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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba
😆LUCKY GIRL...................Dutta reentry part mein first reply......cool.....................😳

I know I know ...i got excited seeing ur pm ...i jetted straight here lol me first YAY .....

* I edited the post 😃

Edited by dg0628 - 14 years ago

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

hi...wow ok let me explain. i've not read any of your previous updates just this one. Actually the title lion returns grabbed me!! maybe because i'm dying to see dutta back in the serial so when i saw that it was a big pull. And let me tell you one thing i really loved it!!! ace..love the way you write few words yet sum up everything in those words. thanks for this ..i think i will surely follow your ff after reading this update so please pm when you update next. p.s loved the end...and duttas re-entry two..totally loved it!!! -thanks!!

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

amaaaazing update sheeba.....thanks for the PM *hugs*

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Awwwwww what an emotional update

I feel so sorry for Nakku :(

She cuts her wrist all the time? Hailaaa.. Dutta wud not be very happy

Woooooooooooo he's BACK! but what is he doing? Please tell me he didnt lose his memory :( .. how can he be living without Nakku? :(

Eyyy Dutta.. Hum aapse bohut naraaz hai..

I can't wait for the next update... Please continue soon :)

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

OH MY GOD

Sheeeeeeeeeebaaaaaaaaaa

i will be dead of u

what is this

its just skip my heart beat

im in ecstasy

they way u described naku hurt herself so that physical pian overcome her inner pain ,

and wooooooo its Dutta he was back , and his hand also bleed

just as my heart is bleeding

MY Dutta is back

OH Sheebu

u just give me immense happiness 1

cant wait :D

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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Loved the update Sheeba. True the Lion is back. But when he is going to be back to his Lioness. Poor Naku. She physically hurts herself to numb her inner pain temporarily.

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prncz

@prncz

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

hey sheeba 🤗, lovely update ,, , finally a glimpse of dutta aliv e ., 🤗, 😛 eagerly waiting for next update 😛 hope it is soon

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

hey sheebs,

that was one emotional update!...... so, D is back........ but i am confused.... wat is he doing in some other mansion........ is he the same D or another D........ or amnesia......

oks.... wil look fwd for ur next update.....

tc
divya

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

sheeba.....girl...tumhara dutta ke missing hone ka dukh aur dard saas nazar ataa hai iss ff mein.....

this rely has 2 b ur most emotional ff eva!!

jab update finish karti hoon parna...toh ek khaali sa ehsaas rehta hai dil mein..ek umeed si jagti hai....aur hamesha uss umeed ko taza karne ke liye tumhara update hai.....

it rely was beautifuly....was trying hard not 2 cry....ukno wen u hav a big lump in d throat wen u get senti......

cant beliv naku is physically harming herself...very unlike her but my heart realy bleeds 4 her....n our D....

so hapy ke our sher is bak.................... it was soo sweet in a painful way how naku cuts herself n at the same time D accidently cuts his hand.....rely missing the patti wala scne.....😭😭😭....y is D der btw....has he lost his memory or somethng....but if he did den y is he saying all dos poetic thngz lyk hes missing one1 (wel we kno hu dat sum1 is but stil.....)...if he rmmbers everythng den y hadnt he gone bak 2 his naku wen he knows perfectly wel dat naku cant liv without hin n he without her!!

thanku 4 giving us such a wonderful updates..keep it up sweetie...thnx 4 pm....do continue soon.x

ps.lovely choic of poetry!! beautiful wordz...perfect 4 d situation..x

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

hey sheeba

awesome update

you always made me cry ......really heart touching update and nakku cut her wrist several times 😭
so dutta is back .he must lose his memory😭 but love when nakku's wrist is bleeding same time dutta's hand is also bleeding.

great update dear