'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jagruti, plzzzzzzzzzzzz updt sooooooooooon.........waiting eagerlyyyyyyyy............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ushankitvc

Jagruti, plzzzzzzzzzzzz updt sooooooooooon.........waiting eagerlyyyyyyyy............



just about to update..please stick with me. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 3

Naku sees that dutta had been In the same attire for some time now, worried that there would be scars under his clothing that needed dressing naku heads towards the wardrobe yet before she turns from dutta naku feels a grasp at her wrist. Turning around dutta was overlooking her… what it felt like to be touched by him was something that only could naku could know. There was fear there was embarrassment, there was emotion. more so as dutta rose and stepped closer to naku how she would die to be in his arms. As he got closer naku could feel hear heartbeat thud..the feeling within give away and her eyes dropped to the floor. Dutta kept a strong grip of nakus wrist…with a pause he spoke with that particular tone to his voice.

Dutta: " Sirf Ek baar keh di thi tu naku… shahab gale laga lo.."

Naku turns to look at dutta in a surprised and shook state. It wasn't only her that could read his silence but dutta had that skill too. naku was like an open book for dutta..from the moment he had felt her presence he knew just what he was thinking. There were a many a times when dutta had stopped naku …sometimes in anger, sometimes in irritation or just for his own relevance but this time it felt like something different.

This time it was for naku, stepping closer to her….

Naku had no answer to duttas questions maybe she didn't know how to ask dutta. Somewhere there was a fear of rejection. A worry that dutta was still thinking of her betrayal. Little did she know that duttas feelings for nakusha had melted in the realization of love. As nakus tears begin to spill again….. she has no other words but to repeat dutta….

"Sahab….gale laga…lo." Before naku realized dutta pulled her closer and taken her into a embrace. Feeling his grip naku had melted in his arms…dutta could feel nakus tears dampening his clothing, he let naku rest within the crux of his neck and along with her found peace in finally feeling her rest.

Sometime later when naku realized that she had been in his arms for sometime now…she parted herself ..quickly realizing that dutta was still under recovery and the fact that duttas face creased in pain when naku took a her head away was something she noticed. Sahab sorry woah..bhul gayee thi ke aapko dard hoga.

Dutta shri ram patil ko kaisa dard … that comment of duttas makes naku smile thinking that there was no change in her husband. Thinking pratically naku walked away in order to pick out new clothes for dutta. Yet hearing her footsteps part duttas questions. "kaha jaa rahin hai naku?" naku opens up duttas cupboard finds a fresh kurta…she picks out white and answers him at the same time.

"Aap ke leighyey nayey kapne nikal rahi hai.' turning around nakus is faced by dutta who had thrown off his shawl and was looking for naku with his body gesture.

There was a kind of a comfort on duttas face..because he knew naku was around. Where as naku found it hard to remind herself that dutta could not see.

As dutta tries to unbotton his kurta in order to get it of he struggles a little and naku intervenes..

Naku; "Sahab mein madat karti hai."

There was mischievous smile that caught duttas face at that very moment and naku tried to figure out why he was smiling. All in all his eyes were covered with those dark shades which made it hard to figure out what he was thinking.

As naku stepped closer and unbuttoned duttas kurta…. It was clear that she was going through a little blushing bride moment . her hands fiddled before she took to his buttons..looking up at him with every botton she undone….dutta had no real forcus on naku yet he wasn't far off looking right down at her.

Dutta: Itni chup kyun hai …sharma rahin hai fikar mat kar..mein thuje dekh nahin raha.

Naku blushed a bright red at duttas comment. There where at the point where dutta had to loop his head out of the kurta yet before naku could prompt him he had already done so.. with some uneasiness dutta mangaged it. Naku picked up duttas old kurta and wrapped it within her hands

There was a kind of irritation on duttas part thinking that the simpliest tasks he couldn't complete. Naku noticed this yet she thought It better not to say anything..dutta was stood in his vest. Naku was going through that uncomfortable phase seeing her husband in flesh. Trying to avoid anymore embarresemet nakus sight scatters around the room after taking a glimse of duttas scars which look like they had already been dressed.

Duta: "Naku kurta de…."

Naku phased by duttas closeness forgets…giving dutta the fresh attire she watches him again fiddle with the clothing and finally put it on. Naku helped dutta botton up the kurta and she took the opportunity to touch open something that was really on her mind.

Sahab aap abhi maante hai ke meine aapko dhoka….

Dutta stopped naku…

-"Nahin naku…muje aaj aisi koi baat nahin karni..

Mein sirf itna jaanta hoon ke muje pyaar ka aisaas hua hai…tumse pyaar kara hoon mein." Naku couldn't belive the moment, dutta had confessed his love and this was more or less his forgivness for her. An amasing smile sparkeled on nakus face..and again her eyes started to fill.

Duttas words were rather demanding , "Ab tu kuch bolegi nahin nahin royegi, mein jaanta hoon tu bolna chahti hai..lekin abhi nahin." Naku submits to duttas wishes and says nothing more. She is more than happy to have her sahab back and to know that he loves her. Naku couldn't stop smiling she kept looking at dutta with affection.

Dutta knew that they both had heart felt confessions for each other and somewhere he also wanted naku to speak her mind but today was not the time according to him.

Instead he stepped closer…making Nakusha nervous with his closeness dutta takes a step closer and feels nakus heartbeat thud in anticipation. Dutta new exactly how innocent and timid naku was when it came to these mattes and in fact it made him feel better to think he had an influence on her. As dutta took defined steps forward naku took a step back..trying to avoid that embarrassment. For every step dutta took closer naku stepped back.. dutta knew that naku was uncomfortable yet he enjoyed the teasing passionate about getting close to her naku ends up hitting the wardrobe and hearing the sound of a collision dutta stopped yet his closeness did not stop.. nakus was a shade of crimson as Duttas lips moved closer in search of hers. Dropping her head in fear of the moment dutta picks up nakus face via his hands. Nakus eyes meet duttas expression and just as the moment arises there is a knock at the door that saves naku from the moment.

Somewhat thankful for the interruption naku takes a breather as dutta steps away sharply.

From behind the door: "Bhao mein baji!!" within his mind dutta curses baji for his timing. Inviting him in with an irritated tone of voice dutta is a pro at consealing the situation. Putting his hands behind is back in a very duta patil manor.

Baji walks in and notices something not quite right.

Baji: "Lagta hai mein galat time pein aagayay" nakus constant blushing gave it away straightaway. She wasn't able to look at baaji.

Baji had figured out that he had interrupted something and his expression gave of a cheeky smile.

bhao bhar kuch log aayey hai aapse milna chahte hai. dutta replies in order to buy some time with naku.."tu jaa mein aata hoon..."

as soon as baji leaves dutta also walks to leave the room yet turns back with a teasing thought. Stopping In his footsteps dutta looking back to naku before leaving he adds something that gives naku a chill of nerves.

Dutta: "adaat dal de naku..agli baar chorunga nahin"

Leaving naku blushing dutta leaves.

……………………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved .......... Me first............... a very emotional and touching updt..........luving it............
So Dutta too understanding Nakku and her feelings......... he too can read nakku like an open book with closed eyes too......... Dutta getting romantic....... wow!!!!!! really liked him teasing her by his actions....... he knew nakku was getting uncomfortable.............. liked the way he said in the end.............

as soon as baji leaves dutta also walks to leave the room yet turns back with a teasing thought. Stopping In his footsteps dutta looking back to naku before leaving he adds something that gives naku a chill of nerves.

Dutta: "adaat dal de naku..agli baar chorunga nahin"
Leaving naku blushing dutta leaves.

Naughty Dutta ............. but liking it very much............. Hope to see sumthing like this in LTL.......

continue sooooooooooon.......... Thanx 4 PM
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
@jagz hope u don't mind me calling u dat since I don't know ur real name
Aww D and N interaction soo good
Naughty D seems like loss of vision ain't gonna keep him frm N
Great upd8 keep em coming 😛
Thanx for d PM
Edited by Ruya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
aww again ur ending was reali cute..haha n dutta had the final dialogue....he surely wnt leave her next time
reali nice update...hpe he recovers his eye sight soon! m glad she mentioned abt her dhoka thing tht way he confessed n she is nw aware tht he has forgiven her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jag, v nice update. Wow must say D is v romantic here. Baaji u always have to interupt love birds???!!!
But I like that too.... It will make it want them more!!!
Last bit was, what should I say.*me day dreming *
Waiting for the next part
Azmi
PS- forgot to thank u for the PM. Thankyou.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update dear ....

dutta is taking live out of me by getting so close to nakku😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear

awesome update

so our dutta is in mood of romance😳 but kabab mein haddi ki toh aadat hai to knock at wrong time.

waiting for next update plz update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ushankitvc

Reserved .......... Me first............... a very emotional and touching updt..........luving it............

So Dutta too understanding Nakku and her feelings......... he too can read nakku like an open book with closed eyes too......... Dutta getting romantic....... wow!!!!!! really liked him teasing her by his actions....... he knew nakku was getting uncomfortable.............. liked the way he said in the end.............

as soon as baji leaves dutta also walks to leave the room yet turns back with a teasing thought. Stopping In his footsteps dutta looking back to naku before leaving he adds something that gives naku a chill of nerves.

Dutta: "adaat dal de naku..agli baar chorunga nahin"
Leaving naku blushing dutta leaves.

Naughty Dutta ............. but liking it very much............. Hope to see sumthing like this in LTL.......

continue sooooooooooon.......... Thanx 4 PM



yep dutta totally has buzzing feelings for naku and he is acting upon them too as for naku bitchari what can she do?? 😆
anyways i wanted to add a thank you for your comment and enjoying my ff. please do feel free to add sugesstions if you wish and i will be back with another update soon. jagruti


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