FF:Benaam Ek Rishta||discontinued|| - Page 47

Hi, 😉an update after such a long time and its so good..

Really wanted to read somebody elses fiction for a change and stop thinking about mine which just gets annoying after a while.

Really love the way nakusha insists that dutta look after himself..true girl in that sense..never gives up. loved the way she stopped him in his steps..aw that was such a wifey time moment.

Highlight of the update as to be naku's line… "aap toe mere"😉 …and she stops!! Omg I so wanted her to say it!!! come on you know you want too. god shes falling for him and she doesn't even know it. DSP effect is working..!!

Another moment has to be the one..where naku tells dutta that he has to change to make this act of theres more convincing!!! ( kyun..dutta kya soch raha 😆tha!!!!????)hmmm something a little different from dosti I think.

Aw and so dutta becomes friends with jaasi ki raani!! Friendship kam..love syada lag raha hai from duttas side.

Next morning and no ff goes without the kurta button moment..par yaha toe baaji aagayay and his comments at the breakfast table..! embarrassing..

O how cunning😲 naku, tricks dutta into visiting the doctors..chal koi toe aayay joe uski baarabari kar sake.!! And baaji never gives up with his teasing. Party time and I really love the choice of song..(one of my frav…)

Aw I really want them to realize there love for each other quick. Don't take two long on that front because I want those genuine husband and wife moments. And god does naku have a jaasi ki raani side to her in this ff…I think if I was to say something was missing then I think its defo the sher side of DSP. I think nakusha should see that aggressive dominating side of him just once..who knows she might even fall for him then. O another thing i love is ..even though nakusha is so open with him..all jaansi rani and everything..yet she still refers to him as.."aap" that i find so sweet😳

There was so many small moments in this update I really liked to so thank you!!

Jagruti

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

@ mishez..thanks for the reply ok my comments on ur welcum honey

part 1 the text in first person creates a informal personalized angle ,certainly from Nakku's point of veiw.. her send off scene for me spelt ,obvious sudden as is traditional,but it was evident through hr musings that she was unhappy at the liasion..there was certainly an abject helplessness about her and the send off! yep it defo was man d amount of sad songs/poems i had 2 listen/read to get in dat kinda mood..was knda depressing LOL .. yep she was very unhappy about it spesh since she wanted 2 do further studies iin Law... 😳😳

part 3: promo very appropriate selection of viual ,their mariage ,their unacceptance of each other..brought back memories of the rel story LTL1! the captions said it all----will some one save this relationship! or will this non named bond remain unnamed!!!! omg rely?!! am so glad it remindd u of our LTL...wel i ges now its been named as 'friendship' but is it rely...*tun tun tanaaa dramatic music* lol

part 3: nice and lengthy!! that's what an avid reader looks for! ahhh dont u just😉 her waking up in an alien/dutta's bed was sad,real, and yet lightly humorous ,only because she choose to get on with her life. aw ikno...i tried 2 write as if its rely hapened 2 me [god forbid] n how she must be feeling..i personaly wud b feelin very scared n totaly broken but den agen naku had realised dat she had 2 do dis 4 her parntz sake n no point sulking now wen der is no way out rely...😆😆

the scene when he comes to collect her for breakfast ,and her stealing glances at him was quite romantic .you deribed him well through nakku's eyes..haiii aww thnx...das wat our LTL naku use2 do as wel rmmba spesh durin d button wala scne...n who cnt describe dutta?!?!!!

baji and his antics and dialouges as the love guru were very amusing contrasted with dutta's angry reactions and Nakku's blushes!hahah wel wen der is baji der has 2 be his nautanki haina n who can b a beter love guru den our very own baaji😉😆😆😆

what was interesting to learn that he is aware that nakku does't fancy him...yep but den agen u dont hav 2 fancy sum1 2 chk em out right😉😆 who would after all the truths he told her on the SR gadha kehan ka..mahaan bunay chala tha !1 kya kare man gadha jo tehra LMAO

dutta's arriving home fter site injury was so typical of him to look out for othersawww ikno stil wana keep our original dutta/MR alive here wit his usual gadhapan n caring yet authoritative nature

sooo loved the read ..please pm me when you do your updates iam used to your style via my feedbacks haha u mean my essays on ur ff n thnx rely glad u liked it so much...n yh cnt get rid off my style of writin evn in a story...😉 though missy the text was not poiple!!! xxx hammie okay is it jus me bein a lil 2 dumb n dont kno wa poiple is o is it jus a typo..wa do u mean b d las bit bbe😕

Originally posted by: suhana19

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Hey Dear Daya and Missy🤗🤗 Suhana 🤗🤗

Thanx a lot for the longest update i know that was one long update ...clearly my writing just went off on some tangent 😆and PM🤗Loved it ...Superb👍🏼🤗thanks 😃

Omg naku just turned into sherni mode and dutta is all suprised😆...Loved tasha convo and the flow of the story so smooth ...Wow she gave him first aid and feed him too ...Loved that one grain rice wali line😆indeed true😉 of course D's lady love must be sherni na...haha yup that one grain of rice wala line tink had said it in a previous comment and i took it 😆

Awww finally they became friends 😍it wont take time to fall in love na ...waise they wanna fool baaji and others...But our baaji will be baaji ...he knows that something is still missing ...😉 baaji is smart and he gonna do watever it takes to bring em together

Haila naku did all this drama just to take Dutta to the hospital😆...Confusing baaji to ...but is no less to 😆always bugging them ...hehe yes yes ...i honestly cant remember how that idea came to mind but it did 😆

Omg iam in love with last part with the dance and the songs ...iam in heaven😍just mindlowing yaara...Loved to thee core ...i was just imagining it alll ...thank u thank u ...it took me forever just to initiate the whole sequence but once i started ...lol couldnt stop 😳

thanx for lovely and long update ...waiting for the nxt part ...pls jaldi update karo Missy ...Now its ur turn na 😆 glad u liked the length and the update 😳 yes now plz chase missy not me...i have other 2 ff to worry about 😆

U take care and see ya around ,,, u too take care...love you 🤗

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Hi, 😉an update after such a long time and its so good.. jag 🤗i just read that comment about my 'daya' being ur surname ...haha so that explains the creepy connection 😉😛😆 nah haha well daya is just my nickname shortened version ...and only IF friends call me that every1 uses full name in person...and my other nicknames are different ...but no one uses those anymore...😆 forgotten names

Really wanted to read somebody elses fiction for a change and stop thinking about mine which just gets annoying after a while. well well good ur here and good i updated right 😆 after long time so gave a LOOONNGG update 😛

Really love the way nakusha insists that dutta look after himself..true girl in that sense..never gives up. loved the way she stopped him in his steps..aw that was such a wifey time moment.

omg yeah she rants like a wife too 😆 very caring girl na

Highlight of the update as to be naku's line' "aap toe mere"😉 'and she stops!! Omg I so wanted her to say it!!! come on you know you want too. god shes falling for him and she doesn't even know it. DSP effect is working..!!

omg lol i soo wanted to put that in there...i actually snuck that line in afterwards initially that whole scene was different jist of it was same but was not liking it so re-wrote it...and that was time i did not have laptop ...so i wrote that entire scene on paper...i crumpled the papers up sooo many times b4 i finally got it right or so i hope

Another moment has to be the one..where naku tells dutta that he has to change to make this act of theres more convincing!!! ( kyun..dutta kya soch raha 😆tha!!!!????)hmmm something a little different from dosti I think. lol haha he is confused and surprised at the girl...let him think in peace about the happenings in his life 😆

Aw and so dutta becomes friends with jaasi ki raani!! Friendship kam..love syada lag raha hai from duttas side. lol is that what you think? hmmm i guess as story progresses you will see what we have in store for this couple 😛

Next morning and no ff goes without the kurta button moment..par yaha toe baaji aagayay and his comments at the breakfast table..! embarrassing..omg totally...come on how can we not have this scene lol and i needed to bring Baaji into this so that is why i inserted that scene 😆

O how cunning😲 naku, tricks dutta into visiting the doctors..chal koi toe aayay joe uski baarabari kar sake.!! And baaji never gives up with his teasing. Party time and I really love the choice of song..(one of my frav') haha she is law student afterall remember...and yeah needed to have her tease baaji but he will be baaji he turned her game right back at her...yes that song sequence sure was one scene i struggled to write 😆 it took me forever to figure out how to initiate the whole thing 😆 what to do ...writers block at so many spots of this update...that is why i took soo loong

Aw I really want them to realize there love for each other quick. Don't take two long on that front because I want those genuine husband and wife moments. And god does naku have a jaasi ki raani side to her in this ff'I think if I was to say something was missing then I think its defo the sher side of DSP. I think nakusha should see that aggressive dominating side of him just once..who knows she might even fall for him then. O another thing i love is ..even though nakusha is so open with him..all jaansi rani and everything..yet she still refers to him as.."aap" that i find so sweet😳 lol hmmm out plans for this FF will kinda have to put hold on genuine husband -wife moments...Naku is not that bad just more sherni side 😆 but dont worry our sher is coming...that lion is just waiting to be released ...he will crack soon 😉 she will defo see that side of D ...dominating and aggressive :P ...yes i did want her to keep the respect...

There was so many small moments in this update I really liked to so thank you!!

aww thank you ...am glad u liked it...lol it was a lot of handwriting literally i wrote in most random places 😆 glad you liked it and thanks for u wonderful comments 😃

Jagruti

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

fabulous update dear
love it
enjoy it
awesome dear
thanks for pm

Daya n Missy update my comment, but so sorry for late n hope i make sence too😳