'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#721

maine kaha tha na dutta ko likh ke dena parega but i am feeling very happy to read this fab ff love it yaar the conclude is good shayad ltl waale bhi tumhari tarah samajhdaar hote waise finally i love the updates

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naina

@krishaa

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#722

awesome update jags 3 update a real treat.i wish you write an epilogue of our ff describing the life of tasha during pregnancy,certain romantic moments btw them and after child birth showing dutta reaction on holding his child,please do consider my request if possible this will be more perfect ending.please do an epilogue of ur ff.thanks for pm too.waiting for your next ff.

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#723

jagutrid thanks for putting frwd such nice story ,the happy ending with tasha been parents & baji getting his love ,its was awesome & looking forward to the new ff plz write soon ,waiting impatentiently 😊

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#724

superb updts... lovely ending all is well with Tasha and Baaji-Madhu... luved ur this ff to the core...it had all the magic we wanted ... and always imagined MR, MV and VR in the charachters which made it more beautiful... looking frwrd to ur new FF... do PM...

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-Ritz-

@-Ritz-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#725

Thanks a lot jagrutid for this ff. I really enjoyed reading it. u really write very well. 👏👏👏👏 hats off to u for writing such a beautiful story.

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#726

What an amazing amazing update Jagruti!
Im going to miss this FF - just for the looking forward to reading the next update part !!!!
Few points that I liked:
1. Dutta's reaction to Baaji's relationship with Madhu...it was sooo DSP right there!
2. DSP's reaction to the baby - very nice :) and beautifully ended :)

Looking forward to your next FF - do PM when you start that one.

Edited by droopy_asleep - 14 years ago

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#727

oohh jagz man am so sad...i cant beliv its ended...but i gues every gud thngs cum 2 an end...

anyway must say i just loved your style..the way naku tells dutta about her pregnancy..it was so naku like and cute!!!

loved the reaction from dutta..the way his eyes did all the speaking...tasha undersetnd everythng n eachother so wel...its jus so mesmerising..im in awe...;

awww duji wer jus awesome man!!!

i knw dat sinc ur endin it dutta has 2 agree...but that was such a typical ffrnds reaction.,...wich mde it evn more special!!

ahhh ending rely was beautiful...both tasha lukin dwn at their happy family...nd at the end the way naku puts duttas hand on her tummy...adorable...

btw i liked how dutta realised sia's real khushi...her son...true..but its stil knda sad na...

thnku so much 4 pm bbe nd such a wonderful wonderful update

pls do write ur other one soon and chnge ur other ffs n post them here...will be waiting for ur pm

lots of luv

xoxo

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mnx12

@mnx12

Channel Moderator

+ 15

Posted: 14 years ago

#728

Very good ff👏👏👏 Datta was unhappy initially, when Sia said no for the marriage & was happy

that Baji was best for Madhu. The way Naku disclosed about her pregnancy to Datta, was very nice. Finally happy ending to this story, with a content Datta & Naku looking at their family. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story, retaining the original essence of the characters.👏👏👏

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#729

Final feeback guys! Thank you to all of you for following my ff with such dedication its been a pleasure writing for you.!

@Daya
I always love your entry into my thread..🤗
MEIN AAGAYI!! (aap ka hein intaasar tha! ) Puts a smile on my face always.😃.and do I need to say…that I love your feedack. I always can be reassured that there will always be that one person who will for sure be there to read and comment. So thank you!
Hey last ever feedback post on this ff..aw enjoyed writing this ever so much its been a pleasure to have you as a reader.
Coming to the updates its self yet …I had an conclude to mind so once I started writing I just felt it was time to carry on and give this ff a good end. So there we are glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading..and commenting in the way you do ..your feeback is always encouraging.
So looking back on your feedback.. and chapter 28 yep this chapter totally dedicated duttas soft side..
As for the first scene where nakusha hides the pic from dutta as he walks into the room that was such a very small moment I didn't think anyone would make note of it but you did so thanks! It was written with intention of showing the kind of understanding dutta has for nakusha. He doesn't make her feel obliged to tell him anything she doesn't want to and that's a characteristic I really love about dutta. Back in the serial right at the start dutta talks to naku.. thanks her for helping him when he was hurt..he mentions hearing the name morey yet he doesn't ask for nakusha to explain anything..so that's a trait that kind of relates here.
Again it's the same kind of feeling from naku to she knows that there is something wrong yet she just lets it be. Gives dutta the space he needs. As for dutta finally opening up to naku he need reassurance as strong as he maybe..there is a very vulnerable side of him.

Chapter 29 for me got straight to the point, naku found a moment and took a chance I think she did very well…that scene kind of wrote its self ..i always find dutta and baaji moments very easy to write..the words just kind of come to mind ..maybe because they were potrayed so well on screen that writing is easy. But glad you liked that conversation.

Finally chapter 30 yep so baajis words come true..likh ke dena padega is what he said and that just how it happened..glad you liked the end off this ff..its been great to write..
Again a big thank you too you…please do come back and read my new ff when its posted.
again cant thank you enough for your dedication and comments totally kept me going so thanks!!🤗

rs1391 😃hey thank you very much for reading and commenting and yep likh kar dena hein pada use..i just think that made the moment much more stubble and dutta like. Glad you enjoyed this ff and liked its conclude pls to do come back and read my next ff its posted. Thank you!😉

Krishaa: 😳my friend! Just come back from reading your ff..yaar out done my writing for sure..love it. simple yet so effective. Thank you soo much for reading my ff..following it commenting and reminding me to update when I forget! As for an epilogue I think im going to leave it there to be honest..going to leave the rest up to your imaginations which I'm sure will do a better job that me! but thank you very so much again…do give my new ff I try when I post it.!

Nakusha: aw thank you very much glad you liked the conclude..thanks for following and do give my new ff I try will pm you when its posted ..thanks!

ushankitvic: 😊Hey thank you very much for following my ff..always love to read your feeback and im so glad that you liked my writing. Do give my new ff a try when its posted..thanks again .

-Ritz- 😉Thanking you for reading, following commenting glad you enjoyed this ff..please do give my new ff a try and again thank you!

droopy_asleep👍🏼 Hey thank you very much for reading and commenting your feedback has been so valuable to me throughout this ff so thank you. Glad you enjoyed my writing and yep please do give my new ff a try when its posted.

mIsHeZ.x 😳 hey aw what can I say thank you ever so much for always following my ff..i think I'm going to miss this ff a little as well yep it had to come to an end some day..it felt right to end it now though so took up that chance.
Thank you so much..and yep about the update its self you are right…there a lot of happiness at one side..baaji/ madhu/dutta, naku and there baby and at the other end is sia. Again I think it kind of shows a sense of reality instead of it being a very fictional fairy tail ending there is still that aspect that shows a hint of reality..
But thank you ever so much do try my new ff when it is posted.

mnx12 😊hey thank you very so much for reading and commenting as always your feeback means a lot and its nice to know you enjoyed the end. Happy ending it was ..please do give my new ff a try when its posted.. thank you again for following my ff.!

ok guys going to leave it there! will pm you all when i decide to post my next ff until then see you and your posts around the forum!😉

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#730

superb fantastic marvellous awesome ff dear

thanks a lot for this ff and am gonna miss it.its really very close to my heart

fabulous updates dear
so baaji told nakku everything and nakku to dutta and dutta agrees i was sure he will be happy
so finally nakku tell dutta about her pregnancy and dutta's most happiest moment of his life

love it jags

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