'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 66

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear jagruti 🤗
First Of all Iam really Sowiee for being so late yaara 😳
Thanx alot for the wonderful update and pm 🤗 loved the update as always 😉
Awww loved the Convo btwn Tasha in the beginning ..they understand each other so well ..they dnt need words to say alot ..even silence says alot ...wow naku dnt wanna get well soon coz she wants D to be near her 😍 but our D is a best husband one can get ..he can be anGry on her ..but will mellow down as soon seeing her face...
Haila who is playing this game 😕 ...o my poor baAji got hurt .."sigh miss Duji and Tasha even more after reading the update ..
Omg naku is pregnant ...can't wait to see DUtta"s reaction to this ..
Loved the update and pls continue soon ..
Thanx yaara
Love and hugs
Suhana 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb updt... the tasha convo is so touching... dutta worried fr Baaji and Nakku... nakku preggy... updt sooon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Super update and I just loved the way you ended it...on a super super high note...where Naku is going to tell Dutta that he is gonna be a father :) Cant wait to see you how you write that chapter. I loved this chapter from your FF the best...cause it had so many elements :)
And just one request...start the new FF first and then end this one...so we never have an opportunity to miss you and your writing :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for a wonderful update will be interesting to see dutta reaction on the news of nakku's pregnancy please update can't wait to read that,please do it asap.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Very nice update👏👏 the understanding between Datta & Naku is very well put, she doesn't want to recover soon, so he can be with her for a longer period. Datta is equally worried about Baji. The concern these three have for each other's safety & welbeing is amazing. Finally Datta has a reason to be more happy, Waiting for how Naku tells him about this good news, in next episode.

Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesoe update ... update next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omggg Omggg Ommggg Shes pregnant... Finally... Wooo!!
Lool... Awww bless Dutta.. this accident touched him deeeply.. He's scared to lose his 2 loved ones.
Haha.. Baaji bhi na... He's hurt but still his chirpy self... Thats y i love him hehe.
Awesomeee updateee... Pllz continue soon (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohmigodd!! nakus preggers!!! WOOHOOO
omg im soo happy...over the moon!!!
absolutly loved the update ... loved the way u showed conern of each prgotagonist n their loyalty 2 one another..dutta worries 4 basha n naku worried 4 duji n baji worried 4 tasha ... love them!!!!
am curious as 2 who tried shooting dutta...?!?!!!
aww dutta tied his read dagha on nakus wrist...rely small but very adorable gesture...very dutta ishtyle <3
thnx 4 pm
but pls pls jaldi update karna i jus cant wait 2 see how dutta is gona react man!!!! we gona get propa cute scenes !!
pls update soon my lovely jagy
xoxox
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

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Jag mein aa gai 🤗...read and now ready to comment

..hey!! always love it when you come with your detailed comments im always sure that atleast you will be around to read and tell me what you think. Am i right in thinking it was your bday a few days ago? hope you had a fab time...!! would like this opportunity to wish you all the best once again!!
but first i must say I am first...ok my moments of fame done 😆
...carry on don't want to take you away from the golden moments!

Ready Ready for comments ...here we go:
...im ready..😳

I loved this part soo much ...they are getting better and better
..aw thank you im actually very surprised because i wasn't too sure about it myself. But if you guys liked it then all is well.

Oh if Dutta approaches in such authoritive manner I too would have butterflies within lol...loved how her sensed her nervousness, obviously not surprising, anyway loved the way he to ease the awkwardness throws her line back at her lol ...so DSP...him and his ways...yet that it wat I love <3
..yep you know i think i would be the same to but i think secretly this is what naku loves about him..he has such an impact over her..its almost suprising that she goes on with daily life without fainting..at his presence..just imagine..if you were in her situation with a man like dsp for you husband...kya haal hota. Not a very good one for me..no where near as strong as nakus character would cry every two minuets. 😆


aww his touch and she loooks up instantly to catch such a hot pair of eyes look at her so warmly ...he is smiling haayeee omg...I should be in a grave by now LOL ..I have died because of your DSP's looks soo many times...i must have a grave by now ...lol
...sorry..i never knew the eyes could have the effect..i dont even think i mention the eyes that much..do i?? might be wrong..

Loved how he stood and watched her consume the medicines..refusing to leave until its down her throat and he has witnessed it..soo much love, concern its all there...
...yep that was the more scolding side of dutta i think..he just wanted to make sure she drank them thats all.

aww Naku in pain...and just like DSP to lovingly scold Naku...it shows his love even more...the amount it's killing him...the pain he feels seeing her like that..and her not taking the meds wont help either of them.
...your right here..every time dutta sees nakusha in pain his own heart gives way..chot naku ko lagti hai dard dutta ko hota hai all he wants is to see her happy and so like anybody who is close to you they just want whats best for you even if they seem like they are being harsh with you..you know in your heart of hearts its because they love you.

So night time...Naku feels that D is not there...just like him to be working...and Naku remembers and asks aabout Baaji <- loved that it was her who remembered him vs D because it really shows her concern for Baaji too...he is after all like her brother na...Dutta on the other hand realizing Baaji not home yet and decides to chk on him. I really liked that he was concerned for both B and N in the moment...didn't want to worry her but at the same time he was worried about Baaji
...personally this was my frav moment of this update..when nakusha walks out to dutta midnight..walks behind his chair at the desk and rests her face on his shoulder..that for me was the moment of my own..update..lol
and yep her dutta is the one who looks out for both of them..

eekk some creepy call mentioning danger...you know for some odd reason...i had a hunch that Baaji will return once Dutta left...i dunno why but I did lol
..you guessed right maybe this was a predictable element of the update..

Naku worried for both her loved ones..and prays and Baaji shows up and as I expected...alone...and then creepy phone call...Baaji tensed ready to leave and of course his Vahini must tag along whether he wants her or not...she is coming it is inevitable lol
...yep nakusha is stubborn and so they go through the whole convo of your not coming- yes i am!! thing yet i didnt think it was need ..tum log samajdar ho!😉

They go and see meet D on the way with his broken down car...
someone aiming a gun ...when I was readin i was like oh naku dont do anything to get ur self hurt and look who ends up taking the shot...Baaji...and Naku faints...u know here for some odd reason (again) i thought pregnancy and then i was like what am i thinking poor girl fainted in fear, anxiety, weakness what ever and then u do say she is pregnant lol I am soo happy about that...more happy that both B and N are good...and now I am soo excited to hear how Naku is going to tell Dutta...
...yep initially it was all out of weakness..and the whole rush of something like this happening but in the end yep..she is!! waahaay! hope i made a few people happy there.

I loved the write up on Dutta's behavior, reaction to his two loved ones being in danger...it must kill him to see the two imp people in his life ...dependent on medical support...never a good sight...
...Duttas reaction was very silent yet for me thats what dutta shri ram patil is ..in anger he erupts and in sorrow there is just silence.

very well written like always 👏👏👏 keep it up ...u never cease to amaze
...too kind with your words..

am soo eager to read next part...jaldi update kar na😳😳
...thank you very much will try to update soon.




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rrs1391

yaar best update of your apni next update jald karna i want to know what is the reaction of dutta about the baby finally footbaal team ki starting ho gayi👏



thank you very much for reading and commenting ..glad you liked the update..
yep much awaited moment finally came!! o god..i abhi tak muje nahin pata ke how hes going to react..will try to update soon though..thanks again. jagruti

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