OS: Shattered - Page 2

hey sophia........

this was urs.......... oh so sad.......... i was really sad after reading this OS.........

but it was well written dear...........

tc
divya

Omg it ws urs i mean just lyk khushi sed...it ws sophies my di's. again 😆

Missy..check ur scraps pls LOL!

I thought it was elysia's while reading it as she had written one similar to this where nakku was dead and dutta waited to be with her ghost...i loved this OS the best in the contest..though others were great too....but there was something about this one that touched my heart..it didn't sadden me..because...i don't know..the epilogue was the reason..

Epilogue:

Dutta's body was found washed up the side of the lake the next day. People said that he had tried to commit suicide again, to be with his love, Nakusha but there was another story going around. This one said that he had only been out for a walk when the bridge had unfortunately broken, bringing him down with it. It said that he had tried to save himself—and proof of that was the sharp sliver of wood that was clenched between his deathly blue-white fingers.

This part made me feel at peace..if Dutta had really jumped off..he would have lost my respect..i know it would be hard to go on without ur love..but ur love never wants u to give up...the fact that dutta didn't jump but accepted death when he fell under the collapsing bridge..somehow let me be in peace...he didn't give up but fate stepped in....it was too good a peace..which deserved to win..it was the only oS i voted for as after reading it i was too touched..

Hats off Sophie.......best of urs...hope to read more.

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Originally posted by: shilpita87

I thought it was elysia's while reading it as she had written one similar to this where nakku was dead and dutta waited to be with her ghost...i loved this OS the best in the contest..though others were great too....but there was something about this one that touched my heart..it didn't sadden me..because...i don't know..the epilogue was the reason..

Epilogue:

Dutta's body was found washed up the side of the lake the next day. People said that he had tried to commit suicide again, to be with his love, Nakusha but there was another story going around. This one said that he had only been out for a walk when the bridge had unfortunately broken, bringing him down with it. It said that he had tried to save himself'and proof of that was the sharp sliver of wood that was clenched between his deathly blue-white fingers.

This part made me feel at peace..if Dutta had really jumped off..he would have lost my respect..i know it would be hard to go on without ur love..but ur love never wants u to give up...the fact that dutta didn't jump but accepted death when he fell under the collapsing bridge..somehow let me be in peace...he didn't give up but fate stepped in....it was too good a peace..which deserved to win..it was the only oS i voted for as after reading it i was too touched..

Hats off Sophie.......best of urs...hope to read more.

Thats exactly why i didnt make him jump... I didnt want him to jump... It was all fate!!.. At that same time the bridge broke and he accepted death... it was destiny.. Ohh shilpi ... im so touched.. 😭 Im a very emotional person... i cudnt read it to check if its alryt after i wrote it... I just posted it.. i didnt have the heart to read.. But im sooo glad u all liked it😳

@All.... I know its unbelievable that, I, Sophia, wrote such a sad story😆... I don't usually write sad ones... But i thought to write something very different😳

Thank you very much😃

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

soph u wudv bin da last person i thought hu wudv wrote this!!! im realy suprised tho ur OS wa very wel analysed n da whol atmosphere was beautifuly described in a afreaky way lol (das a gud thng btw lol)

i knw sme here..i wud hav thrt sophie wud b the last person 2 ryt tht story...i was thought it wud b Jaz...bt man i was shocked 2 knw sophie wrote this...

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Thats exactly why i didnt make him jump... I didnt want him to jump... It was all fate!!.. At that same time the bridge broke and he accepted death... it was destiny.. Ohh shilpi ... im so touched.. 😭 Im a very emotional person... i cudnt read it to check if its alryt after i wrote it... I just posted it.. i didnt have the heart to read.. But im sooo glad u all liked it😳

@All.... I know its unbelievable that, I, Sophia, wrote such a sad story😆... I don't usually write sad ones... But i thought to write something very different😳

Thank you very much😃

u did an amazing job sophie

Omg Sophie u wrote this OS 😲....Usually u write the happy and love stories 😉.....So never imagined that u can wrote this...Sad and emotional it was😭...But very well written yaar 👍🏼.....Keep it up😉