'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 70

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aw...you are such a tease :) Didnt get Naku to tell Dutta this time too huh?
Waiting for the next part and your new FF too...make sure to PM when u post that new one too!
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Posted: 14 years ago
a superb updt... the way u put frwrd nakkus feelings and confusion of how to break the news to dutta, awesome yaar... luved tasha convo and baaji and nakku convo very much luved it to core... updt sooon... looking frwrd to nxt updt...
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update like always jagruti

love it

nakku too confused how to break the news to dutta but like that
dutta our gadha like always

baaji nakku freindship lovely

dutta will agree to baaji and madhu

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Posted: 14 years ago
as always a great update,but no good news is revealed now i have to wait for update,its not a problem if next one is soon.since you said it may be your last part i request you to give an epilogue.make last update of full of tasha and momets btw the two during pregnancy.and in epilogue you can conclude with their life after child birth and certain changes after that that will be a complete end with beautiful memories in it.do consider it if possible and do update soon do't let us wait for long.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

R E S E R V E D ...

You know I honestly thought about you today for a good update...wow my wish came true..😆


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Jagzz as usual mein aa gai ...



Me First ! 😳

now lets get down to it ...I'm so excited to read...I'm gonna comment as I read for a change ...😛

Love how both Baaji and Naku are well aware that this is Dutta's way of showing that the incident has really affected him and both of them go and sit beside him quietly. Every gesture is so meaningful between the three and he is well aware of their presence and well being ...wonderful...and you know what just a side comment lol when I am down or stressed or need to think all I need to do is put on some music and sit in a park or walk through nature in general ...so really love the aspect of staring into the garden because I know what it does for me...i can just imagine how much thoughts are going on Dutta's mind...

Love how they know the reason for his silence and baaji's gesture, comfort from touching the shoulder in hopes the touch will reach his heart...aww Duji gotta love them...D's instant reaction to Baajis pain I loved it...

Awww D feels guilty which is explainable I think I would to feel guilty if i was in his spot...and his scolding with so much love and affection...it really shows how much these to mean to him. His pain and concern and love its all there through his anger and words...aww and Baaji and Naku know that...his unfinished sentence ...tells them exactly what he is feeling ...haha again silence is always greater than words...resting heads on his shoulder ...really brings out the emotions and depth of their relationship...and he melted like always to their innocence, loyalty, love, just them in genreal...aww so sweet this scene love it...

'theeno ka khayal rakhna hai aapko' ...hehe i am waiting for the reaction as well from our DSP

Naku is so cute...thinking about becoming a mother while gettin ready...aww glowing like all to-be mothers...and smiling uncontrollably ... and haaye DSP enters...of course his eyes will catch her figure hehe and he is all like wat is it making her like that...dont worry DSP it is only u ! Ahh love the way he walks to her studying her every expression...move and comfortably stand waiting for an answer...oooh soo love him and his ways lol...love their little moment about her diverting eyes ...I loved it... him getting all romantic...kissing her and her interrupting the moment, with good reason of course, but he doesnt noe...so hes a bit irritated ...u gotta love this guy...lol..

poor girl stumbling not knowing how to say it and he thinks she just wants to leave ...gadha ! ...and she too so unsure what to do just leaves ...and here i was excited that she will tell him now...but no such luck!

omg ...haha madhu baaji already going for names...love them...hehe and as usual baaji will be baaji na ...he is such a character but a lovable one...loved the way he tells her to just tell him or he will

and AS and her motherly ways...omg i loved the way As told her husband and oh this Baaji "bhau itan samajdaat nahin, usko toh likh ke dena pardega" i burst out laughing... ooh baajii!

oh i love how D knew she had something to say but didnt want to ask for she will feel obligated to tell him whatever it is...but she wants to tell him ...ahh the red dhaga ...she got on for him ...i love the little things ...it adds so much to the feel of their relationship...LOL peeping toms ...Baaji and Madhu and he catches them...gets suspicious and doesnt ask ...gadha ! ...and me again thought oh here we are she will say now ...but again no such luck ...I think u r not going even do it ! 😆 let me continue...

Aww loved the Madhu-Dutta scenes...she is leaving...and love how she just said congratz knowing very well he does not know anything yet ...

Oh detective Naku is at it ...studying Baaji's expressions ...hmm so he is troubled...could have something to do with Madhu's leaving? ...OH Dutta mentions Sia and again Baaji not knowing what to say...Naku noticing all...and Baaji trying to cover it up...get on it Naku figure it out! lol

So naku going to talk to Baaji ...yay...love that it them ...will be nice brother-sister moment...I love how he naturally just opens up to Naku immediately ...no coaxing needed...aww Baaji feels he likes someone that he shouldnt and that D will not accept...mujhe pata...its madhu na ...wait let me keep reading...haha Naku take the photo from him ...lol i wud do that too...woohooo i was right...and am glad ...i love this Madhu-Baaji pair...i even made and VM recently as a thank you for the wishes on them ..hehe ...

Aww Baaji feels that its wrong to do that to Dutta for the trust he has in him...and Madhu doesnt even know ...and love how Naku tells him that Dutta will understand and that she will talk to him...ahh Dutta aa gai ...i am excited but I dunno if I should be or not...lol ...

And ahhh i knew it ...she didn't tell him about the pregnancy yet!
and Baaji-Madhu thing is now also left hanging
jaldi update kar na ...i will wish hard :P

thanks for the amazing update...loved it to the core...amazingly written as always👏👏👏

oh so your next chap might be last chap...hmmm well knowing u have another one in mind I dont mind at all lol...now jaldi jaldi update karna



hey thank you very much its always a pleasure to see you around my ff and your comments i love reading..one of the view who really go into depth which i am grateful for...aw your commenting as you go on reading..thats one hell of a multitask lol..but atleast i will be able to judge your reactions hey!. 😉
yep the first bit..all dedicated to baaji/naku and dutta. I actually love the time of bond these three carry..each one of them means so much to the other ...its unbelievable. As for dutta yep not able see two of his closest hurt in such away leaves the hospital for some time out. Mind you only after he was aware that they were both going to be fine..
and yep..totally ..when you need to think about something..you find that quite spot thats going to let you sit in peace and thats just what dutta was doing. Of course baaji and naku knowing dutta in there own ways are very much aware that dutta is hurt..upset. So go and approach him. More like little kids than anything bless them..and obviously because he cares for them so much thodi daat toe padni hai!😳
Silence is always greater than words..well in this ff anyway..duttas silence..the way both nakusha and baaji reacted in such an innocent way totally hit the soft spot in dutta. After all both of are much younger than dutta..hence he feels responsible for them..also probably feels him being the older one should forgive and forget. yep nakusha throws in a line there..mind you.silently and yep i know you were all waiting for that moment..!!😉
ok so the next moment..in the morning and nakusha getting all smiley at the mirror!! lol! yep i think dutta was totally think what is she so happy about...? but in the end..a little bit of a tasha moment and naku gets away with it ..glad you liked that moment..actually put that in there in the end..felt liked something was missing and it was totally the romance..😉
yep again bitchari doesn't really know how to tell him ..do you blame her...shes married to dutta shri ram patil..someone like that looking down at you..how the hell are you meant to find the words.
and again back to baaji and a-team (a standing for aayisahab 😆) glad you liked that scene and yep you guessed right baaji and madhu!! you will have to wait and see what happens.
thanks for you comment omg mene to essay likh diya..if you have got this far then thanks!




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rrs1391

i love the update and baaji and nakku's understanding is really good aur dutta gadha use to sachme hi likhke dena parega yaar but i want you to break this news on him in next update do next as soon as possible



thank you very much for reading and commenting..glad you enjoyed the update.
yep duttas not really good at this understanding dil ki baat business, sometimes he aces it at other times well ...lets just not go there.😆
yep next update for sure..again thank you very much. keep reading!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: droopy_asleep

Aw...you are such a tease :) Didnt get Naku to tell Dutta this time too huh?
Waiting for the next part and your new FF too...make sure to PM when u post that new one too!



sorry just couldn't help myself😆😉..vaise bhi build up chahiyey naa but thank you
very much for reading...will try to update soon and yep soon as this ff is concluding i will mention the start of the next one.
Thank you very much..!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

a superb updt... the way u put frwrd nakkus feelings and confusion of how to break the news to dutta, awesome yaar... luved tasha convo and baaji and nakku convo very much luved it to core... updt sooon... looking frwrd to nxt updt...



hey thank you very much for reading.😉.glad you enjoyed the update, its nice to know you liked the different elements of that update. lovely to read your comments..please keep reading and i will try to update soon..thanks jagruti
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

fabulous update like always jagruti

love it

nakku too confused how to break the news to dutta but like that
dutta our gadha like always

baaji nakku freindship lovely

dutta will agree to baaji and madhu



hey! thank you ever so much for reading and commenting..
i totally thought you guys were going to hate for dragging this one
out but its not so bad then.
Yep as for the update its self..dutta was being his usual self..but cant be
too harsh on him..hows he really meant to know..😕😆 but yep he could have made her
tell him whatever she was hesitating to say..instead he just let it be.
As for what happens with baaji..wait and see.. (or read even )
thank you!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: krishaa

as always a great update,but no good news is revealed now i have to wait for update,its not a problem if next one is soon.since you said it may be your last part i request you to give an epilogue.make last update of full of tasha and momets btw the two during pregnancy.and in epilogue you can conclude with their life after child birth and certain changes after that that will be a complete end with beautiful memories in it.do consider it if possible and do update soon do't let us wait for long.thanks for pm.



hey thank you very much for reading and commenting..and yep sorry i know you guys were all waiting for the moment nakusha tells dutta of her pregnancy but wait a bit longer in the next chapter for sure. As for how i am going to bring about the conclude not hundred percent sure yet but will give your suggestions and the kind of ideas that are to mind a thought.
Anyways thank you very much..will update soon. jagruti

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