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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update Hamlet, continue writing👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH Hamlet

i soooooooooo love it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😊 many thanks to gracious friends who pressed like and commented on previous OS Dutta's kitchen help out. @ kiran22;mnx;mishez.x;etetnity of luv;shyla;prncz;sara212,dc17_7;ivy11;subii;meghaparti;buttbhai;spandana11...much encouraged...here's the next onex
The Party/ part 1
Dressing up
Dutta smoothes his black waist coat with his perfectly manicured fingers,as he positions himself before the mirror dresser.He examines the face of the man in the mirror,and the corners of his mouth drop in his typical smug yet shy smile.This burly tough Dutta is undergoing an over haul. He arranges an escaped strand of hairback in place above his forehead,and contemplates,here he is grooming himself for a party,as opposed to meeting his underworld requirements.The world seems to smile at him,his status quo is modified , much to his liking!
For this Dutta Bhau is not the thinker;philosopher,statesman or poet,but without a doubt even in his own mind,he stands a lover nowadays! Dutta scratches his stubblewith his fore finger and contemplates,that he was ,and is a simple man,who loves his family,works hard,
and follows set morals.Dutta,considers himself blessed now,for after taking a painful journey
of ultimately accepting real love,he has indeed found it in Nakku. He divorces his reflection
and titlshis head side ways ,as his gaze settles on their bed, he muses theirs is not a carnal love,it cannot be,for he recalls the simmer of the unspoken,untouched moments that
created a ripple between them,that which they themselves were afraid to acknowledge in the past. But now Nakku is his Patni,and he her Pati, hence he accepts approvingly, Dutta can be more forth coming in his ways! For,his love is now his in realty his wife,he justifys to himself. The bow of his top lip ,parts with his lower lip,giving him a slight open mouth look,his eyes shone with the innocence of a young lad ,but equally combine with the hard set semblance of a man,also. Nakku now share his bed;his room;space; his life!.
Dutta,continues to and muse,but he raises his left eye brow to steer him back to task. He unscrews the cap of Emporio after shave,pours a few drops on his broad palms,and pats it on his grommed stubble face.He then reaches out for the cologne and sprays his chest and neck with a few colonge laden squirts. He continues to linger before the mirror, observing himself,for any shortcomings with his look, alongside he continues to muse, who would have predicted in the past that Dutta Shreeram Patil would be currently awaiting his wife to finish her taiyaar hona session! , the bow of his upper lip stretched into a tiny smile.
He fondly exhales a little air and plummes his chest, and deduces,after all this is the first time she will be going with her Saab to a party outside PN!
Saab,utters Nakku shyly,he turns around and his eyes behold her,the complete package,he is slightly taken aback,and he again sucks some air as his mouth opens once again.Dutta
starts to fidget with his gold ring on his right finger and brings his hands forward,to contain himself. Saab,she addresses him again, mein theek dikhthey hai ? He has no answer for her question, as he surveys her with glazed eye hypnosis. His eyes indulge themselves on her scarlet red and gold sari; the drapes envelope her with immaculate grace and spell out
the subtle curve of her waist and hips,his eyes rove on her pulla which crosses her bosom
rests on her opposite shoulder and falls behind her. Her hair is disciplined,as per usual
in a middle parting braid ,the top part of her face still sporting the short parted fringe that teases her forehead. He experiences hot blood travel through his body,as he craves to hold her in his arms,instead seemingly he struggles to set aside his desire, but soon realizes it is to no avail,and he lowers his hands and walks towards her,as if in a trance.
Saab,Nakku whispers as he stands close to her,he places his finger on her delicate lips,
and softly cups her face in his hands,to study it; he notices her hazel green eyes are inner lined with kajal,that flicks upwards at the out set corners,he is reminded of a doe's eyes.He bends ,to gently brush his lips against her closed eye lids,he is careful not to prickle her soft skin with the bristle above the bow of his top lip. His lips gradually soar to the black wings of her eye brows, and then descend to her pink glowing,soft cheeks.He moves his head back and looks at her slightly rouged lips and bends his head down to feel her mouth with his,but she puts her soft palm against his burning lips.Saab, koi ah jai ga,aur daair bhi ho rahi hai! Dutta shakes his head ,draws his breat,guiltily bites his lower lip and straightens up,and looks at her completely smitten and besotten by her beauty! He looks at her pallu which has moved and reveals a hint of her cleavage, he curtly says,Nakuu ye pallu theekh kar lai, khahin party mein...Nakku did'ent wait for him to finish his sentence his countenance said it all,the compressed mouth,the slight tilit of his head to one side and the
distant narrow gaze. Nakku moves to the cupboard to find a safety pin and he watches her hands secure the pallu in place above her shoulder,and he gives her a softer complacent look.
... to be continued more interesting bits of dressing up.watch this space😛
to continue this section go to page 4,after matthew's post; apologies for faffing about had to stop due to guests😳
Edited by Hamlet53 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me firsttt

yahooo

Hamlet this was exceptional

this was trotally u , the way u write or the way ur earlier post seems to be !

amazing !

Dutta thoughts, the way he is dressing up himself

his self realization talks alove it

and when naku enters in the scene

the way he looked at her

not missing an inch

he was scanning her in the most adorable way

and the way he kissed her and most importantly the way he tells her to cover herslef and the way Naku obeys !

i love it

as im late in commenting

im running to pg 4 for new update :D
Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
I'm sorry I never commented on your stories. I've ready every part and the one before. All I can say is wonderful, amazing, addictive. Write the next part soon. I want to find out what Dutta does next. Please, please, please update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

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continued from page3, : The party part1 ########################
Dressing up continued...
Dutta saunters to their bed and sits on the edge facing the dresser mirror,as if prediccts her next move.Nakku moves like a nymph towards the dresser,opens a drawer and carefully takes out the jewelery box ,she picks up a pair of gold drops ,and sees his reflection staring at her,completely enamoured by her beauty.She holds up the ear drops,but he screws up his noseslightlyand shakes his head. Nakku picks up another pair of earrings ,and shows him,and he bites his lower lip and shakes his head again.Finally she picks up a pair of jhumkees and shows him the pair, through the reflection,his face breaks into a smile,and his eyes twinkle drowsly as he nods his head in affirmation. Nakku holds her ear lobe by one hand while the the threads the jhumki in, Dutta gets up lovingly and nods his head to Nakku's reflection ,as if to seek her permission,and on her smiling,he picks up the other jhumki and carefully puts it in the other ear. Before sitting down on the bed again,he bends from behind her and plants a kiss on the top her head,in way of approval. She smiles and puts on her mangalsutra
Eventuallyshe adorns her arms with bangles,and a fascinated Dutta stands ,as she stands too,and strums his fingers on her red and gold bangles that move on her arms.
Nakku looks up at his eyes, indictative of longing to love her, and swiftly ,but gently says Saab,bas mein taeyaar hai, sirf bag dhoondna hai!
Dutta thinks ,there we go,women after 10 hours of preening ,still not enough. Theek hai Nakku ,he replies as he sits back on the bed ,this time reclining his head against the
head board,as he continues to drool over her! She goes to their cupboard ... he looks at her beauty that is crowned by simplicity, he muses it is this simplicity that always leaves a lasting impact on him.from yhe day he first saw her to this day! He meditates how exclusive she is when he compares her to Kala glamour! He dismisses his thought and moves on to Nakku's uncontrived innocence that holds him captive.
Saab,Nakku interrupts his thinking train, ye bag theek hai? she asks and shows him the gold clutch bag,he presses his hands on the bed to raise himself from the bed and answers haan Nakku ab chal bhi,aur kitna time laagayegi taeyaar hona mein? he asks
irritatingly.
Bas Saab sirf sandal pehni hai ! KYA! he is about to holler, but stops at he impact it has on her for she briskly goes to the cupboard,pulls out a pair of stilleto heels, swing the loops on her fingers,in front of him.questioningly. Dutta ,folds his upper, and raises an eye brow at her, quizzing her Nakku khabhi aisi jotti phene hai tu nain? In answer fits her toes in the stilletoes and pulls the slings up above her heels.
Dutta watches the spectacle bemused and commands her, aacha tu mera pas chal kar aah Nakku, she smiles with careful steps of geared confidence and painstakingly walks towards her Saab. He wore a smile as he watched herjerky gait, and he stretches his lips and jerks his head, just in time before she got to him ,to catch her in his arms,preventing a fall and a twist of her ankle! She gently beat his chest and complains Saab aap haans rehan ho! Dutta replies as he balances her,Nakku hansoon nai tu kya karoon? jab tu iss joti mein chal nahi sakte tu phenaey ki kya zaroorat hai?
he excclaimed, but he could also see his Nakku was near to a fluster so he gives her a peck on her fore head to make amends!
She gently pushhes him away and proceeds to the cupboard again and gets a pair of gold kitten heeled sandals which she slips, on so as to show him. Dutta declares haan ye theekh hai Nakku , ab chal,and reaches for her arm to chivey her to leave for the part,but she runs to the dresser again ,this time to squirt herself with the perfume he likes on her,Diamonds by Armani... Right decides Dutta ,and walks towards her with defiance, Nakku tu chalte hai ya phir mein,and he starts to gather her in his arms...Saab
,she wrangles free Chalein,chalien!, he drops his hands and walks out of his~ their room... and she follows him demurely...
end of the dressing up part 1 of the party. friends will up date with The Party Part2xxx hammie
Nakku
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is how i roll :D

hehehheh 2 times in a row :D

btw done commenting on part 2 :D

Oh hammie

loved it :D

i was just adoring the whole situation u created

D sitting on bed and looking at Naku
nad make her decide what earrings she should wear

and even make her wear one ,

she choosing bag and the way when she first wears the stiletto

and D laugh on the way she walks

smallest things which gave u so much pleasure

i loved it :D

waiting for the party part 2:D

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Read both parts today and they were amazing, Hamlet.

Dutta's reflections and silent musing while getting ready for the evening out... his black waist coat and perfectly manicured hands..his deliberate movements..OMG.I am in seventh heaven.😍

Tasha scenes ..beauty in simplicity, passion is purity..(I don't know if that makes any sense but that's how I feel) Its sublime but still retains a down to earth perspective.

Adore this indulgent lover-husband Dutta. 😳 Are there men like him in real the world? Don't know😕...But for us its only Dutta Shriram Patil..the complete man.

Thanks and keep writing please👍🏼



Edited by ivy_11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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better late than never...i am still catching up but...i loved dutta in kitchen..so cute na..roops style...i'll catch up and comment in detail...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very well written and very cute and romantic to ,your writing style very good waiting for next part dear jaldi update karo😳

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