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Posted: 14 years ago
as always great update ,i want u to continue writing its upto u if u want to start a new ff ,i know u will come up with something good ,but plz don't leave this incomlete
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jagruti...one week is over after ur previous update...where is next update???
We r waiting yaar...
Update soon :-) :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon dear and make it soon,i hope we will able to read tasha romance a full update on tasha let whole pn wasis go to temple or somewhere leaving tasha alone or tasha going somewhere,its a request please do consider and update soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

"Thank you very much guys for all the amazing feedback!!!"

rrs1391: hey thank you very much for reading as for what happens with

naku ..you will have to wait and see.!

AzMishy: hi thank you soo much for reading and commenting. Glad you liked the last update and o yep that first scene wasn't really ment to be anything special but glad you liked it. The romantic formula always works with you guys is what I have learnt..lol As for imagination well from where I see it dutta was helping nakusha get ready that's all baaki ka is all in your head!!! Yep dutta tells baaji about sia and he runs off you will have to wait and see what happens with that.

Yep I am thinking about ending ths one soon not sure though.. thank you very much for your feedback always love to read what you think. Wil update soon.

Prncz: hey thanks for your comment yep nakusha not taking her meds although its ok of her too do that ..some people totally hate taking them yet she could have hid them in a better place as for aayi yep do you blame her …I would run away too. As for what happens with baaji you will have to wait and see.. thanks again for your feedback. As for closing this one and starting a new one thinking about it..ive got a storyline to mind so would like to start a new ff.

suhana19: hi thank you very much for your comment…glad you enjoyed it ..aw you didn't blush did you..sorry.. as for baaji always on time!! As for what happens with baaji and sia thing you will have to wait to read on and o I am so glad you liked the last bit of the update. Wasn't too sure about it myself but then actually when I finished writing that moment I really liked it too! yep I have been thinking about ending this but I do have something in mind for a new one..not sure yet..anyways thank you..will update soon.

droopy_asleep: hey thank you very much for reading..commenting, glad you liked the update..as for the whole caring dutta I think your right it does at to the appeal..anyways thanks again…think I will be closing this ff soon yet I do have something in mind for a new one..see how it all goes.

eternity_of_luv: hi thank you for reading..nice to know you liked the last update as for what happens with both nakusha and baaji well you will have to wait and read the next chapters.. cant let too much on sorry varna shatir minds will guess!

Thanks again.

mnx12: thank you very much for reading and commenting and yep a little bit going on in the last chapte ..baaji running from duttas wedding talk and naku not taking meds..glad you enjoyed the update..keep following. And thanks!

Buttbhai: hey thank you for reading and aw..really nice to know you like this ff but..i do feel somewhere that an end should approach now and don't worry I will start a new one ..and my style of writing wont change..the essense will pretty much be the same. Still thinking about it though so..for now thank you and keep reading.

Krishaa: o no I don't mind your reminders at all I pretty much need them really because I sometimes totally forget how long its been sorry for taking so long everytime. As for ending the ff..yep been thinking about it I think the next one or two chapters maybe..not sure yet. But don't worry not going to stop writing thinking of starting a new ff..anyways glad you enjoyed the last update please keep following and sorry again for the delays…

p.s got your request about the whole tasha alone thing a bit late ..already written the update but will try to keep it in mind with the next chapters. Sorry!

Shreeya1: hey thank you very much for reading and commenting nice to know you are enjoying my ff..as for whats going on..you will have to wait till the next chapter! Thanks again.

MishalsFAN: hi thank you very much for reading ..glad you liked the update. Yep lots of small moments in that last update..nice to know you liked them..and yep I think my frav had to be the last scene with nakusha hiding from dutta…

As for what happens next..you will have to wait for the next chapter but yep having been thinking about an end..30 odd chapters ho gayey hai..and I think its time for something new.

Thanks again.

Nakusha: hey thank you very much for reading and commenting dont worry I never leave any of my ffs incomplete wont leave this one either.

Daya/kiran/swapna.. I will be replying to your feedback later…but thank you guys too..love your dedication to my ff ..and your comments always put a smile on my face so thanks!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: daya0628

R E S E R V E D ...


E D I T E D...

Jagz 🤗


wonderful update 😳 loved it as usual
..thank you soo much always too kind with your words..

haila opening scene left me breathless, speechless, 😍
..glad you liked it..i think i mentioned it to somebody else too that..you guys can be easily won over by romance!! formula pata chal gayay..little bit of dutta a little bit of nakusha and one romantic moment = hit update!!😆

in dreamland imagining Dutta doing that to me ☺️😆
..keep dreaming!!!😆😆😆

KMH aa gai ...none other than dimpled cutie ..hehe Baaji ...I was expecting that...
...yep nahin aata toe ajeeb lagta..something would be missing then..but i will try to write a moment where he doesnt be kmh! im sure i have done so in the past.

and this time he saved Naku from further embarassment😳 toh good timing 😉
...yep can you imagine..bechari..totally got him wrong..all he wanted was his watch!

hmmm so Dutta asked Baaji about marrying Sia...and his expression was not good 😕
...bhaag gayay...yep..

of course Dutta missed that...and Baaji managed to leave ...
..yep saved by the phonecall..i think if dutta had seen that expression he would have worked it out but naku hai naa..so no problem there.

seems like everything is working in favor of them first KMH to rescue for Naku
...gods on there side today ..

and now phone call to the rescue for Baaji ...who's next 😆
...as for why
baaji reacted this way then...cant tell you now there would be no fun in that..w
next few chapters mein pata chalega ...


I am curious to know reason for the frown...fallen face upon hearing sia...


i hope you say why soon...
...soon wont keep you waiting too long promise..

and that little moment with tasha...about him offering to help her...and she refusing...
..yep i think that was something very sensitive..even though he is her husband..i always think nakusha has his ideology that he is not just her husband but he is dutta shri ram patil..so she doesn't like him taking part in very minor tasks to speak. More so shes typical wife..doesnt want her husband to be the one is burdened by her..and even more i think she ia a reluctant for dutta to see her burns..even though he as seen them..she doesnt want them to be exporsed to him as to speak..anyways im so glad you highlighted that.!

but his line in response to the refusal 👏👏 loved it...
...dutta shri ram patil hai always amazing!!😳

and then comes Madhu and her suspense filled actions 😆 even i was impatient like D
...aw this stared off being a moment i wasnt too sure about but was good in the end..
i would be the same too..

i think i would be annoyed if the person didnt say anything and told me to just stand there

but very well written scene...so Naku say she is sick of meds...
...who wouldn't be!!!

but she has been hiding all her meds in drawer ? why? 😕
...i just think she is one of those who doesn't like taking them..little bit like a kid who runs away from it ..baaki ka you will have to wait to read.

and loved the way Dutta with his suspicious questioning gaze just barged into the rm
..very dsp!! no messing around..

and then he opens the drawer in front of her...and simply asks what is all this

and haha theme of ur update...being saved 😆 AS aa gai ...to save Naku this time...
...omg totally everybody saved each other here never thought about that...

but i guess u can't be lucky always ...AS also handed her right over to Dutta herself 😆
..yep but shes a mother after all even she doesn't agree with naku not taking them so i think she did the wise thing..bhaag gayi!!!

Dutta is like the cop and N the victim ...ready for interrogation 😳😆
...will have to wait and see what happens...

great update ...loved it to the core...
...thank you very much!

am unsure what ur plans for FF is in terms of story/plot

but u know if u feel itz appropriate to end it ...I won't stop u AS LONG AS you are writing

another FF ...u know i am seeing to many FF on this forum that are incomplete ...

I think a majority of them... but decision is urs...

itz great FF and I would love if it continued

but if you feel itz time to end it i am ok with that...just start new ff lol

alright...thanks for the amazing update...

take care...🤗

...As for ending this ff i am considering it within the next one or two chapters..i do feel its time to give a close to this ff now..i am think of starting another yet a little unsure but anyways thank you very much for reading and commenting..as always love you feedback!



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ziks

Hi jagruthi,

Thanks for pm. Its a warm loving update .😊
...thank you very much.

First scene tasha's moment is so lovely . As usual dutta coming close to naku and naku's embarassment and tasha kiss lovely😳 . The way dutta walked towards her , the way naku watches everything is perfect . ...aw glad you liked that moment was only meant to be a small moment but you all seem to highlight that one.

So dutta saab for his watch made naku tensed so much . But anyway its so romantic as ususal in their unique tasha style .😳 ...yep sirf watch chahiyey thi..naku got it wrong.

Dutta asked baazi to think about sia for marriage ? Ohh baazi is so unhappy wonder what would be the reason may be he is not seeing sia in that way or he is in love with madhu or someone ? ok lets see what
happens ? 😕 ...yep baaji not very happy u will have to wait and read next few chapters for this one.

Naku noticed this ya always naku notices all as dutta as usual gadha like these heart related matters .😉 ...i think if dutta had seen the reaction then baand vahi baj jaata so coudn't do that..so naku knows though

Joke is dutta does n't recognise his own love for so long , he did n't find that naku love him whereas baazi finds that naku loves dutta and told him right ? 🤣
...yep very true..ghada king!
Then if our dear dutta can't recognise his own love how can he recognises baazi's . ? 🤣 Ohhh we are expecting too much from dutta . just kidding i love really love very much the innocent side of dutta . 🤗

Dutta helping in dressing up naku wow so romantic . Dutta saab really u r a sweet hubby . love his caring and his concern towards his wife. ...yep pretends to be all sher but hes very soft and sweet really
😍
Loved the lines ...thank you very much!

"asie kya dekh rahin hai muje'tu mere leighyey Itna kuch karti hai..mein itna nahin kar sakta tere leighyey."

"aise kuch nahin hai..jo meri patni mujse chupasakti hai." so naku is hesistant to show him her scars and he is so sweeet towards her . Love dutta saba's adamant nature here . Love tasha .😍
...yep nakusha i think felt it was a task not worthy of him..even though he has already seen her scars she is a little hesitant. yep

And the last scene is really marvellous . Its so simple but its revealing so many hidden feelings and quite amusing scene between tasha .😊
...took me a long to think up this moment..i really couldnt think anything up that would convery lots on there relationship until this little idea..but glad you liked it.

loved the way how madhu showed dutta directly naku's chidish behaviour to take medicines . Its so sweet and amusing .😊 ...bhai ki champchi!!

Madhu threatening naku and naku's answer is superb . "Korlo mein tere bhaiya se nahin darti.." ohh when naku says this line we can imagine dutta's face poor dutta saab he is so confused and he is thinking whether it is good or for bad ? 🤣
...yep hes a don after all after hearing that he must feel a little strange maybe hes loosing his touch..is what was going through his mind..

The way dutta walked to her and asked her about medicines and aaai saab's entry at the same time and naku hiding behind her . Its really a lovely scene . 😊how much i loved to see these type of scenes in show with mishal and mahi ?😔
...yep.mee tooo!! miss them!!

Naku is so child like , so innocent , so sweet and dutta's " yeh aap apni bahu se phuchyey aayi sahab " I mean in simple words of dutta we can see the affection, love , care and concern shows how much dutta loves nakusha ? 😍
...yep irritated..angry concern is always duttas thing but it does show his care for her

Aai saab leaves naku with dutta so now to see how dutta saab handles this sitauation with his lovely wife nakusha either romatically or agressively or in which manner ?😉
...god knows what do you want to see happening!!??


Jagruthi as for this ff its really a great ff and one of favourite ff 👏👏. But every great story has to end at any point . I love this ff very much . As long as u maintain the natural tasha essence and their characters uniqueness and greatness i will read continuously . 😊
...thank you very much its nothing without you readers so thanks

As a writer u can judge better right than readers If u think that this ff has reached its end point u can end .
..i do feel the end should be close now..

But i have to say u one thing i enjoyed and loved so much this ff and the way of ur writing .👍🏼

Hey u r going to start another ff right congratulations Iam very happy on that . waiting for the new ff also . 😊

...just want to add one big thank you!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran255

Omg what

..hey dont worry..will still write but im so touched that
you guys are so dedicated to my ff. do feel like an end is needed now though.

no wayyy ,

i love this FF ,.thank you!

plz dont finish it :( ...aw dont worry will be starting a new ff and my style of writing wont change.

and jagu baby

i know i am like the last person of ur FF , ..dont worry about it..you read it that totally enough for me so thanks

who loved ur FF , but is missing commentng :( ...but i am aware that you still follow so never forger you.

ok now first of all

the way u carried forward the story

wowww

u deserve a bow ! ...far to kind with your words ...

teh story is all about Dingnity , class and power !

amazing

Dutta dutta Dutta ...yep you said it love him!!!😳

the Dutta here is just some one who u can onmly feel respect and a lil dar from him


his character isjust siply amazinggg ...ive tried to stick to his original character hopefully done justice to it..

and Naku

wowww u just tell to how extent she can go to save Dutta
from all the curses ...yep shes really very innocent..yet strong for her relationship

the black color was a sixer .thank you

amazing jagu :D


i was like

wow how can she even think of that ! ...all she wanted i think is for that woman to stop cursing her husband and in that forgot her promise to him.

u know she going back to her old self ...very much soo .

amazing

i hated to miss those updates ...you have caught up now thats what counts..so thank you for going bk and reading

and then he realizes k she can also makes a mistake

nd teh Way D deals with All ! ...yep i think dutta was just very hurt that nakusha of all people had not understood him and of course that would hurt ..he loves her and was convinced that she would never mis-judge him but she did..on the other hand..shes only human.she can make mistakes too..because dutta was so used to naku doing what is correct when she makes a mistake it totally overlooks that she can too make mistakes..

amaizng sia and choti , ...thank you

amaizng entrants i bet , ...they were only meant to be of small significance but i became really found of chotus character cud not help but hand on

i was scared in begging but wowww ...i keep telly swapna..not to worry she always seems to be dead scared and i never no why..


awesome Jagu

u are great ...thank you very much

everything abt ur FF is aweosme ...nice to know you like it..

and wooo D wants B to marry Sia ...yep he is just concerned for her thats all so is jumping the gun a bit i think

i hope all fine theri .,,wait and see

and wht Dutta find out N is not atkin medi

im so scared ...why???? of dutta no..come on..

and yes jagu hatts offf on the burnt thing

this shows a woman is weak in believing her man , ...yep i think thats true i dont think its a case of beliving dutta for naku..she trusts him more than herself yet i think she is just a little unsure..of being exposed that way..and also for nakusha...she feels something like assistanting her is not a worthy enough task for him. She thinks of him very highly in that respect.

she has always got her insecurities

\i sooo love it Jagu

this is just a filler

i will keep my commenting with reffering to past updates

sorry for being so late

and thank u for remembering me when Pming

love u and ur FF sooo much :D

...thank you keep reading and dont worry about comments..

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Posted: 14 years ago
note: sorry having a little trouble with the text editor so the font and size might be strange, zoom out if you find it to big..cant get it to format the way i would like..sorry. thanks for all the feedback on the last chapter..love all your comments please do elaborate on your feelings for this..as it feels like ive written soo much..your turn now...love it or hate it ..please tell me!!😉

Chapter 26

Aayi sahab Leaving Nakusha in the presence of dutta who looks over her, seeing the way in which nakusha seemed a little nervous her eyes scattered and lost for words. Dutta approaches Nakusha silently still with his hands behind his back clasped in a very stern manner his footsteps are sounded in the room as he approaches her, as ever his every approach leaves Nakusha with an warm feeling of butterflies within. Dutta stops before Nakusha overlooking her silently. Watching over the way she fiddles with white dupatta in her hand and the way in which her eyes fail to look up towards him dutta could sense a certain nervousness from nakusha which amused him a little. Minutes ago she had made a very strong declaration to Madhu that she didn't fear him but now that he stood before her Nakusha things were very different. Dutta looked down at Nakusha with a certain warmth to those eyes of his, something within him said he should ease this awkwardness for nakusha and he does that as ever in his own way. "Abhi abhi Madhu ko kya keh rahin thi?? ke tu mujse nahin darti yehi naa.aab saamne hoon toe nazre bhi nahin uth rahin?"

Nakusha a little shocked by the way Dutta seemed to know of her conversation with Madu feels a rush of hesitancy for she knew that what she had boasted of to Madhu was strictly true and this very moment proved so. Further scattering her eyes..and finding no ease with the moment Nakusha hesitates to look at dutta yet..dutta looking down at nakusha with a certain softness breaks the clasp of his hands behind his back and slowly, silently brings the up..around the top of Nakushas shoulders. Nakusha feeling the warm touch upon her skin reacts to the touch by taking an instant look up at duttas expression. In those eyes she sees a warmth that was as ever comforting for nakusha..his eyes were always filled with a certain love for her..yet surprisingly his lips carried a smile too. Nakusha a little confused as her eyes lock with his for a second yet dutta is quick to make something clear.
"Muskuradiya is ka matlab yeh nahin ke mein teri daavayon ko nazar andaz kardunga". Nakusha looks innocently up at dutta yet dutta was having none of it. watching dutta walk towards the side table opening that drawer where naku had hidden the medication dutta takes out one of the silver satchels. Ripping it open he takes out a small off white table and dilutes It within the glass of water Madhu had left on the table. The fizzing of a soda sound as the medication mixes dutta picks up the glass and stops infront of naksuha he hold out the glass in front of her. his eyes insisted that she take it. trying to avoid the liquid in every way nakushas expression creased with a distaste her eyes almost pleaded like a child who was forced to take there medicine. Knowing full well that duttas instruction would stand firm as ever nakusha takes the glass looking into It for a second she takes a look up at dutta…and is just about to say something yet Dutta doesn't give her a chance. Putting his hands behind his backs duttas tone is firm and the look in his eyes even more adamant. "Jab tak tu yeh pura nahin pee leti nahin mein yaha se kahin jaaunga naa tu."

Naku knowing full well that there was no way to get away with this, hearing that seriousness in his voice Nakusha dared not question. Looking down at the glass in her hands at that white liquid that seemed to bubble with a strong sent..nakusha closed her eyes before putting the glass to her lips and drinking. Dutta noticed the way in which her expression shaped in discomfort and he knew that it was something she disliked yet with silence he waited until Nakusha finished. Seeing her expression ease once as she had finished drinking dutta took away the glass from Naku. Whilst having his back turned to her nakusha putting the glass back on the side table unknown to dutta naku feels the existence of a sharp pain through her burns. Her expression creases in pain ..touching over her right shoulder with the palm of her left hand..nakusha takes a seat on the bed, as dutta happens to turn around he sees that existence of pain on nakushas face and an instant concern takes to his him.
Naku? ..Approaching the bed dutta takes hold of nakusha's hand, looking down at her with immense worry don't sounds his concern more in the form of a scolding.
"Dard ho raha hai naa?, itni vakt se daavaai nahin li jo tune"..duttas eyes still disapproving of the way nakusha hadn't been taking her medication, dutta helps nakusha sit comfortably into the bed. Pulling those cushions behind her back dutta sees nakusha relax in more comfort now and his worry eases.
Sitting down next to Nakusha at the edge of the bed..dutta takes nakushas hand into his..looking into those eyes of hers that continuously seemed fixed on him duttas words much softer this time around. "aaj se mein khud tumari davayio par nazar rakhuga", that meant dutta personally would be present to make sure she takes her medication. Nakusha could feel the care and concern in his words and was deeply touched..As dutta gets up to leave looking over naku his words again stress the importance.."Vakt par daayai legi toe..jaldi theekh hojayeygi." As dutta turns..to leave the room walking a few steps..towards the door
Nakusha looks upon dutta walking away her eyes filled with a devoted sense of love for him hearing her ..dutta stops.. for a second.
"Yehi toe mein nahin chahti sahab.. mein bimar hai toe aap mere karib ho..theekh hojayeygi toe duriya baad jayeygi". Turning around Duttas eyes glow in a sense of affection, with understanding and reassurance no words were needed for the eyes spoke.
Late in the night, as Nakusha turns in bed feeling the right hand side of the bed empty dutta was still working. Nakusha carefully sits up flicking the lamp alight on the side table her eyes tired..yet unable to sleep she takes a glance to the clock on the side table which reads 12am.
As dutta sits behind his desk in the lit balcony from the bedroom. His eyes on paperwork sitting in front of his laptop dutta looks busy with offical matter..yes as nakusha apporches silently…walking around duttas chair nakusha pauses behind him for a second watching over the way he seemed to be tired yet still working..nakusha places her expression on his shoulder..resting on it silently dutta feels nakusha touch and without moving his attention from the paper work he comments. "Tu abhi tak soiee nahin naku?" "Aap bhi toe nahin soyey naa sahab." Dutta finshing rearranging his paper work..and looking to be reading something important exdending his hand..over his shoulder..caresses nakushas cheek softy in aknowlegment before taking it away and continuing work. Soe jaa mein kuch der mein aata hoon.. nakusha knew that once her husband hand set his mind on a task it was near enough impossible to distract him. parting from him..nakusha begins to walk towards the inside of there room when ..she happens to think of something..and turns back. Sahab..baaji? for the past few days baaji had been looking after all bussniess on his own. He would leave early morning and return home late yet being on his own there was always a certain concern to mind for him. dutta looking up from his paper work reaslies that baaji hadnt returned yet. A concern taking to mind dutta is careful not to let the worry take to his expression for the last thing he wanted was for to nakusha to worry. Duttas words reassuring he reassures nakusha there was nothing to worry about. "Tu fikar mat kar woah aajayeyga." Watching nakusha turn into the room..dutta makes sure she is a good distance before he picks up his mobile phone that sits on the desk infront of him amongst the paperwork. concerened by the way baaji had not yet returned nor spoken to him over the phone dutta dials Baajis number and puts the phone to his right ear. All the while wondering what was taking him so long. The phone repeatitly rings thereafter the operator message plays. Dutta cuts the call and re-dails only for the same sequence. Puttinhg down the phone a little irritated by how he was unable to get through to baaji dutta looks over his phone for a second and begns to worry more intensitly..
"Kaha hai ….tu baaji..phone kyun nahin utha raha .." Just as dutta is about to again pick the phone up off the desk.. it rings. The display showing an unknown number. Duttas expression creases in question for a second. Picking up the phone he listens to a very..deep..voice on the other end Just a blunt message warning.-"Baaji rao hamare kabse mein hai..batchana hai usko toe..kali ghati poch jaa…- as the man on the other end hangs up and the phone beeps at being disconnected duttas eyes fill with a harshness.….
Nakusha sitting in bed watches nakusha walk into the room, seeing a sense of firmness in that expression of his nakusha silently watches dutta approach his waldrobe. Opening the doors he takes out his black suit which is the first indication that he was going somewhere. Unable to question him nakusha simply watches as dutta walks into the restroom and a few minuies walks out. Neatly dressed in his black attire..sleeves folded and look perfect. Tired as per time of night duttas eye are of a dull shade of tiredness yet within them was deep concern, a anxiousness as well as lingering anger.Dutta without a glance to naksusha approaches his waldrobe..takes out his revolver and tucks it into his waist. Turing his back.. duttas eyes fall on nakusha who seems to be watching him with a silently concern.
Dutta walks over to nakusha with silence arching over her he places a kiss on her forehead. "Fikar mat kar ..jaaldi aajaunga."Nakusha nods a yes..yet her eyes are filled with worry as she watches dutta leave.……Sometime later…nakusha unable to sleep concerned for both baaji and dutta she walks the floor at the entrance of patil niwas..looking over the doorway every second or two nakusha waits for there return her mind constantly worrying for there safety. Yet nakushas wait she feels is over when Baaji walks through the entrance her eyes ease in a relief.Baaji..tum log aagayay..sahab kaha hai..??Nakusha searching behind baajis back, baaji confused brushes his hand across the back of this hair."Yeh kya keh reh li hai naku, bhau mere saath kaise hoga woah toe ghar pein hai naa." Looking confused baaji sees how nakusha face takes to distress at the mention of dutta not being with him. "Baaji ..sahab tuje dhund ne ko nikle the…abhi thak nahin aayey.."Baaji about to console naku from worrying further when his mobile phone rings. Picking It up baaji listens to that same deep, mysterious tone that warns him of dutta being in danger.Baaji Putting the phone down nakusha notices the way his expression instantly changes and is quick to question. "Kya hua baaji?? kaun tha??
Nakusha adamant to accompany baaji, even after baaji had severely reasoned with her nakusha was convinced that she wanted to be there two. Baaji unhappy with putting nakusha at risk in this way still injured he knew that it was wrong for her to accompany him but she was far to stubborn. Driving in the darkness of the night..having driven some distance baaji concerned for dutta couldn't help but think of all this and get angry. A trap from an enemy who wanted to hurt dutta.yet had done it with such apt but how could dutta have fallen for it.
Baaji driving at some speed sees..duttas jeep parked at some distance in the middle of the road and breaks with sharpness. Stopping at a jolt both nakusha and baaji feel at ease when they see dutta. dutta's car broken down..looking over an open bonnet his eyes trail towards baaji and dutta who stand at a distance.. As nakusha and baaji both walk towards dutta..duttas eyes fill with question. His eyes ease In relief at seeing baaji uharmed yet as his eyes linger of nakusha both baaji and naku could see that he didn't approve of her presence. Just as dutta approches..his footsteps closing the distance between them nakusha steps closer..resting her head against his chest softly..nakusha wraps her hands around his back. Dutta looking down on her places his hand around the back head effectionanitly.. Tuje yaha nahin aana achayay tha naku..Resting comfortably on duttas chest..nakusha refilled to see dutta in no halm listens to his words yet.her eye trail off to a figure in the background.Seeing a tall dark figure in the background. As nakusha looked deeper she could make out Someone aiming a gun at dutta nakusha lifting her expression tries to prompt dutta to move yet … baaji had already preempted the situation he is quick to come in harms way..taking a gun shot to his arm. Nakusha seeing baaji hurt weak per existing injury overwhelmed faints in duttas arms..baaji..heavy wounded by the gun shot slanders on the floor…leaving dutta.. with the ramose of to loved ones..nakusha who was unconscious in his arms and baaji injured on the ground before him.
……In the corridors of very conventional hospital Dutta walks up and down the blue corridors of the narrow seated isle. Out of pure distress duttas footsteps trailed back and forth the corridor whilst Aayi sahab and seated on one of the chairs out side the operation theater silently prays with the hope of seeing both nakusha and baaji through this incident. It had been an hour since both had been admitted into the same theater there beds side by side doctors seeing to them both for some time now…dutta burdened with worry ..stops walking the corridor for a second..a sense of sadness to his eyes he takes and visible worry not leaving his expression he seat next to aayi sahab.
Raising his expression to rest on the back of the seat..dutta closes his eyes for a second and breathes deeply. Aayi sahab witnessing dutta' s anxiousness touches upon his right should. As dutta opens his eyes..lower his expression ..and turning it to his right to face aayisahab…aayi sahab sees ..a certain fear in those eyes of dutta which was harldy ever visible. Yet her reassurance and comforting nodd provides a little comfort for dutta. before any words could be shared..a female doctor dressed in a grey saari..over it a white doctors coat come outs of the room both baaji and nakusha are admitted.
Dutta quick to reacts leaves his seat at once and approaches the doctor with haste..Doctor!! Waohh.. the doctor not allowing dutta to distress further explains all."Aap fikar naa kare aapke dost aur aapki patni dono theekh hai.Bas kuch vakt ke baad hosh aajayeyga dono ko…"Having heard that both were in no life threath..both aayi sahab and duttas expression his a relief. Standing before the door of that operation theather..dutta looks through the circular clear glass window…still with a sense of regret for being the season that his loved ones were this way dutta onlooks through the window for a second before entering the room. Having stepped into the room..on looking both nakusha who lay on a bed on the left..and baaji who lay on a bed a little distance away on the right . Dutta notices the way…both unconscious seem..rather at peace, reassured now that they would both were safe. Dutta walks a little further into the room ..approching nakusha bedside..he ovelooks her for a second. As much love as ever in those eyes of his he softly brushes his hands over nakusha left cheek. His eyes trailing down at her figure laid there…duttas eyes fall on nakushas wrist. Remembering the moment in which nakusha had taken that red dhaga from around her wrist and tied it to baaji..dutta thinks over the significance it. The moment where nakusha had tied one on his wrist flashes before dutta. "aap ki suraksha karega yeh dhaga.." is what she had said. Bringing his right arm up dutta looks at his wrist that red thread still tied to his wrist…dutta unties it with his left hand..loosing it from around his wrist he slowly ties it to nakusha's wrist. His eyes moving from Nakusha to baaji who was at some distance..dutta walks around nakusha bed..silence in the room the sound of only duttas footsteps aas he walks towards baajis bedside. Overlooking baaji..his right arm bandaged in a white material where he had been shot dutta touches he hand over baajis forehead for a second. His eyes saddened to see him in such a state..dutta looking over them both..once more leaves the room.
…Sometime later as both nakusha and baaji regain consciousness, Baaji even though hurt still his usual self..his right arm in a sling he talks to naksha who is a little silent due to pain..yet smiles at baajis comments …Aayi sahab enter and madu enter to the room. Both happy to see them good and well there expressions with smiles..aayi sahab takes a seat at at end of nakushas bed whilst madhu approches baaji. -Sahin mein…tum dono ko theekh dekar…man ko shanti mili hai. nakushas eyes searching for dutta..not seeing him…her tone very soft silent she asks . ..aayisahib..sahab kaha hai? aayi sahab takes naku's hand into hers and explains. "woah kuch der pehle ghar chala gayay..tum dono ko aise nahin dekh paa raha tha woah. Satch naku..meine dutta ko kayee baar pareshaan hote hue dekha hai magar aaj jo uski ankhon mein dekha woah..kayi syada ghehra tha. par ab tum dono theekh ho toe sab theekh hai." Nakusha and Baajis eyes lock for a second, both concerned about duttas reaction look at each other with an understanding for both knew of dutta nature well. The fact that he wasn't here meant this incident had touched him deeply. Just had conversation had begun in the room the doctor enters the room. All eyes upon her as she approaches nakushas bedside with a certain report.
"Mrs patil..hamne aapki kuch tests li thi unke results aachuke hai. Kya aap yey private mein suna chahegi ya.." The doctors asks nakusha if she would like to be told the outcome of her results in privacy yet nakusha objects. "Nahin doctor..yeh sab mera parivar hai, aap kahiyey". The presence of baaji aayi sahab and madhu..didnt bother nakusha she would have rather they be with her then she be alone. All eyes on the doctor as she reads from a clip board "Atchi kabar yeh hai ke ..aap bikul theekh hai bas aapko apke zakhmo ka khyal rakhna hoga aaram karna hoga. Ek aur kushbhabri yeh bhi hai ke aap maa bane vali ho."
Hearing the doctor say Naksuha was pregnant all faces in in the room light up in joy nakusha surprised a litte overwhelmed her eyes film in tears of joy whist both baaji and madhu celebrate in a more comic way aayi sahab puts her hands together thanking bapa..with immense joy at the news.
The smile on nakushas face expressive…a little overwhelmed with the news nakushas eyes seem to beam with a certain happiness. As madhu goes on to hug nakusha..nakusha..a little embarrassed yet overjoyed with news…wants to say something to the family.."Aayi sahab…waoh..mein.." Aayi sahab still smiling looks towards nakushas as she goes on…letting her speak. Unable to lift her expression as she speaks nakusha tells aayi sahab that she wanted to be the first one to tell dutta. "Mein phele sahab ko batana chahti hai..."aayi sahab along with the rest of the family overjoyed promise that say wouldn't say a word to dutta.
Nakusha expression glowing with a sense of happiness for today she had fulfilled that wish of duttas nakusha sees that red dhaga tied to her wrist knowing that the one who tied it around her wrist would be dutta nakusha smiles to herself in content…………
Later into the night or even a dark morning of the next day Nakusha and Baaji are allowed leave from the hospital walking into Patil Niwas the joy of such good news leaves a smile on both of there expressions yet as Nakusha still a little weak slowly walks alongside Baaji who has his right arm in a sling looking some distance into the house they see Dutta sat in front of the greenery with his back turned towards them. Sitting in silence on the wooden decking dutta seems to be on looking the garden in silence. Both Nakusha and baaji look at each other for a second in concern

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Edited by jagrutid - 14 years ago
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Jag mein aa gai 🤗...read and now ready to comment

but first i must say I am first...ok my moments of fame done 😆

Ready Ready for comments ...here we go:

I loved this part soo much ...they are getting better and better

Oh if Dutta approaches in such authoritive manner I too would have butterflies within lol...loved how her sensed her nervousness, obviously not surprising, anyway loved the way he to ease the awkwardness throws her line back at her lol ...so DSP...him and his ways...yet that it wat I love <3

aww his touch and she loooks up instantly to catch such a hot pair of eyes look at her so warmly ...he is smiling haayeee omg...I should be in a grave by now LOL ..I have died because of your DSP's looks soo many times...i must have a grave by now ...lol

Loved how he stood and watched her consume the medicines..refusing to leave until its down her throat and he has witnessed it..soo much love, concern its all there...

aww Naku in pain...and just like DSP to lovingly scold Naku...it shows his love even more...the amount it's killing him...the pain he feels seeing her like that..and her not taking the meds wont help either of them.

So night time...Naku feels that D is not there...just like him to be working...and Naku remembers and asks aabout Baaji <- loved that it was her who remembered him vs D because it really shows her concern for Baaji too...he is after all like her brother na...Dutta on the other hand realizing Baaji not home yet and decides to chk on him. I really liked that he was concerned for both B and N in the moment...didn't want to worry her but at the same time he was worried about Baaji

eekk some creepy call mentioning danger...you know for some odd reason...i had a hunch that Baaji will return once Dutta left...i dunno why but I did lol

Naku worried for both her loved ones..and prays and Baaji shows up and as I expected...alone...and then creepy phone call...Baaji tensed ready to leave and of course his Vahini must tag along whether he wants her or not...she is coming it is inevitable lol

They go and see meet D on the way with his broken down car...
someone aiming a gun ...when I was readin i was like oh naku dont do anything to get ur self hurt and look who ends up taking the shot...Baaji...and Naku faints...u know here for some odd reason (again) i thought pregnancy and then i was like what am i thinking poor girl fainted in fear, anxiety, weakness what ever and then u do say she is pregnant lol I am soo happy about that...more happy that both B and N are good...and now I am soo excited to hear how Naku is going to tell Dutta...

I loved the write up on Dutta's behavior, reaction to his two loved ones being in danger...it must kill him to see the two imp people in his life ...dependent on medical support...never a good sight...

very well written like always 👏👏👏 keep it up ...u never cease to amaze

am soo eager to read next part...jaldi update kar na😳😳





Edited by daya0628 - 14 years ago
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yaar best update of your apni next update jald karna i want to know what is the reaction of dutta about the baby finally footbaal team ki starting ho gayi👏

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