SS - Fanaah Ho Sabhi Dooriyaan LAST PARTupdt pg-1 - Page 8

Originally posted by: stranger2rose

@ azymishi ...thanks a lot dear for appreciating the updt esply the dialogues .. me too will miss ur comments ...its wonderful writing for u all

@ ranjana ..glad u liked the last part so much esply the duttas moon talk and the reason for gifting those anklets.will miss u too dear .thanks again

@ komal ..m so happy to know that u could feel that the updt was like LTL which we used to cherish n now miss a lot .. always try to keep the characters as realistic as possible..glad u could felt the same thanks a lot

@ mnx ..thanks minaxi for appreciating the SS ..me too like to read n write stories which have an happy ending..dont like to spread negativity around

@ mlshe ..dear it was an SS i.e. short story so it had to end early but glad u liked duttas moon talk ..i wouldnt say he was jealous but yah he was disappointed with himself for taking so long to accept nakkus love ..anyways will miss ur comments

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Sorry dear for replying late ,catching my ears😳,very well written you full filled our wishes it is full of Tasha😳,and dialogs of dutta awesome the way he talked to sleeping nakuu his regrets then his talk to chand oh my dutta feeling so bad for his deeds gadha 😆,and nakuu to nakuu hi she wakes up screaming saab😳 ,very good emotional,romantic and cute part you brought Tasha emotions very good specially dutta I liked his talk to chand co much ,and you should start writing a new one now pakka will not comment late on that

@ spandy ...ohh dont be so sorry ..its ok ..it happens ...glad u liked it so much ...esply duttas secret talk with nakku and the moon ...i know nakku is nakku always calling out to her sahab ..lol..as it was the last part so made it a little more emotional , romantic and sweet for u ...so happy to know that u enjoyed reading it .

@ geeta ...chalo finally a comment from ur side as well ..lol...and dear no need to thank me its a pleasure writing for u all . ..

@ kiran ...omg ..nowadays u make me wait for ages for ur comments ...arghhh ..

Hey My Rosey !

I know ur mad but got aa perfect explanation , had a presentatipn yesterday whole week ise main busy tha!

Now coming to the most amazing end to a very beautiful , subtle and pure romance!

HMm kahan say shuro karay !

Sab say pehlay thank God the king and Queen are at their place !

Patil niwas:D

AHh Finally Naku proved again that no prove in the world can make her accept that her Dutta can leave her and now even AS and Baaji accepts that !

The love which Naku carries for D is beyond this world !

Im feeling pity for the kidnapper after seeing N in this condition ,

Dutta will not leave the culprit

But here again I love the fact

Now his number on eis priority is Naku ,

He just didn't go for enemy

He wants his Naku to be fine first !

And OMG Dutta dialogues are to die for !

I love it , so true the way N loves him is just too unreal !

She loves him from her heart , soul, everything she has , she is ready to give away for D !

And this one

OMG :!

Love how D hates that N is not around her , so he gave her a payal !

Love the scene where he is applying the ointment !

And omg this update just shows what D really thinks of N ,which always missed in real drama !

The realization he had , Naku love is avove all but the way she does it for him

Without asking fro anything back !

OMG iwant to cry !

Its beautiful !

And Rose tum na mano but ur Anil Deshmukh for me

These dialogues ,the soul these dialogues have and that D knows all k N was the one always listening to him but how many times she come and tell her problems to him !

OMG so true and don't know but it just gave me a smile

The way D knows Naku so well :D

And the last part ,

It gives u happiness and deep pain also !

They have come through so much !

OMG Rose ,,tum happy ending may bhi itna rolati ho !

The dialogues are just mindblowing !

U know I don't know kis kis ko point karo all are just beautiful and soothing like Tashaa !

Awww Rose , I so want to read more ,

But love the fact u keep it all abt Tasha , no kidnapper !

It was such a treat toread this SS !

Thank u sooo much for writing it !

I love it ,

Written beautifully , very Tasha style !

Excellent work Rose !

I think now its become a universal truth

That u are MY Fabulous Rose , who can create magic with her dialogues !

Hatts off !

so much still to say fro this FF , u know i am actually at loss for words !

it was just a kind of FF , u want to remember and its makes u belive in power of love and faith and

one thing more sometimes we think k no body cares or no body knows what we are going through but actually they do !

The D talks with himslef , he just dont know how to xpress but he understands them , he knows each and everything N goes through !

LOve ittt !

Hi Rose...don't give me any thorns, please...I know I'm shamefully late. *looks embarrassed but still showing face* That's right...I'm not hiding before letting you know how much I liked the SS. Your Dutta was just great...so was Naku (but you know I just like Dutta better)...and I can't forget how wonderfully you showed the the connection between Tasha ...not just Naku being one with him, but him feeling that emotional bond as well. It took Dutta forever to mirror Naku in this way on the the show so always happy to see him feeling her presence even when she's far away...like she has always felt his presence. And then what a happy ending! Please write more...just be aware that I have a certain reputation that I always end up keeping. 😳

@ kiran ... u know its a pleasure reading ur comments and i wait impatiently for them which is why sometimes i lose my mind when i have to wait for long ...sorry for that ..but i will blame u coz ur comments r so lovely that i become impatient...but after reading ur reason for being late all my temper has cooled down ...i dont believe this that u take so much pain in reading n then giving ur feedback. coming to ur comments well they were FANTASTIC ...so happy to know that u loved the dialogues so much ..thanks ..glad u could feel tashas emotions so well..agree with u the whole SS focussed mainly on tasha n personally i like it that way ...i mean who cares who n why was dutta kidnapped ..the cvs separated them and rose reunited them lol

Rose,

Thanks for the beautifully written SS focusing on Tasha's eternal love and reunion😳
DSP😍

Hi Rosie…😛🤗

*waves ...dont be shock …yes yes its me… *

OMG now I remember, why you were saying…I forget something on forum 😆 This was …n alas im here … ohh crap this time I break the all the records 😆 Mimi also commented😲👏 … n im …dang🤢… Rose …this SS is very special for me and dis one wil always remain in my sweet memories coz of awesome n awesomest Tasha story of unite 😳n even coz of one big thing I made record here of late comment s…arrrhhh too bad…wil never forget dis…der ws a tym wen I ws first in all ur updated…arrhh n nw…but you know naa last few days I was disturbed so I forget everything…n didn't even read anything :( … but I know what u will say ..lol but im ready …ok m all ears😳 …chal shuru ho jaa…karle apne shauk poore..u know😉😳

But b4 that wud luv to comment …so here cum sonee apni position of late commenter or shud I say last commenter ko barkarar rakhte huye…comment karne ke liye pitch oops post pe tayyar 😆

Ahhh …Back to patil niwas …wow🥳… finally doctor in PN 😆…haila sach me…hum bhi nahi soye kitne dinon se sirf Dutta saab ke liye *sigh* 😳😆… wen wil AS leave her aayi jagdambe alone :) …😆 "dutta hum haar gaye , haar gaye tere pyar aur nakku ke vishwas ke aaghe dutta hum haar gaye , haar gaye tere pyar aur nakku ke vishwas ke aaghe" soo True writer….hum bhi haaar gaye dutta ke pyar ke aage..eee…now just wish ke Nakku ke vishwas ki tarah humara vishwas bhi……. *ahen aheun*😛😉…

Go on dutta …aur uss insaan ko bhi mat chodana jiski wajah se humari yeh halat huyi hai…ohh I missed his action, his anger, haaye miss my sher …aur bhi jiyada *sniff sniff*

Thank god finally AS sed yeh sab toh baad main bhi dekha ja sakta hai philhaal tum dono aaraam karo , hum dono chalte hain" and here our Tasha all alone…😍

" kyun itna pyar karti hai ki tere pyar ke aage *pyar* shabd bhi chota padh jaata hai." OMG…felt lyk D sed dis line and MR's voice rang ..ohhh carp..hope im not crazy…lol…wow such a beautiful line Rose👏…u did it again writer👏 ... " tu dabbe paon meri zindagi main aayi aur kab meri duniya ban gayi mujhe pata hi nahin chala…………………." Rose dis line for Tasha from LTLians …wow really apt yaar…sach kab who aur humari zindagi ban gaye pata hi nahin chala…missing dem :(fantastic scene Rose… D's words remind me a song..."Tere naam humne kiya hai jivan apna sara sanam" …. hang on… whole para… took my breath away... D's words … *sigh*😍😳

She gave him countless number of reasons to love her while he on the other hand gave her every possible reason to hate him but she ignored them all and just loved him selflessly…Best line to describe DN …isn't It ? dey wer lyk dis through first tasha marriage track …

Hayyee Chaand chand ko nihar raha hai😍…who is better…obviously ours😉 😳… ohh he sed ghantoo tujhse baatein karti thi… ohh its reminds me Sweet tasha… yippee…wer N ws standing near d window n looking at D …n d BG score ws "mera chand mujhe aaya hai nazar"😍..ahhh Golden days of forum…aww ST😭…*sniff sniff* missing sweet tasha …n Tasha a lot …ok ..back to comment…

Rosie D convo wit chand each n evry word I read twice…(don't laugh n im not fused lol coz I luved it dats y I read it twice ) last para is wonderful ...yaar marvelous… maar daala 👏👏👏..Tasha scene n specially Tasha convo as usual superbb…thoda…happy, thoda teary..thoda emotional thoda naughty…n last bit romantic…as a lyk always d end on sweet lyk halwa..yeah Tasha romance❤️😍

This last update had a WOW factor dear👏…I loved it n specially u know all d dialogues…der wer mind blowing …ur an amazing writer yaar…while d reading literally felt lyk whole scenario running on screen…WOW…Great job Rosie… u deserve a pat on ur back …shabbash…haan bilkul hasna mat ispe…im damn serious haan…*stern muh* warna next tym I wont comment😈…ok…soo shabbash gal..ur updates wer treat too read yaar…plz keep dem cuming…leah lekin meri baat kaha manti hai tu😒… waste of my talk…😆 arre wait it reminds me …I never told u to write anything..nor u did wen I told u…crap…dis is very bad… we wil disscuss later on dis…lol …anyway …still im late but i loved it …n I knw u wil forgive me…coz I knw u…ur d most innocent person on forum😉😆… "hum hai hum hai humi hai sanam tere humraaz"😎…last n8 heard dis song so try to fit in dis situation 😆…

OK Great SS dear👍🏼👏 👏👏…I always felt True Tasha essence in ur updates😳…Thank u very much for dis…n I luv u for dis❤️…🤗

Arree mazak mazak me comment jaada hi lamba ho hi gaya…awww😳

...I beat Sonee! I beat Sonee! OMG...Rose, have you recovered from the shock of this...and the return of you-know-what-and-what? 🤣 **hides from Soneejee**