FF- Naku's Call, Epilogue, pg32,note on pg 33

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

hey such a sweet story of tasha dear.............
but u finished it very soooooooon😕......y???????????????
anyways i enjoyed it very well..................finishing was amazing............

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Superb..........loved the ending and the epilogue tooo.......... will miss ur FF very much.......... plz keep writing............. Looking frwrd fr ur nxt FF........ Write sooooooon.............

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

hey dear

very beautiful rpilogue

but you end ff so soon we haven't expect it

miss it

so they had twins very naughty like mother and father.

nice ending dear

thanks for such a beautiful ff

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divya17-7

@divya17-7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

hey jayati,

such a sweet epilogue........ 10 yrs down the line.....😆😆...... with twins......

but feeling sad, the FF got over......... kindly start a new one n that too a long one..........

will look fwd to ur work........

tc
divya

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Pooja_219

@Pooja_219

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

Jayati🤗

Wow,what a happy & funny epilouge.😃

The twins & their cricket session was so rejoicing.

10yrs. down the line & now Mrs. Patil loves Nakku.

Dutta told all her secrets to their children😆

Vikas became Opening batsman,chalo nakku's dream of seeing her brother play for indian team got fulfilled.

I laughed reading Dutta's line about -laat khaye bina neend nahi aati🤣

It reminded me of their very first night after marriage😉

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful story & a happy epilouge.

I will not ask u for new FF,becaz i know u will come up with new FF very soon.U won't be able to resist the temptation of telling a new story to all of us.

Lots of love & u have a nice time till we meet again on ur new FF😉😆

Pooja😊

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kiran255

@kiran255

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Superb Tin !

firstly very unique story

second a very subtle end

third the way u updated !

Loved all the above factors !

i will definitely gonna miss it !

But indeed it was really a very entertaining story !

OH wow ur Mommy is ur inspiration to this story !

no doubt u ahve written it from ur heart !
love it :D

so when are we seeing another FF from ur side :D

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Shally

@shally_m

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

very sweet and nice ending ...... hopefully you'll start new story soon .... it's becoming a habit to read your ff

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jayati

@Fishfish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: neverforget
hey dear

very beautiful rpilogue

but you end ff so soon we haven't expect it

miss it

so they had twins very naughty like mother and father.

nice ending dear

thanks for such a beautiful ff

My friend, unlike the makers of hindi serials I like to tell a story till I can hold the interest of my readers and till I do not get bored of writing that story...but then this is one complain many of my readers often make lekin mai kya karu, adaat se majboor hu😛

Dear Friends,

Thanks for your appreciation and comments!! At present I am weaving an Aryan Age story for Alliswell (http://alliswell.express-forum.net) I am sorry I cannot write two stories at one time so for Naku-Dutta story you have to wait for still sometime! Love Tin

Edited by tintiny - 14 years ago