knows naku loves major still he is playing his cheap tricks . So underestimating major saab and his love for naku . 😡


And i hate that lauren also her cheap dressing and her cheap behaviour definetely i have no respect for that character 😡. Baazi's behaviour with lauren is funny .

I loved so much when major saab tolds baazi to stay there in his room when lauren is there . Oh really hamlet iam so much impressed and my heart goes out for him . My love and respect doubled for this major saab . He is such a gem really . 🤗👏
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I know very well that major saab is a strictly one woman man that's y i love and respect him . That's y i love this major saab very much for his uniqueness and for his morals and principles . 👏

Its very sad that tasha are going to seperate because of their respective jobs . Hope tasha marriage happens soon and they won't seperate .

Both are going to jobs differently omg hope tasha won't seperate of harshad . want tasha marriage soon . 😊

Need a strong realtionship and bonding between tasha before going to jobs as baazi said . I know harshad and any other cheap tricks wont work on tasha but still loves to see them as married couple soon .😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
@ziks look its great to see your lengthy remark on my update again
...I thought to my self hainn ye adher kya ker rahi hai... but yes loved your comments ...also pleased to note that you are taking breaks between exams... ..you are doing very well... phase of life once they are over ...you can have a respite and do the things that you want in your leisure time... all the very best in the exams that are left..you look after your self... major dutta likes girls who know what they want and work hard towards it..haaa... i'll keeping you updated with the updates... see after the exams xxxwith much love hammie

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