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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very well written,good continue😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very well written, enjoyed a lot pls continue and update very soon
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Foreword: After a week of inertia of Dutta/Nakku..Thuje Bhaul Diya!; here Iam again,a victim of the figment of my imagination.....

Dutta's kitchen help out!
Dutta stirs from his nightly slumber ,and stretches his arm to feel his wife's presence,with distaste he finds her amiss, ab ye aradhi khana jali gayi? he wonders, sleep makes his eye lids heavy so he lays back his head on the pillow...sara maaza kharab kar diya is Nakku nai,🥱he quietly moans to himself🤢. Taking a deep breathe he folds one of his arms under his head ,while the other fondly shuffles up and down at the space where Nakku was meant to be. Dutta bites his lower lip and his face flushes with the surgence of blood to his cheeks, he thinks helplessly ..aaj tu sunday hai Aye mandir gaye ho gi Baji,Roops,Leela Sudarshan, 12 baji sa pheli nahi uthaney wali! mein aur Nakku baisteer pe hi waqat kuzar saktey thay 😡 ,par is Nakku nai to dahmaak ka dahiyi kar dala!,he fumes.
Suddenly he swings his legs of the bed ,steadys himself,proceeds to the bathroom,splashe his face with water,fingers his hair in place and trudges towards the door.Dutta consoles himself ,mujhe pata hai Nakku ,tu is waqat khan hogi😃 ,meray kamra kay bad tera mun pasand kamara ..rasoi!,he smiles at his intelligence .He descends the stairs quietly as possible ,lest he stirs people in the house from their lye in. Lazily he walks towards the kitchen and stands in the doorway,arms stretched holding the door posts,wearing a smile, he looks at her his patni,his Nakku ,his eyes danced with delight as he feasts on her beauty,while she stands at the stove in the middle of preparing something! Nakku he calls out to her gently....Saab ap adher?, he continues to pause at the door,but gradually in answer to her query ,he lets go of the door posts and simply, replies hai Nakku mein adher ,kyon ka tu jo mera pas nehi thi ,with a twinkle in his smile😛..... oh oh.Bappa she thinks Saab has something up his sleeve,and she lowers her head and smiles,busily... it is this smile he thinks that crucifys him time and again! Dutta gently sucks in air and walks towards her, he turns her away from the stove to face him ,holds her face gently in his large palms ,looks tenderly into her wide eyes ,and softly plants a kiss on her forehead,and closes his eyes... he contiues to gently feel the sides of her face,while she gets hot in her face...Saab woh,yeh kya khar rahain hai aap?😳 she was stupid enough to ask... thujhe choom raha hoon Nakku ,koi shak? patni hai tu meri,he reaffirms. As,Dutta moves his face close to hers, Nakku puts her hand gently but firmly against his thumping chest to stop him..Saab koi aah jai ga.. ,he puts his fore finger on her lips gently and with narrow eyes fixed on her, he retorts giving her assurance, aaj sunday hai Nakku saab soorahain and he tries to come close to her again..😳Oh Bappa thinks Nakku and quickly moves away from him and the stove! Dutta watches her helplessly,with his arms hanging by his sides and he rubs his fingers in abject dissapointment.
Dutta sniffs gently, lowers his eyes and turns his face to one side...Saab,Nakku says softly
and Dutta looks at her with wide ,innocent baby looks ,with open mouth, giving his mouth a pout.... ab ko kuch chaiya tha Saab?,he thought it best not to answer Nakku's ridiculous question....haan Nakku chai peeni hai,milay gi? Haan Saab abhi banatey hai mein says Nakku,and she reaches for the pot to fill it with water,he comes close to her near the sink and puts his hand on hers ,on the tap and says gently...aur mein teri madaat karey ga! Saab ap,Nakku questions....Haan mein tera saath kaam kerayga,he reaffrims, pun Saab ...😕Nakku protests...bak ,bak ,maat kar Nakku,chal bata kya karna hai ...she knew he was not going to budge... Saab gas jalaoi aur pani ,aag per rakho.....pata hai Nakku ..pher dhood,cheeni,pati daloon,hai na Nakku,he says smilingly... tera Saab ko intni to akul hai! he announces. She looks at him and smiles ,he was still in his night clothes,crumpled white kurta,with his collar completely undone revealing his curly black chest hairs, she lowers her eyes shly,as if recalling something!
Dutta,stands with his posterior resting against the sink,his arms folded ,as both him and Nakku await the boil of the water. He looks at her ,as mischief dances in his eyes and a cheeky smile rests on his closed mouth,he takes a breathe in ,and muses..issay pas kaise bulaoon? ,suddenly he says Nakku meri ankh mein kuch hai, and with that he starts to rub his eye..zara dekhey gi...haan Saab ,and Nakku moves towards him sheepishly, and places one hand on his head and the other underneath his eye... she was'nt expecting to find anything there, so she says .kuch nahi hai Saab...and as she moves away to add the milk ,sugar and tea leves to the boiling water on the stove, and lingers at the stove for a few moments...Dutta,embraces her from behind and snuggles his nose in her silky tresses....Oh Baapa here he goes again ,panics Nakku...Saab nahi bas.. Nakku he mumbles in her soft ear ..kahain tu peechalay jaanam mein ustaad tu nahi thi?, har baat pe mujhe tok detay hai...nahin Saab she turns around and moves away from him and the turned off stove! Dutta,follows her and holds her by her arms and looks straight into her slightly frightened eyes, moves his face close to hers and says.. Nakku thujhe pata hai na tera Saab ustadoon ka ustad hai! ...Pun Saab she returns shly ye resoi hai, humara kamraa nahi.... he looks at her with a little shock,for her answer and thinks it fit to say....ghup! patni hai tu Dutta ki, Aye Nakku! he continues in mock anger... mera haq banta hai tera par,har kamaray mein, her jigga ,her waqt... Dutta teray se pyar karta hai!, she smiles at his words,and strokes his face ,while he holds her hand and places it next to his lips tenderly. Chalo Saab chai pee lo! he sips the tea she offers him and singes his lower lip, and yelps a tiny bit..Kya hoa Saab she says... hoont jal gya,he says innocently, oh no she thinks she's not going to fall for his pranks, and reaches out for a glass of cold water and says ..ye thurah sa pee lo Saab theek ho jaye ga! .with a wicked grin he says to her iss se kuch nahi hoga Nakku!
Once he finishes his tea he says to Nakku..ab aur bata kya kara hai..rehaanay do Saab ,but seeing that he was coming towards her again,and he was keen to continue to help her she says.... cahalo aap anay lai sandwich bana lo, and she gives him two pieces of bread and gives him a knife to trim the crusts, on seeing the knife his eyes twinkle ,and with a quick flair of his knife in hand he weilds the knife on the pieces of bread.... Saab she says checking his enthusiasim ,dahaan se laag jai gi... he stops and looks her in eye and retorts back aye Nakku ab tu mujhe chakoo jalna bhi sukhai gi!😡 , he is happy to see that she jumps a little at his mini stroop! nahi saab she says,leaving 😉him to it.Nakku moves towards the fridge to get the butter, and with a cheeky smile he calls out to her from his task😛 Nakku thora mukhaan mujhe bhi laga da....she wanted to call back to him Saab ap to mukhaan ki beghaar bhaut chikneey ho!😆 but she thought it best not to give him any fancy ideas. She comes back to him and takes the knife from him to butter the bread and half it in 4 triangles , just the way he likes it. Dutta watches her completing the job and dusts his hands with satsifaction..good he thinks now ,and he walks towards her with narrow eyes. On finding her he holds her by her shoulders, and lovingly says to her Nakku tu duniya ki saab se sundar patni hai, she closes her eyes and he bends his head to gently brush them with his lips....aur tera dil ,duniya mein saab se sundar dil hai,he moves his hand to touch the placement of her heart,but shly puts his hand back on her shoulder, realizing that he would make her feel awkward!
Kya Bahu! interrupts Baji ,mein aap ke kamra mein gya tha ,pun aap udher aach nahi thain.
Dutta/Nakku move away from each other abruptly. Dutta😡 growls at Baji tu yahan kya kar raha ? woh Bahu says Baji cheekly, tum ko yaad delana tha ki shaam ko Mamon seth ki ghar pe party hai,tumko,Nakku ko,aur mujhe ko bulaiya hai ,tu janna to hoga! Dutta ask's
khis cjeez ka jashan hai? Baji says uske beti nain university pass ki hai issy ki party hai...kya Bahu bhaut item hoon gay wahaan par!!
Haan sunliya hai 😡 grwols Dutta abhi yahaan se ja. Baji looks at Nakku and says chai mila gi? Dutta glares at him tu nay chai kab se peeni shoro kar dey hai Baji..jata hai ki doon ghooma ki ultay haat ka😡.
Baji makes a quick exit. Dutta turns to Nakku,shly ..kaam to khatam hogya hai ,ab chaal kamra mein chaltein hain thora aram kar latien hain.... aaj Sunday hai😉 !
next bit aff to the party...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me first

awesome update dear

love it
so dutta is very naughty but love him in this way
baaji kabab mein haddi like always and aaj sunday oh wow how much dutta thinks

but above all

love it
great update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi Hamlet,

nice update...... a very different dutta😊....... dutta not giving up n nakku not giving in😊......

was quite funny reading it..........

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It great to see this lighter side of Dutta ..I adore the mischievous little boy in DSP using everything in the book to get naku to him...and she trying her best keep him from getting his way😆 How I wish the serial had explored these possibilities.

Also, loved the conversation between D and N....Very Dutta-ish and Naku-ish

And Baaji the cute KMH....

Thanks for the interesting update Hamlet .. .eagerly waiting for the next 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey can some1pls tel me wats goin on in here...me also wana join in...feel kinda left out...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ mishiz.
ofcourse my friend,your opinion matters a lot to me...actually if you go back you to page 2 of this thread,right at the bottom I have wrritten a sort of own scene called" Dutta's kitchen helpout" , it is based purely on my imagination and the purpose is to give readers a little relief and laughs,in these times of no tasha! .if want, you can read the first one at page one whichis called" dutta,nakku,baji shopping", if you can spare the time,for it is long....
yes like I said,I would love you read it and know what you think ,friend! I might do another one after all the comments... I am trying to keep them in the same thread.😊 xxhamlet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG hamlet u honey are truely an amazing writer!!!

i totaly love ur writing styl n ur sens of humour....
loved d shower scne...
the bit wer Ds say phir se aandha karege was jus>> LOL
.............n shoping scne was too good....loved d fact dat u da only pereson hu ever said dutta blushed.....it was soooo cuteeee!! i havnt that so far... ever read in any other ltl ff LOL i kno it lil thng...but all those lil thngs mke it evn mor special and always stay in ur heart
d churiyaan wala scne..soo cute..loved hw D acted all possesiv
awww tasha holding hands
baji is such a nautanki!!!
btw wud hav loved to hav seen dutta sing tu jaane na lmaooo!!! hehe



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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh sory 4got 2 say..............

pls do continue soooon...would love to read more... n pls add me to ur pm list







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