- removed - - Page 3

First Previous

Page

100

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Leandra

@Leandra

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

interesting yar waiting for next update yar keep writing

Quote

divya17-7

@divya17-7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

hey dhayani,

thank u for the PM......

nice update....... but i felt it was short..........

waiting for ur next update.......

tc
divya

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

My Spot!! :)

Edited;;

Awesome update..

I knew it was Dutta's dad. Ohh here theres only Madhu and Dutta.!

& they dont even know each other

Even doe he was wrong for running away, I feel sorry for him

I hope he gets his family back😃

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon😳

Edited by Sophia21 - 14 years ago

Quote

kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Hey Dear !
First of all congrats on writing FF !

very interesting story !

nice characters im really looking forward to read more

enjopyed it alot :D

Quote

Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Sophia21
My Spot!! :)

Edited;;

Awesome update..

I knew it was Dutta's dad. Ohh here theres only Madhu and Dutta.!

& they dont even know each other

Even doe he was wrong for running away, I feel sorry for him

I hope he gets his family back😃

Thanks for the PM.. Continue soon😳

Thanks Sophia!

yeah you got it right Dutta's dad... there will be lots more to this story ..its only going to get very complicated lol for me at least... i going to have lots of tracks running in this FF but for now I will focus on Dutta and Naku character development for a bit ..oh and of course Baaji is also coming 😉

next post will be tonight ... actually it will be the next two parts together.... trying to speed up Dutta's entry here 😆😆

Thanks again ...

Quote

Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

@ everyone:

Thanks for the lovely comments 😊 really appreciated

Next part is coming tonight ...btw these fast updates are only to get to Dutta's entry faster 😆
But after his entry I will slow down 😉

Take Care

Dhayani 😊

Quote

mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

hey honey great parts..rely loving it ... feel sory 4 DP...naku is soo caring na

soo madhu is wit her mum n D wil b wit AS n trio...

thnx 4 pm cont soon.x

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago

Quote

Iridescence

@Iridescence1

Alumni

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
hey honey great parts..rely loving it ... feel sory 4 DP...naku is soo caring na

soo madhu is wit her mum n D wil b wit AS n trio...

thnx 4 pm cont soon.x

perfect timing or what..lol ... I just signed on and you posted lol
Thanks ... yeah madhu us with her mom and D with AS but no evil trio here (only roops)
I think this story is going to complicated as it is ... kala and leela will be unnecessary so i got rid of them all together 😆😆

I will be posting the next two part in like 5mins :)

Quote

mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: dg0628

perfect timing or what..lol ... I just signed on and you posted lol
Thanks ... yeah madhu us with her mom and D with AS but no evil trio here (only roops)
I think this story is going to complicated as it is ... kala and leela will be unnecessary so i got rid of them all together

I will be posting the next two part in like 5mins :)

pheww ukno wat im actually realy glad that der is 1 ff wer there are no evil sisters!!

hehe wel cnt wait😉😆😆