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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii jagruti
must say...a very nice update...but u know what like others me too hoping something else...we want to see dutta's reaction when he come to know that a new member will come in his life and fill it with joy...but nakku is still hesitating to tell him...
awww baji loves madhu...thats why he was unable to decide abt sia...now what will nakku do.
update soon...and plz show duttas reaction in next update...that will b the most imaginable scene...
really happy to know that u have started a new ff😊😊
thanx for this awesome update
lots of luv

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: norey

loved the ff.nice to see the D and N moments and so cute that N can't tell him about the pregnancy but funny how all the rest of the family know about the baby and he is the last to know(reminds me of the face revelation in ltl where everyone except D knows the truth, the days of ltl were so good then full of good viewing, now just memories left)

hope to see more cute moments between the two.
keep up the good work and effort!!



hey thank you very much for this ..sorry for getting bk to you late and yep i did keep you guys
hanging on there sorry. Just though i would make a bit more out of this moment and it is an highlight..keep you guys hooked..but thank you very much for reading and commenting ..will update very soon. thanks
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Originally posted by: MishalsFAN

hiii jagruti
must say...a very nice update...but u know what like others me too hoping something else...we want to see dutta's reaction when he come to know that a new member will come in his life and fill it with joy...but nakku is still hesitating to tell him...
awww baji loves madhu...thats why he was unable to decide abt sia...now what will nakku do.
update soon...and plz show duttas reaction in next update...that will b the most imaginable scene...
really happy to know that u have started a new ff😊😊
thanx for this awesome update
lots of luv



hey thank you very much for reading and commenting ..glad you liked the updates and yep yep i know im sorry you guys were all waiting for nakusha moment of telling dutta...will surely come in the next update. Will update very soon..thanks.
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Note for my readers: ok guys BIG THANK YOU to all my readers..as you have probably noticed i am about to go and conclude this ff..but there are still three chapters for you too read. So please read at your leisure hope you like them. Do tell me what you all make of them ..and then once you are all done ..let me know and i will post my new ff. Thank you so much to all those have followed this ff..really love writing it and you guys made it great.🤗



Chapter 28
As nakusha realizes that baaji mentions another girl in his life..nakusha takes a look to her side..her eyes filled care for Baaji's happiness.
"Baaji tu kisi aur se pyaar karta hai?
"
Baaji pauses for a second turning his expression to Nakusha unsure of weather she he should tell her or not baaji eyes begin to take to shade of deeper sadness. Turning to his side a little, reaching for the side table at the bedside, baaji opens the wooden drawer and from inside it takes out what looks like a photograph. Nakusha watches as baaji pulls out a photograph out and seems to look upon it in silence. Unable to see who the photograph was of..nakusha listens to what baaji has to say.
"Pata nahin naku..pyaar kiya..toe bhi..aisi ladki se jiske baare mein muje aisa sochna bhi nahin chahiyey."
Nakusha looking a little confused and unaware of what baaji was saying reassures him that if it was true love then it could never be wrong.
"Aisa kyun keh raho ho baaji..ek baar sahab ko is ladki kaa naam batate hai ..woh rishte ki baat karenge. Sahab bas tumari kushi chahte hai baaji."
baaji looking at the photograph for a second..thinks over nakushas words but he isn't convinced. "Nahin naku.. yeh rishta bhau ko mansoor nahin hoga kabhi bhi nahin." Just as Baaji is about to put that photograph nakusha takes it from his hands what she sees shocks her.
The girl in the photograph was Madhu!. A little shocked yet pleasantly surprised nakushas words sound her surpise. Baaji, madhu?? Kya madhu bhi tujse?? Baaji turns to nakusha with the same concern.. "pata nahin, mein abhi tak use baat nahin karta bhi kaise.""Aur aisi baat kar ke mein bhau ka apmaan nahin kar sakta naku…ek dost nahin…ek bhai ki tara rakha bhau ne mere ko aur mein. .uski bhen ke saath..pyaar kar behta."
Nakusha seeing the kind of feelings Baaji carried she understood his concern and his loyalty to Dutta yet also knew that Dutta was very close to both baaji and madhu and would do anything to see them happy."sahab ..tum dono ko bohot pyaar karte hai baaji..agar tum dono ki kushi ek dusre mein hai toe woah mana nahin karege."
Putting her hand to baajis shoulder as he turns to nakusha hearing her reassuring words his expression relaxes as nakusha passes a comforting smile.
"Mein sahab..se baat karegi..baaji.."

Baaji nodding in a thankful manner his attention is drawn to the entrance of the room when a familiar shadow is apparent. Nakusha noting the way baaji looks past him towards the entrance she too turns to see..dutta standing at the entrance of the room.

His figure tall and as dominant as ever his expression questioning, standing with his hands placed behind his back Duttas eyes look upon both Naku and Baaji in suspicion. Nakusha very secretly pushes that photograph to a side. Hiding from duttas eyes. As ever Dutta is sharp, nothing could be hidden from those eyes of his yet for him if it was something nakusha didn't want him to see then he wouldn't mention his knowledge of it. Everything was all about principle for Dutta Shri Ram Patil. His eyes hovering over both of them in a curious manner Dutta Pauses for a second before speaking. He sees both nakusha and baajis faces which seem a little guilty. With a significant silence before his words Duttas eyes are a little interrogating as he speaks.

"Tum dono atchi tarike se jaan te ho ke tume aaram karna hai..phir bhi raat ke is vakt.."
dutta pausing looking at the clock on the wall that strikes 10.30pm the issue wasn't the time it was more the fact that both baaji and naku were so careless with looking after themselves in illness.
As dutta is about to go on..nakusha..lifts her expression to him for a second. Interrupting him she uses the term "sahab" very silently very aptly
Which as always..plays on dutta in that soft manner. Instead of completing his words his eyes shirt to nakusha..looking upon that innocent way that she glances at him and then lowers her eyes duttas words shift more to her.
"Aur tune davay toe li nahin hogi.."
the way nakusha doesn't look up at dutta tells him that he was right nakusha had yet again avoided her medication. As nakushas eyes glance up at dutta in the guilt of again not taking her pills she sees duttas eyes and expression point out of the room which means…she was to act upon his word now and he would make sure she takes her medication. That one expression from Dutta was more than enough for nakusha. Getting up from seated posture she takes a glance at baaji for a second who hides those words spoken of in his eyes..and then glancing at dutta for a second she leaves the room. Dutta watching her walk ahead as per his instruction leave begins to turn in his steps to follow her yet turning back for a second his eyes fall in a concern for Baaji. something that baaji sees in those eyes of his which only builds on that guilt within his heart.
"Apna khyal rakh baaji, jab tak tu bagal mein khada nain hota

Dutta shri ram patil ki takat adhuri hai samja na tu?"
Dutta speaking very proudly and as ever with a shadowed sense of care leaves baaji thinking apon how much significance Dutta gave to him. Nodding in acknowledgement to duttas words baaji watches Dutta walk out and is left thinking about his deeds, right or wrong good or bad, everything seemed a little unclear to Baaji.….

Later into the night as nakusha sits at aayi sahabs bedside.
Aayi sahab sitting as soulfully as ever with her prayer beads to hand as one her nightly conversations with nakusha. Nakusha would press aayi sahab feet to help ease the pain she would be going through and at the same time there would be some conversation. Aayi would talk about her past, talk of her days happenings, things that made her happy, maters that were of concern to her. Near enough all those things she couldn't share with any one she would tell nakusha. And nakusha sitting in silence, comforted by the company of a mother figure would listen. Today nakushas attention was as ever for aayi sahab yet in the back of her mind she thought of baaji. Baaji and Madhus relationship. On the other hand
as expected aayi sahib's happiness seemed no bounds after nakushas news of pregnancy and smiling with that same joy, aayi sahib touches upon the one thing everybody was egar to know."Naku tu…dutta ko ." as Nakusha looks up at aayi sahab with ease she knows just was aayi sahab was about to ask her. The almighty question of when she was going to break the news to Dutta yet just as Nakusha is about to answer. Both ayi sahab and nakusha hear certain footsteps from a distance. As dutta seems to be walking past the room oblivious that the door is open and both aayi sahab and Nakusha are able to see him both of them notice the way Dutta seemed to act in a rather abrupt lost fashion. The way he was walking rather aimlessly. The same signature style as ever dutta walked the corridors with his hands placed behind his back yet his trail slow, his expression lost. Stopping in his steps.. duttas stern posture he breaks parting his hands from his back loose, raising his expression to the air he sighs..closing his eyes tightly for a second. It was a sign that Dutta was dealing with something that was hurting him within something that he wouldn't share with anyone yet thinking he was all alone he had broken that hard exterior. Lowering his expression with a deep breath his eyes still shut dutta raising his right hand and putting his index finger and thumb to his glabella in a rather concerned fashion he pauses in silence for a second.

Unknown to the fact that both Nakusha and aayi sahab are watching he lets go of his stern self for a moment. This was something only aayi sahab and naku witnessed and were familiar with. Dutta was very stern per nature, soft and very emotional within yet he never let that soft side that vulnerable side of his to the surface. Nakusha and aayi sahab glancing at each other..aayi sahab..takes a second to look at nakusha before she calls out to Dutta.
Dutta hearing aayi sahab instantly..shakes of his heavy mood, replacing his handa behind his back and that blank expression of firmness dutta turns on his feet..taking a few steps towards the entrance of the room. He stop just outside the entrance and notices both aayi sahab and Nakushas presence that had been watching him all this time. Both looking at him rather intimately for both recognized that look in his eyes. Silence was enough for the moment. Dutta said nothing simply turning away he walked away in silence.

A little later and as Nakusha walks into the bedroom, her eyes falling on dutta who lays on the bed at a distance. Nakusha concerned by the way dutta seemed to be so silently lost in thought she takes note of everything that tells her something is wrong. The way in which dutta lays rested on the bed looking towards the ceiling of the room his head rested on the sideboard his eyes closed expression lifted to up. duttas right forearm placed across his forehead the palm of his hand fisted stated that something was bothering him .His left hand resting loose on the bed dutta lays there with as much dominance as ever his legs stretched out on the bed..right leg resting ovrt the left one. The manner in which dutta was poised should have been relaxing yet all the minor signs of his posture showed that It was the contrary.

As Nakusha thinks of approaching Dutta not wanting to disturb his privacy approaching silently walking close to his bedside she looks upon him and her face creases with concern. Even though he seemed peaceful laying before her in this manner nakusha knew that beneath that exterior there was something that was bothering him. Nakusha looking at duttas expression for a second puts her hand out to reach for his shoulder yet for some reason she stops. Maybe because she was aware that her husband was very introvert by nature. He would share his worries with her if he deemed right to do so until then she would be by his side.

Taking a loving glance over him for a second a moment of the past flashes by in front of Nakushas eyes. The way dutta had told aayi sahab that he was suffering from pain in his feet something that nakusha had too fallen for yet it was all ploy to get her to himself for some intimate moments…thinking of that mischievous side of her husbands, the more softer and lighter dutta patil that seemed dubbed under all this exterior. Nakusha passes a faint smile to herself thinking of that additional side of dutta's that only she would see from time to time.

Nakushas eyes trailing upon dutta, she watches him rest, taking a few steps away to allow dutta to rest nakusha begins to walk away with the intention of filling the water jug up for the night ahead, picking up the jug from the table on the far side of the room nakusha turns back to glance at dutta second before she leaves.
..having returned to her room, nakusha carefully ever so silently places the jug in its rightful face, all the while glancing at dutta who is in the same posture nakusha knew dutta was awake, he was simply thinking, contemplating over what ever it was that was going through his mind.
Nakusha heading towards the dressing table, taking off her jewelry, earrings, bangles, mangalsutra from around her neck places it on the wooden surface of the dressing table yet again she takes a glance at dutta this time through the mirror. Turning around from the dressing table nakusha silently makes her way around the bed stopping at some distance nakushas eyes again glaze over dutta..and the walking around the bed..nakusha steps into her side of the bed..on the right. Her eyes forever trailing up to dutta…nakusha..lies down on her side resting her head on the pillow nakushas eyes glance up at duttas expression ..

Noticing the way dutta still seemed to be thinking in a very deep manner..
Nakusha sounds her words..she didn't think she would get a reaction from him yet contrary dutta taking away his arm from his forehead opening his eyes looks down to his side at nakusha who lays beside him..his eyes filmed with a certain vunrabilty that was visible to naku..
Nakusha moves a little closer to dutta moving her head on to Duttas lap..nakusha looks up at him..with as much affection and feeling as ever in her eyes..
As dutta moves the palm of his hand over nakushas hair…he listens to what she has to say in silence..
"Kya baat hai sahab
..?"
Dutta looks down on nakusha knowing full well that she knows that something is bothering him he denys it with a nod..yet as dutta pauses for a second, looking into ablivon he takes a soft sigh and speaks.. still looking into space nakusha could feel the heaviness in his words..
"Sia muje milne aayi thi aaj.."

Nakusha eyes take to a question, a little worried by the mention of sia. For the face she knew of her sad past..and also that dutta was in away attached to her.
"Uski baton ne..muje bechain chor diya naku.

Us ladki ki baton se muje yeh aisas hua ke mein chahoon toe bhi uski zindagi mein kushiyan nahin laa sakta."
As nakusha sees that sentiment of regret in her husbands words she tries to stop him from talking that way.
"Aise mat bolo sahab…"
but before nakusha could go on dutta reveals something that leaves her stunned.
"Usne shaadi se inkaar kar diya naku.."

Nakusha looks up at dutta a little lost for words she so an sadness in duttas eyes for that girl and within was that reality of baajis love for madhu. Nakusha a mix of feelings sees a deep sorrow in duttas eyes which she wants to take away. As she goes on to listen to duttas words, nakusha realizes that this is something that dutta had taken to heart.
"Woah kehti hai ke ..uske hisbaab mein kushi likhi hein nahin.. "
looking down at nakusha in an very innocent manner, dutta looks for the answers from her.
"tu bol naku, tere pas hamesha in sab baton ka javab hota hai, woah jo kenrahin hai woah galat hai naa.?


Nakusha seeing the sort of softness on duttas expression nods.. drawing the right palm of her hand out to reach upto Duttas cheak nakusha cups it gently and dutta places his fingertips over her hand on his cheek as he looks down on her and listens.
"Aap fikar mat karo sahab..bappa sab kuch dekhta hai, Waoh Sia ko apne haak ki kushiyan sarur dega.."

As dutta feels a little more at ease with Nakushas reassurance nakusha is left with a strayed feeling within. Seeing how dutta seemed to be hurt with Sias misfortune nakusha begins thinking about baaji and madhu...
It was something that she had to tell dutta about yet a little guilt takes to nakushas mind. Thinking of husbands concern for that girl and then her own intentions to talk of Baaji and Madhus relationship didn't seem quite right.

……


Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
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Chapter 29

Mid morning the next day and as dutta sits in his room in front of the coffee table on that green sofa. Dressed in his grey kurta without the overcoat, dutta looks over some file or the other that is to hand. Reading through it and signing the bottom corner of each of the pages dutta closes the file shut, lightly throwing the file onto the coffee table he rises for his seated position and just as he gets up he sees nakusha standing in front of him.

With a soft smile, those innocent and gracefull eyes, nakusha dressed in a deep orange shade of saari that same vibrant glow on her face as ever shes look up at him..and as there eyes lock dutta down on her with a sense of ease in his eyes he notices his overcoat wrapped in her hands, and takes it from her as she hands it to him.
Swinging that overcoat over his shoulders Dutta pulls his arms through it..and then straightens it at the front. Nakusha seeing a very soft and silent side to Dutta this morning takes the opportunity.
Her expression a little unsure she pauses a little, watching dutta straighten his appearance "Sahab…woh..muje baaji ke baare mein kuch baat karni thi." she takes a glance up to him for a second and then lowers her eyes as his eyes lock with hers.
Dutta looks down at nakusha with a look of curiosity placing his hands behind his back in a more structured posture, dutta a man of few words at the best of times as ever gets to the point.
"Bol.."
Nakusha feeling duttas eyes upon her takes a glance up to him.. and sees a sense of confusion in those eyes at her mention of baaji. yet dutta listened to her silently.
Sahab..mein jaanti hai ke aap baaji ke rishte ka soch rahe ho..lekin..

Baaji ne..phele se hein..pele se hein..
nakusha gets stuck with her words there maybe be because she feared Duttas reaction or just more so that she could put it in an appropriate way yet as nakushas words were lost dutta looks down at nakusha a little impatiently.
" aage bhi kuch bolegi..?"

hearing the firmness in dutta tone nakusha ..braises herself a little as she goes on..
"Baaji ne apna jeevan saathi pehle se chun liya hai"
Duttas expression creasing with surprise with a mixture of confustion for why he had not known of this he goes on to question nakusha with the same seriousness to his tone and expression"Aur Usne tuje yeh sab batayay..?" nakusha a little wary of his reaction simply nods fainly. "Ji.."
yet as nakusha looks up from the floor, for a second she sees a very blank and unpredictable expression on duttas face, the kind of look that was always something to be wary of. As dutta spoke he looked away from nakusha more into oblivion as he questioned. "ladki kaun hai..?"
nakusha pausing for a second to look at duttas diverted expression, she takes a deep breath more like a pause before very silently and causiously sounding the name "Madhu.."
Dutta turning his face to nakusha in a very rash manner, his eyes glow in confusion, irritation and seriousness. He was already disspointed with the way he knew nothing of this and now ..she had referred to his sister? Duttas expression stern and his expression even more sharp..
"Soch samaj ke bol naku, woah ladki kaun hai?"

Nakusha feeling that serious glare..and stern nature of duttas becoming more prominent she lowers her eyes as dutta looks down on her..and sounds her words softly hoping for the best. "yehi satch hai sahab baaji madhu se pyaar karta hai.."
Duttas eyes take to a very disbelieving state looking down at nakusha dutta thinks over her words in his mind but per moment. Baaji walking into the room at that particular moment..
Knocking on the surface of that partially open door, as evergreen and chirpy as ever. Dressed in a royal blue shade of kurta..baaji as always walks into the room with a spring in his step. Yet as dutta and nakusha both turn there expressions to then entrance of the room, duttas expression firm yet unpredictable in a very stern manner..nakushas eyes fill with a certain fear for the moment as she sees baaji and then looks back to dutta who looks at baaji in a very serious manner.
Taking a glance into the room, without feeling the intensity of the moment baaji enters.
Heading towards the coffee table he explains the reason for his presence without taking a glance at both dutta and nakusha.
"Ho..bhau..bas yeh file lene aaya tha..mein…deal final karne ka naa aaj.

Before Baaji could get to the file Dutta stops baaji in his steps.
"Rukh…"
baaji hearing that familiar tone of voice from dutta, turns around in his step face dutta who Is standing at a distance. baaji recognizes that expression of duttas, he knew that he was in trouble. Taking a glance from dutta to nakusha by his side baaji sees a very nervous look In nakushas eyes.
"Idar aa…"
dutta takes a glance at that grave expression of Duttas and approaches. Stopping in front of dutta baaji knows nothing of what was going on and even as dutta questions baaji isn't aware that dutta was talking about his feeling for Madhu.
Duttas expression very firm..his eyes bold and piercing he demands an answer an explanation from baaji.
"Bola kyun nahin!??"

Kya bol rahe ho bhau..mein kya nahin bola ..

Dutta angry with the way baaji wouldn't answer his question anger brews on duttas expression…grabbing baajis colar..dutta raises his hand in anger swinging it across baajis face in a harsh slap.
Nakusha a little late yet stepping forward to interrupt here after with a "Sahab..!'' dutta still with his left hand to baajis collar opens the palm of his right hand in front of nakusha as a caution for her not to interrupt. Unable to defy that demand of duttas nakusha steps back.
Watching dutta let go of baaji..and step back and turn his back to baaji nakusha sees baajis eyes film in tears as dutta speaks.
"Bola kyun nahin ke tu madhu se pyaar karta hai..!??"

"Bhau manta hai naa muje tu..ek baar bol nahin saka..

BOL ab CHUP KYUN HAI??"
Turning back to face baaji in anger duttas expression fumes eyes filled with irritation and emotion..question baaji. but baaji unable to put his words together his expression shaky the more innocent and vulnerable baaji comes to light as a sense of fear is seen in his posture. Duttas voice raising volumes…as he looks intensity upon baaji.
"KAB BATATA TU MUJE..JAB TERI SHAADHI KISI AUR SE HO JATI..TAB BOLTA! BEHAKUF!!"
Duttas eyes falling over baajis posture, seeing that baaji had no words duttas eyes fall on baaji arm which Is still in a sling. Dutta pausing for a second..sighs deeply before looking back at baaji.
"ACHI TARIKE SE JAANTA HOON MEIN TUJE BAAJI, KURBANI DENE KA BOHOT SHOK HAI TUJE. Kal mere leighyey goli khayi thi…aaj pyaar ki kurbani dene jaa raha tha."
taking a few steps closer to baaji..dutta overlooks baaji closely and questions him. his tone more silent now yet still with that hint of frustration and anger.
"KYA LAGA TUJE BAAJI, KYA SOCHA THA TUNE..YEH JAAN KAR MEIN KYA KARTA? "
Baaji looks up at dutta that angry get concerned expression of his
With some courage he answers dutta his words hesitant and broken he manages to string a sentence together.
''Muje laga ke aap…aap nahin samjonge bhau, aap samjonge ke meine tere se dhoka kiya.."

Dutta hearing baaji, shaking his head silently at he way baaji was under so many misconceptions dutta looks over baajis expression worried nervous expression. Dutta places his right hand over baajis shoulder. His words very deep, measured yet meaningful as he speaks. Looking into baajis teary eyes dutta is yet again reminded that baaji was at heart a very soft character.
"Ek baar phir se tune vahi galti kardi baaji,

Duniya ke leighyey mein dutta shri ram patil hoon, lekin hamare bheech mein kabhi bhi is naam ka koi..matlab nahin raha hai. Aaj bhi mein tumara woh hein dost hoon baaji. Aaj bhi kuch nahin badlya baaji.

Aur madhu ke leighyey tujse behtar koi nahin hosakta hai..Baaji."


Baaji shocked to hear dutta approve of him for madhu, Baajis eyes speak volumes, tears for a friend, tears for certain happiness that knew no limits. Bhau?? Is the only word that comes from baaji..as he looks up at dutta. duttas expression at ease, with a much warmth and reassurance to his eyes as ever. Dutta nodding a yes his eyes begin to film in tears..
Baaji pulling his unharmed arm around Duttas shoulder hugs dutta with instance Dutta too feeling that sense of innocence in his friend pulls his arms over baaji patting him over the shoulder as he speaks. A content smile takes to his lips. Nakusha watching from a distance wipes her eyes, and smile plays on her expression as she sees both Baaji and Dutta embrace.

…..Chapter 30
Morning Sunrays hitting there bedroom and as Nakusha adds those final touches to her appearance, draped in a deep pink saari..a wet haired appearance adding her mangalsutra and sindhoor nakusha turns silently to take a glance towards the bedside. Seeing dutta sleeping comfortably in bed she softy and very silently as not to awake dutta. Walking across the room stops at a certain wooden drawer unit. Pulling open the drawer she takes out a certain blue colored flip file. Looking upon it for a second and then looking towards the distance at her husband who lay in comfort nakusha expression very composed and ease. Walking out of the room, towards the open balcony potion of the room, nakusha pulls away that white material divide between the room and the balcony..glancing over dutta's desk and table where some of duttas documentation ,paper worker and files sat nakusha places the file amongst all others on dutta's desk.

….

Sometime later and as Dutta steps out of the washroom ringing his white kurta over his neck. His look as ever neat and tidy duttas hair brushed back in water all details to his look were of the norm. An essence of tiredness still lingering on his expression, dutta straightens his kurta in the mirror. Retouching his hair with the fingertips of his right hand dutta glances over the room. 7am and as ever, nakusha had left the room for her morning Puja. As always nakusha had prepared for dutta smallest needs. Per routine she had left a white glass cup and saucer on the coffee table, the liquid within giving of a misty steam Duttas morning tea sat in wait for him. Approaching the sofa, taking a seat in front of that table, dutta picking up the cup drinks from it silently.

Just as his lips touch the cup..his eyes fall upon an white envelope that sits on the table In front of him. looking at it with a glance of curiosity, dutta puts his cup of tea down and takes a more significant look. Picking up the envelope dutta reads the addressed to… "Sahab" written in blue ikn, in a neat hindi script. Reading the reference to "sahab" dutta knew that there was only one person who addressed him in this way.

Picking it up in his hands dutta pauses to look at it for a second wondering what could it possibly be that was presented in such away.

Turning the envelope around Dutta pulls his fingertips through the sealed fold and pulls out a neatly folded piece of paper. Dropping the envelope on the table in front of him dutta unfolds the letter…

And reads the only few lines…

Sahab,

Kuch kehna tha aapse magar..jab bhi aap samne hote ho himat nahin juta pati isleighyey meine apni yeh baat is tarike se batana chahti hai.

Umeed karti hoon ke aapko is baat se bobhot kushi hogi.

Aapki Nakusha..

Dutta looking a little curious to this letter, reads few lines on the paper and thinks about how nakusha ends her words with very little conclude. What was it that she was trying to tell him? dutta giving it an detailed thought glances over the writing and then drops the letter on the table. Whatever it was dutta would ask her to clarify it but..it was like half a message.

Dutta getting up from his seated posture thinks of nakushas words in a bewilderment as he walks out of the room into that balcony potion.

Stepping out of the room, with that same curiosity thinking of Nakushas words dutta pauses for a second yet still it didn't make sense.

Brushing the thought to the back of his mind duttas eyes fall over his desk where his files lie in an disorganized manner. Walking around his table dutta stops in space between his armchair and the table..parting his hand from behind his back he ..picks up the random bits of paper and puts them to a side. Picking the random business files he stacks them in one corner yet..his eye fall on a file that is unfamiliar.

Picking it up his eyes a little in wonder to why he didn't recognize this particular file Dutta flicks it open in his hands.

Within the file an official looking documentation a medical report of some sort. D

duttas eyes go on to read on thinking It was just one of nakushas old medical reports from when she had been admitted to hospital dutta is just about to close the file when his eyes trail down to a particular potion of the document

Patient Name: Nakusha Dutta Shri Ram Patil

Blood type: 0-

Test Date: 30/06/2011

Pregnancy test result: Positive

Duttas eyes reading those words, a disbelief to mind as he looks over those words again thinking of just what they meant a smile takes to his expression.

…..

Sometime later and as Nakusha approaches the entrance of there bedroom. Having completed her morning puja. Knowing full well that by now there was a chance that dutta may have read the report..nakusha pauses for a second a little nervous. Holding that puja plate in her hands that carries a dia. Nakusha looks into the room for a second. Seeing that dutta was not present nakusha takes a few steps in. Her eyes falling on the coffee table, duttta half cup of tea that he seemed to have drunk from and more significant that letter and envelope of hers that lay open bedside the cup. Nakusha knowing that dutta probably knew by now a certain butterfly feeling plays in her stomach as she glances towards the far side of the room. Behind that material parting she sees duttas figure at a distance. …

As nakusha walks out into the balcony area …taking very soft a silent steps. She stops at some distance as she sees Dutta with his back to her…his posture very stern for norm ..overlooking the balcony nakusha is a little unsure to where dutta had seen that report of hers yet. A little nervous per moment nakusha glances over that file that she had left on duttas desk..seeing it sat there shut..nakusha glances back over to dutta who still seems to be very much unaware of her presence. Nakusha putting down that puja plate on the side of duttas desk. Turns her expression to glance up over Dutta…a little anxious..nakushas eyes scatter a little before she manages to approach dutta. Ever so silently she walks closer to him..her footsteps that are heard..stop after a few seconds. Fidgeting with her hand a little as she goes on to look up at dutta who still has his back to her. Nakusha uses the term…"Sahab" to get dutta's attention.

A silence Is sounded as nakusha hopes for dutta to react yet ..as dutta turns to face nakusha, nakusha as ever drops her sight to the floor.

Yet his expression was something never seen before, Dutta Shri Ram Patil a man of imines power..yet today his eyes were filmed in emotion. the look of overwhelm on that expression of his. Duttas eyes smile with cupped tears as he looks down at nakusha. Immense love, joy..a certain sparkle and glow in those eyes of his an uncontrollable smile on his face.

Dutta shri ram patil had no words..yet his expression said It all, parting his hands from that fold in front of his chest..nakusha happens to glance up at dutta ..and her eyes lock with his.

Seeing those tears of joy in his eyes…that playful smile on his expression and she knew that dutta was as happy or even happier than she was.

Seeing him in such an emotional state ..nakushas eyes too fill with tears..her lips crease in a smile…all she is able…to say..is sahab..

Dutta smiling at nakusha..steps closer to nakusha..looking down at her he cups her face in his hands.

His eyes glow with affection as he speaks..moving his hands away from nakushas face..dutta places the palms of his hands on her shoulders. His words full of emotion. "Ek baar.. tere muhn se suna chahta hoon naku.."

Nakusha looks at dutta..as overwhelmed as he is...nakusha smiles..

A little embarrassed yet over struck by emotion nakusha with a pause..very softly puts forward those words her husband wanted to hear.

Aap..aap..pita bane wale ho sahab.. her eyes looking up at him ever so innocently yet full of love.

Nakusha watches as the smile on duttas face which ceases not to ease .. the way he closes his eyes in a certain content for a second..nakusha watches the ease and content nature to his expression and feels fulfilled. She had longed to see dutta this way, to see this joy on his expression. Nakusha glancing up to his expression for a second..drops her eyes for a second and takes the opportunity reach for duttas feet in blessing yet..as dutta feels nakushas touch opening his eyes with instance he picks her up…pulling her in an affectionate embrace..nakusha resting in duttas arms..pulls her arms across his shoulders tightly.

Both a little emotional for the moment..finally part after some moments..dutta pulls away softly from nakusha..looking down at her with at same smile dutta..places a kiss on her forehead. Before nakusha..gets a chance to say anything more..dutta sweeps her of her feet.

Pauses for a second as nakusha..seems to blush in his arms..smiling at her with a certain ease..dutta walks nakusha into there bedroom.

….Two weeks later.. and as Madhu is due to arrive back at Patil Niwas. The lounge of Patil Niwas and as dutta sits with some paper work or the other at the seating area of the room dressed in his black attire. Nakusha approaches, draped in her orange and red saari as per all other members of family she too is excited to have madhu back. As nakusha approaches duttas cup of tea In her hands..she stops close behind the sofa where dutta is sitting and waits for baaji and Duttas conversation to be over before she interrupts'.

Baaji standing looking rather impatient and obvious on his expression the joy of Mahdus return. As ever baaji speaks with that certain amusing touch to his tone

Rustling his hair a little accompanying that orange kurta that seemed to be very co-ordinated with naku today baaji asks for Duttas permission before he leaves.

"Toe mein..chala hai bhau…madhu ko airport se le aata hai.."

Dutta taking his usual firm glance up at baaji nods in acknowledgment

As baaji turns..and begins to walk to exit Patil Niwas dutta stops him.

Rukh..baaji!

Baaji stopping in his steps wonders what he could have possibly done wrong this time. Yayar ho jaa baaji..phir se maar khane wala hai..turning around at duttas words baaji looks towards dutta as he speaks, not looking up from his paperwork yet his tone still very defined.

"Raaste mein ..baat karlne madhu se.." Baaji just quite not understanding what dutta was referring to looks confused Kya baat bhau???

Dutta lifts his eyes from the file in front of him takes a stern look up at baaji..

A little slow to clock on baajis face creases in realization..

"Ho bhau..karta hai..naa..karegna.."

Baaji sounding a little nervous yet putting on a confident voice..looks towards nakusha who stands at a little distance. As ever naku finds baajis words amusing and smiles.

"Naku..aaj koi dhaga vaga..band ne ka nahin hai tere ko ..aaj naa.

Toda sayada hein daar lag rehla hai mere ko.."

Nakusha softly laughing at baajis words nodds a no yet as ever dutta listening to baaji reacts in his usual way. Looking up from his paper work as ever his words more of a warning for baaji,Baaji tu jaata hai yaa! baaji doesn't push his luck any further any leaves quick "ho.. jaanta hai mein.."

Nakusha watching Baaji leave a very soft smile on her lips ..walking around the sofa that dutta is seated on…she puts the cup of tea down ..on the table ..but per moment ..and usual incident Nakusha happens to tip the cup over Duttas paper work. Her expression creasing in a worry Nakushas eyes happens to lock with Dutta who looks at her very sternly for a second yet surprisingly a smile takes to his expression and he begins to laugh.Nakusha pleasantly surprised begins to blush a little at the way Dutta seems at so much ease.

….

Dinner table as dutta takes a seat at the head of the table..nakusha stands behind his chair, aayi sahab sits to duttas left and nakusha empty chair to duttas right.. just as Nakusha is about to serve food into Duttas Plait she pauses as madu and baaji enter. All family members happy to see madhus return, madhu greets, aayi sahab..leela, roops, all with hugs. Whilst dutta watching from a distance..sees baaji approach.. take a seat on his right..and that look on baajis face tells dutta that he had made his feelings known to madhu. Dutta patting baaji on his right shoulder with a smile..looks towards his family. All happy..dutta feeling an content within..gets up from his chair..leaving the dinning table something that Nakusha notices.

…..

As nakusha walks into there bedroom, wondering why dutta had left in such a manner she walks out to the balcony of there bedroom, as ever dutta ..stands overlooking the balcony. Nakusha taking a few steps closer stands beside and looks down at the view. Dutta was looking at his family all who sit at the dinner table with smiles on there faces and even Sia who seemed happy with her son. Dutta had realized that the girls biggest happiness was her son. As dutta goes ont to watch with a smile he hears nakusha voice, soft, silent "Kya dekh rahe ho sahab..?" dutta still looking down toward the ground floor speaks without turning his expression to Nakusha.

"Apne parivar ko itna kush meine kabhi nahin dekha naku…

Jitna kush mein aaj hoon naa naku..kabhi itni kushi mehsoos nahin ki meine ..

Nakusha smiling at dutta..as he turns to look at ther with that comfort in his eyes.

"Ab se yey kushiyan hamara saath kabhi nahin chorenge sahab.."

Dutta nodding smiles down at nakusha as she places her head on his chest..

Dutta putting his hand around nakusha comforts her for a second. Feeing nakushas hand touch upon his she directs duttas hand to her stomach.

Dutta and nakusha both content look down on there family who seemed ever so happy both dream of all those happy moments that were still to come.

…..

"Ek beraang Zindaagi sahab ke naam". Conclude: 12/07/2011

There we are folks..hope you all enjoyed it ..look forward to your comments..

going to give it a day or two..before i post my new ff..but

again thank you very much for reading my writing.. fab readers

jagruti😳




Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
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wow what a heartwarming feel to the end, D and N are finally going to be parents and Baaji has a happy ending too. Nice to see the central characters all happy. such a lovely written ff by you, it was a joy to read this ff thankyou !!!!! waiting eagerly for your next ff. norey
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Originally posted by: norey

wow what a heartwarming feel to the end, D and N are finally going to be parents and Baaji has a happy ending too. Nice to see the central characters all happy. such a lovely written ff by you, it was a joy to read this ff thankyou !!!!! waiting eagerly for your next ff. norey



hey o no..totally thanking you, thank you so much for reading my ff, nice to know you
enjoyed and i will be sure to let you know when i post my new ff. Thanks again..😳
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Mein Aa Gai :D

will be back with my comments 😉

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i am so excited...this time i thought about you yesterday night wen I came home from work ...but i figured u would post soon...and see i was sooo right

ok so imma do this read and comment at the same time...worked well the last time :P

Chapter 28:

Starting where we left of...DSP at the door ...I loved how he knew something was up but at the same time he caught Naku's act of hiding the pic and chose to pretend not to see anything because he knew she did not want him to know yet...and Baaji's guilt is understandable ...poor guy is like on the edge...not sure what to do...confusions pe confusions !

oh our DSP is feeling hurt ..maybe becuz of Baaji-madhu or maybe this whole Sia thing..hmmm...moving on...letting his soft emotional side surface not realizing the presence of AS and Naku...really can imagine this side of hime well...so vulnerable yet not at the same time...silence always speaks volumes...louder than words...loved the way he upon hearing AS call, he goes to be himself...the stern front he puts on...and then on realizing they both knew something was up ...walking away in silence ...very true to his character ...well done

ok loved Nakus entry to the room...the way she observes his every gesture...expression...posture...and knows how to react...and going beside him and thinking that she will be by him and let him decide wen he feels ready to talk to her about whatever it is...that's very true to Naku's character...again well done :D omg she is thinking of the rarely visible SOfty mischievious side of Dutta Sriram Patil and now me also thinking about him like that...haaayee...

loved how sweetly she kind of just went to lay beside him and called out to him...and moved to lay her head in his lap ...

aha it was sia ...oh and she said no to marriage and there is no happiness is not written for her...and the way DSP tells that to Naku and so innocently and soft heartedly asks her for her reason...omg i loved that part to bits...there is so much there...his understandin of Naku and how much he needs to talk to her...his heart finds peace completely only with her...needing her reassurance...which she never fails to give...and he feels thats all he really needs and everything will be fine...love their relationship...

oh k so she wants to talk about Baaji-Madhu but not sure how to bring it in...

ok am so ready to read the next chapter :D

Chapter 29:

oh she found her chance to talk to him ...yippie...
lol lets see how this plays out :D

oh so she manages to word it properly...and hmm expected he would be disappointed to learn this more for the fact that he did not know about it himself ...and Baaji did not approach him. And adding to the fuel the name Madhu ...his sister...hmmm am curious to see his reaction... ohhh my Baaji timing and him dont get along😆 ...aa gai woh...him and his lovely chirpy self...oh and wearing royal blue kurta...royal blue is my color hehe and imagining him in it...damn looking good hehe...and Baaji not feeling the intensity of the mood...baaji will be baaji

ahhhahh i love how he is so causal ...just barging in ...like always and love how he caught on that he was in trouble as soon as he looked up at Dutta and heard the tone. That's Baaji. He even read the nervouness in Naku's eyes.

LOL omg Dutta yeh bhi na...he asks so indirectly...and expects baaji to know wat he is talking about ...and gets angry...hmmm...omg he grabbed collar ahhh and kinda saw this coming SLAP ...owww my poor baaji. didnt see that coming and doesnt even noe why. Naku tries to come in the way...but obeys his gesture to stay out of this...omg...my poor baaji has tears welling up...he is so vulnerable and sweet and innocent ...
i want to give him a hug 😆...

omg jags u nailed this scene ...DSP's yelling...every line esp wen he says bewakoof ...i felt there was sooo much love and affection and concern in that one line ...i dunno why...and all the lines that follow...so much authority and love again...loved it...clearly he was only upset he didnt tell him anything ...and would give it all up for him too...

ahh i love DUji...and DSPs words that to the world he is DSP but thatz not the case btwn them...well said lines...bravo... i really liked this...and he said none better than him for Madhu...i started smiling here so big lol...Baaji such a soft hearted person...tearing and shocked to hear D's approval ... and both hug with a happy Naku watching...beautiful scene

aww all sorted out btwn Duji and this Madhu thing ...good good...now me waiting for the preg revealing...now to read next chp

Chapter 30:

oh yay ok so i assume Mrs. Nakusha Dutta Patil is ready to tell hedr husband finally...
she takes the blue file, maybe a hospital report or something like that... and puts it with his other files...
am waiting to see his reaction...

oh having cofffee and finding a note from his beloved how cute
aww how sweetly she wrote she needs to tell him happy news lol
love how the sentences are complete but the msg is not

yippieee he read it and it was her report lol ...aww and he smiles ...

oh tasha scene...unspoken words...eyes saying it all...his joy ...excitement...happiness...everything...way he cups her face and then asks to hear it from her ...my god this guy will be the death of me lol


madhu is returning a baaji to pick her up...love the light moment there with D telling him to talk to Madhu on the way back.

haha yay seems like all worked out well for Baaji 😃😳

very beautiful last scene...a lovely end to a wonderful FF ...😳

👏👏👏 amazing FF ...great work Jagz

its been a pleasure reading this FF...loved it to the core...and am happy about ur new FF...eagerly awaiting for that...thanks for such amazing story...love you lots...take care and see u with ur new FF



Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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hi jags.. ( peeking frm wrk) ,, aaj pm nahin bheja 😭 .. i wl read once i reach hme ,,bnut trust me i dnt miss a single update . 😳
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Originally posted by: prncz

hi jags.. ( peeking frm wrk) ,, aaj pm nahin bheja 😭 .. i wl read once i reach hme ,,bnut trust me i dnt miss a single update . 😳



😊aw i'm sorry ..i'm sure i sent you a pm..might be wrong ya phir got lost in the post..sorry..😳😆
but thank you so much for following my ff..ive always been aware that you read my ff so not to worry just might have missed checking the box when sending the pm's. Sorry and Thanks, hope you like the conclude. Jagruti

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