batasha the party final part5 page 8

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--- continued from "washed away in love" p.3 foruml ltl
Dutta,Nakku,Baji... shopping!
WhenDutta comes out of the shower,into his bedroom while his red towel rests on his squeaky clean shiny broad shoulders, he presses his thumb to secure the mulitcoloured towel around his waist, and proceeds to comb his hair in place ,checks himself approvingly in his dressing room mirror... kaise batiyen kyoun thujh ko chaien yara... he hums as he adornes his ears... what a wash out in the bathroom with Nakku !...he looks up at himself in slight defeat with his lips pouted ..yeh Nakku bhi ekdum erhy hai..🤢... he pats his emporio cologne on his face ..pas to aye gi naa ..cologne kam dekha de😃 Saab! he decides not to turn around at her call but continues to check her out via the mirror,as she responds to his gaze he continues to slide his watch and ring on the relevant body parts...Saab ,he can see she is😳 as she can see he is bare chest and bare legs as ,well...Nakku lowers her eyes..Tu phir ahgaye hai, bol mein sun raha hoon... Saab meri sari bheeg kai hai ,badalani hai... haaan tu badaal laye Nakku...mein nai tera haat to nahi pakar rakha! Ssaab.. aap?.. Acha ! ja raha hoon mein... and he turns to face her looking straight into her eyes and moves his head from left to right and back to thea centre😡...Saab woh apk ke kaprehay? she looks at his waiting to be worn clothes and walks to offer his attire... tu rahney de mein laye ga ..ab itna behi baacha nahi hai main!..Nakku watches him sit on the edge of the bed.. his face looks like a sore thumb ! one at at time he shoves his long hairy legs into the pyajama😉 bottoms ...then defiantly his eyes still fixed oh her he stands up in front of her and she watches him pull up his bottoms to fit Bappa.she sayaround his torso...she leaps forward to pass him his kurta...kha na Nakku mein kar laye ga ..to kar laga!...😛 ... Nakku thinks oh Deva he is in such a big huff ,kyan ki mein shower mein nahi gaye saab kai saat😳... she thinks he is a such a big oaf... dil karta hai ek zor sai thump doon back par😕... toon nai kuch bola Nakku? nahi Saabb,mein kya boli ghi? .. she watches him put on his kurta,he's left his buttons undone... and he watches her with a stiff neck and slight rock from left to right...she moves lovingly close to him and reaches up to his buttons,his hands reach up and gently grab her tiny hands as he pulls her towards him,with a teeny weeny smile, she can smell his skin dabbed with his cologne... ab colonge ka kaam chalo 😉 he thought... she moves her face to one side,as he lowers his face on hers... and decides to rest his half open lips on her ear ,with the message...rehne dai Nakku button ko, bahut gharmi hai...! 😊 she moves back from him.. haan Saab...😳 oof she thinks got away this time! talk about being hot blooded! she can feel he's looking at her aye Nakku kya sooch rahi hai? kuch nahi Saab.. she smiles broadly😊 as she feels him walk past her ..why has he suddenly stopped near her she muses ..waise Nakku tu yai maat sahmaj kai mein teekh hoon... pun Saab mein nai kya kya hai? ... Nakku tu sab janti hai tune kya kya hai ... she feels his shoulder jerk her slightly as she watches him leave the room...😕 oh..Bappa mera sher ko shaant kar de s loudly as she finds her pink sari, his favourite and drapes it around her tiny delicate body...
As Dutta alights the stairs from his room to PN foyer Baji welcomes him kya bahu! kya baat hai bhau😛 ... Dutta stops ,stiffens his back and neck and throws an Iam not amused look at Baji... kya hooah? ...tu ne pahlay mujhe en kaproon mein nahi dekha kya? dutta says... Baji says bahu baat karprahay ki neehi... teri shakaal ki hai bahooo... kyon meri shakaal pai kuch lekha hai kya? Dutta retorts back patting his beared face Baji with full twinke+dimple ho bahu leka hai nai ,and lapses into song mujhe pyar to hai tohjse hai baa...mujhe pyar to hai thohjse hai baa ..hai baa... chal bas kar Baji nahin to kaan kay nechay kehaanj kai dai gha ultay haat ka!! Dutta says forming his punch😡...Baji ducks😃 kya bahu tum bhi?..Nakku sees them fooling around, smilingly she thinks nothing has changed between these two DOSTANA! as she comes down the stairs, Baji turns to her...aye Nakku! teray ko Aye Sahib nay kaam diya hai.. Dutta saunters off to the dining room table and helps himself to his orange juice...kya kaam hai Baji ? nakku asks...yeh list hai nakku aye ki, aur ye hai Roops ki...still sipping his orange juice he calls out Baji ghari nakkal contacter se milna janna hai, agay he der ho gaye hai! Bahu Aye Sahib ka hukoom hai ki tum ko Nakku ko shopping pa lay kar jana hai tells Dutta with a churlish smile...Dutta stops kya😲 ? tera dehmaak tu theek hai? utters Dutta.. Bahu woh mein...mutters Baji helplessly..Dutta looks at Nakku with a little smile... he feels like giving her a tight hug right now🥱 Dutta jaag ja ,tu to gya kum se ..he thought to himself😳 Baji mein nahin...before he can finish he sees Aye Sahib come in and he hears her say... Dutta aj kam nahi tu Nakku ko shopping kay laye lai kar jaiey ga ,woh kahein bhi nahi jati..pun Aye Dutta pleaded.. bus mein nai khai diya to khai diya! Dutta compresses his lips sheepishly ,he knows he doesn't have a leg to stand on and he looks at Nakku , and gives her a semi growl look, seeing he was giving in she is holding a semi suppressed smile beam on her lips and eyes Dutta's expression changes into a definite sour puss! ...oh Bappa Nakku thinks as she checks his compressed downwards slanting lips.. he'll probably sulk all the way there and back. Nakku looks at Baji helplessly and says..Baji tu bhi jaal jab mai shopping kare gi tab tu Saab ka khayal rakh naa! .. mujhe kesi ka khayal rakhna ki zaroorat nahi ,mein anpa khyal rakh sakta hai! Dutta mutters like a loser! Baji agrees beamingly ..ho Nakku apun chalay gha mazza ai ga! ... Dutta glares at him!!
Dhinchak! Dhinchak, shouts Baji as Dutta gets behind the wheel of his jeep..Nakku looks at his face tenderly and he looks away side ways... Jal ab kya sooch rahi haih baat jha aah gay mera saath he says with a twisted side ways smile... Nakku clambers into the jeep and Baji finds a seat behind them..Dutta looks at her again while biting his lower lip from the side... Kitne pas pun itni pas bhi nahi Nakku... he thinks looking at her eyes... Teray mast mast do nain ,mera dil ka laye gaye chaaien ,mera dil ka laye gaye chaaien..teray mast mast do nein...sang Baji from the back,while Dutta drove... mera dil kaaa.. Baji carried on😉 singing...looking at the two of them ...thujhe film mein bheerti kara doon kya Bahi...bohaut awaz nikal rahi hai teri ..quipped Dutta as Baji carried on... Kya bahu tum bhi kooj bhi boldatay ho... mein tu mahool theekh khar raha hai...retorts Baji... Dutta does a sharp turn around the corner and Nakku jerks on to his left shoulder and the wind blows her hair tendrils in his face,briefly, and desperately, daringly he kisses them..hoping that Baji is'nt looking Dutta is satisfied tha'ts not the case for every so often he is checking his rear mirror.. the tendrils continue to dance on his face, as Nakku is still reclining on his shoulder...ye tera aithir hai... behakta hoin .. mekhta hoinn.. he closes 🥱his eyes for a split second..as Nakku straightens up to regain her posture... awwh Dutta thought😛 maaza ah raha tha! ...he mutters to her,Nakku kitni defa tu jeep mein baathi hai ,durvaaza pakhar kar nahi baath sakti? he looks at her, and thinks😛 i bet she likes falling on me! she senses it and looks up at him with a cocky,cheeky smile...he draws his eyes back on the road and thinks..Nakku aaj Baji na hota to jeep rokh kay teri iss nazar ka jaab deyta 😉 Dutta blushes at his thoughts and presses the brake pedal as a few PWadi women approach his jeep to offer salutations to them.. salaam bahu...he raises his joined hands...one of the women turns to the other...Bahu ki baiko kitni sundar hai! Nakku blushes as she hears the remark and Dutta squares his chest slightly,and lowers his eyes shly ...woh tu hai mausi woh tu hai chirps Baji!... Baji! calls Dutta list phar..ho bahu..Aye nai badaam aur mava mung waiya hai...Kya? roars Dutta ghar mein sara nukar mar gayay thay jo hummien janna parh raha ha? Saab shant ho jayo..kaka choti par gayian hain... Dutta seems embarassed..samjha karoo na bahu says Baji😛 Nakku kay saath tum shopping ,tu pyar bartha hai bahu... thats it Dutta lets go off the steering from his left hand and reels around aiming at Baji's head... Baji😃 ducks! and Nakku squeals Saab ghari control..! haan to ab tu mujhay ghari behi chalna sikhaigee 😉 Dutta nodded?
As they progressed further towards the shops ,Dutta fixes his rear mirror and steals a longing ❤️ glance at her eyes wow Nakku he thinks... meet my eyes in the rear mirror and we can talk the talk,and forget about Baji... as if she reads his thoughts she looks in the rear mirror and catches his narrow ,almost intoxicated gaze ,and their thoughts become one😳... Dutta puts the focus back on the road ahead and gently bites his lower lip back in to his mouth..Nakku stares his profile, his intent eye,the defined bridge of his nose,the curve of his lip and the groomed strong structure of his jaw...❤️ she wishes she could touch his face ..as if he feels her warm gaze he turns and looks at her smiling and she lowers her eyes with a caught out expression😲 ... Baji looks at the two and says Nakku kya apna bahu patil wadi ka sher ek dum jorru ka ghulam ho gya hai ... Dutta growls again Baji chup kar! teri shaadi bhi karani pareheygi ..thujhe line pay lanay kay liya ... kya bahu retorts Baji tum to akdum gholi ka mafiq choot jatay ho...😛 Nakku intervenes Baji Saab ko tang mat kar ... Baji touches his ears in mock apology... saab ap ghari pe dhanian karo says nakku.
They stop at the local grocery store and Dutta looks at Nakku cocking his head...nidicating her to get off... Saab ap nahi jalo ghay? ... Kyon Nakku mein aunder ja kay achar daley gha kya? ... Baji giggled at Dutta's remark...before Dutta finIshes the shop keeper comes rushing to the jeep... Dutta bahu aap meri dukan par ayay ap ki to dain hai.baho, kaise ho ka ka dutta says ..aunder ahao bahu ...Dutta decides to oblige and swings his legs one at a time and walks towards the shop entrance... Nakku smiles chalo ab woh Saab ka baazzo tham sekti hai😊...he watches her tiny hand move towards his arm but he shocks her by stretching his broad palm and catching her warm hand in it😲... Baji ghari ka khayal rakh mein ata hai... Baji goes Dhinchak dhinhcak! and Dutta reels around and darts him an icy look😳 that freezes Baji ...once in the shop much to Nakku's dismay he lets go of her hand and puts his hands in his pockets...jal ab jo laina hai Nakku jaldi se lai mujhe aur bhi kam hain he says firmly... Nakku buys the almonds and dried fruits that Aye Sahib asked for,as she waited for the goods to be packed she catches him checking her out... Dutta stokes his bearded face his eyes fixed upon her ...she is so stunning and delicate from head to toe ..he thinks if only he can sweep her in his arms right now,throw her in my parked jeep and drive off with her ...any where..some where...😍 ...Saab paise? haan ..he moves over and pays ... Bhau phir se aina ...zoroor ka ka and they both start to leave the shop, he takes the bags from her hands, and hungrily reaches out for her hand once again this time sqeezing it gently...Nakku winces and he lets go off her hand as they approach the jeep... Baji ab aur kya laina hai? bahi ladeez ki dukaan par jana hai... kya ? mein nahi jayega ladeez ki dukoon par Baji... Saab, Nakku addresses him gently by putting her hand on his, which is resting on the gear stick...Saab Roops ki cheezein hain tu jana tu parha ga ..he opts for silence and revs the accelerator and shortly stops at the appropriate store ..he mutters ab mein jeep mein bathay ga inteezar karoon gha...Baji tu Nakku kai saath ja...he looks at Nakku who looks upset ...kya hoya nakku? sab wo mein nay bhi koch laina tha ...aap chal te to acha hta...😊 ooh he thought she would never ask , with a narrow eye twisty smile... he jumps out off the jeep the three proceed to the shop... Dutta places his hand gently on her back softly feeling her skin above her sari blouse...she looks up his face with her big doe eyes and he looks down at her beautiful face pouting his upper lip... once inside Baji reads the list ..lipsticks dakhien...the sales man puts some on display ,as he looks at the preety woman ...Dutta looms from behind and stands close to Nakku...the man realizes whose wife she is and starts to show other goods...Nakku chooses a few for Roops and Baji smiles approvingly... Dutta watches the proceedings and gently scrathes his beard ...Saab yai lipstick kaise hai mera liya? ... he looks at her beautiful lips and thinks...she realizes what he is silently thinking and she blushes... nahin Nakku thujhe lipstick ki koi zaroorat nahi...waise agar tunay laynay hai tu rahk lai... 😔 oh Nakku thinks I wish he was a bit trendy and imaginative...pappoo hai saab! ...he walks off to the bangles section where his fingers play with green and red bangles on the display rack... Nakku comes to his side and looks up at him with completely enamoured looks, Saab ye chorriyan? he smiles .. the attendant on seeing her says mein pahna dataien hoon...an irate Dutta growls nahin.. us ki koi zaroot nahi main phanaega! and the man recedes with fright... Dutta gets hold of her soft hand and sqeezes it to slide the bangles in pairs on to her soft hand till his hearts content❤️...Nakku enjoys his grip and loves the look on his face oh Saab what a jaan you are she thinks... Baji looks on at them fondly, Bahu... he says pointing to his watch... the three start to make their way out of the shop ..Dutta gropes for her palm again till he gets it and Nakku willingly entwines her fingers in his as they approach the jeep...he lets go of her hand reluctantly...
Finally the three reach PN ..Dutta cocks his head at Nakku ...nakku tu chal mein aur Baji kaam khatam kar kay atay hain... Nakku watches them drive off... what a lovely day she had... now she has to wait for him to come back😭... yes wait she will for her Saab her one and only Dutta Saab ...
AND THE WAIT GOES ON!!!
Dutta and Nakku maybe stopped by colors...but they can never stop our imagination!! that belongs to us and where there is imaginations there are dreams...so dream on friends! hamlet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update, Hamlet.
Dutta, Naku and Baaji have been depicted true to their character...I could actually visualize the whole thing. Loved DSP's wickedness, Naku's shyness and Baaji's attempts to pull Dutta's leg.

Romance at its subtle best.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ha ha ha HAmlet...u had me in splits in many places..nakku says pappoo hai saab...and baaji the evergreem KMH..woow...SHer of patil wadi buying badaaam and dry fruits...oMG...i can't stop myself from laughing...it was outstanding..

hey, i have started a thread called yun hota to kya hota...here i want every one to write a small scene between Tasha,Batasha,Duji...anyone in such a manner that it looks like it was a edited scene of LTl..Here's the link to the thread...Plz u make contributions like these so that we can have our own den of Tasha memories..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/laagi-tujhse-lagan/1657363/yun-hota-toh-kya-hota-pg26-5-5-11-lekz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH hamlet

dude this is not u !
means this is hilarious
i was laughing my ass off the whole time

Dutta naku thinking
hhehehehhehhe
as if u are in thier minds

love it
very nice
i really enjoyed it !

and one suggestion posting ur scenes in new post will make alot of readers confuse
if u continue and i wish u continue
cuz u just said KEEp on dreaming so make all the scenes in one post !
great job Hamlet !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Hamlet,

nice update😊...... i am still laughing.......

in the first update, it was so not D...... like someone said, it was more of MR kind...... but in this post, in some scenes its very easy to imagine D........ mmm............. good u brought in baji........

D seems to b singing quite a lot😆😆.......

nice update......... keep writing.......😊

tc
divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi hamlet 😛 nice update .. you had me rolling too,, dutta going shopping for badam and dry fruits .. hey u also took them to buy bangles and lipsticks ,, 😉.. dutta gettign "J" and not letting the shopkeeper put on the bangles ,, 😆 /waitign for the next update , enjoyed reading this 😛
got see a glimpse of naughty bhajji 😆 raj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Is this like an ff? Mujhe bhi padna hai..I'll try and read ASAP..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ suvi
nehi yaar I WAS MISSING THEM TWO,TU MAINE SOOJHA WHY NOT MAKE AN OWN SCENES TYPE OF THING...I USUALLY DONT WRITE THIS SORT OF STUFF , BUT DO READ THE FIRST ONE ITS CALLED WASHED AWAY IN LOVE; i asked people what they thought writing wise and a few friends said yes so i did the second shopping one....please let me know your opinion ...also what could the next one be about..... its more on the humorous side ..yaar bahut ansoo shed kar rahe hain..thought could do with some naughty fun..... parenha zaroor xxx chas hammie
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very good Hamlet , continue writing😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey hamlet

very beautiful update......love it.

as u said colors can't stop our imagination regarding tasha and we are enjoying our tasha os,ff and many post with our imagination

love it

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