My Rap song for colors, updated pg 4

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barunipk

@barunipk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Kiran please ise colors ki personal site per bhi post kar do. Loved it yaar

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mnx12

@mnx12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hi Kiran, thank colors for giving you an opportunity, to realise, this hidden talent of yours. Now Gurudakshina to banati hai na. So came up with something more appealing, bizare, drastic for them😆

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

hey kiran,

lovely rap dear...... the wordings are so in sink😊...

just loved it........ the rhyming is too good.......

keep making more....

tc
divya

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
gr8 outcome for a first attempt...u sure its ur first?😉..lol..jus kidding...reali gd rap...

thanks yuvi :P

Originally posted by: -Huma-
nice one..😆...make the next one a bit more spicy..😛...colors deserves a lot of rudeness from us..

Thank you dear !
the spicy one is underconstruction!

Originally posted by: dg0628
🤣 LMAO .... Nice!
you defo have a career in rapping ! 😉
u sure its your first time? lol

thanks dear

its really my first !

Originally posted by: Hamlet53
yooooo maaan!
wicked brudder! yoooo maan...gooo maan
doin a gud jaab maan
yes kiran great attempt .. keep dem cumin girrl.. merrcy merrcy!
gawd help dem colors losers, dem colors losers!

Thakns Hamlet !

oh i think even u are too good with rapping :D

yeah next one is from frustrated mind

Originally posted by: ivy_11
Great job Kiran and so apt for the current situation!!! I can imagine us LTLians rapping to it. Thanks for making me smile the first thing in the morning 😊.

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: mishimano
very nice Kiran 😊 👏

Thanks Noor :)

Originally posted by: pbtghosh
kya rap banaya 😆😆👏

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: stranger2rose
kiran u surely brought a smile on my dull face . continue with ur rap songs , it was a great attempt.

Thanks Rose !

but im mad at you

Originally posted by: duttanakku
Kiran please ise colors ki personal site per bhi post kar do. Loved it yaar

Did that

Originally posted by: mnx12
Hi Kiran, thank colors for giving you an opportunity, to realise, this hidden talent of yours. Now Gurudakshina to banati hai na. So came up with something more appealing, bizare, drastic for them😆

sure will try :)

Originally posted by: dc17-7
hey kiran,

lovely rap dear...... the wordings are so in sink😊...

just loved it........ the rhyming is too good.......

keep making more....

tc
divya

Thanks dear !

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Well Guys thank you for ur liking

i really appreciate and now i am with another rap but its not completely bashing but its a frustrated mind yelling !

A feeling which alot had , is and will experince !

My second rap song from a frustrated fan !

RAp # 2

Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani

ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi jawani !

par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai

colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai

Jis ko chaha apna samjh kay

us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh kay :P)

we beg we cry but no body cared

we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

no reply no mercy they thought we are barking dogs

now the time has come when we will bite them their asses off !

I Know guys kahin rhythm is tricky but cmon its my second one !
i know its more abt us than the Colors but wait im working for colors special :

Note :Hopefully no one sentimets hurt cuz there are two times i write dogs !
but as i know i have written ita as a frustrated fan !

hopefully no one mind !

Edited by kiran255 - 14 years ago

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-Srushti-

@-Srushti-

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+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

RAp # 2

Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani

ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi jawani !

par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai

colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai

Jis ko chaha apna samjh kay

us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh kay :P)

we beg we cry but no body cared

we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

oye Kirrrrannnnnn...tu to lyricist ban gayi re⭐️....
damn right...we are not going to spare them for this insensitivity....
Ek channel ki kahani,
daalo uspe paani...
I swear that is what we will do if they go ahead with this...
By the way great work...colours ka rang sach mein utar raha hai😡
berang ho jayega ab ho jald....
keep them coming...we need more such war songs...😃

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: kiran255
Well Guys thank you for ur liking
i really appreciate and now i am with another rap but its not completely bashing but its a frustrated mind yelling !

A feeling which alot had , is and will experince !

My second rap song from a frustrated fan !

RAp # 2

Aao Sunao tum ko ek kahani

ek tha channel jis ki bare rangeen thi jawani !

par ab raat a rahe hai andhera chaa raha hai

colors ka rang ab urta ja raha hai

Jis ko chaha apna samjh kay

us nay chora hum ko bekhari samjh kay ( orignal was kutta samjh kay :P)

we beg we cry but no body cared

we felt like dummies , whenever an article passed

no reply no mercy they thought we are barking dogs

now the time has come when we will bite them their asses off !

I Know guys kahin rhythm is tricky but cmon its my second one !
i know its more abt us than the Colors but wait im working for colors special :

Note :Hopefully no one sentimets hurt cuz there are two times i write dogs !
but as i know i have written ita as a frustrated fan !

hopefully no one mind !

Hey girl😊

Aawww sooo sweeeet, ok i no sweet dnt quite go wid ur lyrics lool, but hey whenever there's music involved in whateva type of genre den it's always best to keep tru 2ur feelings dats wot music's all about hun....allowing urslf to express ur feelings openly.....n from wot i've read ur doing a real good job.....

....hey just a thought lol, y don't u video urslf rappin instead n post it on utube lol, and den post d link here, dat way we can get a better idea of ur rappin lol, n hu no's mayb colours myt hire u for better ratings !!😆

Nice job keep it up👍🏼

Tink😉